There has been a request to make a second part to this fic, so I've tried to do an effective one. I don't know how well I'm going to do, because the first one was rather from my own point of view. This one will make me go into the point of view of the person speaking to the victim. So, here I go!
A warm thank you to all of you who put us on their favorite's lists. That really made our day, and we hope to continue to satisfy you. Perhaps we could email you some of our original stories, although some of them are VERY LONG (not to mention BIZARRE). And, thanks to, I believe it was Rhelle, though I can't recall (I read the reviews at the library, I don't have net at home), for calling herself my fan! If you liked my poems, you'll like Kaial's story "Pain of Confinement," probably. And, I hope to come out with the first chapter of my first story, "Kamau Basatta," soon. Maybe it's posted at the same time as this chapter!
I hope this meets expectations set by the first chapter.~ Falcona SkyWolf
Yami, Please
Written in the point of view of Mutou Yugi.
Summary: When the one you lean upon needs you, how do you support them?
Yami, oh my Gods! Are you badly hurt?
Are you sure? You really look it!
Here, let me-
But you should-
Yami, here. Just grab my hand-
Hey, hold it-!
You okay?
Here, just lean on me.
Just sore? Yami, you're bleeding!
How could you not notice?
You should have it checked out.
Well, we should go home.
Man, your pants are dripping blood. Eww.
Oh, Yami, your shirt's ripped!
Torn really badly in the back.
Who did this? And why?
Yeah, but they could have wanted your money.
But you've never backed away from a challenge!
Oh. Yami, you've got a black eye there.
Should we call someone to pick us up?
Does it hurt badly to walk?
Here, grab my hand. Oh, Yami, I was so worried!
Oh! Gomen nasai! I didn't want my hug to bother you!
I didn't mean to hurt you.
Are you sure it's okay?
Oh, Yami!
Oh! Sorry!
Sure? I don't want to-
Am I helping at all?
You're so tense, Yami.
Oh! Come here! Oh, sorry! Did I scare you?
Sorry. I'm not trying to.
Oh, thank you.
Here, there's a bench. We should rest. Here.
Yami, are you crying?
Oh, really?
Something in BOTH eyes?
You never cry. It's got to be more than stress.
Oh, Yami. I just want to help you relax.
Does this help?
Whoa! What did I do? Should I stop?
You sure?
Of course, Yami. I'll hold you whenever you need it.
Yami, are you sure you're okay? You're still bleeding.
But, if your leg's cut, why aren't your pants?
People don't just bleed without being injured.
You're awfully stressed, Yami. Are you sure that you're okay, or are you hiding something?
Not feeling well? Is that all? I'm worried for you, you know.
I worry. Are you sure you're going to be okay?
oh. All right. You could get some new clothes at home, anyway. Hey! Don't fall!
So, what did he look like? We could go to the police.
How'd you fight him if you didn't see him? It's not that dark tonight.
Were you even facing him? How could you hit someone behind you?
Yami, just what did he do to you?
Yami, I'm just trying to help! But if you don't want it-
Well, what happened?
Couldn't you Mind Crush him?
Just how overpowering was he?
Why did he attack, if not to rob? He would have killed you if he wanted to.
Oh, Yami. Please be honest. Yami, did he rape you?
Well, the blood- conspicuous place, you know- the way your shirt's ripped, how troubled you are-
Yami, why didn't you tell me? I'm not stupid.
Well, why? Were you afraid to tell me?
Innocent? Since when does innocence mean ignorance? I'm not a little kid, Yami!
Yami, I want to help. Please, don't think I can't handle it. I need to know if you need help.
Yami, I'm here for you. Please, let me help you. I'll never leave you alone with your pain.
Yami, did it hurt you a lot- physically, I mean? I know it hurt emotionally.
Yeah. I'm glad he didn't kill you.
Yeah. It naturally would hurt.
Oh, Yami. With the way you're limping, I wouldn't be surprised if it took you weeks to be able to walk comfortably.
Yeah, but I'm more worried for your spirit. That's not the sort of thing to wear off.
I'm here for you, remember that.
Yeah. I was scared for you, too. I still am. Do you need anything?
Are you sure?
How can you be so sure you're okay?
Oh, Yami. I'm glad I'm helping.
Was this good? I like it, but I don't think it's as powerful as "No, Aibou." Please, review, and I hope this goes well with "No, Aibou."
A warm thank you to all of you who put us on their favorite's lists. That really made our day, and we hope to continue to satisfy you. Perhaps we could email you some of our original stories, although some of them are VERY LONG (not to mention BIZARRE). And, thanks to, I believe it was Rhelle, though I can't recall (I read the reviews at the library, I don't have net at home), for calling herself my fan! If you liked my poems, you'll like Kaial's story "Pain of Confinement," probably. And, I hope to come out with the first chapter of my first story, "Kamau Basatta," soon. Maybe it's posted at the same time as this chapter!
I hope this meets expectations set by the first chapter.~ Falcona SkyWolf
Yami, Please
Written in the point of view of Mutou Yugi.
Summary: When the one you lean upon needs you, how do you support them?
Yami, oh my Gods! Are you badly hurt?
Are you sure? You really look it!
Here, let me-
But you should-
Yami, here. Just grab my hand-
Hey, hold it-!
You okay?
Here, just lean on me.
Just sore? Yami, you're bleeding!
How could you not notice?
You should have it checked out.
Well, we should go home.
Man, your pants are dripping blood. Eww.
Oh, Yami, your shirt's ripped!
Torn really badly in the back.
Who did this? And why?
Yeah, but they could have wanted your money.
But you've never backed away from a challenge!
Oh. Yami, you've got a black eye there.
Should we call someone to pick us up?
Does it hurt badly to walk?
Here, grab my hand. Oh, Yami, I was so worried!
Oh! Gomen nasai! I didn't want my hug to bother you!
I didn't mean to hurt you.
Are you sure it's okay?
Oh, Yami!
Oh! Sorry!
Sure? I don't want to-
Am I helping at all?
You're so tense, Yami.
Oh! Come here! Oh, sorry! Did I scare you?
Sorry. I'm not trying to.
Oh, thank you.
Here, there's a bench. We should rest. Here.
Yami, are you crying?
Oh, really?
Something in BOTH eyes?
You never cry. It's got to be more than stress.
Oh, Yami. I just want to help you relax.
Does this help?
Whoa! What did I do? Should I stop?
You sure?
Of course, Yami. I'll hold you whenever you need it.
Yami, are you sure you're okay? You're still bleeding.
But, if your leg's cut, why aren't your pants?
People don't just bleed without being injured.
You're awfully stressed, Yami. Are you sure that you're okay, or are you hiding something?
Not feeling well? Is that all? I'm worried for you, you know.
I worry. Are you sure you're going to be okay?
oh. All right. You could get some new clothes at home, anyway. Hey! Don't fall!
So, what did he look like? We could go to the police.
How'd you fight him if you didn't see him? It's not that dark tonight.
Were you even facing him? How could you hit someone behind you?
Yami, just what did he do to you?
Yami, I'm just trying to help! But if you don't want it-
Well, what happened?
Couldn't you Mind Crush him?
Just how overpowering was he?
Why did he attack, if not to rob? He would have killed you if he wanted to.
Oh, Yami. Please be honest. Yami, did he rape you?
Well, the blood- conspicuous place, you know- the way your shirt's ripped, how troubled you are-
Yami, why didn't you tell me? I'm not stupid.
Well, why? Were you afraid to tell me?
Innocent? Since when does innocence mean ignorance? I'm not a little kid, Yami!
Yami, I want to help. Please, don't think I can't handle it. I need to know if you need help.
Yami, I'm here for you. Please, let me help you. I'll never leave you alone with your pain.
Yami, did it hurt you a lot- physically, I mean? I know it hurt emotionally.
Yeah. I'm glad he didn't kill you.
Yeah. It naturally would hurt.
Oh, Yami. With the way you're limping, I wouldn't be surprised if it took you weeks to be able to walk comfortably.
Yeah, but I'm more worried for your spirit. That's not the sort of thing to wear off.
I'm here for you, remember that.
Yeah. I was scared for you, too. I still am. Do you need anything?
Are you sure?
How can you be so sure you're okay?
Oh, Yami. I'm glad I'm helping.
Was this good? I like it, but I don't think it's as powerful as "No, Aibou." Please, review, and I hope this goes well with "No, Aibou."
