Hi! eeerrr. hi! mmm. well this is my first update. Three things why it took
so long, 1) stupid computer, 2) phone bill, 3) my mother and the phone bill
and finally I actually do have a life and wish to get as much out of it as
I can before I die (touch wood). Anyway, I've been thinking about this
chapter and I've had a million and one ideas, while being band from the
computer, which involved writing this by hand, so I've scraped them and
uploaded this before I change it for the millionth time.
So enjoy my pretties.
Disclaimer (finally) don't own NUFFIN'!!
Here We Go Again!!
Chapter 3
Intruder Alert!
The sun gleaming bright. A slight welcoming breeze filling the air. Eight young girls stood in the open looking down upon the crystallized city. "WOW!! I can't believe that this is really our city." Said the tallest member of the group. She had straight, shoulder length, blond hair with bluish green eyes. "Ali, you don't remember do you? It's been so long since we've seen this city that ..that.that I don't even think I could remember a time when it was this beautiful before." "I remember princess, I'll always remember." The tall blond looked down at the shorter girl. The princess had red hair done up in a single bun which was placed on the top of her head. This bun had a stream of long red hair falling just to her ankles. Her eyes where a bright crystal green which upon looking at the child, just by her eyes you could tell how pure her heart was. "don't worry so much Rena, we'll get back those beautiful days we use to have. You wait and see." Replied a auburn haired girl. This comment earned a hug from the now crying little princess. "O Linda, you sure?" "of course Rena, I promise you on the life of the scout of Jupiter that we'll return what we have lost." And with that in mind, the girls all set off for the crystal palace.
"sir, we have intruders in quadrant 17, just outside the defense perimeter" "they are just little girls cadet, they can't do anything to us but." "sir, they appeared out of nowhere and are currently heading towards the palace." "send the guards out to intercept them. Bring the leader to me for questioning and place the others in a cell. Do not draw weapons, and tell these girls that we mean no harm." "as you wish, sir."
It's a beautiful day in Crystal Tokyo. The sun is shinning, the birds are singing, all is peaceful. "I'AM A WHAT?!" Well thanks five 14 yr olds girls, two of whom where screaming at each other, it was. The princess of Crystal Tokyo and one of her royal court, arguing, as usual, over nothing. "I said that you're a pathetic little cry baby who needs her daddy's permission just to go to school every day, meatball head" "Rachel, that's not true and you know it" shouted a very angry pink haired girl. Eye red eyes shining with unshed tears. "just because I'm not allowed to go to that party doesn't mean that I'm a pathetic crybaby!!" "your crying aren't you?" Rachel shouted back. The raven headed girl shooting death glares through her violet eyes at her friend. "if you ask me, I think it perfectly understandable that." a blue haired girl interrupted before she in turn faced the raff of their angst. "STAY OUT OF THIS RHEA! THIS IS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" chorused both Rachel and the princess. The blue haired figure hung her head as if she had been defeated. "Rhea, if you ask me, I think we should just leave them to it. They act like their mothers do. Let's go." Said a tall auburn haired girl with bright green eyes. The other three girls left the two arguing.
As the girls from the future walked, they took everything in. the sights, the smells, how happy the people looked and more importantly, they looked at how proud the Crystal Palace looked as they traveled through the bustle of this beautiful city, until. "stop right there, young ladies. You are ordered to come with us to the Crystal Palace at once. By orders of His Royal Highness, Neo King Endymion." A guard of the royal palace stood in front of the girls. They found them selves surrounded by them. "should we fight?" whispered a very beautiful, turquoise haired girl. "no, Melanie, we don't want to prove a threat to them. We need their help." Rena whispered back. At this the girls surrendered quietly to the guards.
"which one of you is the leader?" asked a rather mean looking guard. "I am." Announced Rena. "why do you want to know?" "I have been ordered by His Highness to bring you to him. You will follow me at once." And with that he led her away.
Yes I am pretty mental u don't have to tell me!!!!! I hope u all enjoyed this chapter. Like I said before, I have a million and 1 ideas but I can't seem to put them straight. So here's the deal (and I promise this will happed) the next chapter is called "Who the hell are you?" two characters will appear. And u will finally learn why Rini and Rachel r at each others necks.again So review, please review. Tell me what u fink and I'll do my best 2 slag my self off. PROMISE!!!
Disclaimer (finally) don't own NUFFIN'!!
Here We Go Again!!
Chapter 3
Intruder Alert!
The sun gleaming bright. A slight welcoming breeze filling the air. Eight young girls stood in the open looking down upon the crystallized city. "WOW!! I can't believe that this is really our city." Said the tallest member of the group. She had straight, shoulder length, blond hair with bluish green eyes. "Ali, you don't remember do you? It's been so long since we've seen this city that ..that.that I don't even think I could remember a time when it was this beautiful before." "I remember princess, I'll always remember." The tall blond looked down at the shorter girl. The princess had red hair done up in a single bun which was placed on the top of her head. This bun had a stream of long red hair falling just to her ankles. Her eyes where a bright crystal green which upon looking at the child, just by her eyes you could tell how pure her heart was. "don't worry so much Rena, we'll get back those beautiful days we use to have. You wait and see." Replied a auburn haired girl. This comment earned a hug from the now crying little princess. "O Linda, you sure?" "of course Rena, I promise you on the life of the scout of Jupiter that we'll return what we have lost." And with that in mind, the girls all set off for the crystal palace.
"sir, we have intruders in quadrant 17, just outside the defense perimeter" "they are just little girls cadet, they can't do anything to us but." "sir, they appeared out of nowhere and are currently heading towards the palace." "send the guards out to intercept them. Bring the leader to me for questioning and place the others in a cell. Do not draw weapons, and tell these girls that we mean no harm." "as you wish, sir."
It's a beautiful day in Crystal Tokyo. The sun is shinning, the birds are singing, all is peaceful. "I'AM A WHAT?!" Well thanks five 14 yr olds girls, two of whom where screaming at each other, it was. The princess of Crystal Tokyo and one of her royal court, arguing, as usual, over nothing. "I said that you're a pathetic little cry baby who needs her daddy's permission just to go to school every day, meatball head" "Rachel, that's not true and you know it" shouted a very angry pink haired girl. Eye red eyes shining with unshed tears. "just because I'm not allowed to go to that party doesn't mean that I'm a pathetic crybaby!!" "your crying aren't you?" Rachel shouted back. The raven headed girl shooting death glares through her violet eyes at her friend. "if you ask me, I think it perfectly understandable that." a blue haired girl interrupted before she in turn faced the raff of their angst. "STAY OUT OF THIS RHEA! THIS IS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!" chorused both Rachel and the princess. The blue haired figure hung her head as if she had been defeated. "Rhea, if you ask me, I think we should just leave them to it. They act like their mothers do. Let's go." Said a tall auburn haired girl with bright green eyes. The other three girls left the two arguing.
As the girls from the future walked, they took everything in. the sights, the smells, how happy the people looked and more importantly, they looked at how proud the Crystal Palace looked as they traveled through the bustle of this beautiful city, until. "stop right there, young ladies. You are ordered to come with us to the Crystal Palace at once. By orders of His Royal Highness, Neo King Endymion." A guard of the royal palace stood in front of the girls. They found them selves surrounded by them. "should we fight?" whispered a very beautiful, turquoise haired girl. "no, Melanie, we don't want to prove a threat to them. We need their help." Rena whispered back. At this the girls surrendered quietly to the guards.
"which one of you is the leader?" asked a rather mean looking guard. "I am." Announced Rena. "why do you want to know?" "I have been ordered by His Highness to bring you to him. You will follow me at once." And with that he led her away.
Yes I am pretty mental u don't have to tell me!!!!! I hope u all enjoyed this chapter. Like I said before, I have a million and 1 ideas but I can't seem to put them straight. So here's the deal (and I promise this will happed) the next chapter is called "Who the hell are you?" two characters will appear. And u will finally learn why Rini and Rachel r at each others necks.again So review, please review. Tell me what u fink and I'll do my best 2 slag my self off. PROMISE!!!
