AAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't stand it anymore !!! There is always a kind of bug when I create a
story or add a chapter !!! well it's mydunno-what-number update.
Here is the second chapter of the Lord of the Keys. I hope you enjoyed the first chapter and that you understood it because of those b******t strange letters. It's concerns many stories on the site, a compatibility problem certainly.
Stormhawk : Scary ? really ? well, I am just a noob at fanfics, but you are very kind by saying it is funny, that was the aim. ^_^.
Here you will see a mention of "the Middle City". Well, the Matrix looks like a giant city (you know, when Neo take a look above the City in Reloaded, it seems to have no end), so the gigantic buildings would be mountains and small suburbs cities would be the Shire, and outside, well I dunno yet.
Disclaimer : both The Matrix and TLOTR are not mine. And Smelrond too, it is the property of a fic writer I forgot the name.
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Chapter 2 : Meeting Smelrond
After the Burly Brawl, on the Neb:
Trinity (panicked): Neo, what happened?
Morph (quietly): Was it Smith?
Neo: Yeah.
Morph: There are more of him, right?
Neo: A lot more, and even uglier. He must have found a way to replicate himself. Oh! And the Oracle told me that we must find the Key Maker. She gave me the address.
Without any kind of logical explanation, Neo hands a letter to Morpheus (you know, like Bane and the other dude before Smith got him).
Morph O_o : Aaaaaalright…
~~~@~~~
The next day at the Big Building
The trio goes on a lift and then encounter a kind of " maitre d hotel ", a guy who welcomes people.
Guy: Que puis-je faire pour vous ?
Neo: Wot ?
Guy(exasperated): -_- Hmpf. I asked you what I could do for you.
Neo: Oh ! Ok. Then we want to meet with Smelrond.
Guy: Qui ?
Neo: Smelrond. Isn't this the Rivendell Inn Hotel ?
Guy: HA ! Dieu no ! You are at ze Merovingien Building! The Rivendell Inn iz on ze ozer side of ze street, just in front of zis one!
Morph: Oops! Sorry, wrong building.
Guy : Pas grave, abruti !
Morph: huh ?
Guy: I said it iz not a matter, Sir.
Morph (suspicious): O...K
They go back in the lift. Neo feels strange.
Morph: Do you feel anything?
Neo: It seems that someone just removed several explosives from the structure of this building.
Morph: Really? Maybe they had problems with rats in the ventilation system.
Trinity (happy): Using bombs against rats? That's really fun, believe me!
In the Rivendell Inn's Lobby – a lot of strange people are going in and out. Most are tall, very beautiful and with pointy ears and are moving gracefully like on bullet time mode, there are also some beardy midget people and hairy footed small ones.
Neo, to a reception hostess : We would like to meet Smelrond.
Hostess: You are?
Neo: uh… We were sent by the Oracle.
Hostess: Well, then please follow me.
The woman starts to walk forward with great grace.
Trinity: Hey, listen to me! I think that you should move faster or I'll kick your ass, and if you don't, you can go to hell!
The hostess walks faster with a scared glance at Trinity.
The trio goes in a lift (again) to get out on a furnished building rooftop with an amazing view on Middle City. There are lot of people and a tall man comes to greet the trio.
Smelrond: May you be welco……
Morph and Trin draw their guns and Neo takes on a kung fu pose.
All three: SMITH !
Smelrond: Damn it ! I don't know why humans are scared of me! I am not Smith, he looks like me but I am not an agent! I am the elf-king program! I am your ally, just like the Oracle.
The trio slowly put down guns and menacing poses
Neo: Why are we here?
Smelrond: To stop the "Key Master"
Neo: -Maker.
Smelrond: No, Master! I know who he is! And I know he became evil. But let us now join the Council, and you will have your answers.
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Ok. I think I am starting to have little coherence problems and I must find out how to resolve them. Any advice would be welcome. So please , R+R
Here is the second chapter of the Lord of the Keys. I hope you enjoyed the first chapter and that you understood it because of those b******t strange letters. It's concerns many stories on the site, a compatibility problem certainly.
Stormhawk : Scary ? really ? well, I am just a noob at fanfics, but you are very kind by saying it is funny, that was the aim. ^_^.
Here you will see a mention of "the Middle City". Well, the Matrix looks like a giant city (you know, when Neo take a look above the City in Reloaded, it seems to have no end), so the gigantic buildings would be mountains and small suburbs cities would be the Shire, and outside, well I dunno yet.
Disclaimer : both The Matrix and TLOTR are not mine. And Smelrond too, it is the property of a fic writer I forgot the name.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Chapter 2 : Meeting Smelrond
After the Burly Brawl, on the Neb:
Trinity (panicked): Neo, what happened?
Morph (quietly): Was it Smith?
Neo: Yeah.
Morph: There are more of him, right?
Neo: A lot more, and even uglier. He must have found a way to replicate himself. Oh! And the Oracle told me that we must find the Key Maker. She gave me the address.
Without any kind of logical explanation, Neo hands a letter to Morpheus (you know, like Bane and the other dude before Smith got him).
Morph O_o : Aaaaaalright…
~~~@~~~
The next day at the Big Building
The trio goes on a lift and then encounter a kind of " maitre d hotel ", a guy who welcomes people.
Guy: Que puis-je faire pour vous ?
Neo: Wot ?
Guy(exasperated): -_- Hmpf. I asked you what I could do for you.
Neo: Oh ! Ok. Then we want to meet with Smelrond.
Guy: Qui ?
Neo: Smelrond. Isn't this the Rivendell Inn Hotel ?
Guy: HA ! Dieu no ! You are at ze Merovingien Building! The Rivendell Inn iz on ze ozer side of ze street, just in front of zis one!
Morph: Oops! Sorry, wrong building.
Guy : Pas grave, abruti !
Morph: huh ?
Guy: I said it iz not a matter, Sir.
Morph (suspicious): O...K
They go back in the lift. Neo feels strange.
Morph: Do you feel anything?
Neo: It seems that someone just removed several explosives from the structure of this building.
Morph: Really? Maybe they had problems with rats in the ventilation system.
Trinity (happy): Using bombs against rats? That's really fun, believe me!
In the Rivendell Inn's Lobby – a lot of strange people are going in and out. Most are tall, very beautiful and with pointy ears and are moving gracefully like on bullet time mode, there are also some beardy midget people and hairy footed small ones.
Neo, to a reception hostess : We would like to meet Smelrond.
Hostess: You are?
Neo: uh… We were sent by the Oracle.
Hostess: Well, then please follow me.
The woman starts to walk forward with great grace.
Trinity: Hey, listen to me! I think that you should move faster or I'll kick your ass, and if you don't, you can go to hell!
The hostess walks faster with a scared glance at Trinity.
The trio goes in a lift (again) to get out on a furnished building rooftop with an amazing view on Middle City. There are lot of people and a tall man comes to greet the trio.
Smelrond: May you be welco……
Morph and Trin draw their guns and Neo takes on a kung fu pose.
All three: SMITH !
Smelrond: Damn it ! I don't know why humans are scared of me! I am not Smith, he looks like me but I am not an agent! I am the elf-king program! I am your ally, just like the Oracle.
The trio slowly put down guns and menacing poses
Neo: Why are we here?
Smelrond: To stop the "Key Master"
Neo: -Maker.
Smelrond: No, Master! I know who he is! And I know he became evil. But let us now join the Council, and you will have your answers.
* * * * * * * * *
Ok. I think I am starting to have little coherence problems and I must find out how to resolve them. Any advice would be welcome. So please , R+R
