Uhh, this chapter sucks so much. Well at least I think it does. Anyway, my
reviews were all screwed up and so was my document manager. So if anyone
out there has anymore torture ideas please tell me them or tell me the same
one I don't care. So anyway thanks to all my reviewers *hands out Tala
plushies* oh and Roll throw him off a building that was hilarious. I
laughed my head off. Anyway on with the chapter, oh and if there are any
spelling errors tell me them in a review.
Bryan groaned. Every part of his body ached. He wanted to scream. He wanted to kill the man that had put him in all the pain he was in. But instead, he lay there motionless. Staring at the white wall with peelings of old paint on it.
Bryan's eyes were dull with dark circles under them. His hair was messy sticking out in every direction. His face was black and blue and his lip was cut.
The man, that horrid man came into his view. He noticed the man was holding something. He didn't know what it was but it was black and looked sorta like a very thick string. The man bent over staring at Bryan with a smile on his thin lips.
Bryan felt woozy, what could possibly make the man happy. The only thing that made the man happy was seeing Bryan in pain.
The man, started lifting Bryan's ripped shirt. Bryan did not reject. He just sat there, he did not dare be defiant fore he feared the power the man held over him.
The man could easily rape; beat, torture or even kill him. There was nothing or no one that could save him. The man had the power and Bryan could not do anything to do to change that.
Bryan was pushed onto his stomach, he cried out. The pain was horrid because of the ribs he had broken. He looked over to see what the man had planned and then he realized what the man held in his hand. A whip. Bryan gulped preparing himself.
The man brought the whip down to Bryan's bare back receiving a scream from Bryan. The man laughed and repeated the whipping. He kept doing this till Bryan lay still his back covered in long, deep gashes.
Why weren't they saving him he wondered. Why were they letting the man do all these cruel things to him?
Did they care or was he like Kai, just a puppet in their sick little game to take over the world. If he was then maybe he would never get out of this run down apartment.
The thought of being here forever, away from Tala and the rest of his team brought tears to his eyes. Trapped, that was what he was. He was weak and starting to get sick. While his kidnapper was tall and skinny with strong arms. He was being punished he thought.
Punished by God for all the mean things he did. Like when he attacked Ray. But that wasn't his fault, if he hadn't obeyed Voltaire he would be punished, and that was something that no boy from the abbey wanted to happen to them.
For once in his life he began to pray. Pray that God would forgive him and that he would soon be out of this terrible place full of agony.
He turned and saw the man leaving with the tape in his hand. The tape, the tapes, they were all horrible things for Bryan to think about. Each one brought pain to him. Each one caused tears to tinkle down his cheeks.
That man, had tooken away his innocence and not just be raping him by beating him as well. And then there was the whipping.
It was so painful, it still was. The gashes were still fresh in his skin. And he was sure they would make scars on his back. There was blood almost everywhere on his body. His hair was red and sticky. It sorta made him think of Tala.
Did he know? Did Tala know? And if he did, did he care or was Bryan just a teammate to him? All these questions made Bryan's head spin. He felt dizzy so he rolled himself onto his side and fell into a deep sleep.
Voltaire and Boris had both watched the video of Bryan being whipped. They didn't look as shocked as they should've been though they had actually adjusted to the mans cruelty. They were more worried. Bryan had looked different in this video.
He was starting to get sick. Real sick and they had to get him out of there as soon as possible. Plus, Bryan had lost a lot of blood.
More then someone his age should loose. Boris raised from his chair. "I'm going to see Robert," he said leaving. Robert had arrived earlier with his team. They had been told of what was happening and what they had to do.
They were also given the tapes including the most recent tape of the whipping. Boris got in the elevator and waited till he was on the fourth floor where the Mejestics were staying. He knocked on the door and waited impatiently for the door to open.
Johnny, a red head like Tala opened the door. "What do you want?" Johnny snarled. "Have you made a decision yet?"
Johnny nodded yes. "We'll help you but at a price," said Johnny. Boris looked at him quite shocked. "But what do we possibly have that you don't?" "We want you to shut down the abbey." Boris looked at him again with the same look of shock.
"Shut us down," he said shaking his head. He was about to reject when Bryan's sick face flashed before his eyes. "Isn't there anything else we could do, why shut down the abbey?"
Johnny looked at him angrily. "I've seen what your organization does to bladers. You turn them into emotionless bladers and I don't like it."
"We'll shut down once we have Bryan back." Johnny nodded and Boris left.
Voltaire looked at the angry red head. "Why didn't you tell me Voltaire?" shouted Tala.
Voltaire rubbed his forehead. "I never had time Tala, please don't make the situation harder then it already is."
"Did you get any more tapes?" Voltaire nodded. "Let me see it!" demanded Tala. Voltaire through the tape to Tala.
"Thanks" he muttered before walking off. He was surprised when he opened the door and bumped into the Bladebreakers.
"What are you doing her?' snarled Kai. "Look Kai," said Kenny. "He has something in his hand."
They looked at Tala's hand that contained the tape. "Give it," ordered Kai.
"No, you don't understand," said Tala hugging the tape to his chest. Kai easily grabbed the tape from Tala's embrace. "No!" cried Tala trying to grab the tape back from Kai but it was no use.
Tala looked at his shoes sadly then turned his gaze upward to the five teens. "Please you can't see that tape."
"Why not?" asked Kai.
"It's personal."
"Personal? How the hell is it personal?" demanded Kai.
"It just is," said Tala quickly, a little to quickly. "I'll check this out," Kai said and left with his teammates. Tala looked as they left. He had failed. Failed Bryan. Now they would know, know the horror that descended on Bryan.
They were bound to find out sooner or later thought Tala hopefully. And maybe Bryan wouldn't mind, would he? Hell yeah, Bryan would mind. Tala looked at the hallway where the Bladebreakers had left.
It was too late to do anything. Tala left feeling miserable with himself. He entered the main lobby and saw Enrique flirting with some blond. Tala looked shocked for a moment. What was Enrique from the Mejestics doing here?
Enrique spotted him and started to run over. "Sorry about Bryan," he said. Tala nodded sadly. "Do you think he'll be okay?" asked Tala.
"I'm not sure to be honest. He looked pretty sick in the last video," Enrique admitted honestly. "I never watched the last video. What was on it?"
Enrique shifted uncomfortably. "He well...um, he was whipped."
"Whipped? How bad was it?" Enrique looked at him a little nervous. "Pretty bad," he finally managed, "there was a lot of blood."
Tala heart sank. The Bladebreakers were gonna see Bryan be whipped. How would they react?
Meanwhile in the Bladebreakers suite, Kai sat on the king-sized bed waiting for the tape to rewind. "What do you think is on the tape?" asked Tyson.
Kai grunted. "I don't know."
"Well, maybe it's like a secret thingy with Biovolt," said Max. They raised their eyebrows at him. Thinking that maybe Max was right. They all stared at the tape as it stopped rewinding. Kai took the remote and pressed the play button.
The screen flashed on and the first thing they saw was Bryan lying on his back with his eyes closed.
"That's Bryan!" exclaimed Tyson. They watched as a tall lanky figure came into view towering over Bryan. Bryan's eyes were now open staring blankly at the man.
The Bladebreakers turned there gaze to the mans hand that held a whip. They watched mouths agape as the man lifted Bryan's top. They looked shocked not because the man was lifting Bryan's top.
It was what was under the top; large bruises covered his chest. They saw the man roll Bryan onto his stomach and a cry was heard from Bryan which also startled them. They shifted uncomfortably as the man brought the whip down to Bryan's bare back.
Bryan screamed and they saw the man laugh. After about six hits they saw tears falling from his empty eyes. The blood, Bryan's blood was everywhere. The man got up and left after a while. They saw Bryan lay there motionless with silent tears falling down the side of his cheeks. The screen went black.
"Who the hell was that man and what just happened?" exclaimed Tyson.
They all looked at each other not knowing how to answer it.
Tala was having a conversation with Enrique about what was happening and how him and there team was gonna provide the money.
When suddenly, the main lobby doors were opened and a couple walked in. a women, with long violet hair clung to her husband's arm with tears in her matching violet eyes. Her husband wore a stern expression and had his violet hair brushed back. A girl followed into the through the main lobby doors.
Tala imagined her to be their daughter fore she ran up to them and trailed about a meter away from their heels. Tala looked at the girl; she was rather short and looked to be around the age of seventeen.
She had her mother's violet hair hanging loosely around her shoulders and down her back.
She looked like her mother, with the same soft features. Tala and Enrique turned their gazes to their side as the man stood at the counter. Tala and Enrique were leaning on that very counter like a meter away.(this part was poorly written I know but I don't know how to word it)
The man at the cashier, looked up from the papers he been reading. "Hello," said the husband "We're here to see Mr.Dickenson. Were Bryan Falcov's parents."
The ending sounded so lame to me. And I got bored near the end and I just wanted to finish the scene with the Bladebreakers and Bryan's parents. I feel this chapter sucked but I don't care. I had to redew this cause my first attempt at this chapter was really bad cause I chose a bad torture idea.
Bryan groaned. Every part of his body ached. He wanted to scream. He wanted to kill the man that had put him in all the pain he was in. But instead, he lay there motionless. Staring at the white wall with peelings of old paint on it.
Bryan's eyes were dull with dark circles under them. His hair was messy sticking out in every direction. His face was black and blue and his lip was cut.
The man, that horrid man came into his view. He noticed the man was holding something. He didn't know what it was but it was black and looked sorta like a very thick string. The man bent over staring at Bryan with a smile on his thin lips.
Bryan felt woozy, what could possibly make the man happy. The only thing that made the man happy was seeing Bryan in pain.
The man, started lifting Bryan's ripped shirt. Bryan did not reject. He just sat there, he did not dare be defiant fore he feared the power the man held over him.
The man could easily rape; beat, torture or even kill him. There was nothing or no one that could save him. The man had the power and Bryan could not do anything to do to change that.
Bryan was pushed onto his stomach, he cried out. The pain was horrid because of the ribs he had broken. He looked over to see what the man had planned and then he realized what the man held in his hand. A whip. Bryan gulped preparing himself.
The man brought the whip down to Bryan's bare back receiving a scream from Bryan. The man laughed and repeated the whipping. He kept doing this till Bryan lay still his back covered in long, deep gashes.
Why weren't they saving him he wondered. Why were they letting the man do all these cruel things to him?
Did they care or was he like Kai, just a puppet in their sick little game to take over the world. If he was then maybe he would never get out of this run down apartment.
The thought of being here forever, away from Tala and the rest of his team brought tears to his eyes. Trapped, that was what he was. He was weak and starting to get sick. While his kidnapper was tall and skinny with strong arms. He was being punished he thought.
Punished by God for all the mean things he did. Like when he attacked Ray. But that wasn't his fault, if he hadn't obeyed Voltaire he would be punished, and that was something that no boy from the abbey wanted to happen to them.
For once in his life he began to pray. Pray that God would forgive him and that he would soon be out of this terrible place full of agony.
He turned and saw the man leaving with the tape in his hand. The tape, the tapes, they were all horrible things for Bryan to think about. Each one brought pain to him. Each one caused tears to tinkle down his cheeks.
That man, had tooken away his innocence and not just be raping him by beating him as well. And then there was the whipping.
It was so painful, it still was. The gashes were still fresh in his skin. And he was sure they would make scars on his back. There was blood almost everywhere on his body. His hair was red and sticky. It sorta made him think of Tala.
Did he know? Did Tala know? And if he did, did he care or was Bryan just a teammate to him? All these questions made Bryan's head spin. He felt dizzy so he rolled himself onto his side and fell into a deep sleep.
Voltaire and Boris had both watched the video of Bryan being whipped. They didn't look as shocked as they should've been though they had actually adjusted to the mans cruelty. They were more worried. Bryan had looked different in this video.
He was starting to get sick. Real sick and they had to get him out of there as soon as possible. Plus, Bryan had lost a lot of blood.
More then someone his age should loose. Boris raised from his chair. "I'm going to see Robert," he said leaving. Robert had arrived earlier with his team. They had been told of what was happening and what they had to do.
They were also given the tapes including the most recent tape of the whipping. Boris got in the elevator and waited till he was on the fourth floor where the Mejestics were staying. He knocked on the door and waited impatiently for the door to open.
Johnny, a red head like Tala opened the door. "What do you want?" Johnny snarled. "Have you made a decision yet?"
Johnny nodded yes. "We'll help you but at a price," said Johnny. Boris looked at him quite shocked. "But what do we possibly have that you don't?" "We want you to shut down the abbey." Boris looked at him again with the same look of shock.
"Shut us down," he said shaking his head. He was about to reject when Bryan's sick face flashed before his eyes. "Isn't there anything else we could do, why shut down the abbey?"
Johnny looked at him angrily. "I've seen what your organization does to bladers. You turn them into emotionless bladers and I don't like it."
"We'll shut down once we have Bryan back." Johnny nodded and Boris left.
Voltaire looked at the angry red head. "Why didn't you tell me Voltaire?" shouted Tala.
Voltaire rubbed his forehead. "I never had time Tala, please don't make the situation harder then it already is."
"Did you get any more tapes?" Voltaire nodded. "Let me see it!" demanded Tala. Voltaire through the tape to Tala.
"Thanks" he muttered before walking off. He was surprised when he opened the door and bumped into the Bladebreakers.
"What are you doing her?' snarled Kai. "Look Kai," said Kenny. "He has something in his hand."
They looked at Tala's hand that contained the tape. "Give it," ordered Kai.
"No, you don't understand," said Tala hugging the tape to his chest. Kai easily grabbed the tape from Tala's embrace. "No!" cried Tala trying to grab the tape back from Kai but it was no use.
Tala looked at his shoes sadly then turned his gaze upward to the five teens. "Please you can't see that tape."
"Why not?" asked Kai.
"It's personal."
"Personal? How the hell is it personal?" demanded Kai.
"It just is," said Tala quickly, a little to quickly. "I'll check this out," Kai said and left with his teammates. Tala looked as they left. He had failed. Failed Bryan. Now they would know, know the horror that descended on Bryan.
They were bound to find out sooner or later thought Tala hopefully. And maybe Bryan wouldn't mind, would he? Hell yeah, Bryan would mind. Tala looked at the hallway where the Bladebreakers had left.
It was too late to do anything. Tala left feeling miserable with himself. He entered the main lobby and saw Enrique flirting with some blond. Tala looked shocked for a moment. What was Enrique from the Mejestics doing here?
Enrique spotted him and started to run over. "Sorry about Bryan," he said. Tala nodded sadly. "Do you think he'll be okay?" asked Tala.
"I'm not sure to be honest. He looked pretty sick in the last video," Enrique admitted honestly. "I never watched the last video. What was on it?"
Enrique shifted uncomfortably. "He well...um, he was whipped."
"Whipped? How bad was it?" Enrique looked at him a little nervous. "Pretty bad," he finally managed, "there was a lot of blood."
Tala heart sank. The Bladebreakers were gonna see Bryan be whipped. How would they react?
Meanwhile in the Bladebreakers suite, Kai sat on the king-sized bed waiting for the tape to rewind. "What do you think is on the tape?" asked Tyson.
Kai grunted. "I don't know."
"Well, maybe it's like a secret thingy with Biovolt," said Max. They raised their eyebrows at him. Thinking that maybe Max was right. They all stared at the tape as it stopped rewinding. Kai took the remote and pressed the play button.
The screen flashed on and the first thing they saw was Bryan lying on his back with his eyes closed.
"That's Bryan!" exclaimed Tyson. They watched as a tall lanky figure came into view towering over Bryan. Bryan's eyes were now open staring blankly at the man.
The Bladebreakers turned there gaze to the mans hand that held a whip. They watched mouths agape as the man lifted Bryan's top. They looked shocked not because the man was lifting Bryan's top.
It was what was under the top; large bruises covered his chest. They saw the man roll Bryan onto his stomach and a cry was heard from Bryan which also startled them. They shifted uncomfortably as the man brought the whip down to Bryan's bare back.
Bryan screamed and they saw the man laugh. After about six hits they saw tears falling from his empty eyes. The blood, Bryan's blood was everywhere. The man got up and left after a while. They saw Bryan lay there motionless with silent tears falling down the side of his cheeks. The screen went black.
"Who the hell was that man and what just happened?" exclaimed Tyson.
They all looked at each other not knowing how to answer it.
Tala was having a conversation with Enrique about what was happening and how him and there team was gonna provide the money.
When suddenly, the main lobby doors were opened and a couple walked in. a women, with long violet hair clung to her husband's arm with tears in her matching violet eyes. Her husband wore a stern expression and had his violet hair brushed back. A girl followed into the through the main lobby doors.
Tala imagined her to be their daughter fore she ran up to them and trailed about a meter away from their heels. Tala looked at the girl; she was rather short and looked to be around the age of seventeen.
She had her mother's violet hair hanging loosely around her shoulders and down her back.
She looked like her mother, with the same soft features. Tala and Enrique turned their gazes to their side as the man stood at the counter. Tala and Enrique were leaning on that very counter like a meter away.(this part was poorly written I know but I don't know how to word it)
The man at the cashier, looked up from the papers he been reading. "Hello," said the husband "We're here to see Mr.Dickenson. Were Bryan Falcov's parents."
The ending sounded so lame to me. And I got bored near the end and I just wanted to finish the scene with the Bladebreakers and Bryan's parents. I feel this chapter sucked but I don't care. I had to redew this cause my first attempt at this chapter was really bad cause I chose a bad torture idea.
