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Rating: G

Broken Pride, Shattered Spirit

By. Firemoon

Long have I crept on my broken wings,

Once strong and peerless, my life barely clings.

Broken pride, shattered spirit,

Blown-up dreams, perished merit.

The unreachable sky; I look up, musing, ¡®I cannot make it.¡¯

My mind flies high into open blue, while my limbs dully onto golden sand hit.

Broken pride, shattered spirit,

Blown-up dreams, perished merit.

My life¡¯s memory flicks past, some indifferent, some sorrowful,

Also that of blurred vision, a faint memory, too painful.

Broken pride, shattered spirit,

Blown-up dreams, perished merit.

I feel my life slipping away, like flowing water,

Grasp onto it, and it falls faster, leaving my face, a little whiter.

Broken pride, shattered spirit,

Blown-up dreams, perished merit.

O father, come take me away,

Already before me, the white demons play.

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A/N: Er, did you enjoy the poem? [is THIS?] Er, basically it¡¯s just a random person although I-after reading this through again-thought it could be Raven [hey, who would call their papa as they die other than him? – no offence meant. I¡¯m Raven Fan too.]

And, the White demon thing is just that first, I tried to write red, then I thought of Hiltz0_o;; So I decided to write blue then it was Rizeo_0;; ¡¦¡¦¡¦¡¦¡¦So THAT¡¯S why I wrote white, and also implying that he could POSSIBLY go to heaven. [you know, WHITE? ANGELS?]

Yeah, I hope you enjoyed this, and REVIEW & FLAMES, STONES WELCOMED!!!!!!