A/N Okay, there was a lot of confusion when I posted my first chapter. Well at least I was confused. From now on all thoughts will be 'in these kinds of quotes' people's thoughts will still be in the same paragraph as their speech and actual speech "will be quoted like this." At first I tried using italic for thoughts, but for some reason when I uploaded it there was no italic or bold so then I tried to upload it again with italic and bold and there was no spacing so now I'm not even going to bother with it unless someone has the patience to explain how I can get italic, bold and spacing all in the same entry and believe me having that much patience is not humanly possible. I dedicate this chapter to all my reviewers. So now what you've all been waiting for *drum roll* …. The disclaimer!
(parentheses) = my comments
[brackets] = my alt. Personalities' comments
"quotes" = speech
'half quotation thingies' = thoughts
*starry thingies* = sometimes sounds, sometimes actions
Disclaimer: If I owned Inuyasha why would I spend over 20 hours downloading each episode off of kazaa?
REVIEW RESPONSES: (A/N I got reviews!!! *does happy dance* [ I don't know her..] Ice cream for everyone!! *hands out various kinds of ice cream to all reviewers* Yes ALL reviewers I hold no grudge against "Lala" for his/her rudimentary attempt at a review)
Sakurafans: It was 30 sits. I guess I could have left it at 28 but I decided not to I have no idea why. Thank you for reading it and telling me whether it was confusing or not I was really worried about the whole italic thing but it looks like no one even noticed or if they did they didn't care.
Hallo: Wow thanks! I didn't think I'd get any reviews from people I didn't ask to read this. Actually when you sent me this review I had already gotten one, but whatever you would have had no way of knowing that.
Inuyasha: I'll try to update as often as possible.
XxDarkness HunterxX: Thank you for being honest with your opinion on my writing. Yes I'm making this a chapter fiction. If I ever decide to write a one shot I'll say so in the beginning and the summary, but I wouldn't expect one anytime soon being as I'm not good at writing short stories and would probably end up turning it into a chapter fic.
Mizu: I'm glad that my writing had such an effect on someone. Is the evil plotting really necessary? AHHHH!!
*runs away from one pound weight* You'll have to throw heavier things to make me update!! NO!! How could I forget your fingernails?! *runs away while Mizu randomly slashes people for no particular reason* Thanks for trying to show me how to make the italic work even though I forgot already. *sweat drop* Plus, I'm glad you were around to plot with when the "thing" was sent by the "person."
Kumagoro: Yay! A fellow weird person! Too many people are serious now a days. Thanks for putting me in your favorites I feel so loved! ^_^ I updated see. Look at the chapter! You can call of your chibi random person and spiffy toothpick now.
Lala: First I would like to answer your question "What the fuck is this?" I am assuming the "this" you were talking about is a fanfic. Well a fanfic or fic, short for fanfiction is a fictional story written by fans based on basically whatever the author or authoress is interested in. I.e. the fan part of the word fanfiction. They can be based on almost anything cartoons, anime, television shows, video games ect. You can easily figure out the meaning of the word by simply taking it apart. I hope that I have answered your question to your liking. Although I hope that next time you ask a simple question you won't use such profanity. As for your second comment "This fic sux fucking ass." it is impossible for a fanfiction to suck anything let alone "ass." Like I said before a fic is a fictional story. In the case of this particular fiction it was saved on my computer then uploaded to fanfiction.net. It does not/has never existed as living matter that could perform any actions. Also, about it having "…NO PLOT!" I hope you don't expect me to reveal the entire plot in my first chapter. As previously stated this is NOT a one shot it will be continued as I, the authoress see fit. After answering all your questions I hope you can answer me this why would you bother to ask me "What was the whole plot again?" if you planned on answering that question yourself?
Tenseiga: The healing sword huh? What a coincidence… I have to say that your review had very good timing. It dragged me out of the funk that my last review put me in. I plan on continuing this fic for my personal growth as a writer and my readers.
Shadow: I'll try to update as much as I can. Damn you writers block!! *shakes fist* I'll get you!!! Not you the writers block… yeah this is what too much sugar does to you…
SarA/lunA: *blinks* *rereads review* *blinks again* Thanks!! A lot! You really like it that much? I don't even like it that much. Your review made me so happy!! ^__^ In fact for an annoyingly long I was so happy I would only talk to people on AIM in a completely unreadable neon blue. Of course I'll kill that evil clay pot!! I can't believe Inuyasha kissed her… EEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Corpse kisses!! Blech! The thought makes me sick to my stomach or that could be all the chocolate cake I ate. Whatever, it's still disgusting. They have 3 liter bottles of coke? I've only seen 2 liter ones. Of course I'll email you when I update, but at the time I'm writing this your review hasn't showed up on my stats yet and I tried to look up your penname on ff.net it didn't find anything so yeah…. And because your review made me so happy you get.. *fumbles through bag* um… five cents and a packet of artificial sweetener.. Yeah that's what was actually in my wallet. Enjoy!
Previously on General Hospital… (A/N I just felt like typing that…. [And again I don't know her..] )
"Okay then…" Inuyasha said trying to hide his hurt "As long as you're alright." he finishes jumping to a far away tree.
"Inuyasha wait! That came out wrong!" Kagome yelled after him.
"Go to sleep wench!" he yelled his voice cracking. Reluctantly she obeyed him still feeling guilty for everything she had done that night.
"I'm so sorry Inuyasha." she whispered before falling asleep.
~*~ Chapter 2 … And the night goes on
Inuyasha slowly watched Kagome drift into sleep. 'She looks so innocent, so peaceful. Does she really fear me so much that I haunt her dreams? No that can't possibly be it. Almost every human I've been around has feared me, but she…. she was never truly afraid of me. Even when I tried to kill her I could barely smell the fear on her. But… that's when I'm in this form. Is it possible that my other form could cause her to feel such aversion towards me?' Inuyasha suddenly felt dizzy from the thoughts running through his head. He looked back at Kagome's sleeping form and sighed. 'I need to go somewhere I can clear my head.' he thought.
He began walking, to where he had no idea he just kept walking. 'Why do I even care what she thinks of me?' he asked himself as he came to a small lake and sat on the grass staring into the clear water.
'The real question is why should I care? After all that bitch is just a shard detector to me.' A light breeze picked up causing small ripples to appear on the waters surface. Inuyasha inhaled deeply faintly smelling Kagome's scent in the passing wind. He had purposely stayed downwind of where the group was camping so that if any youkai attacked wanting the shards he could be there to defend them.
'If she was merely a shard detector you would not have stayed with her and the other humans so long.' he thought. The hanyou glared into the water his thoughts once again at war.
'She can detect the shards better than both Kaede- baba and that lecher and that is why I allow her to say.' Inuyasha knew deep down inside past all his arrogance and denial he had feelings for Kagome, but he would never admit it aloud. Not to anyone… especially not her. For he knew his feelings for her could never be returned.
'I am a hanyou. I have dirty blood. I am feared by human's because of my demon blood and because I am stronger then them. I am rejected and mocked by youkai because of my human blood and because I am weaker then them, a disgrace to the entire species.' he looked down into the water seeing his slightly obscured reflection. He had the silvery white hair, golden eyes, claws and fangs of his father Inutaisho, but he also had what Kagome called "cute doggy ears." She would never know how much they shamed him.
'Everyday these ears prove it to me. That I am a half breed. The hanyou Inuyasha. I remember the first time I was called that.' (A/N see episode 7. I don't know exactly what was going on so I kind of filled it in.)
'Back when I was young and naïve. When the villagers were playing with that ball and I came. All I wanted to do was to join them in their game. The man with the shadowed face threw the ball and I stupidly thought he had accidentally thrown it the wrong way so I ran after it. When I turned around everyone was leaving mummering things about hanyous and dirty blood. I suppose they thought I couldn't hear their cruel words and insults, but I heard them every single word. I was young so I did not understand. I remember I asked mother what a hanyou was and she cried. She was worried about my future. About the prejudice I would undoubtedly have to face as I got older. That is why I must become a full inuyoukai. So she will never have to worry about her hanyou son anymore. So she can rest in peace knowing that her son is safe from the world.' A single tear dripped into the water causing small waves to once again obscure his reflection.
Back at the campsite ~*~
Kagome was having a hard time sleeping. No matter how comfortable she got or how tired she was she couldn't put her mind at ease.
'Why did I say that to him? It was just some stupid dream. I could have just as easily told him the truth.' she sighed looking up at the stars.
'Maybe I should talk to him. He seemed really hurt by my words.' Kagome started to get up, but stopped.
"Don't leave me…" Shippou murmured in his sleep clinging to her arm. Kagome looked down at the young kitsune youkai her face softening.
"I will come back, I promise." she whispered softly kissing him on the forehead. He relaxed and curled up comfortably in her sleeping bag. She slowly got up careful not to disturb him and walked away. She had no real way of knowing where Inuyasha had gone, but for some reason she felt like she was being pulled to him.
~*~Back at Inuyasha's mystery location of doom [She's crazy.. -__-']
Inuyasha was high up in a tree staring up at the night sky when he saw Kagome walking into the clearing. 'Why is she here?' he thought.
"Inuyasha! Inuyasha I know you're here! Come out or I'll say it!" she yelled disturbing the calm night air with her shouts.
"Oi Kagome!" he said flattening his sensitive ears against his head. (Aren't his ears cute?!) [Crazy fan girl..] (I'll get you in the final A/N) "Are you trying to call every youkai here to kill you?!" he yelled.
"No. I was just trying to find you." she said lowering her voice almost to a whisper.
"Why were you looking for me? Aren't you afraid I'll eat you?" he said trying to sound intimidating even though every word hurt him.
"Inuyasha about that…." she whispered shifting her feet in the slightly damp grass.
~*~ END OF CHAPTER TWO
A/N Aren't I evil?Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! *gets pegged with many pounds of rotting fruit* *several baths later* Okay I posted this late at night and I was too tired to finish it. I had to post this tonight because I'm going somewhere tomorrow and I wouldn't have time to think and type the rest up. I think it's better that I did this instead of having you wait a possible two more days for me to update. Sorry about how long it took for me to post this chapter, but first it was the writer's block, thenit was the procrastination, then my computer deleted the whole thing, then I had writers block again, then it was deleted again and yeah.. This goes on for a long time. After all that my computer kept deleting only certain parts of my chapter like sentences and review responses and stuff and I had to rewrite it. I also started writing a new fanfic with my little brother. It's not posted yet because the first chapter isn't finished yet, but it should be posted within a few days so if you're interested check up on my stories every once in a while. I still plan on writing this at the same time. I won't abandon it after all the nice feedback I got. Please review! They help keep me inspired and motivated to write. If you have any suggestions for my fic go ahead and suggest them and I'll see if I can fit them in. I love a good challenge. ^_~
Me: Now what was that about that crazy fan girl comment?!
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: Oh come on! Look at your room! I think having that many posters of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru is a little obsessive.
Me: No it's not! I'm sure there are plenty of people with more Inuyasha posters than I have on their walls.
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: Uhuh. How many do you have?
Me: Uh… a little over 178 why?
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: My point has been proved.
Me: What point?
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: *sigh*
(parentheses) = my comments
[brackets] = my alt. Personalities' comments
"quotes" = speech
'half quotation thingies' = thoughts
*starry thingies* = sometimes sounds, sometimes actions
Disclaimer: If I owned Inuyasha why would I spend over 20 hours downloading each episode off of kazaa?
REVIEW RESPONSES: (A/N I got reviews!!! *does happy dance* [ I don't know her..] Ice cream for everyone!! *hands out various kinds of ice cream to all reviewers* Yes ALL reviewers I hold no grudge against "Lala" for his/her rudimentary attempt at a review)
Sakurafans: It was 30 sits. I guess I could have left it at 28 but I decided not to I have no idea why. Thank you for reading it and telling me whether it was confusing or not I was really worried about the whole italic thing but it looks like no one even noticed or if they did they didn't care.
Hallo: Wow thanks! I didn't think I'd get any reviews from people I didn't ask to read this. Actually when you sent me this review I had already gotten one, but whatever you would have had no way of knowing that.
Inuyasha: I'll try to update as often as possible.
XxDarkness HunterxX: Thank you for being honest with your opinion on my writing. Yes I'm making this a chapter fiction. If I ever decide to write a one shot I'll say so in the beginning and the summary, but I wouldn't expect one anytime soon being as I'm not good at writing short stories and would probably end up turning it into a chapter fic.
Mizu: I'm glad that my writing had such an effect on someone. Is the evil plotting really necessary? AHHHH!!
*runs away from one pound weight* You'll have to throw heavier things to make me update!! NO!! How could I forget your fingernails?! *runs away while Mizu randomly slashes people for no particular reason* Thanks for trying to show me how to make the italic work even though I forgot already. *sweat drop* Plus, I'm glad you were around to plot with when the "thing" was sent by the "person."
Kumagoro: Yay! A fellow weird person! Too many people are serious now a days. Thanks for putting me in your favorites I feel so loved! ^_^ I updated see. Look at the chapter! You can call of your chibi random person and spiffy toothpick now.
Lala: First I would like to answer your question "What the fuck is this?" I am assuming the "this" you were talking about is a fanfic. Well a fanfic or fic, short for fanfiction is a fictional story written by fans based on basically whatever the author or authoress is interested in. I.e. the fan part of the word fanfiction. They can be based on almost anything cartoons, anime, television shows, video games ect. You can easily figure out the meaning of the word by simply taking it apart. I hope that I have answered your question to your liking. Although I hope that next time you ask a simple question you won't use such profanity. As for your second comment "This fic sux fucking ass." it is impossible for a fanfiction to suck anything let alone "ass." Like I said before a fic is a fictional story. In the case of this particular fiction it was saved on my computer then uploaded to fanfiction.net. It does not/has never existed as living matter that could perform any actions. Also, about it having "…NO PLOT!" I hope you don't expect me to reveal the entire plot in my first chapter. As previously stated this is NOT a one shot it will be continued as I, the authoress see fit. After answering all your questions I hope you can answer me this why would you bother to ask me "What was the whole plot again?" if you planned on answering that question yourself?
Tenseiga: The healing sword huh? What a coincidence… I have to say that your review had very good timing. It dragged me out of the funk that my last review put me in. I plan on continuing this fic for my personal growth as a writer and my readers.
Shadow: I'll try to update as much as I can. Damn you writers block!! *shakes fist* I'll get you!!! Not you the writers block… yeah this is what too much sugar does to you…
SarA/lunA: *blinks* *rereads review* *blinks again* Thanks!! A lot! You really like it that much? I don't even like it that much. Your review made me so happy!! ^__^ In fact for an annoyingly long I was so happy I would only talk to people on AIM in a completely unreadable neon blue. Of course I'll kill that evil clay pot!! I can't believe Inuyasha kissed her… EEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Corpse kisses!! Blech! The thought makes me sick to my stomach or that could be all the chocolate cake I ate. Whatever, it's still disgusting. They have 3 liter bottles of coke? I've only seen 2 liter ones. Of course I'll email you when I update, but at the time I'm writing this your review hasn't showed up on my stats yet and I tried to look up your penname on ff.net it didn't find anything so yeah…. And because your review made me so happy you get.. *fumbles through bag* um… five cents and a packet of artificial sweetener.. Yeah that's what was actually in my wallet. Enjoy!
Previously on General Hospital… (A/N I just felt like typing that…. [And again I don't know her..] )
"Okay then…" Inuyasha said trying to hide his hurt "As long as you're alright." he finishes jumping to a far away tree.
"Inuyasha wait! That came out wrong!" Kagome yelled after him.
"Go to sleep wench!" he yelled his voice cracking. Reluctantly she obeyed him still feeling guilty for everything she had done that night.
"I'm so sorry Inuyasha." she whispered before falling asleep.
~*~ Chapter 2 … And the night goes on
Inuyasha slowly watched Kagome drift into sleep. 'She looks so innocent, so peaceful. Does she really fear me so much that I haunt her dreams? No that can't possibly be it. Almost every human I've been around has feared me, but she…. she was never truly afraid of me. Even when I tried to kill her I could barely smell the fear on her. But… that's when I'm in this form. Is it possible that my other form could cause her to feel such aversion towards me?' Inuyasha suddenly felt dizzy from the thoughts running through his head. He looked back at Kagome's sleeping form and sighed. 'I need to go somewhere I can clear my head.' he thought.
He began walking, to where he had no idea he just kept walking. 'Why do I even care what she thinks of me?' he asked himself as he came to a small lake and sat on the grass staring into the clear water.
'The real question is why should I care? After all that bitch is just a shard detector to me.' A light breeze picked up causing small ripples to appear on the waters surface. Inuyasha inhaled deeply faintly smelling Kagome's scent in the passing wind. He had purposely stayed downwind of where the group was camping so that if any youkai attacked wanting the shards he could be there to defend them.
'If she was merely a shard detector you would not have stayed with her and the other humans so long.' he thought. The hanyou glared into the water his thoughts once again at war.
'She can detect the shards better than both Kaede- baba and that lecher and that is why I allow her to say.' Inuyasha knew deep down inside past all his arrogance and denial he had feelings for Kagome, but he would never admit it aloud. Not to anyone… especially not her. For he knew his feelings for her could never be returned.
'I am a hanyou. I have dirty blood. I am feared by human's because of my demon blood and because I am stronger then them. I am rejected and mocked by youkai because of my human blood and because I am weaker then them, a disgrace to the entire species.' he looked down into the water seeing his slightly obscured reflection. He had the silvery white hair, golden eyes, claws and fangs of his father Inutaisho, but he also had what Kagome called "cute doggy ears." She would never know how much they shamed him.
'Everyday these ears prove it to me. That I am a half breed. The hanyou Inuyasha. I remember the first time I was called that.' (A/N see episode 7. I don't know exactly what was going on so I kind of filled it in.)
'Back when I was young and naïve. When the villagers were playing with that ball and I came. All I wanted to do was to join them in their game. The man with the shadowed face threw the ball and I stupidly thought he had accidentally thrown it the wrong way so I ran after it. When I turned around everyone was leaving mummering things about hanyous and dirty blood. I suppose they thought I couldn't hear their cruel words and insults, but I heard them every single word. I was young so I did not understand. I remember I asked mother what a hanyou was and she cried. She was worried about my future. About the prejudice I would undoubtedly have to face as I got older. That is why I must become a full inuyoukai. So she will never have to worry about her hanyou son anymore. So she can rest in peace knowing that her son is safe from the world.' A single tear dripped into the water causing small waves to once again obscure his reflection.
Back at the campsite ~*~
Kagome was having a hard time sleeping. No matter how comfortable she got or how tired she was she couldn't put her mind at ease.
'Why did I say that to him? It was just some stupid dream. I could have just as easily told him the truth.' she sighed looking up at the stars.
'Maybe I should talk to him. He seemed really hurt by my words.' Kagome started to get up, but stopped.
"Don't leave me…" Shippou murmured in his sleep clinging to her arm. Kagome looked down at the young kitsune youkai her face softening.
"I will come back, I promise." she whispered softly kissing him on the forehead. He relaxed and curled up comfortably in her sleeping bag. She slowly got up careful not to disturb him and walked away. She had no real way of knowing where Inuyasha had gone, but for some reason she felt like she was being pulled to him.
~*~Back at Inuyasha's mystery location of doom [She's crazy.. -__-']
Inuyasha was high up in a tree staring up at the night sky when he saw Kagome walking into the clearing. 'Why is she here?' he thought.
"Inuyasha! Inuyasha I know you're here! Come out or I'll say it!" she yelled disturbing the calm night air with her shouts.
"Oi Kagome!" he said flattening his sensitive ears against his head. (Aren't his ears cute?!) [Crazy fan girl..] (I'll get you in the final A/N) "Are you trying to call every youkai here to kill you?!" he yelled.
"No. I was just trying to find you." she said lowering her voice almost to a whisper.
"Why were you looking for me? Aren't you afraid I'll eat you?" he said trying to sound intimidating even though every word hurt him.
"Inuyasha about that…." she whispered shifting her feet in the slightly damp grass.
~*~ END OF CHAPTER TWO
A/N Aren't I evil?Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! *gets pegged with many pounds of rotting fruit* *several baths later* Okay I posted this late at night and I was too tired to finish it. I had to post this tonight because I'm going somewhere tomorrow and I wouldn't have time to think and type the rest up. I think it's better that I did this instead of having you wait a possible two more days for me to update. Sorry about how long it took for me to post this chapter, but first it was the writer's block, thenit was the procrastination, then my computer deleted the whole thing, then I had writers block again, then it was deleted again and yeah.. This goes on for a long time. After all that my computer kept deleting only certain parts of my chapter like sentences and review responses and stuff and I had to rewrite it. I also started writing a new fanfic with my little brother. It's not posted yet because the first chapter isn't finished yet, but it should be posted within a few days so if you're interested check up on my stories every once in a while. I still plan on writing this at the same time. I won't abandon it after all the nice feedback I got. Please review! They help keep me inspired and motivated to write. If you have any suggestions for my fic go ahead and suggest them and I'll see if I can fit them in. I love a good challenge. ^_~
Me: Now what was that about that crazy fan girl comment?!
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: Oh come on! Look at your room! I think having that many posters of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru is a little obsessive.
Me: No it's not! I'm sure there are plenty of people with more Inuyasha posters than I have on their walls.
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: Uhuh. How many do you have?
Me: Uh… a little over 178 why?
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: My point has been proved.
Me: What point?
Yet-to-be-named alternate personality me: *sigh*
