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want to make a bit of comment though before I go on with my fourth chapter.
So ya, ok, the plot maybe is overused by MANY people, but it's not just the
plot that makes the story, it's the creativeness of the author to sell it!!
Am I right?!?!?! RIGHT!!!! Now that I'm finished with that, if you don't
happen to like this story, check out my other one, "Each to Their Own." I
guarantee you'll love it.
Now.......ON WITH THE SHOW!!!!!!!!
The Weaker Sex
Chapter Four---Introductions and Training
After a long a wonder full rest and some food to fill her stomach, Serena was ready to conquer the world. But where could she go? Andrew said she didn't have much freedom but he didn't say she couldn't take a look around. But as she was about to exit her room a knock resounded upon her door. Quickly she opened it and saw Andrew standing in front of her door.
"Next time, ask who's at the door. You never can tell who may be at the other side."
"Oh yes, of course."
"Come, we have introductions to make."
Quickly she shut the door behind her and followed Andrew through the winding corridors. To many to even confuse the princess who even lived in one herself. But finally they made it to a pair of large cherry oak doors with guards on either side. Andrew nodded his head to the men and they each took a door handle and opened it wide for them to proceed.
What Serena than saw was a large throne room indeed. Perhaps not as grand as her mothers but beautiful none the less. Inlaid with tapestries of family arms and symbols of the different planets from the galaxy. Each in their insignia color and awesome splendor. Many men and women of the court stood about in the room that now became deathly quite. Quite so as to see the new visitor to the throne.
She felt a tug upon her arm and suddenly came back to reality. Noticing that Andrew was signaling her to go on. Slowly she proceeded down upon the carpet, guard in arms at attention at each of her sides. Until finally she came to the great steps to the throne. And there sat the King his wife and son. She tried not to be so obvious as to her awe at the prince's handsome looks so to keep her from doing so she knelt to the the rulers low and kept her head bowed in respect.
"Arise Artemis," commanded the King. "I have come to learn that you wish to learn the art of war. Where it not for your ties to their throne of the Moon and the consistent prattle," he smiled, "of my sons close friend, I may have not even let you come. But they tell me you are a quick learner. And loyal to what you set out to do. Let us hope you will become a fine guard to my son."
Serena than lowered her voice an octave than before she spoke, "I shall Your Majesty."
"You may arise."
And as she did Andrew stepped forward, bowed to His Majesty and spoke, "With your permission Sire, I would like to become Artemis' personal trainer. And perhaps start as soon as possible."
"Of course. You have my permission. Now go," he waved, "And return upon the eve for dinner to sit upon my right hand side Artemis. I have much to discuss with you."
"Yes Your Highness," Serena replied.
Andrew than took Serenas' arm and led her through the same doors she had just entered and than took her to one of the many palace gardens.
"This is where we shall train until I believe you ready to take on the other men. You will meet me every morning at dawn at this spot. The training will be hard and rigorous and I will not be merciful in combat. You want to become strong, to learn the art of combat, I will show you. I expect perfection and nothing less from you."
Serena was surprised at the sudden attitude change in Andrew. That it showed upon her face.
"I will do the best I can and more Andrew. You can count on that."
"One more thing; in public you will call me sir and nothing more. All trainees start out this way. But I must forewarn you; I will be ten times harder upon you than any other man I have ever trained. If you want to prove your strength you must do so with ease and seemingly without effort." He looked upon her face now and saw the apprehension there and began to soften a moment. "Don't worry Serena. I have never been so sure in my life that you could possibly become the strongest woman I know. Don't worry, with time you will learn. But for now why don't we just go through some basic hand-to-hand moves."
Andrew had definitely had his work cut out for him. The only type of self- defense Serena could ever possibly do was call forth the crystal. And even that hardly worked. After a few hours Andrew stopped a moment and looked at Serena.
"Perhaps the reason why you can't call forth the crystal is not just the physical aspect of your body but perhaps the mentality."
Serena looked on in confusion. Which lead Andrew to explain, "What I mean is, perhaps you are not mentally ready to fully wield the power of the crystal. Don't get me wrong, Lunarians' have far superior use of their minds when it comes to us humans. But just think about it for a moment, the crystal must be an awesome force to control. And from what I hear, it takes its toll doubly upon the body as well as the mind."
"Well, yes it does," Serena contemplated, "That is another reason why I have come here. To prove myself capable of wielding the crystal. That is why I must learn combat. To strengthen my body."
"No offence malady, but perhaps as we learn combat you should also train in the mind as well as the body."
"Your advice is greatly appreciated Andrew. Thank you for all you are doing for me."
"It is my pleasure Your Majesty."
And as they where about to return to their lesson a servant came to call upon them for their presence in the Dinning Hall. Quickly they both washed up and came unto the Hall where they would have a grand meal beyond any measurability. Even the Princess was shocked by how much food sat upon the grand dinning table that ran the length of the giant hall. At least 87 seats where filled three remained empty. The King sat at the head of the table, his wife at the other head. Knights, nobles and their families arrayed the rest. And as the two just made their entrance the prince did as well.
"So my friend, how goes it with our newest recruit?" looking upon Serena she began to feel uneasy. She felt almost as if he could see through her whole charade but would not come forth with his knowledge.
"Artemis shows great promise. Not only physically but in the mind as well."
"Aww, a rarity even among our own people," looking upon her he than asked, "where say you from Artemis?"
"From the Moon Kingdom Sire,"
"Awww, that may be why he shows such mental prowess," smiling upon Serena and Andrew he than ushered them to their seats and he than taking his. Serena was just about to comment on how rude the prince was when he did not seat her until she remembered that unto him and all others she was a man. Quickly recovering she took her seat and in doing so all began to dine.
The king than inquired upon "Artemis" about his life and home. Even asking how the people of the moon faired. It was strange for Serena especially when the King inquired about the Queen and "Princess."
"I had heard she had a lovely daughter. One that surpassed even her own beauty. Is that not true?"
Serena began to blush but quickly hid that and answered him, "Yes, many believe she is far beautiful than even her own mother."
"And those tales about the crystals and such, are they indeed true?"
And when the mention of the crystal came up Serena relaxed and began to tell him her knowledge of the crystal and all the others similar or stronger than the power. "Yes. The Moon Crystal is indeed a real thing. A most powerful weapon unto my people that lives inside of the body of the princess. One that even surpasses the one that lives inside the Queen. But they say that even these crystals do not hold the true potential of power unto the Moon. They say that the Imperial Moon Crystal holds far more power than even the Queen or Princess possesses inside themselves. Some even rumor to say that this crystal is actually the crystal that lies dormant in the fabric of time. That once a sense of dread comes upon the universe it than comes forth with the aid of another crystal unknown unto the Moon to join together and vanquish the evils."
"For a boy you seem to know much of these crystal's," commented Endymion.
Serena began to fume with anger but suppressed her anger and calmly answered him, "Yes. Well, there are many stories that are common knowledge among my people. Some may even be mythical, such as the Imperial Moon Crystal. But, we shall never know. For nothing has ever come to bring the people of this galaxy even the slightest fear upon their lives. And if that where to happen, many people believe that the one that wields the Imperial Moon Crystal will rise to defeat the threat with its awesome power."
Endymion looked upon this boy with a sudden curiosity. Something in his gut told him that this Artemis fellow was not what he seemed to be. Nor did he fully seem to tell all his knowledge of this "legend." But whatever it was.. he would find out.
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Well, there it is.the 4rth chapter. But I must tell everyone that I may or may not be able to put out the 5th chapter till Friday. Hopefully it'll be out tomorrow though. I have a little vacation set up for the next few days. Nothing major, but good enough for me. Also, if any1 wants me to e-mail them on updates just send me ur e-mail and I'll personally make sure you know whenever I set out a new chapter. But, till then, I'll c you guys later!!!!
The Weaker Sex
Chapter Four---Introductions and Training
After a long a wonder full rest and some food to fill her stomach, Serena was ready to conquer the world. But where could she go? Andrew said she didn't have much freedom but he didn't say she couldn't take a look around. But as she was about to exit her room a knock resounded upon her door. Quickly she opened it and saw Andrew standing in front of her door.
"Next time, ask who's at the door. You never can tell who may be at the other side."
"Oh yes, of course."
"Come, we have introductions to make."
Quickly she shut the door behind her and followed Andrew through the winding corridors. To many to even confuse the princess who even lived in one herself. But finally they made it to a pair of large cherry oak doors with guards on either side. Andrew nodded his head to the men and they each took a door handle and opened it wide for them to proceed.
What Serena than saw was a large throne room indeed. Perhaps not as grand as her mothers but beautiful none the less. Inlaid with tapestries of family arms and symbols of the different planets from the galaxy. Each in their insignia color and awesome splendor. Many men and women of the court stood about in the room that now became deathly quite. Quite so as to see the new visitor to the throne.
She felt a tug upon her arm and suddenly came back to reality. Noticing that Andrew was signaling her to go on. Slowly she proceeded down upon the carpet, guard in arms at attention at each of her sides. Until finally she came to the great steps to the throne. And there sat the King his wife and son. She tried not to be so obvious as to her awe at the prince's handsome looks so to keep her from doing so she knelt to the the rulers low and kept her head bowed in respect.
"Arise Artemis," commanded the King. "I have come to learn that you wish to learn the art of war. Where it not for your ties to their throne of the Moon and the consistent prattle," he smiled, "of my sons close friend, I may have not even let you come. But they tell me you are a quick learner. And loyal to what you set out to do. Let us hope you will become a fine guard to my son."
Serena than lowered her voice an octave than before she spoke, "I shall Your Majesty."
"You may arise."
And as she did Andrew stepped forward, bowed to His Majesty and spoke, "With your permission Sire, I would like to become Artemis' personal trainer. And perhaps start as soon as possible."
"Of course. You have my permission. Now go," he waved, "And return upon the eve for dinner to sit upon my right hand side Artemis. I have much to discuss with you."
"Yes Your Highness," Serena replied.
Andrew than took Serenas' arm and led her through the same doors she had just entered and than took her to one of the many palace gardens.
"This is where we shall train until I believe you ready to take on the other men. You will meet me every morning at dawn at this spot. The training will be hard and rigorous and I will not be merciful in combat. You want to become strong, to learn the art of combat, I will show you. I expect perfection and nothing less from you."
Serena was surprised at the sudden attitude change in Andrew. That it showed upon her face.
"I will do the best I can and more Andrew. You can count on that."
"One more thing; in public you will call me sir and nothing more. All trainees start out this way. But I must forewarn you; I will be ten times harder upon you than any other man I have ever trained. If you want to prove your strength you must do so with ease and seemingly without effort." He looked upon her face now and saw the apprehension there and began to soften a moment. "Don't worry Serena. I have never been so sure in my life that you could possibly become the strongest woman I know. Don't worry, with time you will learn. But for now why don't we just go through some basic hand-to-hand moves."
Andrew had definitely had his work cut out for him. The only type of self- defense Serena could ever possibly do was call forth the crystal. And even that hardly worked. After a few hours Andrew stopped a moment and looked at Serena.
"Perhaps the reason why you can't call forth the crystal is not just the physical aspect of your body but perhaps the mentality."
Serena looked on in confusion. Which lead Andrew to explain, "What I mean is, perhaps you are not mentally ready to fully wield the power of the crystal. Don't get me wrong, Lunarians' have far superior use of their minds when it comes to us humans. But just think about it for a moment, the crystal must be an awesome force to control. And from what I hear, it takes its toll doubly upon the body as well as the mind."
"Well, yes it does," Serena contemplated, "That is another reason why I have come here. To prove myself capable of wielding the crystal. That is why I must learn combat. To strengthen my body."
"No offence malady, but perhaps as we learn combat you should also train in the mind as well as the body."
"Your advice is greatly appreciated Andrew. Thank you for all you are doing for me."
"It is my pleasure Your Majesty."
And as they where about to return to their lesson a servant came to call upon them for their presence in the Dinning Hall. Quickly they both washed up and came unto the Hall where they would have a grand meal beyond any measurability. Even the Princess was shocked by how much food sat upon the grand dinning table that ran the length of the giant hall. At least 87 seats where filled three remained empty. The King sat at the head of the table, his wife at the other head. Knights, nobles and their families arrayed the rest. And as the two just made their entrance the prince did as well.
"So my friend, how goes it with our newest recruit?" looking upon Serena she began to feel uneasy. She felt almost as if he could see through her whole charade but would not come forth with his knowledge.
"Artemis shows great promise. Not only physically but in the mind as well."
"Aww, a rarity even among our own people," looking upon her he than asked, "where say you from Artemis?"
"From the Moon Kingdom Sire,"
"Awww, that may be why he shows such mental prowess," smiling upon Serena and Andrew he than ushered them to their seats and he than taking his. Serena was just about to comment on how rude the prince was when he did not seat her until she remembered that unto him and all others she was a man. Quickly recovering she took her seat and in doing so all began to dine.
The king than inquired upon "Artemis" about his life and home. Even asking how the people of the moon faired. It was strange for Serena especially when the King inquired about the Queen and "Princess."
"I had heard she had a lovely daughter. One that surpassed even her own beauty. Is that not true?"
Serena began to blush but quickly hid that and answered him, "Yes, many believe she is far beautiful than even her own mother."
"And those tales about the crystals and such, are they indeed true?"
And when the mention of the crystal came up Serena relaxed and began to tell him her knowledge of the crystal and all the others similar or stronger than the power. "Yes. The Moon Crystal is indeed a real thing. A most powerful weapon unto my people that lives inside of the body of the princess. One that even surpasses the one that lives inside the Queen. But they say that even these crystals do not hold the true potential of power unto the Moon. They say that the Imperial Moon Crystal holds far more power than even the Queen or Princess possesses inside themselves. Some even rumor to say that this crystal is actually the crystal that lies dormant in the fabric of time. That once a sense of dread comes upon the universe it than comes forth with the aid of another crystal unknown unto the Moon to join together and vanquish the evils."
"For a boy you seem to know much of these crystal's," commented Endymion.
Serena began to fume with anger but suppressed her anger and calmly answered him, "Yes. Well, there are many stories that are common knowledge among my people. Some may even be mythical, such as the Imperial Moon Crystal. But, we shall never know. For nothing has ever come to bring the people of this galaxy even the slightest fear upon their lives. And if that where to happen, many people believe that the one that wields the Imperial Moon Crystal will rise to defeat the threat with its awesome power."
Endymion looked upon this boy with a sudden curiosity. Something in his gut told him that this Artemis fellow was not what he seemed to be. Nor did he fully seem to tell all his knowledge of this "legend." But whatever it was.. he would find out.
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Well, there it is.the 4rth chapter. But I must tell everyone that I may or may not be able to put out the 5th chapter till Friday. Hopefully it'll be out tomorrow though. I have a little vacation set up for the next few days. Nothing major, but good enough for me. Also, if any1 wants me to e-mail them on updates just send me ur e-mail and I'll personally make sure you know whenever I set out a new chapter. But, till then, I'll c you guys later!!!!
