Disclaimer: Hey, if you're reading this, chances are you've already read the disclaimer in part one. Plus, I don't own Little League.
A Gateway to Madness
4:40 AM
Slumped in a bus seat, Thomas eyed the Poké-Finder. He had built the hand-held device from his old Game Boy, which he didn't need anymore because A) he had a Game Boy Advance, and B) he wouldn't need a game when he was in the real thing!
Finally, a dot appeared on the screen. He exited the bus, hauling 4 suitcases in a cart, while at the same time watching his invention.
The red dot flashed in the upper right-hand corner. This showed where the nearest interdimensional passage was. Thomas turned around slowly until the dot was centered at the top. He started walking. The dot slowly moved down until it was exactly in the middle. The boy looked around. He was in a baseball field where the local Little League team played. Thomas flicked a switch on the Poké-Finder. Nothing happened.
"Shoot. I thought I had it there," he thought out loud. He examined the finder's many buttons, trying to find out what was wrong.
"Ah-hah! There's the problem; I didn't have the sound on." The redheaded Pokémaniac flipped the MUTE switch to OFF, remembering that he had turned it ON during the bus ride to avoid drawing attention to himself.
A dull bleeping filled the air. The boy rotated ever so slowly to his left. The sound grew fainter. Thomas turned to the right, and it increased in pitch and volume until
FLASH! He was blinded by light; CRACK! Thunder deafened his ears, and he lost conciousness.
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P.S. The last thing he thought before he passed out was, "Thank you fanfic writer for not saying 'fainted'." LOL
Please review! I need your input, suggestions, criticism, and comments to help me with future chapters and fanfics.
A Gateway to Madness
4:40 AM
Slumped in a bus seat, Thomas eyed the Poké-Finder. He had built the hand-held device from his old Game Boy, which he didn't need anymore because A) he had a Game Boy Advance, and B) he wouldn't need a game when he was in the real thing!
Finally, a dot appeared on the screen. He exited the bus, hauling 4 suitcases in a cart, while at the same time watching his invention.
The red dot flashed in the upper right-hand corner. This showed where the nearest interdimensional passage was. Thomas turned around slowly until the dot was centered at the top. He started walking. The dot slowly moved down until it was exactly in the middle. The boy looked around. He was in a baseball field where the local Little League team played. Thomas flicked a switch on the Poké-Finder. Nothing happened.
"Shoot. I thought I had it there," he thought out loud. He examined the finder's many buttons, trying to find out what was wrong.
"Ah-hah! There's the problem; I didn't have the sound on." The redheaded Pokémaniac flipped the MUTE switch to OFF, remembering that he had turned it ON during the bus ride to avoid drawing attention to himself.
A dull bleeping filled the air. The boy rotated ever so slowly to his left. The sound grew fainter. Thomas turned to the right, and it increased in pitch and volume until
FLASH! He was blinded by light; CRACK! Thunder deafened his ears, and he lost conciousness.
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P.S. The last thing he thought before he passed out was, "Thank you fanfic writer for not saying 'fainted'." LOL
Please review! I need your input, suggestions, criticism, and comments to help me with future chapters and fanfics.