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WINNERS OF THE TRIVIA ARE (SWITCHES TO ANNOUNCER VOICE) IN FIRST PLACE, JUSTAGIRL. IN SECOND PLACE, STAR FUTURE, AND IN THIRD, OLUSHA. THE CORRECT ANSWER WAS ARAGORN, SON OF ARATHORN. CONGRATS TO ALL WHO TRIED.
SPECIAL THANKS GOES TO BLACKROSE1356, RAINYDAYZ, AND MOROTHEOLFGOD. THEY ARE HELPING ME WITH THE STORY, AND MOROTHEWOLFGOD WAS THE FIRST TO REVIEW, AND PUSHES ME AFTER EVERY CHAPTER TO CONTINUE. THANK YOU. THIS STORY IS DEDICATED TO THEM. ALSO THANK YOU TO ALL MY OTHER REVIEWERS, AND SILENT READERS. HURTING HANDS
CH.4
Legolas slowly opened his eyes. The first sight he saw was a bunch of whips. Long ones, short ones, fat ones, thin ones, multi thong ones, ect. They were all there. Legolas struggled to get up, only to find that he was tied to a cold metal table.
"Always the weakling. What, are you giving up that easy?" Rayne mocked Legolas as Legolas leaned back. Legolas forced himself to think.
"What choice do I have?" Legolas said bitterly, his mind fresh out of ideas.
"And finally, you see it our way. You see, I've tried to tell you that for years. And only now do you understand. See this room? Well, this is my toy room. Ever weapon that is used in Arda is here. whips, knives, swords, bows, arrows, torture weapons." Rayne smiled as he named his toys.
"Your sick." Legolas snapped. Rayne laughed.
"You see, little one, I'm not sick, I'm reasonable. You see, these toys have been here for thousands of years, waiting for the right flesh to cut. Now, I think I have it. You." Rayne ran a hand over Legolas's chest.
"Don't touch me." Legolas's voice had a tingle of begging to it.
'Now, I thought we had an understanding. You see, I give the orders, not you. Understand, or do I have to take a toy to you?" Rayne laughed.
"I won't bow the way I did earlier." Legolas said suddenly. Rayne turned, fire lighting his eyes more than Legolas had ever seen.
"I would have thought different. You see, a toy is used for idiots, stubborn, disobedient, or obnoxious Elves. You are one." Rayne picked up a blind fold, and blind folded Legolas. Legolas whimpered, wanting to see. The was a small pain on his side, then a large pain on his chest. It felt like his chest was on fire.
Rayne smiled at the way the child tried to move away from the flame. He shook it out, and glanced around the room. there were tons of toys in there, and he had to figure the best ones. Then he spotted it. He left Legolas for a few seconds, and picked up the toy.
Legolas relaxed for one second when the burning went away. He then heard a noise, and tensed. A cold piece of metal was run over his chest.
"You see, wait you can't, well, I see, that this toy is one of the most dangerous. It doesn't get any more painful than this. It's called a whip, yet it's not. This is like a metal piece, with leather thongs. It was used in earlier days to flog thieves. Some parents used it on disobedient children. Like I'm going to do to you. See, for years you have been running around and being plain flat out disobedient. You see, I'm going to change that. After this, your spirit is mine." Rayne was running the metal over Legolas's chest, and down his stomach. Legolas cringed at his words.
"I refuse to be yours. You can hit me with that all you want, but you cannot take my spirit." Legolas snapped. Rayne brought the metal down on his chest. Legolas bite back a cry.
"Well, I see that in a different way. How about this?" Rayne brought the whip down and everything went black at the pain once more.
*Should I have another torture sence, or has Legolas been tortured enough? Next trivia question, What two Lord of the Rings characters get their nails done by the same person?
Is it tine for Aragorn to save the day? Much more to come, just review. To all my silent readers out there, don't be afraid to review. I don't bite, and answer directly back. Oh, I suggest you read one of my friend's story. BlackRose1356. Her story, Believe in Me. It will be good. Chapters a little short right now, but getting longer. Check it out. I personally think it very good. Thank you, and review soon.*
Legolas's fanatical fan girl
WINNERS OF THE TRIVIA ARE (SWITCHES TO ANNOUNCER VOICE) IN FIRST PLACE, JUSTAGIRL. IN SECOND PLACE, STAR FUTURE, AND IN THIRD, OLUSHA. THE CORRECT ANSWER WAS ARAGORN, SON OF ARATHORN. CONGRATS TO ALL WHO TRIED.
SPECIAL THANKS GOES TO BLACKROSE1356, RAINYDAYZ, AND MOROTHEOLFGOD. THEY ARE HELPING ME WITH THE STORY, AND MOROTHEWOLFGOD WAS THE FIRST TO REVIEW, AND PUSHES ME AFTER EVERY CHAPTER TO CONTINUE. THANK YOU. THIS STORY IS DEDICATED TO THEM. ALSO THANK YOU TO ALL MY OTHER REVIEWERS, AND SILENT READERS. HURTING HANDS
CH.4
Legolas slowly opened his eyes. The first sight he saw was a bunch of whips. Long ones, short ones, fat ones, thin ones, multi thong ones, ect. They were all there. Legolas struggled to get up, only to find that he was tied to a cold metal table.
"Always the weakling. What, are you giving up that easy?" Rayne mocked Legolas as Legolas leaned back. Legolas forced himself to think.
"What choice do I have?" Legolas said bitterly, his mind fresh out of ideas.
"And finally, you see it our way. You see, I've tried to tell you that for years. And only now do you understand. See this room? Well, this is my toy room. Ever weapon that is used in Arda is here. whips, knives, swords, bows, arrows, torture weapons." Rayne smiled as he named his toys.
"Your sick." Legolas snapped. Rayne laughed.
"You see, little one, I'm not sick, I'm reasonable. You see, these toys have been here for thousands of years, waiting for the right flesh to cut. Now, I think I have it. You." Rayne ran a hand over Legolas's chest.
"Don't touch me." Legolas's voice had a tingle of begging to it.
'Now, I thought we had an understanding. You see, I give the orders, not you. Understand, or do I have to take a toy to you?" Rayne laughed.
"I won't bow the way I did earlier." Legolas said suddenly. Rayne turned, fire lighting his eyes more than Legolas had ever seen.
"I would have thought different. You see, a toy is used for idiots, stubborn, disobedient, or obnoxious Elves. You are one." Rayne picked up a blind fold, and blind folded Legolas. Legolas whimpered, wanting to see. The was a small pain on his side, then a large pain on his chest. It felt like his chest was on fire.
Rayne smiled at the way the child tried to move away from the flame. He shook it out, and glanced around the room. there were tons of toys in there, and he had to figure the best ones. Then he spotted it. He left Legolas for a few seconds, and picked up the toy.
Legolas relaxed for one second when the burning went away. He then heard a noise, and tensed. A cold piece of metal was run over his chest.
"You see, wait you can't, well, I see, that this toy is one of the most dangerous. It doesn't get any more painful than this. It's called a whip, yet it's not. This is like a metal piece, with leather thongs. It was used in earlier days to flog thieves. Some parents used it on disobedient children. Like I'm going to do to you. See, for years you have been running around and being plain flat out disobedient. You see, I'm going to change that. After this, your spirit is mine." Rayne was running the metal over Legolas's chest, and down his stomach. Legolas cringed at his words.
"I refuse to be yours. You can hit me with that all you want, but you cannot take my spirit." Legolas snapped. Rayne brought the metal down on his chest. Legolas bite back a cry.
"Well, I see that in a different way. How about this?" Rayne brought the whip down and everything went black at the pain once more.
*Should I have another torture sence, or has Legolas been tortured enough? Next trivia question, What two Lord of the Rings characters get their nails done by the same person?
Is it tine for Aragorn to save the day? Much more to come, just review. To all my silent readers out there, don't be afraid to review. I don't bite, and answer directly back. Oh, I suggest you read one of my friend's story. BlackRose1356. Her story, Believe in Me. It will be good. Chapters a little short right now, but getting longer. Check it out. I personally think it very good. Thank you, and review soon.*
Legolas's fanatical fan girl
