Hey PPL! I want to thank Claruchu and Xiao for being my first 2 reviewers
from this site. Tell me if u like the fic.and if u don't.tell me what's
wrong with it. Ok first thing.I write in MSN type. That means I will
occasionally put "u" for "you" or "c" for "see" if more than 6 different
reviewers oppose this option and want me to use all PROPER type..I will
change it as u wish. But only if there r 6 reviewers and more. K? good
anywayz on to the next part of the fic. The Syaoran Cards make their
appearance in Hong Kong. Ok first thing.get this. Syaoran is not hunting
down the cards.the CARDS r hunting HIM! They wont stop until Syaoran proves
himself 10 times more powerful than Clow Reed or until he is DEAD.
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~*~*~*~At school~*~*~*~
Mr. Takashi waited for the class to settle down before making the announcement. As he was waiting he took a glance at Syaoran or Li as he preferred to be called. Syaoran was sitting down with the posture that parents spend lifetimes trying to teach their kids and looking very important with a somewhat superior look. His eyes revealed nothing and that was what made people feel inferior to him. Even full grown adults shrunk beneath Syaoran's steady glare.
Mr. Takashi thought in wonderment (A/N: I don't know if "wonderment" in a real word.) Syaoran was indeed, the perfect student. Perfect balance in all subjects yet better then anyone at them. Syaoran had a perfect build even before he came to the school at the age of 10. He was probably the first person to have a six-pack at the age of 8. Muscular but not overly muscular. He also had very good looks for a boy of his age. Girls in the halls gasped when they saw him. He was definitely the GUY of the school. Smarter than any other child he could have easily skipped 2 grades but Mr. Takashi would not let him leave his class. He was .did takashi dare say?.a perfect person.
Then he looked at Meilin, she was also like Syaoran just.a more feminine version of him. She was beautiful and all who truly knew her loved her but yet.Syaoran rarely ever been seen without her. Both of them were a perfect pair.
"Mr. Takashi? Hello?, said Sakura
Mr. Takashi snapped back to reality finding his class staring at him.
He cleared his throat and got to the announcement.
"Your classmates, Syaoran and Meilin Li, will be leaving for Hong Kong on Monday and wont be returning for another year. They have both been outstanding students and our school would like to present then both with the all rounded student's award." said Mr.Takashi, missing them both already.
Sakura's heart skipped a beat. Syaoran? Leaving? She held back the tears that seemed to come immediately. "No.Syaoran can't leave!" she thought. But in her heart she knew she couldn't stop him. "I must pretend to be happy for him" thought Sakura before plastering a ever so fake smile on her face.
Meilin watched Sakura's reaction. She noticed the tears that Sakura held back. She saw through the fake smile. Meilin specialized in being able to understand and know how people felt. She felt Sakura's pain and felt pity for the girl. Yes, they were the same age. But Meilin and Syaoran were.well.more mature and stronger with almost no weakness except for each other.
Syaoran sneaked a peak at Meilin. He also sensed what Meilin was thinking. After all, he was the one who taught meilin how to feel someone's thoughts.even more.he and Meilin had a special connection.they had both been taught telepathy when they studied together at the Shoulin temple in Hong Kong.
~*~*~*~MONDAY~*~*~*~
Syaoran and Meilin were at the airport. The whole class had came along to wish them a safe trip. Sakura had brought a box of tissues and had almost finished them. Suddenly, A huge Jet with the word "Li private jet" landed on the runway.
2 men with strange Chinese traditional suites somewhat like Syaoran and Meilin's ceremonial costumes came out and approached Syaoran and Meilin. They got on their knees and bowed to Syaoran first and then to Meilin.
"Your majesty, and duchess, your private jet will take you to the palace. We are eternally sorry that we could only provide 10 bodyguards for your majesty and only 5 for the duchess Meilin. Please accept our humble apologies, your highness." said the first man.
"Very well u have been forgiven", said Syaoran in a royal monotone. "but as for the poor security of the duchess, u must ask her yourself for forgiveness."
Meilin stepped up. "Your flaw has been forgiven but I do not expect this to happen again. Is that clear?" she said in a dignified tone.
The class watched all of this in awe. Syaoran was a prince and future king? And Meilin was a duchess? 15 bodyguards? A private jet? Sakura was even more shocked. She had known that Syaoran was rich and special.but not royalty. She loved him even more now.
Meilin and Syaoran looked at their classmates and then suddenly 7 bodyguards surrounded the class with swords pointed at their throats.
The class screamed. Meilin immediately took action. "What are you doing?!" she yelled the bodyguards".
The bodyguards explained. "Duchess, they looked into your eyes without bowing first."
The class, now knowing what to do, bowed as low as their bodies would let them.
Syaoran now spoke. "Now are you satisfied?" he questioned the bodyguards. "Yes, your majesty we are most sorry for our behaviour it is only our job." Syaoran nodded.
A green carpet was rolled out before him leading straight to the private jet and a red carpet was rolled out for Meilin. They both turned around and waved goodbye and proceeded to the jet.
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So what do u think? I know it is a tiny bit confusing but if u read carefully it'll sort itself out. Please review I'm counting on the reviewers to continue.if I don't get enough reviews then im abandoning this story efore we even get to the Syaoran cards!!!!! So R&R or else!!!!!!!!!! -
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~*~*~*~At school~*~*~*~
Mr. Takashi waited for the class to settle down before making the announcement. As he was waiting he took a glance at Syaoran or Li as he preferred to be called. Syaoran was sitting down with the posture that parents spend lifetimes trying to teach their kids and looking very important with a somewhat superior look. His eyes revealed nothing and that was what made people feel inferior to him. Even full grown adults shrunk beneath Syaoran's steady glare.
Mr. Takashi thought in wonderment (A/N: I don't know if "wonderment" in a real word.) Syaoran was indeed, the perfect student. Perfect balance in all subjects yet better then anyone at them. Syaoran had a perfect build even before he came to the school at the age of 10. He was probably the first person to have a six-pack at the age of 8. Muscular but not overly muscular. He also had very good looks for a boy of his age. Girls in the halls gasped when they saw him. He was definitely the GUY of the school. Smarter than any other child he could have easily skipped 2 grades but Mr. Takashi would not let him leave his class. He was .did takashi dare say?.a perfect person.
Then he looked at Meilin, she was also like Syaoran just.a more feminine version of him. She was beautiful and all who truly knew her loved her but yet.Syaoran rarely ever been seen without her. Both of them were a perfect pair.
"Mr. Takashi? Hello?, said Sakura
Mr. Takashi snapped back to reality finding his class staring at him.
He cleared his throat and got to the announcement.
"Your classmates, Syaoran and Meilin Li, will be leaving for Hong Kong on Monday and wont be returning for another year. They have both been outstanding students and our school would like to present then both with the all rounded student's award." said Mr.Takashi, missing them both already.
Sakura's heart skipped a beat. Syaoran? Leaving? She held back the tears that seemed to come immediately. "No.Syaoran can't leave!" she thought. But in her heart she knew she couldn't stop him. "I must pretend to be happy for him" thought Sakura before plastering a ever so fake smile on her face.
Meilin watched Sakura's reaction. She noticed the tears that Sakura held back. She saw through the fake smile. Meilin specialized in being able to understand and know how people felt. She felt Sakura's pain and felt pity for the girl. Yes, they were the same age. But Meilin and Syaoran were.well.more mature and stronger with almost no weakness except for each other.
Syaoran sneaked a peak at Meilin. He also sensed what Meilin was thinking. After all, he was the one who taught meilin how to feel someone's thoughts.even more.he and Meilin had a special connection.they had both been taught telepathy when they studied together at the Shoulin temple in Hong Kong.
~*~*~*~MONDAY~*~*~*~
Syaoran and Meilin were at the airport. The whole class had came along to wish them a safe trip. Sakura had brought a box of tissues and had almost finished them. Suddenly, A huge Jet with the word "Li private jet" landed on the runway.
2 men with strange Chinese traditional suites somewhat like Syaoran and Meilin's ceremonial costumes came out and approached Syaoran and Meilin. They got on their knees and bowed to Syaoran first and then to Meilin.
"Your majesty, and duchess, your private jet will take you to the palace. We are eternally sorry that we could only provide 10 bodyguards for your majesty and only 5 for the duchess Meilin. Please accept our humble apologies, your highness." said the first man.
"Very well u have been forgiven", said Syaoran in a royal monotone. "but as for the poor security of the duchess, u must ask her yourself for forgiveness."
Meilin stepped up. "Your flaw has been forgiven but I do not expect this to happen again. Is that clear?" she said in a dignified tone.
The class watched all of this in awe. Syaoran was a prince and future king? And Meilin was a duchess? 15 bodyguards? A private jet? Sakura was even more shocked. She had known that Syaoran was rich and special.but not royalty. She loved him even more now.
Meilin and Syaoran looked at their classmates and then suddenly 7 bodyguards surrounded the class with swords pointed at their throats.
The class screamed. Meilin immediately took action. "What are you doing?!" she yelled the bodyguards".
The bodyguards explained. "Duchess, they looked into your eyes without bowing first."
The class, now knowing what to do, bowed as low as their bodies would let them.
Syaoran now spoke. "Now are you satisfied?" he questioned the bodyguards. "Yes, your majesty we are most sorry for our behaviour it is only our job." Syaoran nodded.
A green carpet was rolled out before him leading straight to the private jet and a red carpet was rolled out for Meilin. They both turned around and waved goodbye and proceeded to the jet.
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So what do u think? I know it is a tiny bit confusing but if u read carefully it'll sort itself out. Please review I'm counting on the reviewers to continue.if I don't get enough reviews then im abandoning this story efore we even get to the Syaoran cards!!!!! So R&R or else!!!!!!!!!! -
