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"Darque Tournament"
By Wicked-Wytch
Disclaimer: The sun was shining brightly down on us. His red hair flashed with golden sunlight. Large green eyes looked at me in anticipation. We sat side by side in the dirt. Kurama wore a large gardening hat, the type old ladies wore when gardening. And on his hands were thick gloves. I held tightly to a spade. He waited. Our lesson would not begin until he heard those special words.
"Fine," I said with a heavy sigh, "I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho... Satisfied?" He grinned and nodded, pointing at the seeds that were beside me.
"Now..." He began with the tone of an instructor, "It's time to learn how to plant Makai Seeds into the bodies of our enemies."
(And I'm still plotting to get that Keiko bitch)
Thanks to my readers and esp. to my reviewers. I appreciate you guys. (AHAHAHAHAHA Finally, I have a good number of reviewers!!!!!!!!!!!! *oh, the vanity*)
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"Damn," Kuwabara muttered, "This is boring." Held between his two hands was his chin. The boy let out a loud sigh before rolling his eyes heavenward.
Two large, green identical beasts were in the center of the arena, circling each other uneasily. They had been doing so for the past ten minutes.
"When are they gonna do something?" The boy asked in an impatient tone.
As soon as the words were out of his mouth, one of the demons had jumped up into the air and slashed . The audience gasped- his opponent's head collapsed onto the ground.
"Oh shit," Kuwabara whispered. Hiei grinned at this.
"What," the short one asked with a wicked grin, "Suprised?"
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"Well," Snape announced as he made his way back into the ring. "Wasn't *that* interesting?" His voice had dulled back to its former tone. "The beast Krayer is the winner." The crowd roared. "Next to battle is..." He looked from side to side, examining the two demons that made their way to the center of the arena. The first one he saw, to his right, was an incredibly large monster that had a maroon coloring. "Komman verses..." Snape paused, looking at the quickly approaching competitor. The announcer seemed confused as he watched the cloaked figure to his left. "...Verses this guy... " He chuckled nervously as the crowd began to mutter, "I actually have no bloody idea who the hell this is." After a pause and a shurg of his shoulders, he continued. "The second battle has..." Snape ran off the arena, "BEGUN!"
"I don't have a good feeling about this," Yusuke spoke from his seat. The others seemed to nod in agreement. Kurama especially had his eyes fixed on the arena. Hiei looked over, seemingly bored, but there was a gleam of curiosity in his eye.
"Urameshi," Kuwabara called, "That big guy has a hell of a lot of Spirit Energy. And the little one... I can't feel anything coming from him. He doesn't have a chance."
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," Kurama muttered.
"Something strange is going on," Hiei agreed, sitting up and turning his attention the center.
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The battle had begun. The demon Komman, who at nearly twenty feet high, towered over his enemy. Komman was an old being, of nearly 80 years. His skin was wrinkled and his body was completely without hair. Since birth, he'd been trained for this competition. The being had large, spiky teeth and a gaping mouth that would have frightened even the most experienced as well as eyes that were completely black. He made his way closer to the caped person, who did not reach over 5'5, and was suprised by the fact that it would not move.
"Are you petrified in terror, little man?" Komman asked with a loud belly laugh. His opponent remained silent.
The red demon raised a claw and pointed it at the unmoving competitor. A purple blade of Spirit Energy rushed toward the cloaked one. Demons who sat in the audience began to cheer for blood.
The blade inches from her, the cloaked one rose her hand. It had been covered by the cloak, but just a small bit of fingertips were spotted by Kurama.
The half demon's eyes widened. Whatever was fighting Komman was human (or at least was in human form). How curious.
The purple Spirit Blade dissapated into nothing as it reached the hand.
A gasp resounded from the audience.
"What the hell was that?" Yusuke asked in a low voice. He looked over to Botan who seemed too surprised to answer.
Back in the arena, Komman growled in anger. "How dare you do that!" He shouted as he rushed toward the cloaked one in a fury. His massive fist was aiming at the unknown competitor's head.
Yusuke looked away. No one could block an attack like that. Especially someone so small. The demons around him went wild, excitedly crying for death. The rest of the team just watched, fixated on the one in the black cloak.
But Komman's fist never reached its destination. It seemed blocked, as if it had hit into an invisible brick wall. Because of the sudden stop, the black hood that covered the unknown fighter's face was blown back by a small gust of wind. The maroon demon was too surprised to react. Everyone in the audience was silent.
"A girl?" Yusuke asked no one.
The cloaked figure was a girl. She had long white hair and pale skin. Dark, grim eyes revealed a vileness inside her. Her lips were tightly pursed into a thin line but as she looked up at her enemy, she grinned darkly.
"Are you pertified in terror, little demon?" She asked. Komman blinked and said nothing. The girl raised her right hand and from it, a large blue bolt of energy escaped. The energy cut a large jagged hole into Komman's middle. He fell onto his back, weakened and shocked. Black blood gushed from a wound that was nearly 5 feet in length. The white haired girl just chuckled, taking a step back. Then, raising both hands over her head, she screamed.
"What the hell?" Yusuke muttered.
"She's channeling her power," Botan explained.
"So much energy," Kuwabara whispered.
Komman's body brightened suddenly. A blinding pale blue light began to fill the stadium. Everyone, including Snape and the audience, turned away and closed their eyes. And when it cleared, the large red demon was gone. Only a scorched spot remained where he had been.
Each member of the Urameshi team stared wide eyed in silence.
Snape made his way to the center of the arena, growing cautious as he got closer to the girl. "Um..." He muttered nervously, "Well... we have a winner." He turned to the girl and whispered, "What's your name?"
"Ven," she responded in a thin voice.
"The winner is our mysterious fighter- Ven."
No one clapped. No one cheered. The audience was much too stunned by the fact that a young girl, who look no more than sixteen could defeat the well known, aged beast Komman- one who'd once been considered nearly as strong as a Saint Beast.
"I have a bad feeling, Urameshi," Kuwabara spoke to his friend quietly.
"Me too."
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*In Spirit World:*
Orge stood, jaw nearly on the ground. Everyone in the small office stared at the large screen. "Sir," he whispered to Koenma, "What was that?... Who was that?" But the boy did not respond. His pacifier was nearly hanging out of his mouth and his eyes were large. He was breathing irregularly.
"I thought she was dead..." the boy muttered in a voice too low for anyone to hear.
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Ohhhhh... I like this ending. ^_^). Hehe... I always did enjoy cliffhangers.
Next chappy has the boys finally seeing some action. And I'm almost positive that Batos is somewhere around. And who the bloody heck is that mysterious 'Ven' chick? hhmmmmmm...
*evil laugh* You will have to wait until later to see. Patience, patience, happy reader.
Not to shamelessly plug myself, but please... if you're not busy, take your time and go see my cowboy bebop mini fic. I want to see what people think about it. It's called "Through Fire Showers".
TO THE REVIEWERS:
You know what the best feeling in the world is? When I sign on and I have a whole bunch of (well not a *whole* bunch, but still...) nice reviews. ^_^) Thanks so much to you guys and girls. *points all reviewers in the direction of my complimentery fugde brownies that have my pen name written in pretty blue icing.*
*Angelfire*- Thanks! ^_^) Totally appreciate it.
*Lisa*- ^_^) As usual, your review totally keeps me going. You really know how to make me feel better :). I swear... I need to get you a present or something by the end of this story.
*Golden Siren* ^_^) Thanx so much for both reviews. *hugs*. See ya in the RP. ^_~
*Gina*- Thank you! You're so nice.
*Thunderstorm*- Thanks!!!
***If you want me to continue, review please.***
Ok, I know I'm talking a lot here, but I just wanted to say that the fic is gonna be taking some turns soon. FYI- I think I might bring up the rating within the next 2 or 3 chaps or change things around- no worries though. More action and fights.
Plus, they might be coming a little slower (schools almost back *heavy sigh* and it takes up a lot of my time and I'm also having some computer problems as of now). With that depressing note... I end this chappy.
Until later, be well.
~the Wicked one
"Darque Tournament"
By Wicked-Wytch
Disclaimer: The sun was shining brightly down on us. His red hair flashed with golden sunlight. Large green eyes looked at me in anticipation. We sat side by side in the dirt. Kurama wore a large gardening hat, the type old ladies wore when gardening. And on his hands were thick gloves. I held tightly to a spade. He waited. Our lesson would not begin until he heard those special words.
"Fine," I said with a heavy sigh, "I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho... Satisfied?" He grinned and nodded, pointing at the seeds that were beside me.
"Now..." He began with the tone of an instructor, "It's time to learn how to plant Makai Seeds into the bodies of our enemies."
(And I'm still plotting to get that Keiko bitch)
Thanks to my readers and esp. to my reviewers. I appreciate you guys. (AHAHAHAHAHA Finally, I have a good number of reviewers!!!!!!!!!!!! *oh, the vanity*)
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"Damn," Kuwabara muttered, "This is boring." Held between his two hands was his chin. The boy let out a loud sigh before rolling his eyes heavenward.
Two large, green identical beasts were in the center of the arena, circling each other uneasily. They had been doing so for the past ten minutes.
"When are they gonna do something?" The boy asked in an impatient tone.
As soon as the words were out of his mouth, one of the demons had jumped up into the air and slashed . The audience gasped- his opponent's head collapsed onto the ground.
"Oh shit," Kuwabara whispered. Hiei grinned at this.
"What," the short one asked with a wicked grin, "Suprised?"
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"Well," Snape announced as he made his way back into the ring. "Wasn't *that* interesting?" His voice had dulled back to its former tone. "The beast Krayer is the winner." The crowd roared. "Next to battle is..." He looked from side to side, examining the two demons that made their way to the center of the arena. The first one he saw, to his right, was an incredibly large monster that had a maroon coloring. "Komman verses..." Snape paused, looking at the quickly approaching competitor. The announcer seemed confused as he watched the cloaked figure to his left. "...Verses this guy... " He chuckled nervously as the crowd began to mutter, "I actually have no bloody idea who the hell this is." After a pause and a shurg of his shoulders, he continued. "The second battle has..." Snape ran off the arena, "BEGUN!"
"I don't have a good feeling about this," Yusuke spoke from his seat. The others seemed to nod in agreement. Kurama especially had his eyes fixed on the arena. Hiei looked over, seemingly bored, but there was a gleam of curiosity in his eye.
"Urameshi," Kuwabara called, "That big guy has a hell of a lot of Spirit Energy. And the little one... I can't feel anything coming from him. He doesn't have a chance."
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," Kurama muttered.
"Something strange is going on," Hiei agreed, sitting up and turning his attention the center.
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The battle had begun. The demon Komman, who at nearly twenty feet high, towered over his enemy. Komman was an old being, of nearly 80 years. His skin was wrinkled and his body was completely without hair. Since birth, he'd been trained for this competition. The being had large, spiky teeth and a gaping mouth that would have frightened even the most experienced as well as eyes that were completely black. He made his way closer to the caped person, who did not reach over 5'5, and was suprised by the fact that it would not move.
"Are you petrified in terror, little man?" Komman asked with a loud belly laugh. His opponent remained silent.
The red demon raised a claw and pointed it at the unmoving competitor. A purple blade of Spirit Energy rushed toward the cloaked one. Demons who sat in the audience began to cheer for blood.
The blade inches from her, the cloaked one rose her hand. It had been covered by the cloak, but just a small bit of fingertips were spotted by Kurama.
The half demon's eyes widened. Whatever was fighting Komman was human (or at least was in human form). How curious.
The purple Spirit Blade dissapated into nothing as it reached the hand.
A gasp resounded from the audience.
"What the hell was that?" Yusuke asked in a low voice. He looked over to Botan who seemed too surprised to answer.
Back in the arena, Komman growled in anger. "How dare you do that!" He shouted as he rushed toward the cloaked one in a fury. His massive fist was aiming at the unknown competitor's head.
Yusuke looked away. No one could block an attack like that. Especially someone so small. The demons around him went wild, excitedly crying for death. The rest of the team just watched, fixated on the one in the black cloak.
But Komman's fist never reached its destination. It seemed blocked, as if it had hit into an invisible brick wall. Because of the sudden stop, the black hood that covered the unknown fighter's face was blown back by a small gust of wind. The maroon demon was too surprised to react. Everyone in the audience was silent.
"A girl?" Yusuke asked no one.
The cloaked figure was a girl. She had long white hair and pale skin. Dark, grim eyes revealed a vileness inside her. Her lips were tightly pursed into a thin line but as she looked up at her enemy, she grinned darkly.
"Are you pertified in terror, little demon?" She asked. Komman blinked and said nothing. The girl raised her right hand and from it, a large blue bolt of energy escaped. The energy cut a large jagged hole into Komman's middle. He fell onto his back, weakened and shocked. Black blood gushed from a wound that was nearly 5 feet in length. The white haired girl just chuckled, taking a step back. Then, raising both hands over her head, she screamed.
"What the hell?" Yusuke muttered.
"She's channeling her power," Botan explained.
"So much energy," Kuwabara whispered.
Komman's body brightened suddenly. A blinding pale blue light began to fill the stadium. Everyone, including Snape and the audience, turned away and closed their eyes. And when it cleared, the large red demon was gone. Only a scorched spot remained where he had been.
Each member of the Urameshi team stared wide eyed in silence.
Snape made his way to the center of the arena, growing cautious as he got closer to the girl. "Um..." He muttered nervously, "Well... we have a winner." He turned to the girl and whispered, "What's your name?"
"Ven," she responded in a thin voice.
"The winner is our mysterious fighter- Ven."
No one clapped. No one cheered. The audience was much too stunned by the fact that a young girl, who look no more than sixteen could defeat the well known, aged beast Komman- one who'd once been considered nearly as strong as a Saint Beast.
"I have a bad feeling, Urameshi," Kuwabara spoke to his friend quietly.
"Me too."
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*In Spirit World:*
Orge stood, jaw nearly on the ground. Everyone in the small office stared at the large screen. "Sir," he whispered to Koenma, "What was that?... Who was that?" But the boy did not respond. His pacifier was nearly hanging out of his mouth and his eyes were large. He was breathing irregularly.
"I thought she was dead..." the boy muttered in a voice too low for anyone to hear.
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Ohhhhh... I like this ending. ^_^). Hehe... I always did enjoy cliffhangers.
Next chappy has the boys finally seeing some action. And I'm almost positive that Batos is somewhere around. And who the bloody heck is that mysterious 'Ven' chick? hhmmmmmm...
*evil laugh* You will have to wait until later to see. Patience, patience, happy reader.
Not to shamelessly plug myself, but please... if you're not busy, take your time and go see my cowboy bebop mini fic. I want to see what people think about it. It's called "Through Fire Showers".
TO THE REVIEWERS:
You know what the best feeling in the world is? When I sign on and I have a whole bunch of (well not a *whole* bunch, but still...) nice reviews. ^_^) Thanks so much to you guys and girls. *points all reviewers in the direction of my complimentery fugde brownies that have my pen name written in pretty blue icing.*
*Angelfire*- Thanks! ^_^) Totally appreciate it.
*Lisa*- ^_^) As usual, your review totally keeps me going. You really know how to make me feel better :). I swear... I need to get you a present or something by the end of this story.
*Golden Siren* ^_^) Thanx so much for both reviews. *hugs*. See ya in the RP. ^_~
*Gina*- Thank you! You're so nice.
*Thunderstorm*- Thanks!!!
***If you want me to continue, review please.***
Ok, I know I'm talking a lot here, but I just wanted to say that the fic is gonna be taking some turns soon. FYI- I think I might bring up the rating within the next 2 or 3 chaps or change things around- no worries though. More action and fights.
Plus, they might be coming a little slower (schools almost back *heavy sigh* and it takes up a lot of my time and I'm also having some computer problems as of now). With that depressing note... I end this chappy.
Until later, be well.
~the Wicked one
