Young Winter, Sweet Smiles...

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Chapter 4: Close to Death But Escaped It

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A tale of Tomoyo (Madison) and Eriol.

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Notes:

1.) Card Captors never existed at all.

2.) Tomoyo has this sortta heart disease (it's supposed to fit with the story so bear with it. I'm not trying to hurt Tomoyo.

3.) They are all 19 in this story.

4.) Tomoyo, Sakura, Eriol, and Li are all Chinese (it has to be this way in order to work).

5.) MOST IMPORTANT I DO NOT OWN CLAMP OR CCS OR CC OR ANY MOVIES!!! Please don't sue me if you find the story like someone else's or like a movie or a t.v. show or something. I won't know cuz I made this story up from my mind (this is fully true). If you do find it like someone else's story or like a movie or t.v. show you've seen before please tell me and I'll consider removing it.

6) The theme song is changed.

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Summary: Tomoyo's older sister died and she has to fulfill her sister's last wish that she told Tomoyo before she died. Tomoyo has to then journey to Japan with her best friend, Sakura, and find her sister's boyfriend and give her sister's ashes to him (her sister was in very deep love with her boyfriend). While on the way Tomoyo and Sakura meet up with Eriol and Li. They all end up together at the same ski lodge. Then Tomoyo later finds out that Eriol's brother is also dead (or her sister's boyfriend)! What should she do? Eriol looks like he is starting to develop feelings for Tomoyo. Will they end up loving each other? This story is a complex mixture of courage, not giving up, hate, sadness, anger, but mostly the compelling words of love that bring Tomoyo and Eriol together (as long with Sakura and Li ^-^ just to be fair).

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Facial Expressions:

^-~ = winks

~-^ = ouch or sometimes 'sour'

^-^ = smiling

~-~ = annoyed or 'oh that gotta hurt'

~(8)- = little chick (see it? if not tilt your head)

+-+ = cute expression

=-= = blacked out (hehe)

XD = laughing

x_x = poisioned

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Theme Song: At The Beginning - By: Donna Lewis and Richard Marx

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Note from Author: Um... Almost but this is the 4th chapter and I hope you like it. I hope you noticed that the theme song has changed. It's now 'At The Begining' by Donna and Richard. It's a really really really cute song. I hope you like it!!! Anyway. Have a great time with this chapter. Oh yeah. And I still don't have enough votes to decide the color fur for SeeYa. PLEASE VOTE!!! So the daily poll has not changed. Or should I say Chapter Poll. Yeah. I'll change the name of it. ^-^ Also I added a new facial expression. Poisioned!!! R+R

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Annie: SeeSi and SeeYa are FINALLY awake!!!

SeeSi: Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder, Pepper Powder... (ect.)

SeeYa: SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP!!!

Annie: Oh boy. This is going on FOREVER!!!

SeeSi and SeeYa turn to Annie and yell in a really loud voice: SHUT UP!!!

Annie looks mad then kicks SeeSi and SeeYa out of the house and yells: DON'T COME BACK UNTIL YOUR READY TO SAY SORRY!!! I HOPE YOU REMEMBER THAT I HAVE THE POWER TO DISTROY YOU!!!

SeeSi and SeeYa wear a face of horror looking at Annie while she slams the door.

Annie: Hehe. Time to get my spells out and DISTROY THEM ONCE AND FOR ALL!!! Mu hahahahah!!! Then I can creat new ones!!! ^-~

SeeSi and SeeYa stare at Annie through the window with horror still on their faces and beg Annie to let them live. Annie just sticks her tong out at them and continues looking at the spells.

Annie: Anyway back to the story!!!

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Sakura and Tomoyo's Room:

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Tomoyo and Sakura franticly looks around the room for Tomoyo's medicine box because it's time for Tomoyo to take her medicine and she can't find it.

"Oh my GOSH!!! I can't find it!!!" Tomoyo yelled with horror on her face and all the happiness in here eyes had dissapeared.

"Tomoyo. Calm down. You'll just make the condition of your heart is in worse since you didn't take your medication and getting stressed. Tomoyo for your life please calm down!!!" Sakura yelled back at Tomoyo with concern in her voice. Sakura was looking through the draws while Tomoyo was looking under the bed. "Tomoyo could you have left it in your luggage? Did you check there yet?"

"No. I'll look." replyed Tomoyo with deep distress still in her voice along with a tint of worry. "It's nowhere!!! We searched everywhere!!!"

"Tomoyo calm down!!!"

Just then Tomoyo was about to faint but Eriol caught her and put Tomoyo in a chair. Eriol and Li who just came into the room to find out what all the racket was about and was just in time to catch Tomoyo before she fell. Tomoyo haveing not taken her medication for an hour and a half all the disease effects started to have a huge effect on Tomoyo.

Tomoyo's breathing had become horse and she was taking large gulps of air. Tomoyo held her on hand on her head and the other over her heart while doing this. Tomoyo was feeling dizzy and sick.

"Hurry. We have to take her to the Town Hospital," said Eriol.

"How!?! We don't have a car!?! (their car once broke down again after they arrived LOL)" yelled Sakura back to Eriol while looking full of worry for Tomoyo. Like she saw a death omen of somthing close to that.

"I got a taxi outside. Hurry," replyed Eriol as he picked up Tomoyo once again and carried her to the taxi. Sakura ran after Eriol and Li ran after Sakura.

"She'll be alright you know," said Li to Sakura while they were running (yeah they finally got nice!!!).

"I hope so. Thanks," relyed Sakura.

The whole group got into the car with Li up in the front and Sakura in the back wipping all the sweat off Tomoyo's head and Eriol holding Tomoyo's head on his lap. With that the taxi started it's journey to the hospital.

(should I stop? Nah... I'll stop somewhere else. Were at 3 and 1/2 pages so far. LONG!!!

Chapter 1= 3 and 1/8 pages

Chapter 2 = 7 and 1/3 pages that was really long it took me only 1 hour to write it up though ^-^

Chapter 3 = 3 and 1/4 pages)

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The Hospital

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Tomoyo and a doctor walk out of a room and Eriol, Li, and Sakura walk up to the doctor. Tomoyo has new bottle of medicine in her hands. Sakura walks over to Tomoyo and hugs her to she that she's ok.

"You were really lucky to get her here on time. It could have ment fatial for her if you arrived a little later," said the doctor with concern on his face. He turned to Tomoyo, "Remember to take your medication on time and don't lose it again."

"Thank you doctor," replyed Eriol.

With that the little group walks out of the hospital with Tomoyo looking better and less sick.

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Annie: Sorry this chapter wasn't long. I'll try to make it up next time. Anyway. Thanks for reading!!!

SeeYa: She finally let us back in the house and I feel so bad for making her mad. One problem. SeeSi is still outside screaming Pepper Powder. She hasn't given up yet.

SeeSi is outside pounding on the window for Annie to let her in. SeeYa and Annie sweat drop animie style.

Annie: That's why I like SeeYa better.

SeeSi: WHAT WAS THAT!!!

Annie: Anyway thanks for reading and please review. Chapter Poll at the bottom

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Chapter Poll: (see I changed the Title)

What Color should SeeYa be? SeeYa is currently white.

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1.) Green with blue stars.

2.) Light Cloud Blue with White stars. (SeeSi had Yellow stars and the same fur)

3.) Black with a single white star on her head.

4.) Stay the way she is. (SeeYa is a SHE not a HE)

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