Chapter 1- I'm sorry

Annie, Kevin, Lucy, Simon, Ruthie, Sara,
Sam & David, and Ben are all waiting in the waiting
room of the hospital. They are waiting for the announcement
of Eric's condition. Doctors run in and out but none
come over to the Camdens. Annie starts to get worried.
Lucy and Kevin try to calm her down. Then a doctor walks
out. Everyone prays that it is Eric's doctor. He walks over
to the Camdens and starts to speak, but his words are
stuck... "Mrs. Camden, I am so sorry to tell you this. But
we have lost Eric. We aren't quite sure what happened, but he
has died." Annie collapsed in Kevin's arms. When she came to,
she couldn't believe what had happened, her husband gone.
She started crying and couldn't stop. Ruthie had taken
off and Simon went after her. He found her sitting on the
floor crying. Simon started crying to as he sat down and embraced her in his arms. Ruthie struggled at first but Simon wasn't letting go. Then Ruthie says "I wanna die."

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