Hi people, I'm back. Just responding to a review I got. First of all (this
is going to be one long paragraph), the reason I tell people that I dislike
it is because I see reviews as something to give your personal reaction and
when you give your personal reaction the author has every right to know why
you think that way. Second, I feel that if people should say which couples
they like then I have every right to say which couples I dislike. I'm not
trying to bash anybody, but almost any story I read there's a mild or huge
taste of Keniko. I dislike it and I have every right to say it. Now, with
that out of my way, on with the story.
"So, where's your room, Shenlong?" Yugo asked while sitting comfortably in an armchair.
"It's room 410." Shenlong said pulling out the key to his and Uranus's room.
"Oh, that's nice.." Yugo said.
They sat in silence, when Kenji had to ask Yugo out. The two boys had stepped out, when Kenji began to talk.
"I got a call today." Kenji said.
"Who called us THIS time?" Yugo asked.
"Well, it was Xion." Kenji said.
Although it didn't seem or look like they'd be friends, Xion and Yugo were pretty close.
"Well! Xion! Why'd he call?" Yugo asked with interest.
"He said that he came down to the spa but doesn't have enough money for any rooms. He said all the cheaper rooms are sold out. He wanted to know if he can share with us." Kenji explained.
"Sure, of course he can!" Yugo exclaimed.
The two boys stepped back in. Shenlong was staring out the window, while Uranus was looking through the little figurines on the shelves.
"Okay, we're back." Yugo said.
They were engaged in talking about Uranus's new role. Kenji heard a knock on the door.
"Hello! It's me!" Came what sounded like Uriko's voice.
Kenji's eyes grew wide. What was she doing here? How did she know what room they were in? Kenji swallowed, and expected to see Uriko with a gun or something. But no, it was Xion, master of voices.
"Oh, Xion. Hello." Kenji said, two seconds away from pulverizing Xion.
"Got you good, didn't I?" Xion asked.
"Yeah, yeah.. Shut up and get in.." Kenji never felt comfortable around Xion.
Ever since Alice's death, he didn't want anything to do with Xion. Kenji stepped out of the way, letting Xion come in. Everybody greeted eachother and went back to their conversation.
"Alice would've loved that part.." Yugo sighed.
"I know! It's the best part!" Uranus said, rubbing it in his face.
"If only some bastard hadn't killed her.. Or she could've commit suicide." Yugo was trembling.
"I'm sure she wouldn't have commit suicide." Xion said, sipping a cup of wine.
"Yugo, let the past go. That was a whole year ago. Let these things go." Shenlong said.
"I've heard that Nonomura is here too." Uranus said.
"She is." Yugo and Kenji said in unison.
"Aren't you worried? That something might happen?" Xion asked. "Another fight might break out."
"We're keeping our distance." Yugo said.
"My name is Uriko Nonomura, grade A bitch." Xion mocked Uriko's voice.
"You're really good at voices Xion." Yugo exclaimed.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Uriko *~*~*~*~*~*~
"Really?! This helps me a whole lot! Thank you miss! All right, good bye!" Uriko was happy.
She could finally pin down Yugo for the murder of Alice! A woman was passing by when she heard Yugo's voice and then saw Alice fall. Somebody had pushed Alice off. Another person, a man, also said the same thing. But could they be trusted? The man was a robber who was robbing the apartment room above Alice and Yugo's and the woman was crazy. She had to take medications and such. A robber and mental patient. Wasn't it enough to pin down Yugo?
"I can't think right now.. I think I'll go swim." Uriko changed into her swimsuit and put on the little whistle that Jane gave her.
She was to blow it if she were in danger. Uriko wrapped a towel around her waist. It was night, so she could walk without the fear of being seen. She reached the pool, and dove in.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Yugo and Kenji *~*~*~*~*~*~
"Okay, thanks for stopping by, bye." Yugo said.
He slammed the door behind Shenlong and Uranus.
"Man, they're a pain in the ass." Xion said. "Would you look at that?"
"Look at what?" Yugo asked.
"Nonomura sneaking around in a swimsuit." Xion said looking out the window.
"Hm.. " Yugo got a thought. 'After that phone call, they have enough evidence to say I did it. I'm not going to let that happen. I'll have to get rid of Nonomura. Without her, how can the court trust a woman with hallucinations and a man who was robbing a room? I'll just have to get rid of her now..' He didn't like the thought, but he decided to do it. "Boys, I'll be back."
He stepped into the hallway, and into the changing for the swimming area. There was scuba gear. He slid it on, and went outside. There was Uriko, making laps around the perimeter of the pool. Yugo's one chance was when Uriko was turned around, so he could get her from behind. He cracked his knuckles. She had turned around, and luckily for him, had stopped. Yugo snuck to the edge of the pool. He quietly sank into the deep waters, and with ease swam for Uriko's foot. He grasped it, dragging her under. Uriko was flailing; he could feel her kicking. She couldn't make him let go, she flailed more and more.
'Who is this?! How did they know that I was here? Is it some random murderer?' Uriko could feel the attacker bear hug her, so she couldn't swim from their grip. 'It's a guy, I can tell! Can it really be Yugo?! Or Kenji?! Are they actually trying to kill me?!'
Uriko kicked more. Her foot hit Yugo in the spot that shouldn't be hit. Yugo let her go, and Uriko swam upwards. She got the whistle, and blew all her breath into it. Yugo quickly got out, and scurried away. Uriko was gripping the side of the wall, but her body was weak with exhaustion, and her grip was loosening. Jane came quickly, and noticed Uriko. She pulled her out of the water, and tried to help her.
"Uriko? What happened?" Jane asked.
"I-I *cough* was attacked.." She gasped for air.
"I'll get you to the hospital right away!" Jane said.
They had a little mini hospital, not one for big things, but one for things like this. Uriko lay on the bed; she was going to be fine in the morning.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Jenny *~*~*~*~*~*~
"How horrible! Uriko was almost murdered" Jenny said into the recorder. "She recalls a man attacking her, although she could not see his face or anything because he wore scuba gear. He almost got rid of her. Terribly dreadful."
Jenny stuffed the recorder into her bag. Somebody was at the door. She opened it, and Xion walked in.
"What're you doing here?" Jenny asked.
"Just stopping by, saying hello." Xion said.
"Okay, hello, good bye. Have a nice day." Jenny said, shutting the door. "He's very odd. I wonder why he'd come over here just to say hi?"
Jenny was looking over her schedule for the following weeks. Why was she going to have an injection for her face? She looked young enough already. Oh well, Jenny put the list into her purse. She was to have a massage then go to dinner. Everybody was busy. Jenny had a massage, Uriko was taking a walk, Yugo was in an exercise class, Kenji was taking a shower, and Xion was wandering around the complex trying to figure out what was where, Shenlong was in the mud baths and Uranus was taking a facial. Dinner was in 20 minutes. Everybody came dressed to dinner. Uriko sat in her corner again.
'There they are again. With the whole gang. Except Jenny. Why does she keep hanging around them?' Uriko glared at their table.
"Yugo, I can't eat. She keeps staring over here and it's making me uncomfortable." Kenji whispered into Yugo's ear.
"Just ignore her. She deserves no attention." Yugo responded.
But Kenji could feel her eyes glaring at their table. She was planning something, and he knew they'd fall for it.
"Oh, please?" Jenny asked.
"No, leave me alone you crazy woman!" Xion stuffed chicken into his mouth.
"But I've heard that you can do Dr. Phil's voice and Oprah's voice. And even Uriko's." Jenny smirked.
"Why should I tell you?" Xion asked.
"Because I'm curious." Jenny said, leaning over the table to him. Her pen was in his face almost, why did she bring that everywhere she went?
"Curiosity killed the cat, Jenny." Xion pointed out.
"But I'm not a cat, I'm a bat, remember?" Jenny said a bit irritated.
"It's a phrase, woman." Xion said, getting angry.
'He looks like he's getting mad.' Uriko thought. 'What're they saying?'
"And Nonomura's getting on my nerves." Xion said.
"Can't we talk about something other than HER?" Yugo asked.
"I'm done eating. I'll see you in the room." Kenji stood up and left.
"Okay, Kenji.." Yugo said.
'And where is HE going?' Uriko thought. 'Perhaps getting into scuba diver gear and waiting for me to go swimming again?'
A thought struck Uriko. Now was time for a plan. She'd go swimming all right. And she'll get caught. After dinner, instead of swimming though, she went to bed. She decided that he'd wait till she went swimming. Then she'd let him catch her and she would transform. It was a good idea. Uriko fell into a deep slumber.
"Well, I guess it's time to get up.." Uriko said.
She sat up and changed. First up was an exercise class. She locked her door and left.
"Well, I see I have nothing till tomorrow. Might as well snoop around again." Jenny picked up her recorder and left.
"I hate walking, but we've gotta go, huh Kenji?" Yugo asked.
"Yeah, see ya Xion." Kenji and Yugo went off for their walking classes.
Xion looked around. Now was the time to strike.
And there you have it. The next chapter. I've lost all feeling to write right now. Okay, see ya.. laterz.
"So, where's your room, Shenlong?" Yugo asked while sitting comfortably in an armchair.
"It's room 410." Shenlong said pulling out the key to his and Uranus's room.
"Oh, that's nice.." Yugo said.
They sat in silence, when Kenji had to ask Yugo out. The two boys had stepped out, when Kenji began to talk.
"I got a call today." Kenji said.
"Who called us THIS time?" Yugo asked.
"Well, it was Xion." Kenji said.
Although it didn't seem or look like they'd be friends, Xion and Yugo were pretty close.
"Well! Xion! Why'd he call?" Yugo asked with interest.
"He said that he came down to the spa but doesn't have enough money for any rooms. He said all the cheaper rooms are sold out. He wanted to know if he can share with us." Kenji explained.
"Sure, of course he can!" Yugo exclaimed.
The two boys stepped back in. Shenlong was staring out the window, while Uranus was looking through the little figurines on the shelves.
"Okay, we're back." Yugo said.
They were engaged in talking about Uranus's new role. Kenji heard a knock on the door.
"Hello! It's me!" Came what sounded like Uriko's voice.
Kenji's eyes grew wide. What was she doing here? How did she know what room they were in? Kenji swallowed, and expected to see Uriko with a gun or something. But no, it was Xion, master of voices.
"Oh, Xion. Hello." Kenji said, two seconds away from pulverizing Xion.
"Got you good, didn't I?" Xion asked.
"Yeah, yeah.. Shut up and get in.." Kenji never felt comfortable around Xion.
Ever since Alice's death, he didn't want anything to do with Xion. Kenji stepped out of the way, letting Xion come in. Everybody greeted eachother and went back to their conversation.
"Alice would've loved that part.." Yugo sighed.
"I know! It's the best part!" Uranus said, rubbing it in his face.
"If only some bastard hadn't killed her.. Or she could've commit suicide." Yugo was trembling.
"I'm sure she wouldn't have commit suicide." Xion said, sipping a cup of wine.
"Yugo, let the past go. That was a whole year ago. Let these things go." Shenlong said.
"I've heard that Nonomura is here too." Uranus said.
"She is." Yugo and Kenji said in unison.
"Aren't you worried? That something might happen?" Xion asked. "Another fight might break out."
"We're keeping our distance." Yugo said.
"My name is Uriko Nonomura, grade A bitch." Xion mocked Uriko's voice.
"You're really good at voices Xion." Yugo exclaimed.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Uriko *~*~*~*~*~*~
"Really?! This helps me a whole lot! Thank you miss! All right, good bye!" Uriko was happy.
She could finally pin down Yugo for the murder of Alice! A woman was passing by when she heard Yugo's voice and then saw Alice fall. Somebody had pushed Alice off. Another person, a man, also said the same thing. But could they be trusted? The man was a robber who was robbing the apartment room above Alice and Yugo's and the woman was crazy. She had to take medications and such. A robber and mental patient. Wasn't it enough to pin down Yugo?
"I can't think right now.. I think I'll go swim." Uriko changed into her swimsuit and put on the little whistle that Jane gave her.
She was to blow it if she were in danger. Uriko wrapped a towel around her waist. It was night, so she could walk without the fear of being seen. She reached the pool, and dove in.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Yugo and Kenji *~*~*~*~*~*~
"Okay, thanks for stopping by, bye." Yugo said.
He slammed the door behind Shenlong and Uranus.
"Man, they're a pain in the ass." Xion said. "Would you look at that?"
"Look at what?" Yugo asked.
"Nonomura sneaking around in a swimsuit." Xion said looking out the window.
"Hm.. " Yugo got a thought. 'After that phone call, they have enough evidence to say I did it. I'm not going to let that happen. I'll have to get rid of Nonomura. Without her, how can the court trust a woman with hallucinations and a man who was robbing a room? I'll just have to get rid of her now..' He didn't like the thought, but he decided to do it. "Boys, I'll be back."
He stepped into the hallway, and into the changing for the swimming area. There was scuba gear. He slid it on, and went outside. There was Uriko, making laps around the perimeter of the pool. Yugo's one chance was when Uriko was turned around, so he could get her from behind. He cracked his knuckles. She had turned around, and luckily for him, had stopped. Yugo snuck to the edge of the pool. He quietly sank into the deep waters, and with ease swam for Uriko's foot. He grasped it, dragging her under. Uriko was flailing; he could feel her kicking. She couldn't make him let go, she flailed more and more.
'Who is this?! How did they know that I was here? Is it some random murderer?' Uriko could feel the attacker bear hug her, so she couldn't swim from their grip. 'It's a guy, I can tell! Can it really be Yugo?! Or Kenji?! Are they actually trying to kill me?!'
Uriko kicked more. Her foot hit Yugo in the spot that shouldn't be hit. Yugo let her go, and Uriko swam upwards. She got the whistle, and blew all her breath into it. Yugo quickly got out, and scurried away. Uriko was gripping the side of the wall, but her body was weak with exhaustion, and her grip was loosening. Jane came quickly, and noticed Uriko. She pulled her out of the water, and tried to help her.
"Uriko? What happened?" Jane asked.
"I-I *cough* was attacked.." She gasped for air.
"I'll get you to the hospital right away!" Jane said.
They had a little mini hospital, not one for big things, but one for things like this. Uriko lay on the bed; she was going to be fine in the morning.
~*~*~*~*~*~* Jenny *~*~*~*~*~*~
"How horrible! Uriko was almost murdered" Jenny said into the recorder. "She recalls a man attacking her, although she could not see his face or anything because he wore scuba gear. He almost got rid of her. Terribly dreadful."
Jenny stuffed the recorder into her bag. Somebody was at the door. She opened it, and Xion walked in.
"What're you doing here?" Jenny asked.
"Just stopping by, saying hello." Xion said.
"Okay, hello, good bye. Have a nice day." Jenny said, shutting the door. "He's very odd. I wonder why he'd come over here just to say hi?"
Jenny was looking over her schedule for the following weeks. Why was she going to have an injection for her face? She looked young enough already. Oh well, Jenny put the list into her purse. She was to have a massage then go to dinner. Everybody was busy. Jenny had a massage, Uriko was taking a walk, Yugo was in an exercise class, Kenji was taking a shower, and Xion was wandering around the complex trying to figure out what was where, Shenlong was in the mud baths and Uranus was taking a facial. Dinner was in 20 minutes. Everybody came dressed to dinner. Uriko sat in her corner again.
'There they are again. With the whole gang. Except Jenny. Why does she keep hanging around them?' Uriko glared at their table.
"Yugo, I can't eat. She keeps staring over here and it's making me uncomfortable." Kenji whispered into Yugo's ear.
"Just ignore her. She deserves no attention." Yugo responded.
But Kenji could feel her eyes glaring at their table. She was planning something, and he knew they'd fall for it.
"Oh, please?" Jenny asked.
"No, leave me alone you crazy woman!" Xion stuffed chicken into his mouth.
"But I've heard that you can do Dr. Phil's voice and Oprah's voice. And even Uriko's." Jenny smirked.
"Why should I tell you?" Xion asked.
"Because I'm curious." Jenny said, leaning over the table to him. Her pen was in his face almost, why did she bring that everywhere she went?
"Curiosity killed the cat, Jenny." Xion pointed out.
"But I'm not a cat, I'm a bat, remember?" Jenny said a bit irritated.
"It's a phrase, woman." Xion said, getting angry.
'He looks like he's getting mad.' Uriko thought. 'What're they saying?'
"And Nonomura's getting on my nerves." Xion said.
"Can't we talk about something other than HER?" Yugo asked.
"I'm done eating. I'll see you in the room." Kenji stood up and left.
"Okay, Kenji.." Yugo said.
'And where is HE going?' Uriko thought. 'Perhaps getting into scuba diver gear and waiting for me to go swimming again?'
A thought struck Uriko. Now was time for a plan. She'd go swimming all right. And she'll get caught. After dinner, instead of swimming though, she went to bed. She decided that he'd wait till she went swimming. Then she'd let him catch her and she would transform. It was a good idea. Uriko fell into a deep slumber.
"Well, I guess it's time to get up.." Uriko said.
She sat up and changed. First up was an exercise class. She locked her door and left.
"Well, I see I have nothing till tomorrow. Might as well snoop around again." Jenny picked up her recorder and left.
"I hate walking, but we've gotta go, huh Kenji?" Yugo asked.
"Yeah, see ya Xion." Kenji and Yugo went off for their walking classes.
Xion looked around. Now was the time to strike.
And there you have it. The next chapter. I've lost all feeling to write right now. Okay, see ya.. laterz.
