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Chapter 5: Not Good Enough
~*~ HAYDEN PENTHOUSE~*~
Rory's at home watching Saturday Night Live in her pj's when the phone next to her started to buzz. She looked at the Caller Id and frowned as she didnt recognize the number.
RORY/JESS:
RORY: Hello Hayden Residence, Lorelai speaking...
JESS: Uh..hello is Rory there?
RORY: Yeah, speaking. Whose this?
JESS: Oh hey its Jess. How are you?
RORY: Oh hey yeah im good how bout you?
JESS:Good....
After a few minutes of silence Rory coughed hoping to remind Jess that when you called someone you usually spoke.
JESS/RORY:
JESS: Ah...yeh..um...Will you go to Kyle's party with me?
RORY: Kyle?
JESS: Yeah he goes to my school.
RORY: Oh...yeah...ah...i dunno...
JESS: Fine yeh, whatever! Tristan told me you all thought you were too good for us....i just hoped you were different....look dont worry about it, cya have a nice life.
RORY: Je-
Rory was interuppted by the sound of the Jess hanging up. She hung up the phone slaming it into the reciever and staring at the phone. She sat their and watched SNL for about 10mins before she picked up the phone and dialed his number.
TRISTAN/RORY:
TRISTAN: Hello?
RORY: Is Jess there?
TRISTAN(sarcastically): What....No hello?
RORY: Hello!....Is Jess there?!?
TRISTAN(smart-assly): Actually sorry.....He's gone out to find a NICE girl for himself....
RORY: What? Do you even know what he said to me? And what right do you have telling him i think im too good for him, you dont even know me.
TRISTAN: You're all the same, i dont need to know you, and frankly i dont want to.
RORY: And i care because? Just get Jess....
TRISTAN: I told you his not here. What part of that didnt you understand? Ok I'll spell it out for you...he's.....not....
RORY(interrupting): Yeah ok i know. Goodbye!
Rory hung up the phone angrily and flicked the channel on the TV violently. She then thought to herself...'i guess he does have the right to think that...'
~*~ TRISTAN AND JESS'S APARTMENT~*~
JESS: Who was that?
Jess asked as he walked out of the bathroom and into the lounge room as Tristan just hung up the phone.
TRISTAN: That physco bitch Rory...
JESS: What?!!
TRISTAN: She's a frickin' weird bitch man....needs anger management classes if you ask me...
JESS(angrily): What'd you say to her?
TRISTAN: Nothing ...
With that, Jess grabbed the car keys and quickly stormed down the steps. He hopped into the car and dialed Rory's number on his cell phone.
RORY/JESS:
JESS: Where do you live? (He asked as soon as the phone clicked in)
RORY: I beg your pardon?
JESS: What's your address? I'm coming to pick you up...
Rory gave Jess her address and hung up the phone confused.
~*~ RORY'S HOUSE ~*~
Josh(Rory's brother) answered the door.
JOSH: Sorry wrong house...We already made our donation..
He started to close the door, but Jess stopped him and pushed it back open angrily.
JESS: Oh fuck off! Go get Rory for me.
JOSH: And you'd be?
JESS: Jess, and i dont care who you are... i'm here to pick up Rory.
Josh slammed the door in Jess' face and ran up the stairs towards Rory's room where he could hear some music blaring. He opened the door to see his sister applying her eyeliner heavily while looking into the mirror.
JOSH: Rory who the hell is the poor gansta looking boy standing at our door who goes by the name of JESS?!!?
RORY: What? Jess is here already!!! Is he inside?!
JOSH: I'm not inviting 'him' into the house!
RORY: Josh you hang aroung those sort of guys!!
JOSH: Yeh...But that's different.
RORY: How the hell is that different?
JOSH: Well I'm a guy, your a chick, he's gunna take advantage of you. I hang around with his type, I know what they're like.
RORY: Well he's not like that!
With that Rory grabbed her bag and stormed out of the room and just as she opened the door, she heard Josh yell "Don't say I didn't warn you."
RORY/JESS:
RORY: I need to get out of here.
JESS: Ok c'mon I'll take you for a ride.
~*~JESS'S CAR~*~
The car ride started out in silence, Jess just watched as Rory stared out the window deep in thought. Her face showed emotions of sadness, anger and frustration, so he decided not say anything as of yet.
RORY: God I hate him, he had no right to say what he did!!!
JESS: Who?
RORY: Who do you think? The stupid asshole who answered the door!
JESS: Why, what'd he say?
Rory just seemed to ignore Jess's question and continued.
RORY: Actually he was probably right, this was a bad idea....
JESS: What was a bad idea? Right about what?
RORY: Me and you....
With those last words from Rory, Jess swerved the car around, and as he was turning, a semi-trailer was coming from the right, as the semi.............
A.N. Hey everyone, hope you enjoyed that chapter, we tried not to swear so much coz we got some emails saying that they didn't want us to, plz tell us if you do or don't like the swearing. We would like to thank all those who have reviewed so far and say keep 'em coming. Anyways we'll thank you all properly in the next chapter coz we have to go now coz we got school stuff to do. We still haven't decided on a pairing yet, we've gotten heaps of votes for both so keep them coming. And we want to know wether you all want us to add in some of the other character such as Dean, Luke, etc. We don't how we would add them in yet so if you have any ideas we'd love to hear them and Lorelai will be in the next chapter. Thanx cya luv Tiz and Princezz. Review plz!!!
Disclaimer: We dont own any of this, none of it. Except for the plot, and most characters.
Chapter 5: Not Good Enough
~*~ HAYDEN PENTHOUSE~*~
Rory's at home watching Saturday Night Live in her pj's when the phone next to her started to buzz. She looked at the Caller Id and frowned as she didnt recognize the number.
RORY/JESS:
RORY: Hello Hayden Residence, Lorelai speaking...
JESS: Uh..hello is Rory there?
RORY: Yeah, speaking. Whose this?
JESS: Oh hey its Jess. How are you?
RORY: Oh hey yeah im good how bout you?
JESS:Good....
After a few minutes of silence Rory coughed hoping to remind Jess that when you called someone you usually spoke.
JESS/RORY:
JESS: Ah...yeh..um...Will you go to Kyle's party with me?
RORY: Kyle?
JESS: Yeah he goes to my school.
RORY: Oh...yeah...ah...i dunno...
JESS: Fine yeh, whatever! Tristan told me you all thought you were too good for us....i just hoped you were different....look dont worry about it, cya have a nice life.
RORY: Je-
Rory was interuppted by the sound of the Jess hanging up. She hung up the phone slaming it into the reciever and staring at the phone. She sat their and watched SNL for about 10mins before she picked up the phone and dialed his number.
TRISTAN/RORY:
TRISTAN: Hello?
RORY: Is Jess there?
TRISTAN(sarcastically): What....No hello?
RORY: Hello!....Is Jess there?!?
TRISTAN(smart-assly): Actually sorry.....He's gone out to find a NICE girl for himself....
RORY: What? Do you even know what he said to me? And what right do you have telling him i think im too good for him, you dont even know me.
TRISTAN: You're all the same, i dont need to know you, and frankly i dont want to.
RORY: And i care because? Just get Jess....
TRISTAN: I told you his not here. What part of that didnt you understand? Ok I'll spell it out for you...he's.....not....
RORY(interrupting): Yeah ok i know. Goodbye!
Rory hung up the phone angrily and flicked the channel on the TV violently. She then thought to herself...'i guess he does have the right to think that...'
~*~ TRISTAN AND JESS'S APARTMENT~*~
JESS: Who was that?
Jess asked as he walked out of the bathroom and into the lounge room as Tristan just hung up the phone.
TRISTAN: That physco bitch Rory...
JESS: What?!!
TRISTAN: She's a frickin' weird bitch man....needs anger management classes if you ask me...
JESS(angrily): What'd you say to her?
TRISTAN: Nothing ...
With that, Jess grabbed the car keys and quickly stormed down the steps. He hopped into the car and dialed Rory's number on his cell phone.
RORY/JESS:
JESS: Where do you live? (He asked as soon as the phone clicked in)
RORY: I beg your pardon?
JESS: What's your address? I'm coming to pick you up...
Rory gave Jess her address and hung up the phone confused.
~*~ RORY'S HOUSE ~*~
Josh(Rory's brother) answered the door.
JOSH: Sorry wrong house...We already made our donation..
He started to close the door, but Jess stopped him and pushed it back open angrily.
JESS: Oh fuck off! Go get Rory for me.
JOSH: And you'd be?
JESS: Jess, and i dont care who you are... i'm here to pick up Rory.
Josh slammed the door in Jess' face and ran up the stairs towards Rory's room where he could hear some music blaring. He opened the door to see his sister applying her eyeliner heavily while looking into the mirror.
JOSH: Rory who the hell is the poor gansta looking boy standing at our door who goes by the name of JESS?!!?
RORY: What? Jess is here already!!! Is he inside?!
JOSH: I'm not inviting 'him' into the house!
RORY: Josh you hang aroung those sort of guys!!
JOSH: Yeh...But that's different.
RORY: How the hell is that different?
JOSH: Well I'm a guy, your a chick, he's gunna take advantage of you. I hang around with his type, I know what they're like.
RORY: Well he's not like that!
With that Rory grabbed her bag and stormed out of the room and just as she opened the door, she heard Josh yell "Don't say I didn't warn you."
RORY/JESS:
RORY: I need to get out of here.
JESS: Ok c'mon I'll take you for a ride.
~*~JESS'S CAR~*~
The car ride started out in silence, Jess just watched as Rory stared out the window deep in thought. Her face showed emotions of sadness, anger and frustration, so he decided not say anything as of yet.
RORY: God I hate him, he had no right to say what he did!!!
JESS: Who?
RORY: Who do you think? The stupid asshole who answered the door!
JESS: Why, what'd he say?
Rory just seemed to ignore Jess's question and continued.
RORY: Actually he was probably right, this was a bad idea....
JESS: What was a bad idea? Right about what?
RORY: Me and you....
With those last words from Rory, Jess swerved the car around, and as he was turning, a semi-trailer was coming from the right, as the semi.............
A.N. Hey everyone, hope you enjoyed that chapter, we tried not to swear so much coz we got some emails saying that they didn't want us to, plz tell us if you do or don't like the swearing. We would like to thank all those who have reviewed so far and say keep 'em coming. Anyways we'll thank you all properly in the next chapter coz we have to go now coz we got school stuff to do. We still haven't decided on a pairing yet, we've gotten heaps of votes for both so keep them coming. And we want to know wether you all want us to add in some of the other character such as Dean, Luke, etc. We don't how we would add them in yet so if you have any ideas we'd love to hear them and Lorelai will be in the next chapter. Thanx cya luv Tiz and Princezz. Review plz!!!