Welcome to another chapter of ALTERING FATE!!! Streetwyse brought up a
very excellent question in her review. Will Folken go to Zaibach with
Hitomi or will they return to Fanelia? This was the kinda thing I was
talking about on my last chappie ppl but to find out you have to read the
chapter on to the fic!!
I like to thank-
Streetwyse- You reviewed again thank you so much
Divined Discontent- Thank you for bringing that up. She is five and acting like a ten year old though I always thought Hitomi was a little mature despite her age.
I do not own esca or any of it's characters
Ch.3 First Vision
~*~
Man and beast stare at each other defiantly, they circle each other in ready of attack. All was silent, except for the sounds of breathing the battlefield was eerily quiet, as if waiting for death scream to roar.
Folken attack
He cried a scream of fury and lunged toward the monster. He raised his sword up to strike the beast before him. The dragon anticipated this and its tail slammed into Folken in result to plummet to ground with amazing force. Folken coughed up and stood up uneasily readying himself for an another attack.
The serpent flickered its tail left to right and lunged it towards Folken. Folken dodged against the assault and slashed its tail. It screamed in pain and charged at him in a blinding rage. Floken slashed again getting its under arm this time. Again and again he cut the beast green blood covered both him and the beast.
~*~
Hitomi stood, petrified as she saw Folken unleash another devastating gash on the creature. It roared out in a mixture of pain, anger, and perhaps sorrow. The battle field had once again become silent as the dragoon and the green haired youth, covered in its blood stared at each.
"Folken-san...."
A sharp pain hit her head. She gasp in pain and clasp it. She saw Folken and the dragon as they were now. The dragon's eyes began to close and Folken lowered his sword down. Then it's slit disappeared and he lunged at him. His arm flew off as blood spewed from his wound.
Hitomi opened her eyes in horror she was shaking from what she saw. "what?' She whispered meekly. Realization hit her she knew those pictures were going to come true.
~*~
The dragon and the youth stood in their places never taking their eyes off from each other. Sweat dripped all over Folken; he was tired and was ready to pass out. Then something gave him hope the dragons slit began to cover its eyes. Folken sighed in relief and began to lower his sword.
"FOLKEN-SAN!!! DON'T!!!" Hitomi screamed on the top of her lungs. Folken stared at her bewildered. Then the dragon lunged itself at him it's mouth ready to engulf him. Hitomi let out a blood-curdling scream and covered her tear-filled eyes.
She heard Folken scream then the dragon then silence. Her sobs grew louder she fell to her knees.
~*~
"FOLKEN-SAN!! DON'T!!!" The little girl screamed at him. Folken look at her confused the to the dragon it lunged at him its mouth opens ready to take his arm. Folken barely got out of the way. The dragon missed it mark Folken saw the chance he took it, letting out another scream he rolled under the dragon and Impaled his sword in its chest and slashed upwards. The dragon screamed in agony and ceased moving.
More of its blood spewed on him he cut open it's pink sac and took out the energist. The blood immediately evaporated as the rest of the Dragon. With little strength he had left he stood up and walk towards the crying child.
"Hitomi..." He whispered.
~*~
Folken was dead he had to be Hitomi reasoned. She choke on her tears she was alone again she lost her only friend. Then she heard someone whisper her name. Hitomi look up and saw the green haired youth giving her a tired smile. New tears fell down on her he hugged Folken tightly burying her face in his torso.
"I thought..."
"I'm OK Hitomi, thanks to you" he replied and embrace the crying child. Hitomi look t Folken and wipe her tears her smile shown against the now lowering sun.
The bushes began to rustle again Hitomi grab Folkens leg while Folken ready his sword. Wolf men appeared surrounding them, one came forward. Folken smiled in relief and reassured the frighten girl.
"It's all right Hitomi, We're among friends"
~*~
"I WILL NOT HAVE RUMORS LIKE THOSE HEAR"
Balgus turn to the raven haired Van. "I am sure Folken-sama will return Van-sama" he assured. Van nodded sadly "But it's been many days" he thought.
"FOLKEN-SAMA'S BACK!!"
Van raised his head a big smile plaster on his youthful face "BIG BROTHER" he yelled and ran to the palace gated. He pushes through the crowds of people biting others in order to proceed further. His eyes widen in joy Right there before him was his big brother holding the drag-energist but besides him was something else little Van didn't expect.
"Who's that girl??"
~*~
Folken stood before his beloved homeland millions of his people cheered and shouted for his return. Hitomi stood behind him, trying to hide herself from all these strangers. Folken gave her and reassuring squeeze on her hand.
"Folken-sama you have return"
Folken nodded and held up the drag-energist for all to see.
"I, Folken Lancour de Fanel have slayed the dragon in the rite of Dragon slaying to become king!!"
~*~
So whaddya think hmmmm? please R/R this was a tough choice to pick but I think it came out well in the end thanks for reading
See ya
Y.V.
I like to thank-
Streetwyse- You reviewed again thank you so much
Divined Discontent- Thank you for bringing that up. She is five and acting like a ten year old though I always thought Hitomi was a little mature despite her age.
I do not own esca or any of it's characters
Ch.3 First Vision
~*~
Man and beast stare at each other defiantly, they circle each other in ready of attack. All was silent, except for the sounds of breathing the battlefield was eerily quiet, as if waiting for death scream to roar.
Folken attack
He cried a scream of fury and lunged toward the monster. He raised his sword up to strike the beast before him. The dragon anticipated this and its tail slammed into Folken in result to plummet to ground with amazing force. Folken coughed up and stood up uneasily readying himself for an another attack.
The serpent flickered its tail left to right and lunged it towards Folken. Folken dodged against the assault and slashed its tail. It screamed in pain and charged at him in a blinding rage. Floken slashed again getting its under arm this time. Again and again he cut the beast green blood covered both him and the beast.
~*~
Hitomi stood, petrified as she saw Folken unleash another devastating gash on the creature. It roared out in a mixture of pain, anger, and perhaps sorrow. The battle field had once again become silent as the dragoon and the green haired youth, covered in its blood stared at each.
"Folken-san...."
A sharp pain hit her head. She gasp in pain and clasp it. She saw Folken and the dragon as they were now. The dragon's eyes began to close and Folken lowered his sword down. Then it's slit disappeared and he lunged at him. His arm flew off as blood spewed from his wound.
Hitomi opened her eyes in horror she was shaking from what she saw. "what?' She whispered meekly. Realization hit her she knew those pictures were going to come true.
~*~
The dragon and the youth stood in their places never taking their eyes off from each other. Sweat dripped all over Folken; he was tired and was ready to pass out. Then something gave him hope the dragons slit began to cover its eyes. Folken sighed in relief and began to lower his sword.
"FOLKEN-SAN!!! DON'T!!!" Hitomi screamed on the top of her lungs. Folken stared at her bewildered. Then the dragon lunged itself at him it's mouth ready to engulf him. Hitomi let out a blood-curdling scream and covered her tear-filled eyes.
She heard Folken scream then the dragon then silence. Her sobs grew louder she fell to her knees.
~*~
"FOLKEN-SAN!! DON'T!!!" The little girl screamed at him. Folken look at her confused the to the dragon it lunged at him its mouth opens ready to take his arm. Folken barely got out of the way. The dragon missed it mark Folken saw the chance he took it, letting out another scream he rolled under the dragon and Impaled his sword in its chest and slashed upwards. The dragon screamed in agony and ceased moving.
More of its blood spewed on him he cut open it's pink sac and took out the energist. The blood immediately evaporated as the rest of the Dragon. With little strength he had left he stood up and walk towards the crying child.
"Hitomi..." He whispered.
~*~
Folken was dead he had to be Hitomi reasoned. She choke on her tears she was alone again she lost her only friend. Then she heard someone whisper her name. Hitomi look up and saw the green haired youth giving her a tired smile. New tears fell down on her he hugged Folken tightly burying her face in his torso.
"I thought..."
"I'm OK Hitomi, thanks to you" he replied and embrace the crying child. Hitomi look t Folken and wipe her tears her smile shown against the now lowering sun.
The bushes began to rustle again Hitomi grab Folkens leg while Folken ready his sword. Wolf men appeared surrounding them, one came forward. Folken smiled in relief and reassured the frighten girl.
"It's all right Hitomi, We're among friends"
~*~
"I WILL NOT HAVE RUMORS LIKE THOSE HEAR"
Balgus turn to the raven haired Van. "I am sure Folken-sama will return Van-sama" he assured. Van nodded sadly "But it's been many days" he thought.
"FOLKEN-SAMA'S BACK!!"
Van raised his head a big smile plaster on his youthful face "BIG BROTHER" he yelled and ran to the palace gated. He pushes through the crowds of people biting others in order to proceed further. His eyes widen in joy Right there before him was his big brother holding the drag-energist but besides him was something else little Van didn't expect.
"Who's that girl??"
~*~
Folken stood before his beloved homeland millions of his people cheered and shouted for his return. Hitomi stood behind him, trying to hide herself from all these strangers. Folken gave her and reassuring squeeze on her hand.
"Folken-sama you have return"
Folken nodded and held up the drag-energist for all to see.
"I, Folken Lancour de Fanel have slayed the dragon in the rite of Dragon slaying to become king!!"
~*~
So whaddya think hmmmm? please R/R this was a tough choice to pick but I think it came out well in the end thanks for reading
See ya
Y.V.
