Control Freak
By ToT

I don't own newsies. But they're sure fun to cuddle with!!!! ^_^ various newsies try to escape ToT's grasppouts But school work has been my whole life recently, not including all the jazz choir performances and band concerts and choir concerts and extra geometry help and. Oh, nevermind. You don't care except that you get your story. At least, that's what my piano teacher tells me about recitals: "The audience doesn't care if you're nervous, or sick, or whatever as long as you play and play well." I've heard *that* one too many times. Anyway. Here's your story update.

Shout Outs~

Kate~ Hello. Glad you could join us (the four of us, but us nonetheless). I'm glad you are enjoying my little ficlette. Read on! ~Luv ToT

Chapter Eleven

"Hello, Mush," It says through the white light.

I squint. It's so hard to see.

"You. You've ruined my life!" I scream as I lunge towards the voice.

It dodges.

"No, I just.edit what I want to change. Your life - all these lives - are mine."

"You cowardly bastard.! Show yourself!"

The light fades and, in the passenger seat next to me, appears a fairly attractive young woman, probably in her early twenties. She has long chestnut hair and hazel eyes.

"You're a.woman?"

She smiles, and nods.

"How ironic," I smirk. "I never thought a woman would ever control my life."

"It's time for you to go now," she says. "You character no longer fits into my perfect story. Goodbye."

His eyes grow clod and he is about to say, "No," but in an instant he is gone.

The woman sighs, looks around, and fades away.

Closing Comments~ One more chapter guys! Hold on with me for only one more chapter and then the whole last chapter will come together a little more. I apologize for the changes in person and time, but it was necessary. See ya soon for the conclusion! Luv~ ToT