This are some questions from Reviewers that I felt the need to answer to
clarify things as I now realize that I did leave a few things out of the
story and made a few mistakes.
Blessed Be: Wow! That was great AND crazy ^_^ And funny! Heehee, why is 'she' (whom I'm guessing to be Kagome) like that? Was she raped when she was young or something *shudders*?
I really liked the way you made InuYasha intruiged in her, it was really interesting, and refreshing compared to the way most people would have him react ^_^ Very different, this story is, but I like it very much so far ^_^ (so far? I've only read one chapter! I'm so weird)
SC: I 'm REALLY glad you like the way I have the characters. I tried to do a "what is the opposite of what they would do" type of thing.yeah..
Blessed Be: thought it was Sango, but then that's pretty obivous ^_^ And how would Shippou know InuYasha if he just moved there? Hehe, just a little bit confused here.
I liked how he and Kagome actually had a conversation and I like the way that you have him more working towards getting to know her rather than the opposite way around ^_^
Anyways great story, on the favorite list it goes ^_^
SC: Shippo and Rin are friends, Rin and Shippo play together at each other's house, Rin lives at Inu Yasha's so they met! And I'm glad you liked them having a conversation, instead of an argument. I know I would no argue with a crazy. They will win the fight, my child, they will win.
Blessed Be: Okay, this chapter was rather random and the whole "let's rush Rin into the hospital cause she got ran over while playing with her protector Shippou" was really sudden. Also, since when was Sesshou-maru and InuYasha on speaking terms? And since when was Kagome THAT crazy, I mean, i don't see any appeal that would keep InuYasha anything but frightened. However the whole Sesshou-maru being a girl was just hilarious ^_^
This story needs some work, but I like your style of writing ^_^
SC: Well like I said I tried to do the "opposite character" thing. And that's what I did to Inu and Sesshy! Well Inu Yasha isn't really one for thinking about the consequences, just getting what he wants and he wants to know what the hell is wrong with this girl!
Blessed Be: That was funny, but why is Kagome sleeping in his apartment much less next to him? And why is he all of the sudden head-over-heels for her, especially- as you said-since she's a 'looney'? But my god that was funny, hehe, out of character and off the story line, but very funny ^_^ Hahaha, you have no shame, hehehehehe, rather nasty, but in comparison of his real character this is damned funny! But he can be so cute *reminiscing the shower conflict "BOO!!" heeheehee*
SC: See, Kagome thinks like a child so in a child's mind gender doesn't matter, so she didn't find anything wrong with it, It was a sleepover!! ^_^. And he wasn't head over heals, he was just horny, that's all. The only feeling he has is friendship or brothership...so far.. ^.^
Blessed Be: I'm sorry (it must seem like I'm flaming you, but believe me I'm not, I'm trying to give suggestions), but I don't understand how you could write an understandable romance between one sane person and one Insane person.
I liked Sango's story, it was creative, and a nice way to explain why she's a Schizo ^_^
SC: No worry, I'm glad you have questions and stuff. I really appreciate you trying to help my story writing. n_n Having a relationship between a sane and insane person, is the fun of the story. Makes the people think "how the hell is this gonna work out?" Yeah. Kagome's problem isn't all that complicated and could probably be fixed.but you peoples don't know what the problem is. *sings* la lalalalala. yeah..
Laura-chan: cute chapter!! n_n
you wrote Inu-no-nee-chan.
but nee-chan means 'sister'. ^^;;
you should write Inu-no-nii-chan ^^
nii-chan means 'brother' ^^
SC: THANK YOU FOR FINDING MY MISTAKE!!!!!!! Ok yeah. anyway, I'm glad you pointed that out, cause now I can yell at my brother for distracting me and disappointing all of my loyal readers. BAD BROTHER BAD!!
Vicki: sideburns? SIDEBURNS???!!! Inuyasha doesn't have sideburns!!!AHHHH!!!!!!*runs around hysterically*
You made him have SIDEBURNS?! WAAA!!!!!
*wails loudly* NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
sorry. *sweatdrop* TMS (Too much sugar)
-Vicki
PS: e-mail me!or leave me a note in your next chappie! ^_____^
SC: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I didn't give him sideburns!! I meant the little thingies, the little pieces or whatever that hang at the side of his face, like long sideburns. I SORRY! I DIDN"T KNOW WHAT TO CALL THEM!!!
Crazyinulover: hahahahaha very funny specially the chocolate ass and ramen flavored ice cream just out of curiosity do you eat a lot of sugar?
SC: Yes actually. I put it in everything that I make. I think that might be the reason my brother calls me "Akane-Monster" maybe.. Mmmmmmm..Chocolate ass..
So yeah. feel free to ask me any questions about my story that you don't understand and I'll make up a reasonable explanation for you and if you don't like it, I'll make up another, you just gotta use your imagination people!! And I'M SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING FOREVER!!!!!!!!!! So I finally update my story..cause my brother's not here today!!! EVERBODY SAY YAY!!!
D: I KNOW I DON"T OWN INU YASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STOP RUBBING IT IN MY FACE OKAY? I GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 7: Miroku's secret admiration (Ha! What secret!)
Sango and Miroku went into a pet store. Sango 'cooed' at the kittens while Miroku 'awwed' at the view he was getting from his precise angle of eyesight. (aka. Sango's bent position) After what seemed like a lifetime in a zoo(to Miroku) they left the pet store and went to a coffee shop. Miroku was having trouble keeping a conversation with Sango. She would just nod or reply yes or no.
*She wasn't like this before we split up.* Miroku thought. After they got their coffee, Miroku asked Sango if they could have a little talk. He wanted to get to know her better. He knew her for about 3 months now, but didn't really know anything about her.
After they grabbed a seat Miroku sat quietly, gathering his conversation in his mind. Finally he started.
"Sango---lovely day, ne?"
Okay, so he's not Shakespeare, but to Sango it meant no difference. She smiled at him and replied.
"Yes."
Then came the silence.
Miroku looked around for a little bit and then back to Sango. It didn't know why she was so quiet all of a sudden. *Is it because she doesn't know me very well? Or does she not have anything to talk about? Never, girls always have something to talk about.*
Sango watched in amusement as Miroku continued to make abstract funny faces as he thought. He stopped when he heard giggling. He smiled at Sango as she laughed.
*Ah!! Finally some connection!!!!!!!!! Let the dialogue begin!*
A question popped up in his mind.
"Sango." She looked over at him. "How did you meet Kikyo?" he asked.
"Well, her and her husband, Naraku, took special case children in to their home to take care of them and I was one of them." Sango answered.
*well, that was brief* Miroku thought.
Then he asked, "So, Kagome was one of them?"
All it took was one simple question of that particular subject and Sango's mouth was off like rocket. Miroku couldn't even keep up with her.
"~~~andthenthat'swhensheandifoundoutthatwewerespecialandeventhoughitwasn'tli ke superpowers,weknewitwasforthegoodofmankind.soKagomeanditriedtohelpthemby~~~"
Miroku, even though it didn't catch most of it, now knew everything about Sango and Kagome's life. EVERY SINGLE DETAIL!!!! So he figured something in that sentence triggered her to talk.
*Hmmm, "So, Kagome was one of them" must have been Kagome cause the rest is just common words. Maybe that's why she's so quiet. She's not with Kagome!!!*
They got up and left the coffee shop and started to wander around. They went to a lot of different stores and sites. Then they ended up in the park and decided to rest. Sango marveled at the beauty of the spot they chose.
A circle of trees that surrounded a small clearing. Sango loved how it looked here, while Miroku loved how she looked here. He only knew her for three months, but he's had a crush on her eleven years. He's known she existed for that long, but he did move away when he was eight, and that's when Sango's big ordeal happened and she moved to where he was.
Sango looked at him. He blushed. Sango blushed. Sango didn't know why but she would get butterflies in her stomach when she looked at him. They sat there just staring at each other. Light wind blew cherry blossoms around them and lightly rustled their hair. Miroku moved his lips to say something, but no sound would come out. The girl in front of him unknowingly wouldn't allow it. She just had this affect on him that he couldn't explain. A feeling like he lived his whole life just for her to allow him to gaze at her. He's a hopeless romantic at heart, although he doesn't show it at times (in the proper manner..^^;;;).
She giggled at him. "Your staring," she whispered. "Tis a sin to gaze at beauty, I know" he whispered back. She turned away. He crawled up to her. "Sango.." She looked at him.
"S-sango, I-I w-wanted to..to say..t-that, that is..you s-see." Miroku played with a piece of grass for a little bit then suddenly stood up, startling Sango. " SANGO I LOVE YAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!" Miroku yelled as two children smashed into him. Sango laughed as the children got up off Miroku and she laughed even harder when he lifted his head from the ground. He looked very much of what resembled a walrus of sorts. Dirt covering his face and grass up his nose and in his mouth. "YOU LITTLE BRATS!!!!!!!!" He screamed and chased them around the park. Sango spotted Kagome and Inu Yasha. After they calmed Miroku down, they all went back to Kikyo's.
THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna stop now and for a very very VERY good reason. I just got Inu Yasha episode 104 and I'm gonna watch it!!! YAY!!! So see you in another millennium!! Hahaha! I wouldn't be surprise if it took me that long to make the next chapter. LALALALA!!!
Blessed Be: Wow! That was great AND crazy ^_^ And funny! Heehee, why is 'she' (whom I'm guessing to be Kagome) like that? Was she raped when she was young or something *shudders*?
I really liked the way you made InuYasha intruiged in her, it was really interesting, and refreshing compared to the way most people would have him react ^_^ Very different, this story is, but I like it very much so far ^_^ (so far? I've only read one chapter! I'm so weird)
SC: I 'm REALLY glad you like the way I have the characters. I tried to do a "what is the opposite of what they would do" type of thing.yeah..
Blessed Be: thought it was Sango, but then that's pretty obivous ^_^ And how would Shippou know InuYasha if he just moved there? Hehe, just a little bit confused here.
I liked how he and Kagome actually had a conversation and I like the way that you have him more working towards getting to know her rather than the opposite way around ^_^
Anyways great story, on the favorite list it goes ^_^
SC: Shippo and Rin are friends, Rin and Shippo play together at each other's house, Rin lives at Inu Yasha's so they met! And I'm glad you liked them having a conversation, instead of an argument. I know I would no argue with a crazy. They will win the fight, my child, they will win.
Blessed Be: Okay, this chapter was rather random and the whole "let's rush Rin into the hospital cause she got ran over while playing with her protector Shippou" was really sudden. Also, since when was Sesshou-maru and InuYasha on speaking terms? And since when was Kagome THAT crazy, I mean, i don't see any appeal that would keep InuYasha anything but frightened. However the whole Sesshou-maru being a girl was just hilarious ^_^
This story needs some work, but I like your style of writing ^_^
SC: Well like I said I tried to do the "opposite character" thing. And that's what I did to Inu and Sesshy! Well Inu Yasha isn't really one for thinking about the consequences, just getting what he wants and he wants to know what the hell is wrong with this girl!
Blessed Be: That was funny, but why is Kagome sleeping in his apartment much less next to him? And why is he all of the sudden head-over-heels for her, especially- as you said-since she's a 'looney'? But my god that was funny, hehe, out of character and off the story line, but very funny ^_^ Hahaha, you have no shame, hehehehehe, rather nasty, but in comparison of his real character this is damned funny! But he can be so cute *reminiscing the shower conflict "BOO!!" heeheehee*
SC: See, Kagome thinks like a child so in a child's mind gender doesn't matter, so she didn't find anything wrong with it, It was a sleepover!! ^_^. And he wasn't head over heals, he was just horny, that's all. The only feeling he has is friendship or brothership...so far.. ^.^
Blessed Be: I'm sorry (it must seem like I'm flaming you, but believe me I'm not, I'm trying to give suggestions), but I don't understand how you could write an understandable romance between one sane person and one Insane person.
I liked Sango's story, it was creative, and a nice way to explain why she's a Schizo ^_^
SC: No worry, I'm glad you have questions and stuff. I really appreciate you trying to help my story writing. n_n Having a relationship between a sane and insane person, is the fun of the story. Makes the people think "how the hell is this gonna work out?" Yeah. Kagome's problem isn't all that complicated and could probably be fixed.but you peoples don't know what the problem is. *sings* la lalalalala. yeah..
Laura-chan: cute chapter!! n_n
you wrote Inu-no-nee-chan.
but nee-chan means 'sister'. ^^;;
you should write Inu-no-nii-chan ^^
nii-chan means 'brother' ^^
SC: THANK YOU FOR FINDING MY MISTAKE!!!!!!! Ok yeah. anyway, I'm glad you pointed that out, cause now I can yell at my brother for distracting me and disappointing all of my loyal readers. BAD BROTHER BAD!!
Vicki: sideburns? SIDEBURNS???!!! Inuyasha doesn't have sideburns!!!AHHHH!!!!!!*runs around hysterically*
You made him have SIDEBURNS?! WAAA!!!!!
*wails loudly* NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
sorry. *sweatdrop* TMS (Too much sugar)
-Vicki
PS: e-mail me!or leave me a note in your next chappie! ^_____^
SC: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I didn't give him sideburns!! I meant the little thingies, the little pieces or whatever that hang at the side of his face, like long sideburns. I SORRY! I DIDN"T KNOW WHAT TO CALL THEM!!!
Crazyinulover: hahahahaha very funny specially the chocolate ass and ramen flavored ice cream just out of curiosity do you eat a lot of sugar?
SC: Yes actually. I put it in everything that I make. I think that might be the reason my brother calls me "Akane-Monster" maybe.. Mmmmmmm..Chocolate ass..
So yeah. feel free to ask me any questions about my story that you don't understand and I'll make up a reasonable explanation for you and if you don't like it, I'll make up another, you just gotta use your imagination people!! And I'M SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING FOREVER!!!!!!!!!! So I finally update my story..cause my brother's not here today!!! EVERBODY SAY YAY!!!
D: I KNOW I DON"T OWN INU YASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STOP RUBBING IT IN MY FACE OKAY? I GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 7: Miroku's secret admiration (Ha! What secret!)
Sango and Miroku went into a pet store. Sango 'cooed' at the kittens while Miroku 'awwed' at the view he was getting from his precise angle of eyesight. (aka. Sango's bent position) After what seemed like a lifetime in a zoo(to Miroku) they left the pet store and went to a coffee shop. Miroku was having trouble keeping a conversation with Sango. She would just nod or reply yes or no.
*She wasn't like this before we split up.* Miroku thought. After they got their coffee, Miroku asked Sango if they could have a little talk. He wanted to get to know her better. He knew her for about 3 months now, but didn't really know anything about her.
After they grabbed a seat Miroku sat quietly, gathering his conversation in his mind. Finally he started.
"Sango---lovely day, ne?"
Okay, so he's not Shakespeare, but to Sango it meant no difference. She smiled at him and replied.
"Yes."
Then came the silence.
Miroku looked around for a little bit and then back to Sango. It didn't know why she was so quiet all of a sudden. *Is it because she doesn't know me very well? Or does she not have anything to talk about? Never, girls always have something to talk about.*
Sango watched in amusement as Miroku continued to make abstract funny faces as he thought. He stopped when he heard giggling. He smiled at Sango as she laughed.
*Ah!! Finally some connection!!!!!!!!! Let the dialogue begin!*
A question popped up in his mind.
"Sango." She looked over at him. "How did you meet Kikyo?" he asked.
"Well, her and her husband, Naraku, took special case children in to their home to take care of them and I was one of them." Sango answered.
*well, that was brief* Miroku thought.
Then he asked, "So, Kagome was one of them?"
All it took was one simple question of that particular subject and Sango's mouth was off like rocket. Miroku couldn't even keep up with her.
"~~~andthenthat'swhensheandifoundoutthatwewerespecialandeventhoughitwasn'tli ke superpowers,weknewitwasforthegoodofmankind.soKagomeanditriedtohelpthemby~~~"
Miroku, even though it didn't catch most of it, now knew everything about Sango and Kagome's life. EVERY SINGLE DETAIL!!!! So he figured something in that sentence triggered her to talk.
*Hmmm, "So, Kagome was one of them" must have been Kagome cause the rest is just common words. Maybe that's why she's so quiet. She's not with Kagome!!!*
They got up and left the coffee shop and started to wander around. They went to a lot of different stores and sites. Then they ended up in the park and decided to rest. Sango marveled at the beauty of the spot they chose.
A circle of trees that surrounded a small clearing. Sango loved how it looked here, while Miroku loved how she looked here. He only knew her for three months, but he's had a crush on her eleven years. He's known she existed for that long, but he did move away when he was eight, and that's when Sango's big ordeal happened and she moved to where he was.
Sango looked at him. He blushed. Sango blushed. Sango didn't know why but she would get butterflies in her stomach when she looked at him. They sat there just staring at each other. Light wind blew cherry blossoms around them and lightly rustled their hair. Miroku moved his lips to say something, but no sound would come out. The girl in front of him unknowingly wouldn't allow it. She just had this affect on him that he couldn't explain. A feeling like he lived his whole life just for her to allow him to gaze at her. He's a hopeless romantic at heart, although he doesn't show it at times (in the proper manner..^^;;;).
She giggled at him. "Your staring," she whispered. "Tis a sin to gaze at beauty, I know" he whispered back. She turned away. He crawled up to her. "Sango.." She looked at him.
"S-sango, I-I w-wanted to..to say..t-that, that is..you s-see." Miroku played with a piece of grass for a little bit then suddenly stood up, startling Sango. " SANGO I LOVE YAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!" Miroku yelled as two children smashed into him. Sango laughed as the children got up off Miroku and she laughed even harder when he lifted his head from the ground. He looked very much of what resembled a walrus of sorts. Dirt covering his face and grass up his nose and in his mouth. "YOU LITTLE BRATS!!!!!!!!" He screamed and chased them around the park. Sango spotted Kagome and Inu Yasha. After they calmed Miroku down, they all went back to Kikyo's.
THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna stop now and for a very very VERY good reason. I just got Inu Yasha episode 104 and I'm gonna watch it!!! YAY!!! So see you in another millennium!! Hahaha! I wouldn't be surprise if it took me that long to make the next chapter. LALALALA!!!