Dream Walking Time.

            I gave in. I really didn't want to let chap. 10 collect dust in my disk. Also, there was a lot of hints from the general audience:P:P BUT PLEASE REVIEW!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHETHER THIS STORY SUCKS OR NOT!!! IF IT DOES…I"LL stop!!!

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It was dark. The forest was alive around her, the leaves rustling with their song. The wind blew around her and she was enveloped. As the darkness fled, she found herself in a clearing. Oh my It was pristinely sharp, so much so it seemed unreal. No. Not unreal. A voice called from far away. This is the beginning, at the place of the elves. She saw a gathering of the most beautiful elves she had ever seen. Man, if the Rivendell elves are considered pretty, these would be the gods and goddesses themselves Indeed, it was such. The elves in front of her did not posses the soberness and wariness of the elves she knew. They were filled with a light and joy that seemed to radiate from them. Her heart was melting at the very sight of them. Before her eyes shone three jewels, red, clear and blue. Her heart soared, they were the…

            And she was taken again.

            Flames engulfed her. The heat was so strong that it made her hands look transparent. What place is this? She though-yelled. But there was no answer. Oh no…. Of all the f**king things to happen, 'voice' had to go off and leave me alone here. The least it could have done was to leave me with the elves… But a dark figure caught her eye, and as she began to focus her attention on it, she was reviled at the evil it represented.

            It was Sauron. With great reluctance, she watched as he forged the ring, and with a rush of power, it became the one we all love and know: The Ruler Ring. Then the world waved and it became a battlefield. War cries and Arrows flew in the air, as all the armies of Middle-Earth were set before her eyes. The utter chaos was devastating, and the most fearsome sight of all was a huge knighted figure set atop a black horse. Soldiers crashed against Sauron like waves breaking upon the shore, yet nothing happened. And suddenly, a tussle, and the figure pulled from its saddle. In slow motion, it killed the man who'd pulled it down, and another man rushed forward and cut off its finger. And with a great roar, the figure dissipated. And the armies of Sauron were thrown into a great confusion.

            A tar-smeared guy faced her, panting from exhaustion. Behind him, stood a familiar face. Elrond! her heart leapt, even if it was only the face of the elven king. She watched and cried, as the man refused to part with the ring, and in that instant, she saw the folly of mankind. And the two walked back, she saw the hardening of Elrond's heart. And she sorrowed.

            Then things speeded up. She saw Isildur's death, the motions of the ring, and the changing of its ownership. She saw the fellowship set out, Gandolf's death…. Are they not written in the book? It's what's gonna happen after that's important for you. The Voice rang out, and she slowly sank into the darkness of her mind…

            As they ring was destroyed, she saw groups of orcs and animals cry out in agony. Screeching, they were literally out of their minds. Even the goblins and leaders were in anguish. For the absence of their link with Sauron was felt most keenly and they were without aim. Yet the evil still remained, deeply encroach.

            Then she saw herself, walking alongside a path. She stopped suddenly, as if having spotted something, and walked into the grass. As the girl bent to pick up a book, she saw a golden glow descend on her. Slowly, lines spread from it, joining her to the fellowship. And then she was taken.

            To Legolas. She saw the Orcs in one of their desperate attempts try to enter the boundaries of Rivendell. Little did they know that it was a drive in them towards the 'good' that was the main compilation towards their attempts. In a way, the evil was seeking to destroy itself together with Joari.

            And the world darkened as she slowly sank into the soothing darkness…

            "Lady Joari? It's time to rise." Araya's voice led her slowly back to reality, and the soft sunlight filtered into the room.

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What do you think? Dreamy enough? Review me more about your feelings! Tell me what you want changed( if anything:)) Thanks! BTW, pple haven't ans. Should the male elf's immortality be represented in a pendent (like a gal elf) or daggers or any other thing you pple can think of! Thanks for readin~