Whoa... it is just me, or do people just love to criticize fanfics? Like seriously. Here is a lovely flame written by "The Fairy"

Is it just me, or does this sound like a Mary Sue? Her name is both hard to pronounce and very annoying to read. You are even costumized yourself as her for Halloween. Pathetic.

First of all, that sentence didn't even make sense. Lovely grammar skills you have, I see. I'm sorry for having any kind of 'creativity'... is cosplaying so pathetic? If so, tell me why thousands of people all over happen to enjoy doing so? If I'm pathetic, what kind of name is "The Fairy". Now who's pathetic?!

Also, elves can't cry. CAN'T. CRY. Arwen is not supposed to cry, but apparently Peter Jackson thinks differently; I think he thought it would add an element of despair to the story if Arwen cried. I also wonder if you have read the books.

Yes, I have read the books. However, I did read them long time ago, and even if I do screw some things up, I probably did it intentionally, seeing as this is FANFICTION.

Back this up for me also, where in the name of Varda is this 'Loria'? Tell me, where would you find it located in Arnor? Is it on any map? Or is it self-created?

If you read the FIRST chapter, I clearly state that Loria is made up.

Overall, this is a standard Legolas/Mary Sue romance. I would ask you to tone it down if it were not for the other reviewing Mary Sues out there who seem to adore it.

Alright. So everyone else seems to like it. If you don't like it, DON'T REVIEW IT or Don't read it! Is that such a hard concept to grasp???? If my story is so bad in this person's opinion, why did he/she bother reading up to chapter 15 to review it??

Anyway... yeah. I'm just going to write this, so that everyone sees this:

1. This is a mary sue fic. You got a problem with it? LEAVE THEN

2. Yeah, some things are screwed up. It's fanfiction.

3. Loria is made up.

4. I'm a cosplayer.

Ok. Any other concerns? Feel free to e-mail me. It's in my Bio. But, if you're too incompetent to look for it, it is here.

lone_woodsprite@hotmail.com

Sorry for the rant. Just had to get it out of my system.

~Feathers of the Wind [12.27.02]