Ray:That last chapter was so not scary!
Jacky:Really, then why are u shaking?
Ray:Ummmmm........It's cold for me.
Jacky:Its 27 degrees out side..
Ray:I come from Africa, we're always cold!
Jacky:Ray, you're from China.
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"AHHHHHHH!!!!!What is going on?!!!" Zira screamed.

Suddenly, Zira couldn't hear her shouts anymore. She felt herself rise, by some invisible force. She blinked. Zira wasn't in her basement any more, she was surrounded by darkness.

"Huh? Where am I?"

She heard a screech coming from behind her.She turned around, and saw it. The creature, was a pheonix, with flaming feathers, and glowing eyes. It was beautiful. Suddenly it spoke.

"You freed me."It said

"Huh, ffff..reeed you?What are you talking about?Who are you?"

"I am Dranzer of the fire, I am a bitbeast."

"A bitbeast, but thats just impossible, they don't exist."

"Alright then, let me tell you. I was first awaken by a mankind, he was a boy. He was afraid of me at first, just like you are, but with age, mastered my power.We became close friends."

"What happened then?"

"He died."

"Died?"

"Yes, a long time ago, there was a legend of a man who had a lot of questions, when he was a young boy, but he could not get the answers. His master, was a good man, and told him, that with time he would find out what the answerers were, that where he would end his journey. He went on a search for his answers, and got them. But he remembered that his master said that once you find them all, your path will end. His master died, and he was very upset. He went to the mountain of wishes where on the bridge, high up in the mountains made his last wish. For his master to come back. He jumped, and flew into the fog, and no one knows what happened to him."

"Does this mountain still exist?"

''Somewhere far in the world, the only one who will see it, is the one who knows the answers."

"My master, knew that I became weak, but did not know why, so he went on a search for the mountain of wishes, and I know he found it, but i also know that he jumped and died. His wish came true, my powers were restored."

"Wow, he sacrificed himself."

"He was a true man.But you are my master now."

The darkness faded as fast as it appeared.Zira didn't even have time to blink before Dranzer disappeared. Dropping the potatoes, Zira ran up to her room, opened her drawer, and started searching for her beyblade.

"Come on! Where are you?"

She raised the beyblade up to her face. A picture of a pheonix was there as a bitchip.

"Wow, so it wasn't a dream."

Her beyblade was not a freaky mix of colors anymore, it was a dark tone of blue. She placed her finger on the bitchip.She could fell the power inside.

The next day Zira ran out of her class, racing home. She closed the door behind her. Her parents were not home yet. She ran up to her room to get her beyblade, and wrote a note to her parents saying: I'm going to the park now to hang out with my friends.Be back before dinner. Zira

(She made up the part with friends.)
Zira ran to the park to find some bladers she could face, and spotted a battle going on. A large crowd of people surrounded the competitors. She stepped inside, ans gasped.
Broken pieces of plastic and metal were scattered all over the ground.A boy about 10 years old was trying to pick them up.Across him stood another boy, of older age. Ray.He picked up his beyblade.
Zira ran before Ray saw her, but it was too late.
"Hey Zira!"A shout came behind Zira.

She stopped dead in her tracks.Ray caught up with her.

"What did you think?"

"Huh, about what?"

"Well the battle of course!"

"Oh it was okay."Zira said trying to sound as calm as she could.

"Wow, thats a compliment?"Ray laughed."Well I'll see ya around, I gotta find some more victims!"

And he ran off.Zira sighed. She saw some teenage boy practicing his beyblade, and started walking over.

"Hey, you beyblade?"Said a voice behind her.

Zira turned around. A group of teenagers were standing behind her.

"Yeah.."

"Fine let's have a battle then."

Zira prepared to launch her beyblade.

"No,not here."

"Uhhh....why not?"Zira asked.

"I don't like crowds."

"Then, where?"

"Follow me."

Feeling uncomfortable, Zira followed the group of guys. They led her into some sort of warehouse.

"Step up here."

Zira walked up the stairs, and almost fell into a gigantic dish.

"Whoa! Is that what I think it is?"

"Yes, a beyblade stadium."

Zira prepared to launch. She never had any experience with Dranzer, so she tried to be as careful as possible.

"THREEE, TWOOOO,ONEEE Let it rip!!"

They both launched.The beyblades circled each other, preparing to attack.

"Thunder wave!"The boy called.

His blade lightly hit Zira's.

"Hmmm..."Zira studied the patterns of his beyblade."Isn't Pokemon sort of old?"

"Uhhhh....hey!"

"Well it doesn't matter anyway, cause I know exactly where your blade will end up in 5 seconds. Dranzer final attack!!!"

"A graceful bitbeast, raised its self from the blade.It's flaming wings burned the stadium.The boy started making weird moves trying to call his beyblade back, but they were unsuccessful.

Zira's beyblade circled around the boy's beyblade, extremely fast, making the circle smaller and smaller, while at the same time chipping pieces from the beyblade.Finally it stopped circling the beyblade, while the other blade was barely spinning.Then Dranzer moved back, and at enormous speed went through the beyblade, and all the pieces shot straight at the boy..

"AAAhhhhhhhhh!!"He screamed in pain and horror.
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Yes, the attack is almost like galux's, but please don't get mad!
And I just had to write that conversation between Ray and Jacky.
Hope you liked it, and sorry if I made it too long.