DevilsAngel (Author's note)
By: kijotenshi (devilsangel)
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Disclaimer: Sekushi Sesshou and Inu have never and will never, EVER be mine (unfortunately). Tho, my original characters are mine and I lay my claim on them (I feel dumb. '.')
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8.6.2003
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This fic is going on a temporary hiatus. I'm losing interest, but I do plan to start it up again sometime later. You'll know when that happens if you're on the LordSesshoumaru mailing list. Anyways, right now, I'm going to redo a few of my chapters. Hopefully, it will come out for the better. (^.^).
If there are any offering BETA-readers/proofreaders, I would really appreciate it!
(My two dedicated BETA-ers are working on the next chapter of R.O.M. for me and I don't want to load it all on them). Any ways, I'm open to suggestions (even though I have the plot all down). Especially on my latest chapter (which, by the way, really sucked). The more I think about it. The more I need to change that chapter. But, I really need a BETAreader.
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To clear some things up:
There was a time elapse. .. I need to redo that chapter. It sux.
In case you didn't get that whole Youkai/Enjeru (demon/angel) thing, this is for you. The Demons and Angels were stranded colonies of alien civilizations (Sort of sci-fi like, if you think about it). They, unfortunately, are stuck on Earth with the Ningens (humans) and the Fumetsu (Immortals). Now, about the Fumestu. The Fumetsu aren't really people. They are kuromikos (dark witches) or magicians that work magic at the expense of their soul. Therefore meaning, that they are soul-less (but not heartless) bodies.
And gender. The problem of gender. Enjeru are all females. And Youkai are all male. They can shape-change, but only once in a lifetime. Enjeru give birth by bedding with a Ningen man. There is the occasional I.. In this story (mild spoiler), Mina has a child with a Youkai, causing mass panic.
Okay enough of the explanations. If you still don't get something, tell me. (Oh yea, my email is xoxaznqtiexox@yahoo.com and my AIM/mIRC is xoxaznqtiexox. And, my kazaa is devilsangel.)
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About Word choice:
I will use the occasional Japanese word phrase in place of the English. Basically the kana (cause the kanji doesn't show up). I will define those words in parentheses, just in case you don't know it. etc., etc.
Some main words:
Demon-Youkai (I hope everyone knows this one.
Angel- Enjeru, enzeru, mitsukai, tennotsukai, tenshi
Angel baby- Enzerubabii
Dearest: Itoshii, koishii
Immortal: fumetsu, fukyuu
Epitome: Daigomi (What the Youkai and Enzeru are trying to achieve, it's explained later)
Broken heart: burookunhaato (name of the cliff in the beginning)
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Until next time, Ja!
By: kijotenshi (devilsangel)
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Disclaimer: Sekushi Sesshou and Inu have never and will never, EVER be mine (unfortunately). Tho, my original characters are mine and I lay my claim on them (I feel dumb. '.')
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
8.6.2003
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This fic is going on a temporary hiatus. I'm losing interest, but I do plan to start it up again sometime later. You'll know when that happens if you're on the LordSesshoumaru mailing list. Anyways, right now, I'm going to redo a few of my chapters. Hopefully, it will come out for the better. (^.^).
If there are any offering BETA-readers/proofreaders, I would really appreciate it!
(My two dedicated BETA-ers are working on the next chapter of R.O.M. for me and I don't want to load it all on them). Any ways, I'm open to suggestions (even though I have the plot all down). Especially on my latest chapter (which, by the way, really sucked). The more I think about it. The more I need to change that chapter. But, I really need a BETAreader.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
To clear some things up:
There was a time elapse. .. I need to redo that chapter. It sux.
In case you didn't get that whole Youkai/Enjeru (demon/angel) thing, this is for you. The Demons and Angels were stranded colonies of alien civilizations (Sort of sci-fi like, if you think about it). They, unfortunately, are stuck on Earth with the Ningens (humans) and the Fumetsu (Immortals). Now, about the Fumestu. The Fumetsu aren't really people. They are kuromikos (dark witches) or magicians that work magic at the expense of their soul. Therefore meaning, that they are soul-less (but not heartless) bodies.
And gender. The problem of gender. Enjeru are all females. And Youkai are all male. They can shape-change, but only once in a lifetime. Enjeru give birth by bedding with a Ningen man. There is the occasional I.. In this story (mild spoiler), Mina has a child with a Youkai, causing mass panic.
Okay enough of the explanations. If you still don't get something, tell me. (Oh yea, my email is xoxaznqtiexox@yahoo.com and my AIM/mIRC is xoxaznqtiexox. And, my kazaa is devilsangel.)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
About Word choice:
I will use the occasional Japanese word phrase in place of the English. Basically the kana (cause the kanji doesn't show up). I will define those words in parentheses, just in case you don't know it. etc., etc.
Some main words:
Demon-Youkai (I hope everyone knows this one.
Angel- Enjeru, enzeru, mitsukai, tennotsukai, tenshi
Angel baby- Enzerubabii
Dearest: Itoshii, koishii
Immortal: fumetsu, fukyuu
Epitome: Daigomi (What the Youkai and Enzeru are trying to achieve, it's explained later)
Broken heart: burookunhaato (name of the cliff in the beginning)
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Until next time, Ja!
