*Hee hee!Sorry for being so cruel,lol.Today is Friday,so you know that I've actually started writing it early,it's just it takes me a while to think of good stuff.Thanks again for all the reviews.Keep 'em coming! :) btw-for some reason,my spaces in between the paragraphs sometimes don't show up in the fan fic that appears on the site.Is this like a really obvious problem that everyone knows about?If so,can someone please tell me how to fix it? Thanks.
Grissom stood with his jaw wide open.
Sara wasn't there.
'Damn that receptionist,' he cursed aloud.
But Grissom knew it wasn't her fault.
He had seen the card.Sara had gone in and had been taken to room 209.Grissom fought back the urge to cry.His wife,his children,where were they?
When Sara woke up,she felt very drowsy,but didn't want to fall asleep again.
She looked around the room and smiled.
'The gang have been busy' she thought.
There were several large bunches of flowers,boxes of chocolates,little baby clothes,and a picture which had obviously been drawn by Lyndsay.'Or Greg' she chuckled.She winced as pain shot up her back and chest.
'Gil?' she whispered softly.
'Gil?' she said again,slightly louder.
She tried to sit up,but collapsed back onto the bed.
'Okay,I won't try that again' she said with a smirk.
The nurse rushed over to her and glanced at the monitor bleeping beside her.
'I need to see my husband and my children,'Sara demanded,propping herself up slightly with one of her many pillows.
A nurse pretended not to hear her.
'Excuse me,'Sara raised her voice,only to start coughing and spluttering.
'Listen.....' the nurse began 'the doctor will be through in a minute and he'll explain to you everything that has happened.'
Right on cue,the doctor rushed in and grabbed Sara's notes from the end of the bed.
'Mrs Grissom,I'm afraid I've got some bad news.'
Grissom raced back down to the receptionist.
'They're not there!Please tell me where they are!'
The receptionist flicked through more cards,pulled one out,and held it up in the air without looking up from the magazine she was reading.
Grissom grabbed it from her and rushed off to the room.
'Sir,you can't-'
The receptionist sighed and went back to work.
Gil raced up the stairs this time,not wanting to wait for the elavator.
He reached the 3rd floor and stood for a second,panting and wheezing.
He flung the door wide and saw Sara lying on the bed.
'Thank God,'he said,sitting on a nearby chair.
Sara had her face in her hands and was rocking back and forth.
'Sara....what's-'
He stopped as Sara looked up.Her face was red from crying and tears were flowing down her cheek.
He quickly pulled her into a hug and she buried her face into his shoulder.
'Oh Gil,' she wailed 'Why did you take so long?I.......I......'she searched for the words.
Grissom hugged her tighter.
They both looked up as the doctor entered again.
'Sorry to disturb you,but you can see your child now' he explained,turning to leave,obviously wanting to leave them alone.
'Children,' Grissom replied 'Plural.'
'Gil........' Sara started crying again.
'Sara,why is he acting like we have one child,' Grissom asked,tears welling up in his eyes.
This was very unlike Grissom because he didn't usually ask questions that he already knew the answers to.
'There were complications.......' Sara began 'and.......and.......' she couldn't bring herself to say it.
Grissom got up and paced around the room.
'I.........understand,' he said,before rushing out of the room.
'Gil!'Sara shouted after him,but he was already gone.
Ooooooooooooo..........I know I'm cruel but I've got soooooooo much homework and tests cos I'm about to start a new school year,S2,so the teachers just keep piling on the work!Plus,some people went on a stealing spree in my school's changing rooms while my class was outside during PE and I got my house keys and my purse stolen,so I have to go to the police station and identify my stuff etc. I will try to get at least half of the next chapter done by wednesday. :)
btw-thanks for all the advice,Jane,I'm trying to make it better,so bear with me.
Grissom stood with his jaw wide open.
Sara wasn't there.
'Damn that receptionist,' he cursed aloud.
But Grissom knew it wasn't her fault.
He had seen the card.Sara had gone in and had been taken to room 209.Grissom fought back the urge to cry.His wife,his children,where were they?
When Sara woke up,she felt very drowsy,but didn't want to fall asleep again.
She looked around the room and smiled.
'The gang have been busy' she thought.
There were several large bunches of flowers,boxes of chocolates,little baby clothes,and a picture which had obviously been drawn by Lyndsay.'Or Greg' she chuckled.She winced as pain shot up her back and chest.
'Gil?' she whispered softly.
'Gil?' she said again,slightly louder.
She tried to sit up,but collapsed back onto the bed.
'Okay,I won't try that again' she said with a smirk.
The nurse rushed over to her and glanced at the monitor bleeping beside her.
'I need to see my husband and my children,'Sara demanded,propping herself up slightly with one of her many pillows.
A nurse pretended not to hear her.
'Excuse me,'Sara raised her voice,only to start coughing and spluttering.
'Listen.....' the nurse began 'the doctor will be through in a minute and he'll explain to you everything that has happened.'
Right on cue,the doctor rushed in and grabbed Sara's notes from the end of the bed.
'Mrs Grissom,I'm afraid I've got some bad news.'
Grissom raced back down to the receptionist.
'They're not there!Please tell me where they are!'
The receptionist flicked through more cards,pulled one out,and held it up in the air without looking up from the magazine she was reading.
Grissom grabbed it from her and rushed off to the room.
'Sir,you can't-'
The receptionist sighed and went back to work.
Gil raced up the stairs this time,not wanting to wait for the elavator.
He reached the 3rd floor and stood for a second,panting and wheezing.
He flung the door wide and saw Sara lying on the bed.
'Thank God,'he said,sitting on a nearby chair.
Sara had her face in her hands and was rocking back and forth.
'Sara....what's-'
He stopped as Sara looked up.Her face was red from crying and tears were flowing down her cheek.
He quickly pulled her into a hug and she buried her face into his shoulder.
'Oh Gil,' she wailed 'Why did you take so long?I.......I......'she searched for the words.
Grissom hugged her tighter.
They both looked up as the doctor entered again.
'Sorry to disturb you,but you can see your child now' he explained,turning to leave,obviously wanting to leave them alone.
'Children,' Grissom replied 'Plural.'
'Gil........' Sara started crying again.
'Sara,why is he acting like we have one child,' Grissom asked,tears welling up in his eyes.
This was very unlike Grissom because he didn't usually ask questions that he already knew the answers to.
'There were complications.......' Sara began 'and.......and.......' she couldn't bring herself to say it.
Grissom got up and paced around the room.
'I.........understand,' he said,before rushing out of the room.
'Gil!'Sara shouted after him,but he was already gone.
Ooooooooooooo..........I know I'm cruel but I've got soooooooo much homework and tests cos I'm about to start a new school year,S2,so the teachers just keep piling on the work!Plus,some people went on a stealing spree in my school's changing rooms while my class was outside during PE and I got my house keys and my purse stolen,so I have to go to the police station and identify my stuff etc. I will try to get at least half of the next chapter done by wednesday. :)
btw-thanks for all the advice,Jane,I'm trying to make it better,so bear with me.
