No, it's not called spell check, and rereading, it's called getting off the sugar rush that is making it difficult for a decent fic. And in that age, they most have used twas, thus, thee, ye, nay, and other dialects like that, but know not many people understand that now day in age. Gay back then ment something totally different then back then to.

AND PLEASE SHOOT ME IF THIS TURNS INTO A MARRY SUE!

And thank you greatly to Lady of Legolas, Lady Jaina, celebrian, RoMayDrako, and JLF. To Tindomiel thank you for your support, and your concerns... I'll mail ya.

Disclaimer, I do not own Tolkien's work.
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It was another nice day in Lórien, Astal was out on the forest floor playing, as Haldir was with Celeborn. Two days had passed, Celeborn wished to know what had gotten past their line of defense, with Haldir's brother Orophin. Lórien was by far, the safest elven city around today, any intrusion would not be taken so easily.

'Haldir, I know you trust the child, and not those that delivered the child to you. There is, how ever, no reasoning how they got past Orophin, and your other brother.' Celeborn reasoned.

'He is right brother, I was watching carefully, and I seen no one enter the north woods, nor leave.' Orophin looked at his brother.

'So you wish for me to leave the child in the woods?' Haldir asked.

'Preferably outside the woods.' Orophin mumbled.

Haldir clenchecd his fists, as Celeborn snarled at Orophin. Calmly though Celeborn stood up staring out over the vastness, back turned to the brothers.

'She is but a child, that is true.' Celeborn began. 'Still something mysterious surrounds her. I do not know if she is a threat, the only one who would know that for certain is my wife.' Celeborn paused. 'You claim that she is your daughter, do you not Haldir?'

'She is my daughter, yes.' Haldir answered.

Celeborn turned to face the brothers. 'Then in my best opinion Haldir, she is under your care, your responsible for all her actions. I do not want you to leave her alone. Orophin, you do not have to accept her, but I would sagest you do.'

Orophin face tightend, 'Yes Lord Celeborn.'

'And I accept responsibilities for what Astal does.'

'Good, now the day has just begun, and your both healthy, I sagest you go patrol your area. I do not want a repeat of a few days ago.'

'Pardon me Lord Celeborn, but what about Astal, surely I can't take her with me.' Haldir complained.

'Then the child must go.' Celeborn snapped. 'I cannot extend elves for you to become a stay at home mom.'

Orophin grined at the thought of the child leaving Lórien. Sighing Haldir's shoulders dropped.

'I'll find a way to take her with me, we'll be out before the sun is fully up.'

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Haldir finished making Astal a nest in a thick bush. Orophin stood in the background watching his brother. Grabbing Astal Haldir sat her in the nest of prepared blankets and toys.

'I want you to stay here Astal till I get you out, I'll be near by so don't worry.'

'Yes father.'

Haldir closed up the bushes, he was so glad she called him her father. For reasurance he tied a bell unto one of the branches, then turned towards his brother. Orophin walked away, beginning the usual walk around the northern woods.

'You really do care for her.' Orophin stated.

Haldir nods, 'She is mine to care for now, I will not leave her alone to die.'

'Then I shall do my best to accept her, now come, we must make sure the borders are clear. Lord Celeborn will be unpleased if we fail again.'

Haldir smiled, 'I hear there's a group of humans venturing close to Lórien, shall we take care of them?'

'Of course Haldir, cannot let any filthy humans in.'

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Crud forgot the other brothers name, crud. Oh so yeah, figure him as already out in the woods. X_X I apologize. Next chapter should be up soon again. (If this chapter is still to bad with grammer, I'll hunt down a beta.)