AN thanks to the one person who reviewed. Thanks Tyler-t you rock, it's
people like you that keep us holding on. To the rest of you. If you just
want to yell at me about how bad of a writer I am, do so. At least I know
you read my story. Anyway I've had a question about Conner's name being a
boy's name and all I have to say is I'm Irish and it's not a rare sight to
see a guy with a girly name and a girly with a guy name. I have a friend
named sky and a friend named Jayme, one's a guy one's a girl, guess who's
who. It happens. I really wanted to have a half original name for her.
Conner got out of the car. The heat of Panama City Florida hit her in the face. She looked at the track before her. She took it all in. it was perfect. The perfect track to wipe the faces of the other drivers on. She could already see the cars going round and round then her car passing the line first. Dom came up from behind and put his arm around her shoulder.
"It's beautiful, isn't it? What do you think about hitting our pit and starting the layout tonight before we go to the hotel." Dom squeezed his daughter.
"Let's unpack that car." She ran to the spot that was marked DT motors and waited for her father to unlock the garage to she could see and touch her car again. That car was her baby.
Conner was taking the corners well after reading the track for a few hours. It was dark now and she knew she had to take it in. she was coming around the last corner as she felt the murmur in her rear passenger side. "Aw baby don't do this to me. Come on girl." She pulled into the pit and got out. She locked the garage and locked it. She got in the car with her father.
Jesse walked down the stairs of the lavish hotel lobby. He couldn't believe that someone was paying to put the whole team up in rooms here. Just as he was about to hit the door he saw Dom and Conner. "Yo, where you been. I've got the ps 2 set up and we're ready to rock. I grabbed my layouts set them in the game, now all that's left is setting up con girls practice chair and wheel, ordering pizza to the room and getting this girl set up to virtual reality."
Conner tossed her bag at Jesse. " Sony made a major mistake by turning you down." They all walked into the lobby and stopped when the say him. He came face to face with Conner. Daring her to do something. "Well isn't it Conner toretto. What you didn't get enough of me beating you last time, you come for more. Or did you come because you want to cheer me on from the side lines." Eric Tomas was 4 years older than Conner and dominating the east coast and slowly taking the west. Conner hated him. She pulled her fist back to punch him when her father grabbed her fist.
" Fight him on the track baby. You're so much better than him." He whispered into her ear. Jesses then leaned over and added, "Plus look at this place. Don't get us kicked out till you win and we can party." Conner pushed pass Tomas and went upstairs. Jesse and Conner stayed in Conner's room so they could set the game up. Dom went to his room to unpack is stuff for the next three weeks and to order the pizza to Conner's room. Conner sat on her bed. "Jesse I gotta tell you some thing but so can't tell my dad because he's already worried enough about me." Jesse looked up at the girl on the bed and the blood drained from his face. Conner never kept secrets from her father. "When I was driving today there was a murmur in my back right wheel. Could you check it out with the guys when my dad's not there. He was totally like I had a bad feeling and stuff so I can't tell him. He'll flip."
Jesse got his color back and started the breath again. He was laughing while con looked at Jesse oddly. "I thought you were going to tell me you were pregnant or something. I that I was about to die 5 seconds ago. Yeah sure, I'll get to it bright and early in the morning. Now let's get you going on this game.
R and R
Conner got out of the car. The heat of Panama City Florida hit her in the face. She looked at the track before her. She took it all in. it was perfect. The perfect track to wipe the faces of the other drivers on. She could already see the cars going round and round then her car passing the line first. Dom came up from behind and put his arm around her shoulder.
"It's beautiful, isn't it? What do you think about hitting our pit and starting the layout tonight before we go to the hotel." Dom squeezed his daughter.
"Let's unpack that car." She ran to the spot that was marked DT motors and waited for her father to unlock the garage to she could see and touch her car again. That car was her baby.
Conner was taking the corners well after reading the track for a few hours. It was dark now and she knew she had to take it in. she was coming around the last corner as she felt the murmur in her rear passenger side. "Aw baby don't do this to me. Come on girl." She pulled into the pit and got out. She locked the garage and locked it. She got in the car with her father.
Jesse walked down the stairs of the lavish hotel lobby. He couldn't believe that someone was paying to put the whole team up in rooms here. Just as he was about to hit the door he saw Dom and Conner. "Yo, where you been. I've got the ps 2 set up and we're ready to rock. I grabbed my layouts set them in the game, now all that's left is setting up con girls practice chair and wheel, ordering pizza to the room and getting this girl set up to virtual reality."
Conner tossed her bag at Jesse. " Sony made a major mistake by turning you down." They all walked into the lobby and stopped when the say him. He came face to face with Conner. Daring her to do something. "Well isn't it Conner toretto. What you didn't get enough of me beating you last time, you come for more. Or did you come because you want to cheer me on from the side lines." Eric Tomas was 4 years older than Conner and dominating the east coast and slowly taking the west. Conner hated him. She pulled her fist back to punch him when her father grabbed her fist.
" Fight him on the track baby. You're so much better than him." He whispered into her ear. Jesses then leaned over and added, "Plus look at this place. Don't get us kicked out till you win and we can party." Conner pushed pass Tomas and went upstairs. Jesse and Conner stayed in Conner's room so they could set the game up. Dom went to his room to unpack is stuff for the next three weeks and to order the pizza to Conner's room. Conner sat on her bed. "Jesse I gotta tell you some thing but so can't tell my dad because he's already worried enough about me." Jesse looked up at the girl on the bed and the blood drained from his face. Conner never kept secrets from her father. "When I was driving today there was a murmur in my back right wheel. Could you check it out with the guys when my dad's not there. He was totally like I had a bad feeling and stuff so I can't tell him. He'll flip."
Jesse got his color back and started the breath again. He was laughing while con looked at Jesse oddly. "I thought you were going to tell me you were pregnant or something. I that I was about to die 5 seconds ago. Yeah sure, I'll get to it bright and early in the morning. Now let's get you going on this game.
R and R
