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Chapter 3
When Link reached the end of the portal, Epona was shaking, and the poe was laughing and pointing and laughing at Epona. Link dismounted and drew his Biggoron sword.
"Shut up Poe! She's never traveled through a portal before. She has a reason to be scared to death!" Link said patting Epona's snout. Epona stomped her front left hoof in agreement. The poe stopped laughing, and looked behind itself.
"OK sonny, lookie over there. That's the village. Master will be waiting for you in the Office. Hurry, he's been waiting for you for sometime now." The poe said drifting backwards. Then it disappeared. Link took Epona's reins and lead her to the village. When he got there, the village was filled with a dark smog. People were coughing, and some were falling to the ground in pure agony. Link backed away because one person almost fell dead on top of him. Link was sure he was going to throw up. Then finally he reached the Office.
A fat little man was sitting behind a desk. His small feet were up high on the counter top. He was snoring too. Link rapped on the desk top. The man grunted and didn't wake up.
"Sir? Um, sir?" Link asked looking out the window making sure Epona wasn't being eaten or stolen.
"Huh? What? Oh, are you the kid who needs to see Master? OH YEAH! Hold on a second kid." The fat man got up and waddled over to a door on his left. He entered it, and then another man came out. He was tall and slim. His dirty blonde hair was covering his bloodshot eyes.
"Is this that Link boy I called for?" He asked looking over at the little fat man.
"Yesum sir." Said the man.
"So, you're Link. Hero of time eh?" Said the tall man raising an unseen eyebrow.
" Yeah, you called for my help. I'm sorry I couldn't come sooner." Link said apologetically. The little fat man had scuttled back inside of the other room. Link felt weird standing there being watched. The tall man scratched his nose.
"I'm Master Obline, that little guy over there is Addicus Martell. We call him Martie, everyone here call me Master. So, we need to talk some things over." Said Master.
"Yes sir." He said looking back at Epona who was eating some grass.
"You can see how bad this disease is getting. That Horon King. Why does he torment us so? He shouldn't do these kind of things. We never did anything to him. Pure evil I tell ya, pure evil." Master lead Link outside. He pointed at a giant mountain. "He lives up there, he casts evil spells upon us." Link stared up at the top. He could faintly make out a castle. Link was taken aback by the demons that fluttered around the top of the mountain.
"Those things don't do anything to your village?" Link asked pointing at a winged lion who's flesh was dripping in blood, and it's teth glowed of silver. Master looked at him strangely.
"What things? I don't see anything up there except the outline of that castle." Link looked harder at the mountain top. He scratched his eyes to make sure he wasn't hallucinating. Even then, he could still see the demons. He swallowed hard, and turned away. Master lead him to an Inn. He got him a nice little room on the third floor. They also gave Epona her own stable. Link appreciated this very much.
"Link, I believe that you need your rest. You'll be fighting soon. I'm sorry for all these dead people. There's nothin I can do. I tried every protection spell in the book, but Horon's spells are too strong." Master said sadly, and he closed Link's door and went downstairs. As Link took off his tunic and put on a clean white shirt that lay on his bed, and fiery red headed maid came in. She noticed him changing and turned quickly around.
"So sorry sir, didn't know you were changing in here." The maid started to blush a vibrant magenta.
"It's ok, I was just changing a shirt, that's all." The maid smiled a little. She put some white towels on his dresser.
"Oh, here you go sir, a bath is being drawn for you." She smiled and left. Link thought that she was the prettiest lady he's ever met. Her eye's were a deep ocean blue, her voice was like chimes in a light breeze, and her skin was milky white. Link smiled to himself. He went to the bath room, and saw that there was a steaming bath waiting for him. Link took off his clothes quickly and jumped in.
"Ah, this is nice. Very nice." He said sighing. He went under the water and came back up. He was really surprised to see a girl staring him straight in the face.
"Hallo, what's your name?" She asked. She had straight blonde hair, green eyes, and was very small.
"Who are you? Link asked covering his *ahmmm* parts. The little girl giggled frantically.
"AHAHAHA! That's so funny. Wait, that wasn't a joke was it mister? I'm sally. What's your name?" Link thought this child quite strange.
"It's Link." He said slowly. " Can you leave now?
"Oh I'm sorry sir, Oh gosh." Said a teenaged girl rushing in and picking up the ittle girl.
"I'm so sorry, she's my sister, good day sir." The girl rushed away and closed the bathroom door. Link scratched his head a little confused. He sighed and started scrubbing himself with a bar of soap.
After about an hour, Link got out of the tub and put on a robe that was on a near by chair. Link walked into his room, he lay in his bed. Slowly he fell asleep.
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Chapter 3
When Link reached the end of the portal, Epona was shaking, and the poe was laughing and pointing and laughing at Epona. Link dismounted and drew his Biggoron sword.
"Shut up Poe! She's never traveled through a portal before. She has a reason to be scared to death!" Link said patting Epona's snout. Epona stomped her front left hoof in agreement. The poe stopped laughing, and looked behind itself.
"OK sonny, lookie over there. That's the village. Master will be waiting for you in the Office. Hurry, he's been waiting for you for sometime now." The poe said drifting backwards. Then it disappeared. Link took Epona's reins and lead her to the village. When he got there, the village was filled with a dark smog. People were coughing, and some were falling to the ground in pure agony. Link backed away because one person almost fell dead on top of him. Link was sure he was going to throw up. Then finally he reached the Office.
A fat little man was sitting behind a desk. His small feet were up high on the counter top. He was snoring too. Link rapped on the desk top. The man grunted and didn't wake up.
"Sir? Um, sir?" Link asked looking out the window making sure Epona wasn't being eaten or stolen.
"Huh? What? Oh, are you the kid who needs to see Master? OH YEAH! Hold on a second kid." The fat man got up and waddled over to a door on his left. He entered it, and then another man came out. He was tall and slim. His dirty blonde hair was covering his bloodshot eyes.
"Is this that Link boy I called for?" He asked looking over at the little fat man.
"Yesum sir." Said the man.
"So, you're Link. Hero of time eh?" Said the tall man raising an unseen eyebrow.
" Yeah, you called for my help. I'm sorry I couldn't come sooner." Link said apologetically. The little fat man had scuttled back inside of the other room. Link felt weird standing there being watched. The tall man scratched his nose.
"I'm Master Obline, that little guy over there is Addicus Martell. We call him Martie, everyone here call me Master. So, we need to talk some things over." Said Master.
"Yes sir." He said looking back at Epona who was eating some grass.
"You can see how bad this disease is getting. That Horon King. Why does he torment us so? He shouldn't do these kind of things. We never did anything to him. Pure evil I tell ya, pure evil." Master lead Link outside. He pointed at a giant mountain. "He lives up there, he casts evil spells upon us." Link stared up at the top. He could faintly make out a castle. Link was taken aback by the demons that fluttered around the top of the mountain.
"Those things don't do anything to your village?" Link asked pointing at a winged lion who's flesh was dripping in blood, and it's teth glowed of silver. Master looked at him strangely.
"What things? I don't see anything up there except the outline of that castle." Link looked harder at the mountain top. He scratched his eyes to make sure he wasn't hallucinating. Even then, he could still see the demons. He swallowed hard, and turned away. Master lead him to an Inn. He got him a nice little room on the third floor. They also gave Epona her own stable. Link appreciated this very much.
"Link, I believe that you need your rest. You'll be fighting soon. I'm sorry for all these dead people. There's nothin I can do. I tried every protection spell in the book, but Horon's spells are too strong." Master said sadly, and he closed Link's door and went downstairs. As Link took off his tunic and put on a clean white shirt that lay on his bed, and fiery red headed maid came in. She noticed him changing and turned quickly around.
"So sorry sir, didn't know you were changing in here." The maid started to blush a vibrant magenta.
"It's ok, I was just changing a shirt, that's all." The maid smiled a little. She put some white towels on his dresser.
"Oh, here you go sir, a bath is being drawn for you." She smiled and left. Link thought that she was the prettiest lady he's ever met. Her eye's were a deep ocean blue, her voice was like chimes in a light breeze, and her skin was milky white. Link smiled to himself. He went to the bath room, and saw that there was a steaming bath waiting for him. Link took off his clothes quickly and jumped in.
"Ah, this is nice. Very nice." He said sighing. He went under the water and came back up. He was really surprised to see a girl staring him straight in the face.
"Hallo, what's your name?" She asked. She had straight blonde hair, green eyes, and was very small.
"Who are you? Link asked covering his *ahmmm* parts. The little girl giggled frantically.
"AHAHAHA! That's so funny. Wait, that wasn't a joke was it mister? I'm sally. What's your name?" Link thought this child quite strange.
"It's Link." He said slowly. " Can you leave now?
"Oh I'm sorry sir, Oh gosh." Said a teenaged girl rushing in and picking up the ittle girl.
"I'm so sorry, she's my sister, good day sir." The girl rushed away and closed the bathroom door. Link scratched his head a little confused. He sighed and started scrubbing himself with a bar of soap.
After about an hour, Link got out of the tub and put on a robe that was on a near by chair. Link walked into his room, he lay in his bed. Slowly he fell asleep.
Do You like it so far? Hope you do. Please R&R!
