Disclaimer: Ok, my first Crow fic. Based on the first film, 'cause I heard that the tv show was just an extended version of the film, and the sequels to the Crow weren't as good as the first film. (I read somewhere about something called The Crow: Wicked Prayer. If it's another sequel and not some video game, I'm getting nervous. But I guess I'll eventually see the sequels (City Of Angels, Salvation). I'll just make my friend rent them for me, so if they suck, she's stuck with 'em unless she returns the tapes early.)

Sarah: You done?
Broadwaypoetess: No. In Shelly's POV, her last dying moments, with the doctor's dialogue in between thoughts… Rated… uhmn… PG -13 for uhmn…. just language.
Sarah: Positive?
Broadwaypoetess: I sure hope so.
Eric: *rubbing temples* My god….
Broadwaypoetess: Sorry.

                                                                       
What about…?

I want to know where he is.
The officer said he was going to be with me.
Why isn't he here?
Unless, he's been hurt…
Or..
No! The officer said…


"Jesus Christ! She keeps breaking out."
"Another spasm like that, we're gonna be doing more harm than good. I'm trying to heal the little things…"


I can't see…
I …
Something's on my mouth…
Is someone taking care of Gabriel?
Is someone taking care of Sarah?
Is my dress…
Is it still there?


"Give her more sedative!"
"She's have enough sedative to practically kill a baby elephant!"
"I don't care!"


The officer said I was going to be okay
He wouldn't lie…
He's an officer.
'Serve and Protect!'
Unless…
He's protecting me from the truth.


"Her body's slowing down…"
"The sedatives?"
"No, we're…"

I can't hear…
I feel… ok
For a moment
Then I ache.
I can't see
I can't hear
But I feel

"We're losing her…"
"No, goddammit! No!"
"She's Catholic… bring the priest…"
"We can try, she's not giving up!"
"She wants to … It's been nearly thirty hours."
"Twenty-nine and about fifty-five minutes…"
"You were monitoring?"
"Fucking hell, she should've been gone, awhile ago—"
"—Losing pulse!"
"Get the priest!"
"We can still—"
"What's going on?"
"Father! We're losing her…"


I don't want to reschedule the wedding
I'm feeling better.
I think the lights are coming back on.
I see someone…
"Eric's worried, that's what you said?
Well, take me to him!"


"Time of death."
"4:48 November 1st."
"The officer said she was going to be married around noon yesterday."
"May the Devil take her killers."
"We all feel that way, Father."



End.


Ok, I liked it! Ok, I have to say, that when I wrote the bit "Eric's worried…" it's supposed to be that his soul is agonizing, thus, his soul is overly sad, and most likely can't see reason, even in Heaven. So his soul is sad that the crow brings back his Spirit and … well, y'know.


I'm thinking of writing a remotely funny story with Top Dollar and his sister, Myca. (Although some reviews for the Crow on epinions.com said "half-sister" but I heard "sister" in the film.) I just want to see if I have the names of the gang members straight.

Tin-Tin………… Guy with the knives. Raped Shelly.
Funny Boy………Guy with the… heroin? Was screwing Darla.
T- Bird …………Guy who blew up in his car. Unless, his car was a T-Bird. He had the Devil quote.
Skank………….. Guy who was hanging out with T-Bird. And you usually had no clue what he said. It was like… "Reahrahrahrah! He's gonna kill my ass! Raharahrah! Oh shit! Oh shit! Rahrahrahrah!


And… there was a black guy. I have no clue what his name is. I know who Skull Boy was supposed to be in the first film (was supposed to guide Eric instead of the crow (I read it in a review on epinions)).

Ok, now review, and possibly help me with the names!
~Broadwaypoetess