Disclaimer: I don't own DA, that guy and his friend do (or did).
AN: OK, so two stories in a day is not that bad is it?? Three's better though.
Well I hope it's three. Now you can see my different views on Ben's death, from various characters' points of views (does that make sense?)
By the way, why couldn't Max carry him??
She carried Brain, and I don't mean to be nasty, but he was a lot bigger then Ben. I thought it was nasty, the way she left him for Lydecker, poor Ben.
I Love you Ben!!!
N E Ways- yeah so um here's another story in the Ben series. I t might not be a poem, 'cos I'm getting bored of them.
So, what does Zack think when he find's out that Ben is gone? (Did he ever find out anyway??)
It's been about eight months since Ben's death, and when he goes to Max, he doesn't say a thing.
Oh yeah, Lydecker told him, in a nasty fight. Zack didn't mention it because he was too busy worrying about the other to tell them that he knew.
OK, I'll stop my ranting; here's my story-
Zack's P.O.V-
He's gone.
493 is gone.
I never thought that he would be the first to leave. The way he talked about the outside world, it was like he was normal, not a freak.
But that's what he was, a freak. That's what we all are.
We were supposed to keep cover, to keep safe.
Damn you Ben!! Why didn't you keep cover?? You knew they would find you. You knew it was dangerous, but you carried on with that shit.
Why didn't you listen to me?? I'm your CO dammit!
You would never listen.
And now you put us all in risk. Especially Max.
Oh God Max!
How is she going to cope? She loved you more than the rest of us.
But then she always did.
Ben!! Why did you have to be so cruel? Why did you have to leave us??
I know I wasn't a great brother, but I cared about you, I cared about you all.
I never told you that did I?
Because feelings are our downfall.
'Always remember soldier- never let your feelings get in the way of your mission.'
Ben, the mission was to survive. But you got messed up.
And I didn't help you. I was looking after everyone else.
I didn't think that you would need it.
But you did.
I'm sorry.
I should have never have split us up.
But you were lucky, in a way.
You wouldn't have to go through all that crap again.
You were a good soldier Ben.
Don't forget that.
AN2: So, how was that?? I think it's pretty good. But I didn't know how to keep Zack all soldiery, but like a brother too.
I think I'll do an Alec version, in my little book of Ben.
Hmm, a good title- 'Little book of Ben.' What do you guy's think??
Review.
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AN: OK, so two stories in a day is not that bad is it?? Three's better though.
Well I hope it's three. Now you can see my different views on Ben's death, from various characters' points of views (does that make sense?)
By the way, why couldn't Max carry him??
She carried Brain, and I don't mean to be nasty, but he was a lot bigger then Ben. I thought it was nasty, the way she left him for Lydecker, poor Ben.
I Love you Ben!!!
N E Ways- yeah so um here's another story in the Ben series. I t might not be a poem, 'cos I'm getting bored of them.
So, what does Zack think when he find's out that Ben is gone? (Did he ever find out anyway??)
It's been about eight months since Ben's death, and when he goes to Max, he doesn't say a thing.
Oh yeah, Lydecker told him, in a nasty fight. Zack didn't mention it because he was too busy worrying about the other to tell them that he knew.
OK, I'll stop my ranting; here's my story-
Zack's P.O.V-
He's gone.
493 is gone.
I never thought that he would be the first to leave. The way he talked about the outside world, it was like he was normal, not a freak.
But that's what he was, a freak. That's what we all are.
We were supposed to keep cover, to keep safe.
Damn you Ben!! Why didn't you keep cover?? You knew they would find you. You knew it was dangerous, but you carried on with that shit.
Why didn't you listen to me?? I'm your CO dammit!
You would never listen.
And now you put us all in risk. Especially Max.
Oh God Max!
How is she going to cope? She loved you more than the rest of us.
But then she always did.
Ben!! Why did you have to be so cruel? Why did you have to leave us??
I know I wasn't a great brother, but I cared about you, I cared about you all.
I never told you that did I?
Because feelings are our downfall.
'Always remember soldier- never let your feelings get in the way of your mission.'
Ben, the mission was to survive. But you got messed up.
And I didn't help you. I was looking after everyone else.
I didn't think that you would need it.
But you did.
I'm sorry.
I should have never have split us up.
But you were lucky, in a way.
You wouldn't have to go through all that crap again.
You were a good soldier Ben.
Don't forget that.
AN2: So, how was that?? I think it's pretty good. But I didn't know how to keep Zack all soldiery, but like a brother too.
I think I'll do an Alec version, in my little book of Ben.
Hmm, a good title- 'Little book of Ben.' What do you guy's think??
Review.
I I O U