In the last chapter:
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Kagome finished telling her story, and sobbed on her mother's shoulder. Her mother was crying as well.
"Azuki/Papa! Why did you leave us? Why didn't you/we walk another way home? WHY???" they screamed as they sobbed.
While they were crying, they heard a miniscule sound. They both looked up at the same time.
It was Azuki. They screamed.
"Azuki!" "Papa!" "Are you alive?"
"No, I am visiting you as a ghost, to tell you to not worry, for I am happy now. My wish has been fulfilled, to die protecting Kagome."
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Kagome whispered, "Honto?"
Azuki nodded and vanished, leaving the scent of rain in the room. Mrs. Higurashi turned to her daughter.
"Kagome, I think we should build a little shrine for your father. That way, he'll be able to visit us whenever he wants."
"Okay, I would like that, and I think Papa would too. He always said that whenever he leaves to go somewhere, he likes to be able to visit us often. "
"He never said that to me. I guess there are some things that he kept secret from me. "
"Mama, I'm sorry I said that. I didn't know that he never told you."
"That's okay. I would like to know he did say it, even though he kept it secret from me for. 17 years."
(A/N: Kagome is 18, her mother is 35, and Azuki is 37)
"Back to the topic, where are we going to build the shrine?"
"I guess in the living room. He always did like to watch TV."
"Sure. It's good that you still care about his interests, mama."
"Why wouldn't I? I'm his wife, right?"
"Of course, mama. I'm sorry I offended you."
"It's okay, Kagome. I'm stressed out because of your father's death. We need to get his body so we can build a grave for him."
They left the house to find Azuki's body. When they reached the alleyway, they didn't see anything. By anything, I mean no blood, no fabric shreds, and no body.
"NANI???"
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Hmmm, what do you think? I guess this is a romance/tragedy/mystery fic. What should I do next?
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Kagome finished telling her story, and sobbed on her mother's shoulder. Her mother was crying as well.
"Azuki/Papa! Why did you leave us? Why didn't you/we walk another way home? WHY???" they screamed as they sobbed.
While they were crying, they heard a miniscule sound. They both looked up at the same time.
It was Azuki. They screamed.
"Azuki!" "Papa!" "Are you alive?"
"No, I am visiting you as a ghost, to tell you to not worry, for I am happy now. My wish has been fulfilled, to die protecting Kagome."
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Kagome whispered, "Honto?"
Azuki nodded and vanished, leaving the scent of rain in the room. Mrs. Higurashi turned to her daughter.
"Kagome, I think we should build a little shrine for your father. That way, he'll be able to visit us whenever he wants."
"Okay, I would like that, and I think Papa would too. He always said that whenever he leaves to go somewhere, he likes to be able to visit us often. "
"He never said that to me. I guess there are some things that he kept secret from me. "
"Mama, I'm sorry I said that. I didn't know that he never told you."
"That's okay. I would like to know he did say it, even though he kept it secret from me for. 17 years."
(A/N: Kagome is 18, her mother is 35, and Azuki is 37)
"Back to the topic, where are we going to build the shrine?"
"I guess in the living room. He always did like to watch TV."
"Sure. It's good that you still care about his interests, mama."
"Why wouldn't I? I'm his wife, right?"
"Of course, mama. I'm sorry I offended you."
"It's okay, Kagome. I'm stressed out because of your father's death. We need to get his body so we can build a grave for him."
They left the house to find Azuki's body. When they reached the alleyway, they didn't see anything. By anything, I mean no blood, no fabric shreds, and no body.
"NANI???"
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Hmmm, what do you think? I guess this is a romance/tragedy/mystery fic. What should I do next?
