Okay here it is Chapter 2 I put a lot more time in to this one and it has more action in it than the first, which isn't hard so please enjoy

Chapter 2 The Visitor returns

"Okay here it is Raiden I want you to go with Snake into the facility and destroy, disarm or what ever just get rid of Metal Gear Hawk. This one is designed to wipe the floor with even Metal Gear RAY so you have to...Raiden are you even listening to this"

"Rose, your gone"

"Oh shut up Raiden" says Snake as he slaps Raiden hard across the face but Raiden barely even flinches

"You need to stay focused on the mission, we will get back rose anyway, now back to the mission" Otacon continues with Raiden paying attention this time "you need to destroy Metal Gear Hawk by any means necessary. We know that it is not anyone we have encountered before that is producing it but we think it is linked to the Patriots directly so it will be heavily guarded"

"The Patriots, I thought the Patriots were dead"

"Not quite they are all alive and still rule this country but we think some of them are supervising the creation of Metal Gear Hawk so this is very important that you...

"Kill them every last one let them all die horrible painful deaths"

Raiden what are you saying, you're just angry that rose is gone but save that anger for the mission"

As they carried on talking in the car they drove to the east coast of America so they could then swim to the factory but they were so busy discussing their mission they did not realize that they were being followed.

"We cannot let them get to the new Metal Gear and destroy it, they must be stopped now" Just as he said it he lent out the window and shot out one of the tires of the car and watched it skid of the road and crash down a bank into a tree. The other car stopped at the top the hill and out stepped the man with the metallic arm. As he watched the car the, second it set alight Raiden and Snake jumped out of their doors and lay on the floor. As they looked up they saw the man laughing at them"

"I'm surprised you are still alive"

"You, give me back Rose now or you'll pay" Raiden quickly drew out his SOCOM and pointed it at the man

"Who are you? and Raiden how do you know him?" lucking puzzled he Snake pulled out his M9 with but instead of just pointing he shot at the man. Quickly he leapt up into the air and behind Raiden with so much speed that no one saw it and before anyone could react brutally punched Raiden in the back with his metal arm sending him hurtling to the ground. Now seeing him in the light Snake could see that not only did he have a metal arm but also the metal covered from his heck to his waist on his right side of his body. The rest of his chest was covered with scars and he had two circular scars on his head.

"Surely you must remember me, no well then I'll tell you. It's me VAMP"

"Vamp how is it you Raiden killed you on the Big Shell 3 years ago"

"No he only knocked me unconscious but now I'm back and you will pay"

Suddenly Vamp shot up into the air and threw a knife at Snake. Snake jumped behind the car to hide from him and sat crouched up against the bonnet.

"Come out little Snake and fight me or shall I just come to you" Snake jumped out from behind the car and shot five shots one got no way near, the second brushed through his hair, the third slit his leg sending blood squirting everywhere, the fourth hit one of his scars on his chest but had no effect and the last ripped through his metal arm and sent a electric shock through Vamp sending him crashing to the ground. At this point Raiden got up from the noise of the gun firing He stared at vamp and from the expression on his face you could tell that his mind was overwhelmed with thoughts, Vamp took Rose from him, Vamp tried to kill him, Vamp must Die. He got up, picked up his SOCOM and ran over to Vamp screaming

"Were is she, Where's Rose" to which Vamp replied smugly

"She is dead" Raiden looked at Vamp with a look I've never seen him use before, a look of pure hatred a look from his days in the army when he was young. He started shooing madly at Vamp while screaming words that should not be said, Vamp was now a mess of blood and burnt metal that was not nice to be looked upon and then when his gun was empty started kicking him and crying at the same time. Snake got up and ran over to Raiden to stop him and Raiden just turned around and hugged him in a way that suggested that he just needed someone to be there.

Otacon had died in the crash as his door got buckled when they hit the tree so he could not escape and the person who was with Vamp got away without anyone seeing who he was. Snake and Raiden carried on with their mission the next morning and they got a cab to the coast and them headed out to the Island with Metal Gear on it. The mission had begun.

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There it is my second chapter feel free to review it and be honest I want full opinions. Chapter 3 will be on its way soon.