~Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs~
You have probably heard many tales about Snow White, but they are all wrong. See they say that the mother is "evil". However, they are very wrong; the stepmother is not evil. How do you know that Snow White is"nice"? See you do not know Snow White could be "evil" and the mother "nice". Well I'll let you decide for yourself, but remember I warned you.
Once upon a time there lived a girl who was beautiful. She had smooth black hair and beautiful white skin that looked like snow. So that was what her name was, Snow White. Snow White's father died when she was 12 years old. Snow White killed her father. Why (?), because he would not let her eat an "apple" that she found on the ground. How? She poisoned his "apple" sauce. That was when her killing spree started. Nothing would have happened if her father would just let her eat the "apple". So he basically got what he asked for.
The mother, Amanda knew of this so when Snow White turned 16 years old she had to be stopped. Snow White was killing everyone. Anyone who made her mad was dead. Snow White had to be stopped. So Amanda tried to stop her. Amanda sent someone to kill Snow White, but once he looked at her he couldn't kill Snow White. Therefore, he told her to run far away and never come back. That was her first mistake. He told her to go where no one could stop her from killing her.
Then, after that Snow White went into the "evil" forest. To Snow White the "evil" forest was quite nice. It was a lovely place (to Snow White). She was very sad to leave it, but had to kill some more people.
Then she came to a small cottage. When the dwarfs came home she put them to work. She made them wait on her hand and foot. There were at the start 23 dwarfs, but now there are only 7.
After awhile the mother came around to kill Snow White with an "apple". Snow White chocked on the "apple". Then when she didn't die, the dwarfs cut off her head.
This is the end.
P.S. everyone lived happily ever after except Snow White.
~*~**~
A/n: I did not really change that chapter much but I fixed some simple spelling mistakes.
You have probably heard many tales about Snow White, but they are all wrong. See they say that the mother is "evil". However, they are very wrong; the stepmother is not evil. How do you know that Snow White is"nice"? See you do not know Snow White could be "evil" and the mother "nice". Well I'll let you decide for yourself, but remember I warned you.
Once upon a time there lived a girl who was beautiful. She had smooth black hair and beautiful white skin that looked like snow. So that was what her name was, Snow White. Snow White's father died when she was 12 years old. Snow White killed her father. Why (?), because he would not let her eat an "apple" that she found on the ground. How? She poisoned his "apple" sauce. That was when her killing spree started. Nothing would have happened if her father would just let her eat the "apple". So he basically got what he asked for.
The mother, Amanda knew of this so when Snow White turned 16 years old she had to be stopped. Snow White was killing everyone. Anyone who made her mad was dead. Snow White had to be stopped. So Amanda tried to stop her. Amanda sent someone to kill Snow White, but once he looked at her he couldn't kill Snow White. Therefore, he told her to run far away and never come back. That was her first mistake. He told her to go where no one could stop her from killing her.
Then, after that Snow White went into the "evil" forest. To Snow White the "evil" forest was quite nice. It was a lovely place (to Snow White). She was very sad to leave it, but had to kill some more people.
Then she came to a small cottage. When the dwarfs came home she put them to work. She made them wait on her hand and foot. There were at the start 23 dwarfs, but now there are only 7.
After awhile the mother came around to kill Snow White with an "apple". Snow White chocked on the "apple". Then when she didn't die, the dwarfs cut off her head.
This is the end.
P.S. everyone lived happily ever after except Snow White.
~*~**~
A/n: I did not really change that chapter much but I fixed some simple spelling mistakes.