Disclaimer: I don't own DA.
AN: Here is the darker version, of my poem.
I still can't stop laughing at the first one's rhymes!!
It's been a year since Ben died, and Max remembers.
Forgive me brother Ben.
I didn't mean to cause you pain.
Or to let you go.
But you wouldn't stop your dirty deeds.
They were cruel, and disgusting,
But you still wouldn't stop.
I miss you, brother Ben.
You were so sweet, and kind before.
But then you changed,
No longer dear Benjamin,
But 493,
The monster you so badly wanted to escape.
I'm sorry brother Ben.
I really am.
I can still see the darkness in your eyes,
As you towered upon me.
I can still hear the crunch,
As I broke you bone.
I can still hear your voice,
Telling me to let you go.
I can still see the lifeless vessel,
As I held you.
I'm sorry brother Ben.
I didn't want to.
I miss you brother Ben.
Why did you do those things brother Ben?
I know you didn't mean to hurt those men.
But you're not a Nomelie,
You're a good soldier.
And I know you're in the good place.
Where no one gets punished.
Where no one has to hurt people.
Where we can live happily,
And forever.
I miss you, brother Ben.
Forgive brother Ben.
I love you brother Ben.
AN2: I know it's not that dark or dreary as I said it would be, but hey, a
girls gotta try!!
OK, I got reviews telling me that Ben's designation is 493 not 494, I just
got so used to writing about Alec, and 494 that I forgot, so now, I've
changed it. So people, don't worry, I'll check my stories properly.
So N E wayz, review : D
AN: Here is the darker version, of my poem.
I still can't stop laughing at the first one's rhymes!!
It's been a year since Ben died, and Max remembers.
Forgive me brother Ben.
I didn't mean to cause you pain.
Or to let you go.
But you wouldn't stop your dirty deeds.
They were cruel, and disgusting,
But you still wouldn't stop.
I miss you, brother Ben.
You were so sweet, and kind before.
But then you changed,
No longer dear Benjamin,
But 493,
The monster you so badly wanted to escape.
I'm sorry brother Ben.
I really am.
I can still see the darkness in your eyes,
As you towered upon me.
I can still hear the crunch,
As I broke you bone.
I can still hear your voice,
Telling me to let you go.
I can still see the lifeless vessel,
As I held you.
I'm sorry brother Ben.
I didn't want to.
I miss you brother Ben.
Why did you do those things brother Ben?
I know you didn't mean to hurt those men.
But you're not a Nomelie,
You're a good soldier.
And I know you're in the good place.
Where no one gets punished.
Where no one has to hurt people.
Where we can live happily,
And forever.
I miss you, brother Ben.
Forgive brother Ben.
I love you brother Ben.
AN2: I know it's not that dark or dreary as I said it would be, but hey, a
girls gotta try!!
OK, I got reviews telling me that Ben's designation is 493 not 494, I just
got so used to writing about Alec, and 494 that I forgot, so now, I've
changed it. So people, don't worry, I'll check my stories properly.
So N E wayz, review : D