Newcomer Ch.4
By. EvilSorata
Authors Note: Ok now where we left off I was about to face Motoko in a duel. Yes a duel me and her wonder how it will turn out since she has been
training and I well haven't lol. Hope yall enjoy it R&R please.
[Now where we left off. Motoko dashes at me with a possessed look on her
face. She slashes at me but I jump over her.]
Me: Heh too slow
[I pull my sword out of my sheath to slash her in the back but she blocks
with her sword.]
Motoko: Am I?
Naru: Wow she has gotten better.
[Motoko slashes her sword and sends me flying back down to the ground and
we lock swords again.]
Motoko: Come on use your technique or I will use mine!
Me: Heh be my guest.
[Motoko jumps back.]
Motoko: Gods cry school Cutting Boulder Slash!
[I jump up in the air and the boulder that was behind me cuts in half.]
Me: Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Tsui Sen!
[I slash down at her from high above and she moves back and I miss.]
Me: Heh you have gotten better.
Motoko: What you trying to stop the fight?
Me: Heh
[I jump toward her.]
Me: Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Ken San!
Motoko: Ahh
[Motoko blocks my sword slashing at her sideways and knee's me in the chin
I fly back and hit the ground then stand up and I see her in the air.]
Motoko: Gods Cry School Cutting Evil Second Form!
[This time for me it scars and scratches me all over the body and im bleeding heavily not noticing. some instead of taking my cloths off. She is
still in the air about to slash down at me.]
Me: Grrr…… heh Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Sho Sen!!
[ I fly up in the air and hit her in her neck. She falls back hits the
ground grasping for air and I hold the tip of my sword pointed at her
neck.]
Me: Heh I win again beautiful.
Motoko: Grr… so you do but I will return and be even stronger.
Me: Good i'll…uh… be..waiting.
[I fall to the floor from light headedness and lose of blood. Hours pass by and Naru puts bandages on my scars and puts me in a bed, then I wake up.]
Me: Uhh man what happened?
[I see Naru right beside me.]
Naru: You passed out.
Me: I did?
[I try and sit up but I squelch in pain holding my side.]
Naru: Don't sit up your hurt.
Me: Just a few scars uh.
[I fall back down because it hurts too much to get up or move.]
Naru: I'll be back.[To Shinobu] Hey Shinobu watch over him for a moment
will ya?!
[Shinobu walks in.]
Shinobu: Sure. [Naru leaves the room, and Shino takes the towel on my head and get it cold
again.]
Me: Thank You.
Shinobu: Sure No Problem that was an amazing fight.
Me: Really you think so?
Shinobu: Oh yeah Sempai couldn't do that against Motoko so far you're the
only man we know who can do that well besides Seta.
Me: Seta? Heh never heard of him.
Shinobu: Oh he is Sarah's father.
Me: Well a father is always good to have.
Shinobu: Yeah I guess so.
Me: What about your parents?
[Motoko walks by the room and stand out side eaves dropping on what we are
talking about.]
Shinobu: I came here because my parents were fighting and going through a
divorce so I came to live here and everything is going good so far.
[I put my hand on her face.]
Me: I bet you miss your parents a lot don't you?
Shinobu: Yeah I do but I wish they would stop fighting all the time and
actually we can live as a happy family.
[My hand falls to the floor.]
Me: Well keep wishing for it and it may come true I don't know when but it
will possibly.
[I start to sit up and stand up still squelching in pain.]
Shinobu: You shouldn't be standing up.
[I put my hand on Shinobu's head.]
Me: Its ok im fine I can walk. I'll use my sword as a cane, so it will be
easier to walk.
[I take my hand off of Shinobu's head and I walk out the door hand Motoko
falls to the ground.]
Shinobu: Motoko? What were you doing?
Me: Well hello beautiful. ^_^
[Motoko gets a mean look on her face and she blushes from that comment.]
Motoko: Grr.. I wasn't doing anything.
Me: Heh yeah right Motoko you were eaves dropping you can't lie to me.
Shinobu: Motoko! You were?
Motoko: Yes I was I couldn't help but over hearing what you were talking
about.
Me: Oh well it doesn't matter where are the others?
Shinobu: Everyone is down stairs except Sempai and Naru they went to get
groceries.
Me: Oh ok then.
[I walk down the stairs and Shinobu and Motoko follow me.]
Kitsune: Hey he finally came to.
Me: Heh yeah I like sleeping a lot.
Shinobu: So what you did was fake?
Me: No it was real but I like sleeping.
Kitsune: Oh well come have a drink with me handsome.
[Kitsune hands me a drink and I sit down on the couch and drink it. And she
pours me some more.]
Kitsune: Drink up.
Me: Heh
[I drink the drink again.]
Me: Ah.
[For some reason Motoko pulls her sword out and points it at me.]
Me: You challenge me again?
Motoko: Yes I do.
Me: Your kidding me right? Look at me im battered up scared and maybe a
bruse some where on my body like hmm lets see everywhere.
Motoko: Grr. Fine I will go train some more.
Me: Don't exhaust yourself your too pretty to do that.
Motoko: Grr.
[She walks away growling at me. Su shows up and kicks me in the face.]
Su: Do you like my Motoko!?
[I fall to the floor.]
Kitsune: Ahh Su he's injured.
[Shinobu helps me up.]
Me: Ugh oww that hurt.
Su: Do you like my Motoko?
Me[blushing]: Well I uh I guess I do.
Kitsune: Oh we knew it that's why you always compliment her.
Me: Heh yeah that's it you figured me out. ^_^
Shinobu: Aww that's so sweet.
Me: That's what my friends in America said to me. We always do stuff
together when we are bored. We go swimming go to the mall hang out with
friends at their house stuff like that.
Kitsune: Sounds like fun.
Me: Oh it was tons of fun.
[Naru and Keitaro walk through the door holding groceries.]
Keitaro: Hey your finally up.
Me: Yeah a little after Naru left I got up.
Keitaro: Let me check her bandages.
[Keitaro walks forward trips and accidentally grabs Shinobu's skirt and
pulls it down.]
Naru: Grr you Pervert!
[Naru Punches him into orbit.]
Keitaro: Why me!!
Naru: Let me check your bandages.
Me: Uh ok.
[Naru sets the groceries on the counter.]
Shinobu: I'll start fixing breakfast.
Me: Breakfast? Iv been asleep that long that its already the next day?
Kitsune: Yeah you sleep like a baby.
Me: I guess you all watched over me huh?
Naru: Well yeah except Motoko she just didn't want to.
Me: Oh well probably wanted to train more.
Su: My Motoko wont give up till your defeated.
Me: She has a strong will to win doesn't she?
Naru: Oh yeah she does.
[Naru starts taking off my bandages with some blood stains everywhere on
them.]
Naru: Well you're a little healed but still bleeding. You should rest for a
few more days. So no fighting.
[Naru wraps my body back up in bandages.]
Me: I wonder if beautiful out there will wait that long. Motoko: Don't worry I can wait that long and the next time for sure I will
beat you.
Me: Well you may win since I wont be able to train for a few days. But we
will see.
Motoko: Yes we will till then I will train more and get stronger every
time.
Me: As will I except not so much I might hurt myself.
Naru: I don't think you should train at all until we are certain and you
look well enough to train.
Me: Ugh alright.
[Keitaro falls back down to earth.]
Keitaro: Oww.
Kitsune: Hey Keitaro you and Jason go take a bath looks like you both need
it.
Keitaro: Alright.
Me: ok.
[We get changed and into the bath.]
Keitaro: Ah this feels good.
Me: Grr ugh ow.
Keitaro: What's wrong.
Me: Nothing just ow the hot water is ugh hurting my scars and scratches.
[I just suck air in hold it and get all the way in the hot springs.]
Me: Uhhhhhhhhh OW!
Keitaro: Hurt that bad huh?
Me: Ugh yeah and its stinging.
[Naru walks in.]
Naru: What happened I heard a shout.
Me: Oh it was just me getting into the hot spring with these scars and
scratches.
Naru: Oh ok then.
[Naru leaves and goes back inside.]
Keitaro: She worries a lot.
Me: Yeah I noticed.
Keitaro: Hey I got a question for you.
Me: Shoot.
Keitaro[whispering]: Are you in love with Motoko?
Me[blushing]: What? No I don't love her. I mean I like her but im not in
love with her yet at least.
Keitaro: So you mean you will love her?
Me: I guess that's what I mean. What about you and Naru do you love her?
Keitaro: Yes I do and she loves me and we both know it.
Me: Ahh ok I was just kinda wondering.
Keitaro: You feeling better?
Me: Yeah I am a little.
[Yet again Motoko eaves drops on our conversation.]
Keitaro: What do you like about Motoko anyway.
Me: Oh god she is so beautiful I like her attitude she is determined but
uhh too quick to assume she has already won in a fight.
Keitaro: Oh really?
Me: Yeah but im calm see I don't assume anything till im done with a fight,
or something like that.
Keitaro: Oh really?
Me: Well yeah sometimes. I guess I do assume I will win sometimes that I
shouldn't.
Keitaro: Well that's cool I guess maybe you will get Motoko to like you.
That would be a first.
Me: What do you mean?
Keitaro: Well she doesn't like guys.
Me: Wow well I guess her being a swordsman she will be like that.
Keitaro: Yeah.
Me: *sigh* Im going in. You coming?
[Motoko quickly leaves before she gets caught.]
Keitaro: Yeah.
[Me and Keitaro get out of the bath so the girls can take one. I go to the couch and fall on it and fall asleep after I got done changing into my old
cloths I sleep in.]
END!
By. EvilSorata
Authors Note: Ok now where we left off I was about to face Motoko in a duel. Yes a duel me and her wonder how it will turn out since she has been
training and I well haven't lol. Hope yall enjoy it R&R please.
[Now where we left off. Motoko dashes at me with a possessed look on her
face. She slashes at me but I jump over her.]
Me: Heh too slow
[I pull my sword out of my sheath to slash her in the back but she blocks
with her sword.]
Motoko: Am I?
Naru: Wow she has gotten better.
[Motoko slashes her sword and sends me flying back down to the ground and
we lock swords again.]
Motoko: Come on use your technique or I will use mine!
Me: Heh be my guest.
[Motoko jumps back.]
Motoko: Gods cry school Cutting Boulder Slash!
[I jump up in the air and the boulder that was behind me cuts in half.]
Me: Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Tsui Sen!
[I slash down at her from high above and she moves back and I miss.]
Me: Heh you have gotten better.
Motoko: What you trying to stop the fight?
Me: Heh
[I jump toward her.]
Me: Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Ken San!
Motoko: Ahh
[Motoko blocks my sword slashing at her sideways and knee's me in the chin
I fly back and hit the ground then stand up and I see her in the air.]
Motoko: Gods Cry School Cutting Evil Second Form!
[This time for me it scars and scratches me all over the body and im bleeding heavily not noticing. some instead of taking my cloths off. She is
still in the air about to slash down at me.]
Me: Grrr…… heh Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu-Ryu Sho Sen!!
[ I fly up in the air and hit her in her neck. She falls back hits the
ground grasping for air and I hold the tip of my sword pointed at her
neck.]
Me: Heh I win again beautiful.
Motoko: Grr… so you do but I will return and be even stronger.
Me: Good i'll…uh… be..waiting.
[I fall to the floor from light headedness and lose of blood. Hours pass by and Naru puts bandages on my scars and puts me in a bed, then I wake up.]
Me: Uhh man what happened?
[I see Naru right beside me.]
Naru: You passed out.
Me: I did?
[I try and sit up but I squelch in pain holding my side.]
Naru: Don't sit up your hurt.
Me: Just a few scars uh.
[I fall back down because it hurts too much to get up or move.]
Naru: I'll be back.[To Shinobu] Hey Shinobu watch over him for a moment
will ya?!
[Shinobu walks in.]
Shinobu: Sure. [Naru leaves the room, and Shino takes the towel on my head and get it cold
again.]
Me: Thank You.
Shinobu: Sure No Problem that was an amazing fight.
Me: Really you think so?
Shinobu: Oh yeah Sempai couldn't do that against Motoko so far you're the
only man we know who can do that well besides Seta.
Me: Seta? Heh never heard of him.
Shinobu: Oh he is Sarah's father.
Me: Well a father is always good to have.
Shinobu: Yeah I guess so.
Me: What about your parents?
[Motoko walks by the room and stand out side eaves dropping on what we are
talking about.]
Shinobu: I came here because my parents were fighting and going through a
divorce so I came to live here and everything is going good so far.
[I put my hand on her face.]
Me: I bet you miss your parents a lot don't you?
Shinobu: Yeah I do but I wish they would stop fighting all the time and
actually we can live as a happy family.
[My hand falls to the floor.]
Me: Well keep wishing for it and it may come true I don't know when but it
will possibly.
[I start to sit up and stand up still squelching in pain.]
Shinobu: You shouldn't be standing up.
[I put my hand on Shinobu's head.]
Me: Its ok im fine I can walk. I'll use my sword as a cane, so it will be
easier to walk.
[I take my hand off of Shinobu's head and I walk out the door hand Motoko
falls to the ground.]
Shinobu: Motoko? What were you doing?
Me: Well hello beautiful. ^_^
[Motoko gets a mean look on her face and she blushes from that comment.]
Motoko: Grr.. I wasn't doing anything.
Me: Heh yeah right Motoko you were eaves dropping you can't lie to me.
Shinobu: Motoko! You were?
Motoko: Yes I was I couldn't help but over hearing what you were talking
about.
Me: Oh well it doesn't matter where are the others?
Shinobu: Everyone is down stairs except Sempai and Naru they went to get
groceries.
Me: Oh ok then.
[I walk down the stairs and Shinobu and Motoko follow me.]
Kitsune: Hey he finally came to.
Me: Heh yeah I like sleeping a lot.
Shinobu: So what you did was fake?
Me: No it was real but I like sleeping.
Kitsune: Oh well come have a drink with me handsome.
[Kitsune hands me a drink and I sit down on the couch and drink it. And she
pours me some more.]
Kitsune: Drink up.
Me: Heh
[I drink the drink again.]
Me: Ah.
[For some reason Motoko pulls her sword out and points it at me.]
Me: You challenge me again?
Motoko: Yes I do.
Me: Your kidding me right? Look at me im battered up scared and maybe a
bruse some where on my body like hmm lets see everywhere.
Motoko: Grr. Fine I will go train some more.
Me: Don't exhaust yourself your too pretty to do that.
Motoko: Grr.
[She walks away growling at me. Su shows up and kicks me in the face.]
Su: Do you like my Motoko!?
[I fall to the floor.]
Kitsune: Ahh Su he's injured.
[Shinobu helps me up.]
Me: Ugh oww that hurt.
Su: Do you like my Motoko?
Me[blushing]: Well I uh I guess I do.
Kitsune: Oh we knew it that's why you always compliment her.
Me: Heh yeah that's it you figured me out. ^_^
Shinobu: Aww that's so sweet.
Me: That's what my friends in America said to me. We always do stuff
together when we are bored. We go swimming go to the mall hang out with
friends at their house stuff like that.
Kitsune: Sounds like fun.
Me: Oh it was tons of fun.
[Naru and Keitaro walk through the door holding groceries.]
Keitaro: Hey your finally up.
Me: Yeah a little after Naru left I got up.
Keitaro: Let me check her bandages.
[Keitaro walks forward trips and accidentally grabs Shinobu's skirt and
pulls it down.]
Naru: Grr you Pervert!
[Naru Punches him into orbit.]
Keitaro: Why me!!
Naru: Let me check your bandages.
Me: Uh ok.
[Naru sets the groceries on the counter.]
Shinobu: I'll start fixing breakfast.
Me: Breakfast? Iv been asleep that long that its already the next day?
Kitsune: Yeah you sleep like a baby.
Me: I guess you all watched over me huh?
Naru: Well yeah except Motoko she just didn't want to.
Me: Oh well probably wanted to train more.
Su: My Motoko wont give up till your defeated.
Me: She has a strong will to win doesn't she?
Naru: Oh yeah she does.
[Naru starts taking off my bandages with some blood stains everywhere on
them.]
Naru: Well you're a little healed but still bleeding. You should rest for a
few more days. So no fighting.
[Naru wraps my body back up in bandages.]
Me: I wonder if beautiful out there will wait that long. Motoko: Don't worry I can wait that long and the next time for sure I will
beat you.
Me: Well you may win since I wont be able to train for a few days. But we
will see.
Motoko: Yes we will till then I will train more and get stronger every
time.
Me: As will I except not so much I might hurt myself.
Naru: I don't think you should train at all until we are certain and you
look well enough to train.
Me: Ugh alright.
[Keitaro falls back down to earth.]
Keitaro: Oww.
Kitsune: Hey Keitaro you and Jason go take a bath looks like you both need
it.
Keitaro: Alright.
Me: ok.
[We get changed and into the bath.]
Keitaro: Ah this feels good.
Me: Grr ugh ow.
Keitaro: What's wrong.
Me: Nothing just ow the hot water is ugh hurting my scars and scratches.
[I just suck air in hold it and get all the way in the hot springs.]
Me: Uhhhhhhhhh OW!
Keitaro: Hurt that bad huh?
Me: Ugh yeah and its stinging.
[Naru walks in.]
Naru: What happened I heard a shout.
Me: Oh it was just me getting into the hot spring with these scars and
scratches.
Naru: Oh ok then.
[Naru leaves and goes back inside.]
Keitaro: She worries a lot.
Me: Yeah I noticed.
Keitaro: Hey I got a question for you.
Me: Shoot.
Keitaro[whispering]: Are you in love with Motoko?
Me[blushing]: What? No I don't love her. I mean I like her but im not in
love with her yet at least.
Keitaro: So you mean you will love her?
Me: I guess that's what I mean. What about you and Naru do you love her?
Keitaro: Yes I do and she loves me and we both know it.
Me: Ahh ok I was just kinda wondering.
Keitaro: You feeling better?
Me: Yeah I am a little.
[Yet again Motoko eaves drops on our conversation.]
Keitaro: What do you like about Motoko anyway.
Me: Oh god she is so beautiful I like her attitude she is determined but
uhh too quick to assume she has already won in a fight.
Keitaro: Oh really?
Me: Yeah but im calm see I don't assume anything till im done with a fight,
or something like that.
Keitaro: Oh really?
Me: Well yeah sometimes. I guess I do assume I will win sometimes that I
shouldn't.
Keitaro: Well that's cool I guess maybe you will get Motoko to like you.
That would be a first.
Me: What do you mean?
Keitaro: Well she doesn't like guys.
Me: Wow well I guess her being a swordsman she will be like that.
Keitaro: Yeah.
Me: *sigh* Im going in. You coming?
[Motoko quickly leaves before she gets caught.]
Keitaro: Yeah.
[Me and Keitaro get out of the bath so the girls can take one. I go to the couch and fall on it and fall asleep after I got done changing into my old
cloths I sleep in.]
END!