Devil-gurl a.k.a. devil-chan : Hello everyone. I am new here so i hope to have supports from all of you (whoever who reads my story). This story happened 53 years after the Eikon Den series. It is about Sukunami Mimi who is Miaka's grandchildren and her adventure Inside and Outside Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho (Four Gods' Sky and Earth). Hehe, please review and tell me if the fic is good or bad. Let the story begin. Before i forget i would like to thank Locke for helping me with the story (in every way).
Japanese word translation:
Omedeto = congratulation
kaiju onna = female monster
Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho = Four Gods' Sky and Earth
Konnichiwa = Good afternoon
Title : The last chapter of Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho
Chapter 1 : The book
Before Mayo and Tamahome were sent back to the other world by Suzaku , Mayo made 3 wishes. First, to let all the Seishi, including Suzaku, Seiryuu, Byakko and Genbu, live a normal and happy lives. Second, to protect the book inside and outside from any other harm that may come. Third, to prevent any other human beings from entering the book. Mayo knew about the danger of stepping in another world. She thought those wishes would let people live in a normal and happy life in their own world. She was right....yet wrong.
After 53 years pass by
After handing a devestated looking boy his physic's test result, the middle age teacher silently took the last test paper on her desk. Her usually wooden face is suddenly lifted into a smile when she saw who this paper belonged to. "Sukunami?"
"Hai!" A cinnamon hair girl looked up when her teacher suddenly called her. Her beautiful face lifted up to a smile as she approached toward her teacher's desk.
"Omedeto, you've got the highest mark again in the class." The girl smiled and silently took her test result from her teacher. The teacher was about to praised her further when the bell suddenly rang. Dropping her praise, the teacher quickly turned her attention to the retreating students that were trying to sneaked out of the classroom before the teacher was able to give them any further assignment. The young girl shook her head when she heard the other students groaning when the teacher smartly stood at the door to block their passage and told them their homework assignments. With her test paper clutched in her hand, she went back to her desk and started to place all of her things out on the desk before packing them into her backpack. A young boy, with short blond hair sneaked toward her direction silently in hope to startle her. However, before he could approach her, she suddenly turned around and glared at him. Instead of scaring her, the young boy jumped up in surprise when he saw the glare she was sending toward his direction.
" What do you want Yamato-kun?" The young boy ran his hand through his short hair nervously as he looked at the angry girl.
"Yoh Mimi-chan, konnichiwa," he said in hope to stop her from glaring at him. However, like always Sukunami Mimi ignored his weak attempt and continued to glare at him. Just before Mimi can give Kajiwara Yamato a taste of her wrath, her best friend and cousin, Yuuki Sora, came rushing into the door. Mimi quickly turned to look at her friend when she saw her out of breath.
"Sora-chan, what happened? Why are you sweating," Mimi asked couriously.
"It's a long story. I don't want to talk about it."
"What is it Sora-chan." Sora threw up her hand in defeat. After knowing Mimi for all these years, she knew Mimi would not leave her alone until she have gotten what she wanted from her.
"Okay...first of all, I accidentally fell down the stairs while I was rushing to class. When I was finally able to stand up again, a person ran into me and pushed me down the floor. After I was able to finally stand up again, I realize I was late for my class. So I rush down the hallway and enter the classroom, only to find out that I have enter the wrong classroom. With a bunch of apology to the professor and receiving a huge lecture from him, I finally was able to reach here." She sighed and turned to look at Mimi and Yamato. "But unfortunately, I found you two fighting again. And knowing the both of you for so many years, I can basically tell you that Mimi will end up winning the fight and scaring the living daylight out of Yamato." She give Mimi a wary grin. "And while she is at it, she will end up breaking something."
"Hey i will not be scared of this kaiju onna" Yamato denied while pointing his finger to Mimi.
When Mimi heard this, she turned around to hit Yamato. Seeing the blow coming toward him, Yamato moved away from her blow. Her blow fell upon the unfortunate old desk, which Yamato was standing at. Sora sighed when one of the leg of the desk crumbled upon the sudden impact, causing the whole desk to lose its balance and fell on the floor.
"See what i mean," said Sora.
Mimi frowned at Sora's remark and started to pack her bag. Yamato nervously looked back and forth at her and the desk, while taking some steps back away from her. She slung her backpack on her shoulder when she was done packing, and glared at Yamato. "I'll let you go this time." Yamato laughed nervously as Mimi walked out of the classroom. Unfortunate for him, he and Sora happened to live in the same neighborhood as Mimi. Therefore, Sora ignored his protests as she pushed him forcefully out the doorway of their classroom.
As they walked home from their school, Mimi told them about the spring cleaning that she was planning to do when she reached back home. To Mimi's joy, Sora quickly agree to help her out with her cleaning. Yamato didn't take that long to volunteer his help when he saw Mimi looking at him. However, he told her that he need to go home to change his cloths before he was able to come. Realizing that she need to change her clothes too, Sora told Mimi that she need to go home first. So, Mimi end up going home by herself. She tossed her backpack on the table, once she was inside and shook her head when she saw the mess that was around her.
"Might as well start before they come," she muttered to herself. Since her family have given each members of the family an area where they are responsible for, Mimi decided that she will start in the attic. After fifteen minutes of roaming around the dusty small room, she happened to find a little book. Mimi quickly blowed off the thick dust that was covering it, and coughed violently when she accidently inhaled the dust. "Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho?" Mimi looked at the book in puzzlement as she wonder about the name. "It's probably a normal book." She opened it and to her surprise, images from Miaka's journey from the time she first step into the book and the time she made the last wishes flashed through Mimi's head. Surprised with the unknown information that were flashing in her head, she accidentally drop the book on the floor. "Huh? What was that?" She looked at the book in confusion when the images disappear from her mind. She jumped slightly when the doorbell rang. She picked up the book and placed it on the table.
"Mi-chan! Sora and Yamato are here!" Mimi stucked her head from the doorway of the attic and looked toward the door. She could see Sora and Yamato standing there and talking to her mother.
"I'm upstair," shouted Mimi. She retreated back into the attic and in a few minutes, she could hear Sora and Yamato climbing the ladder and entering the attic.
"Mimi-chan, konnichiwa" Sora greet Mimi.
Mimi smiled at Sora and turned to look at Yamato. Yamato raised up his hand to say hello but his eyes suddenly fell on the book on the table. Without a word, he quickly strolled toward the book and picked it up.
"Isn't this the book that your Miaka baa-chan always talk about? Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho?"
"Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho," Mimi said thoughtfully. She quickly strolled toward Yamato and took the book away from him.
"Hey," protested Yamato, when Mimi took the book away from him. "What did you did that for?" To his annoyance, she ignored him as she continued to observed the book. To their surprise, the book suddenly open itself in her hand and flipped into an empty page.
"What is..." Mimi started to say when a red light shot out of the book and enveloped her in it. Yamato and Sora watched in horror as Mimi was sucked into the book.
"Mimi," Yamato cried.
Devil-gurl a.k.a. devil-chan : Finish, chapter 1. How was it? Do you like it?????? If you do please review or even email me, devil_gurl088@yahoo.com. Do tell me if you have any idea on this story, if i put the wrong informations and if i make mistakes. Bye
Japanese word translation:
Omedeto = congratulation
kaiju onna = female monster
Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho = Four Gods' Sky and Earth
Konnichiwa = Good afternoon
Title : The last chapter of Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho
Chapter 1 : The book
Before Mayo and Tamahome were sent back to the other world by Suzaku , Mayo made 3 wishes. First, to let all the Seishi, including Suzaku, Seiryuu, Byakko and Genbu, live a normal and happy lives. Second, to protect the book inside and outside from any other harm that may come. Third, to prevent any other human beings from entering the book. Mayo knew about the danger of stepping in another world. She thought those wishes would let people live in a normal and happy life in their own world. She was right....yet wrong.
After 53 years pass by
After handing a devestated looking boy his physic's test result, the middle age teacher silently took the last test paper on her desk. Her usually wooden face is suddenly lifted into a smile when she saw who this paper belonged to. "Sukunami?"
"Hai!" A cinnamon hair girl looked up when her teacher suddenly called her. Her beautiful face lifted up to a smile as she approached toward her teacher's desk.
"Omedeto, you've got the highest mark again in the class." The girl smiled and silently took her test result from her teacher. The teacher was about to praised her further when the bell suddenly rang. Dropping her praise, the teacher quickly turned her attention to the retreating students that were trying to sneaked out of the classroom before the teacher was able to give them any further assignment. The young girl shook her head when she heard the other students groaning when the teacher smartly stood at the door to block their passage and told them their homework assignments. With her test paper clutched in her hand, she went back to her desk and started to place all of her things out on the desk before packing them into her backpack. A young boy, with short blond hair sneaked toward her direction silently in hope to startle her. However, before he could approach her, she suddenly turned around and glared at him. Instead of scaring her, the young boy jumped up in surprise when he saw the glare she was sending toward his direction.
" What do you want Yamato-kun?" The young boy ran his hand through his short hair nervously as he looked at the angry girl.
"Yoh Mimi-chan, konnichiwa," he said in hope to stop her from glaring at him. However, like always Sukunami Mimi ignored his weak attempt and continued to glare at him. Just before Mimi can give Kajiwara Yamato a taste of her wrath, her best friend and cousin, Yuuki Sora, came rushing into the door. Mimi quickly turned to look at her friend when she saw her out of breath.
"Sora-chan, what happened? Why are you sweating," Mimi asked couriously.
"It's a long story. I don't want to talk about it."
"What is it Sora-chan." Sora threw up her hand in defeat. After knowing Mimi for all these years, she knew Mimi would not leave her alone until she have gotten what she wanted from her.
"Okay...first of all, I accidentally fell down the stairs while I was rushing to class. When I was finally able to stand up again, a person ran into me and pushed me down the floor. After I was able to finally stand up again, I realize I was late for my class. So I rush down the hallway and enter the classroom, only to find out that I have enter the wrong classroom. With a bunch of apology to the professor and receiving a huge lecture from him, I finally was able to reach here." She sighed and turned to look at Mimi and Yamato. "But unfortunately, I found you two fighting again. And knowing the both of you for so many years, I can basically tell you that Mimi will end up winning the fight and scaring the living daylight out of Yamato." She give Mimi a wary grin. "And while she is at it, she will end up breaking something."
"Hey i will not be scared of this kaiju onna" Yamato denied while pointing his finger to Mimi.
When Mimi heard this, she turned around to hit Yamato. Seeing the blow coming toward him, Yamato moved away from her blow. Her blow fell upon the unfortunate old desk, which Yamato was standing at. Sora sighed when one of the leg of the desk crumbled upon the sudden impact, causing the whole desk to lose its balance and fell on the floor.
"See what i mean," said Sora.
Mimi frowned at Sora's remark and started to pack her bag. Yamato nervously looked back and forth at her and the desk, while taking some steps back away from her. She slung her backpack on her shoulder when she was done packing, and glared at Yamato. "I'll let you go this time." Yamato laughed nervously as Mimi walked out of the classroom. Unfortunate for him, he and Sora happened to live in the same neighborhood as Mimi. Therefore, Sora ignored his protests as she pushed him forcefully out the doorway of their classroom.
As they walked home from their school, Mimi told them about the spring cleaning that she was planning to do when she reached back home. To Mimi's joy, Sora quickly agree to help her out with her cleaning. Yamato didn't take that long to volunteer his help when he saw Mimi looking at him. However, he told her that he need to go home to change his cloths before he was able to come. Realizing that she need to change her clothes too, Sora told Mimi that she need to go home first. So, Mimi end up going home by herself. She tossed her backpack on the table, once she was inside and shook her head when she saw the mess that was around her.
"Might as well start before they come," she muttered to herself. Since her family have given each members of the family an area where they are responsible for, Mimi decided that she will start in the attic. After fifteen minutes of roaming around the dusty small room, she happened to find a little book. Mimi quickly blowed off the thick dust that was covering it, and coughed violently when she accidently inhaled the dust. "Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho?" Mimi looked at the book in puzzlement as she wonder about the name. "It's probably a normal book." She opened it and to her surprise, images from Miaka's journey from the time she first step into the book and the time she made the last wishes flashed through Mimi's head. Surprised with the unknown information that were flashing in her head, she accidentally drop the book on the floor. "Huh? What was that?" She looked at the book in confusion when the images disappear from her mind. She jumped slightly when the doorbell rang. She picked up the book and placed it on the table.
"Mi-chan! Sora and Yamato are here!" Mimi stucked her head from the doorway of the attic and looked toward the door. She could see Sora and Yamato standing there and talking to her mother.
"I'm upstair," shouted Mimi. She retreated back into the attic and in a few minutes, she could hear Sora and Yamato climbing the ladder and entering the attic.
"Mimi-chan, konnichiwa" Sora greet Mimi.
Mimi smiled at Sora and turned to look at Yamato. Yamato raised up his hand to say hello but his eyes suddenly fell on the book on the table. Without a word, he quickly strolled toward the book and picked it up.
"Isn't this the book that your Miaka baa-chan always talk about? Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho?"
"Shi Jin Ten Chi Sho," Mimi said thoughtfully. She quickly strolled toward Yamato and took the book away from him.
"Hey," protested Yamato, when Mimi took the book away from him. "What did you did that for?" To his annoyance, she ignored him as she continued to observed the book. To their surprise, the book suddenly open itself in her hand and flipped into an empty page.
"What is..." Mimi started to say when a red light shot out of the book and enveloped her in it. Yamato and Sora watched in horror as Mimi was sucked into the book.
"Mimi," Yamato cried.
Devil-gurl a.k.a. devil-chan : Finish, chapter 1. How was it? Do you like it?????? If you do please review or even email me, devil_gurl088@yahoo.com. Do tell me if you have any idea on this story, if i put the wrong informations and if i make mistakes. Bye