This is my my first fanfic in general, so I would like constructive criticism of my work. Thank you.
In the weeks following the Fortress Inquisitorius attack, the Mantis grew quiet. Everyone was considering what their next move should be, and the days were spent with the ship in hyperspace traveling back and forth from Bogano and Dathomir.
Most of the time Greez and Cere sat and slept in the cockpit, all the while questioning their lives and what was next. Merrin sat calmly next to the holotable, eyes closed sleeping and waking. Cal and BD wandered the ship, and at night Cal locked himself in his room for meditation and sleep.
However, one night Cal had had enough of laying in bed alone, listening to the ship creak and hum. So one night Cal entered his room, but not locking his door for he planned on exiting soon enough.
"Night little guy," Cal said while putting BD down in his "sleeping" spot. Cal pushed a button on the back of BD's head and BD fell silent and his lights unlit. Cal flicked BD twice just to be sure.
"Finally."
Cal took off his shoes just to make little noise as possible, and he exited his room. He stealthily walked over to the seats where Merrin was slumped over in a light sleep. Cal took a quick glance in the cockpit to find Greez and Cere out cold, just as he had hoped.
Cal nudged Merrin, and as she stirred and her eyes fluttered, he put one finger on his lips and another finger on her lips. Merrin looked confused, but followed Cal's instructions. Once he saw that she wasn't going talk, Cal beckoned her with the wave of his arm. Still confused, Merrin followed him into his quarters.
Once both were in his room, he locked the door, and Merrin finally understood. The two broke into a kiss.
They kissed lightly at first, but soon they started to kiss with ferocity.
"Oh Cal," Merrin managed between kisses. They embraced each other, and as Cal groped her curves, he let out a moan. Merrin, turned further on by his moan, started to lift off his top. His top came off and Merrin took a step back to admire his chest. She placed a hand on his chest, and Cal could see her sharply intake breath.
Nightsisters were known to not wear undergarments, and Cal saw this in action when Merrin was caressed his chest, her bottoms seemed to have soaked through and started to drip onto the floor. Cal embraced Merrin quickly, and with one hand grabbed her soaked folds. Merrin moaned quite loudly, and this was provoked by her squirting. Cal kept his hand down as she released her juices, and his hand quickly became covered in it. Cal took his hand away and licked all the juices off his hand. Cal then proceeded to remove Merrin's clothes, and the two still continued kissing as he did so.
In one swift movement, Cal removed Merrin's dress, revealing her greyish body, all of it. Cal quickly admired her curves before removing his pants and undergarments, and once he had, they continued kissing and embracing.
Merrin felt Cal's 6 inch shaft grind against her clit, and she could barely wait any longer.
"Oh Cal. OH CAL! Please! Put it in me."
Cal picked her up by her hips and laid her on his bed. He positioned himself on top of her and guided his throbbing cock to her folds, slightly teasing her by rubbing his cock against her.
She moaned loudly and managed, "Oh please, come on!" And she grabbed his shaft and put it right on top of her dripping entrance. With one thrust, he entered her and she went EUPHORIC.
