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Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho or the characters they all belong to Yoshihiro Togashi.
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I will like to give a special thank you to my first reviewer ever Sarah Lee. Also to my second reviewer Rose Angel. Mostly I will responed to the first two reviewers of every chapter I make. I might change my mind though.
Sarah Lee: don't take this the wrong way but this is a little werid but it sounds good just the same.
Response: No I did not (laughing hardly) take it the wrong way. I get that from alot of people about my stories.
Rose Angel: hmm...this is interesting but odd, it still good and the characters were a little strange. You spelt Keiko's name wrong its K-E-I-K-O.
Response: I learned how to spell her name from www.yuyuhakusho.com. Do you think their the ones who spelled it wrong?
I will like to thank all my other reviewers if I have any more that is. Anyway on with the story.
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A little bit of what happened on the last chapter. ^__^
" Thats what I like about you. (his attitude and him being forceful just incase you did not know) I love you Yusuke." Kakyo mummbled under her breath.
" What did you just say Kakyo?" her friend said and the whole class got slient.
" Ummm.....(blushing) nothing." she replied feeling a little strange. " Oh... it time for dismissal bye." she ran out the class still blushing.
" That is one strange girl." everyone shook their heads as a symbol that they agree.
Everyone went home and started doing whatever they like to do.
Chapter Two: A New Case
Its was a pleasant day in Spirit World that is until.
" Aww..... my precious castle is on fire." Koenma screamed while running back and forth in front of the castle. A scene went through his mind. Where the sky is all red. Then his father destroying his world and giving him hundred spankings.
The Blue Orge came running with a big pale of cold water. He threw it on the fire.
" U...You thought that would work didn't you." Koenma said with a sweat drop on his the back of his head.
" Yeah sort of!" He replied while scratching the back of his head.
* How could have I been so stupid. I was so busy denying or approving papers that I forgot I was baking (Cholcate chips) cookies. Konema thought.
Koenma is starting to see everything blurry.
" Wake up Koenma." blue org said while shaking Konmea
" Alright! Alright! Oww... my head hurts what happen?" Koenma said while rubbing his sore head.
" You mean you don't remember. The M1,M2, and M3 (for the people that don't know it is those three people that were controled by Dr.Ichigaki) attacked you. " They stole Shadow Sword." he countinued talking. " Do you think it is Hiei again do not forget he has the ability to control minds maybe he had control over theirs."
" No, I am quite sure it is not him." Koenma continued talking " Go get Botan and tell her to get Yusuke Uramshi on this case." he got that serious look on his face. The blu orge did what he said and got Botan.
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So how did you like it? Was it better than the last chapter or is it still a little weird. Please Review and tell what you think and remeber be honest? ^__~
Disclaimer: I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho or the characters they all belong to Yoshihiro Togashi.
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I will like to give a special thank you to my first reviewer ever Sarah Lee. Also to my second reviewer Rose Angel. Mostly I will responed to the first two reviewers of every chapter I make. I might change my mind though.
Sarah Lee: don't take this the wrong way but this is a little werid but it sounds good just the same.
Response: No I did not (laughing hardly) take it the wrong way. I get that from alot of people about my stories.
Rose Angel: hmm...this is interesting but odd, it still good and the characters were a little strange. You spelt Keiko's name wrong its K-E-I-K-O.
Response: I learned how to spell her name from www.yuyuhakusho.com. Do you think their the ones who spelled it wrong?
I will like to thank all my other reviewers if I have any more that is. Anyway on with the story.
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A little bit of what happened on the last chapter. ^__^
" Thats what I like about you. (his attitude and him being forceful just incase you did not know) I love you Yusuke." Kakyo mummbled under her breath.
" What did you just say Kakyo?" her friend said and the whole class got slient.
" Ummm.....(blushing) nothing." she replied feeling a little strange. " Oh... it time for dismissal bye." she ran out the class still blushing.
" That is one strange girl." everyone shook their heads as a symbol that they agree.
Everyone went home and started doing whatever they like to do.
Chapter Two: A New Case
Its was a pleasant day in Spirit World that is until.
" Aww..... my precious castle is on fire." Koenma screamed while running back and forth in front of the castle. A scene went through his mind. Where the sky is all red. Then his father destroying his world and giving him hundred spankings.
The Blue Orge came running with a big pale of cold water. He threw it on the fire.
" U...You thought that would work didn't you." Koenma said with a sweat drop on his the back of his head.
" Yeah sort of!" He replied while scratching the back of his head.
* How could have I been so stupid. I was so busy denying or approving papers that I forgot I was baking (Cholcate chips) cookies. Konema thought.
Koenma is starting to see everything blurry.
" Wake up Koenma." blue org said while shaking Konmea
" Alright! Alright! Oww... my head hurts what happen?" Koenma said while rubbing his sore head.
" You mean you don't remember. The M1,M2, and M3 (for the people that don't know it is those three people that were controled by Dr.Ichigaki) attacked you. " They stole Shadow Sword." he countinued talking. " Do you think it is Hiei again do not forget he has the ability to control minds maybe he had control over theirs."
" No, I am quite sure it is not him." Koenma continued talking " Go get Botan and tell her to get Yusuke Uramshi on this case." he got that serious look on his face. The blu orge did what he said and got Botan.
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So how did you like it? Was it better than the last chapter or is it still a little weird. Please Review and tell what you think and remeber be honest? ^__~
