Hey there! This is my first fanfic so I hope it's good! It's a small poem I wrote and it is a spoiler for those who haven't read that far so if you didn't get too far past the beginning please don't read this if you don't want it all spoiled. (this is near the end of their first huge mission) Well hope you guys like it and please review it!! I want to know if you liked it! And now the usual:
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Naruto characters, Kishimoto Masashi does (though I do want Sasuke… ^^)
Now… ON TO THE POEM!
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A Timely Fate Called 'death'
As my teammate pointed towards you,
I felt myself think, 'this can't be true'
When I arrived next to you, I felt your face,
That was ice cold while your skin remained icy blue.
I knew what happened, I knew it was true.
You battled a battle, to the death,
Used yourself to save a friend
But sorrow and tears are all that's left.
I may have been told to let it all out,
But I couldn't and I wouldn't, even if you were a friend
'Friend' may not even be the word,
Because you're more in the end.
I recall the question from one tough exam,
To record shinobi saying no. twenty five
I wrote I as usual, like it was nothing new
And naturally, my score was still high.
Saying 25 said, "To keep all emotions, on the inside,
No matter what the situation, keep this mission #1,
Even if someone dies in the process,
Think of nothing but the mission"
But it's hard when I love you, as much as I do
You may have shown no affection, I'm sure you cared
For our team mates and me
And the times we have shared
And now it's this, a time so sad,
And there you lie, dead as night
Saving our friend, from death
During this long and fearful fight
But no longer can I hold back,
I burst out in tears and hug your neck
No longer will I see you face or hear your voice
This is the timely end called 'death.'
Well that's it, hope you liked it! (Reviews! I want to hear from you guys! Ok?)
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Naruto characters, Kishimoto Masashi does (though I do want Sasuke… ^^)
Now… ON TO THE POEM!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A Timely Fate Called 'death'
As my teammate pointed towards you,
I felt myself think, 'this can't be true'
When I arrived next to you, I felt your face,
That was ice cold while your skin remained icy blue.
I knew what happened, I knew it was true.
You battled a battle, to the death,
Used yourself to save a friend
But sorrow and tears are all that's left.
I may have been told to let it all out,
But I couldn't and I wouldn't, even if you were a friend
'Friend' may not even be the word,
Because you're more in the end.
I recall the question from one tough exam,
To record shinobi saying no. twenty five
I wrote I as usual, like it was nothing new
And naturally, my score was still high.
Saying 25 said, "To keep all emotions, on the inside,
No matter what the situation, keep this mission #1,
Even if someone dies in the process,
Think of nothing but the mission"
But it's hard when I love you, as much as I do
You may have shown no affection, I'm sure you cared
For our team mates and me
And the times we have shared
And now it's this, a time so sad,
And there you lie, dead as night
Saving our friend, from death
During this long and fearful fight
But no longer can I hold back,
I burst out in tears and hug your neck
No longer will I see you face or hear your voice
This is the timely end called 'death.'
Well that's it, hope you liked it! (Reviews! I want to hear from you guys! Ok?)