Pokemon fan fic
Backround: this fic is set 10 years after ash ketchums adventure, the story begins in pallet town, please review this after reading it to encourage me to continue the story
[dawn approaches on pallet town]
Zack: [snores]
[alarm clock rings]
Zack: [turns] wha????
Zack: [leaps up in bed] ohhhh [rubs head] [looks at clock] oh man half 6!!! I was supposed to meet the old dude half an hour ago!!
Zack: [quickly puts clothes on and runs out of house]
Zack: [runs towards lab] oh man I've been waiting for this day for years [straightens cap]
[at the lab]
Zack: [straightens jacket] oh well hope the old dude still has some pokemon left [knocks on door]
Man: [opens door] yes can I help you?
Zack: professer oak!!! I came here for my pokemon
Oak: [sighs] I think you better come in!!
[in the pokeball room]
Oak: well there are three pokemon here
Zack: all right [opens 3 pokeballs] hey the're empty!!
Oak: very observent
Zack: [angry] don't get all smartass with me pokemon has been!!
Oak: fine if you don't want a pokemon off me then go off and catch one yourself [waves hand]
Zack: all right sorry sorry, so do you have a pokemon for me?
Oak: erm well yes and no
Zack: huh?
Oak: I have a pokemon but well..
Zack: sweet I'll take it!! [grabs pokeball]
Oak: [this I'll teach him for calling me a has been] all right and heres your pokedex and pokeballs so go on and go to the first gym..
Zack: heh heh [puts pokeballs in pocket] I don't need this pokedex I already know it all about pokemon [throws pokedex to oak]
Oak: oh I think you will need all the help you can get [throws back pokedex] did you check your new pokemon yet?
Zack: uh no [throws pokeball] hey!!! Its empty
Oak: [groans] that would be because it is an empty pokeball, feel the pokeballs and the one which you can feel movement within contains your pokemon
Zack: ahhh yeah I got it [throws pokeball]
[small bird pops out]
Oak: yup theres your brand new pokemon
Zack: it's a pidgey!! [expresses a confused look]
Oak: yes very good that will be your pokemon
Zack: but it's a pidgey.
Oak: yeah, yeah I know now go on [pushes zack out of the door]
Zack: I want a different one!!
Oak: if you had got here earlier then you wouldn't have to get a level 3 pidgey no, go!! [closes door]
[door opens again]
Oak: oh and good luck
Zack: does that old man think hes funny!! I'm gonna wipe that smirk off his face
Voice: Zack your such a dufus!!
Zack: [turns round] oh man brittney [woah shes looking hot today]
Brittney: so your 15 today?
Zack: yup I've come of age.. [oh man why did I say that!!]
Brittney: so I guess your heading off then.
Zack: [scratches head] yeah I guess this will be the last time we see each other for a while [oh man I wish I could take her with me]
Brittney: you know what I'm going to miss ya!!
Zack: you are!! I mean yeah well this is something I gotta do
Brittney: yeah and oh yeah try not to let josh beat you to a pulp k?
Zack: sorry!!
Brittney: yeah didn't you know he became a pokemon trainer today as well and hes gonna compete in the pokemon league as well, tough break huh?
Zack: [damn Josh, her boyfriend, brilliant at everything so perfect. so sickening] don't worry I'll win the pokemon league
Brittney: [chuckles] yeah sure well best of look [waves] see ya
Zack: [shakes head] all right if I beat josh and win the pokemon league shes gonna fall for me!! [throws pokeball]
[pidgey pops out]
Zack:[kneels down] all right pidgey listen up me and you are gonna win the pokemon league ya hear?
Pidgey: [puzzled look]
Zack: sharpen up your moves buddy cos this wont be a pleasure cruise [clenches fist] look out world here I come!!
[door opens]
Oak: listen zack your first goal is in pewter city against the first gym leader brock
Zack: you think I don't know that!! His geodude and onyx wont be a problem
Oak: [scratches head] I don't think he stills has the same pokemon after 10 years!!
Zack: [not listening] don't worry gramps I'm gonna become a pokemon master and win the ultimate prize!!
Oak: no where have I heard that before [shrugs] and I don't even want to know what your ultimate prize is. well anyway you better get going because the other three trainers set off over an hour ago so you [points at zack] have to play catch up, If you want to talk to me again there is a video phone in every poke-centre
Zack: [frowns] I don't need any help
Oak: fine.
Zack: [walks off] now I'm off to pewter city
Pidgey: [flaps wildly]
Oak: [coughs] arent you forgetting someone?
Zack: huh? [looks at pidgey] oh yeah return pidgey [red light beams pidgey into pokeball] now lets go [leaves pallet town]
Backround: this fic is set 10 years after ash ketchums adventure, the story begins in pallet town, please review this after reading it to encourage me to continue the story
[dawn approaches on pallet town]
Zack: [snores]
[alarm clock rings]
Zack: [turns] wha????
Zack: [leaps up in bed] ohhhh [rubs head] [looks at clock] oh man half 6!!! I was supposed to meet the old dude half an hour ago!!
Zack: [quickly puts clothes on and runs out of house]
Zack: [runs towards lab] oh man I've been waiting for this day for years [straightens cap]
[at the lab]
Zack: [straightens jacket] oh well hope the old dude still has some pokemon left [knocks on door]
Man: [opens door] yes can I help you?
Zack: professer oak!!! I came here for my pokemon
Oak: [sighs] I think you better come in!!
[in the pokeball room]
Oak: well there are three pokemon here
Zack: all right [opens 3 pokeballs] hey the're empty!!
Oak: very observent
Zack: [angry] don't get all smartass with me pokemon has been!!
Oak: fine if you don't want a pokemon off me then go off and catch one yourself [waves hand]
Zack: all right sorry sorry, so do you have a pokemon for me?
Oak: erm well yes and no
Zack: huh?
Oak: I have a pokemon but well..
Zack: sweet I'll take it!! [grabs pokeball]
Oak: [this I'll teach him for calling me a has been] all right and heres your pokedex and pokeballs so go on and go to the first gym..
Zack: heh heh [puts pokeballs in pocket] I don't need this pokedex I already know it all about pokemon [throws pokedex to oak]
Oak: oh I think you will need all the help you can get [throws back pokedex] did you check your new pokemon yet?
Zack: uh no [throws pokeball] hey!!! Its empty
Oak: [groans] that would be because it is an empty pokeball, feel the pokeballs and the one which you can feel movement within contains your pokemon
Zack: ahhh yeah I got it [throws pokeball]
[small bird pops out]
Oak: yup theres your brand new pokemon
Zack: it's a pidgey!! [expresses a confused look]
Oak: yes very good that will be your pokemon
Zack: but it's a pidgey.
Oak: yeah, yeah I know now go on [pushes zack out of the door]
Zack: I want a different one!!
Oak: if you had got here earlier then you wouldn't have to get a level 3 pidgey no, go!! [closes door]
[door opens again]
Oak: oh and good luck
Zack: does that old man think hes funny!! I'm gonna wipe that smirk off his face
Voice: Zack your such a dufus!!
Zack: [turns round] oh man brittney [woah shes looking hot today]
Brittney: so your 15 today?
Zack: yup I've come of age.. [oh man why did I say that!!]
Brittney: so I guess your heading off then.
Zack: [scratches head] yeah I guess this will be the last time we see each other for a while [oh man I wish I could take her with me]
Brittney: you know what I'm going to miss ya!!
Zack: you are!! I mean yeah well this is something I gotta do
Brittney: yeah and oh yeah try not to let josh beat you to a pulp k?
Zack: sorry!!
Brittney: yeah didn't you know he became a pokemon trainer today as well and hes gonna compete in the pokemon league as well, tough break huh?
Zack: [damn Josh, her boyfriend, brilliant at everything so perfect. so sickening] don't worry I'll win the pokemon league
Brittney: [chuckles] yeah sure well best of look [waves] see ya
Zack: [shakes head] all right if I beat josh and win the pokemon league shes gonna fall for me!! [throws pokeball]
[pidgey pops out]
Zack:[kneels down] all right pidgey listen up me and you are gonna win the pokemon league ya hear?
Pidgey: [puzzled look]
Zack: sharpen up your moves buddy cos this wont be a pleasure cruise [clenches fist] look out world here I come!!
[door opens]
Oak: listen zack your first goal is in pewter city against the first gym leader brock
Zack: you think I don't know that!! His geodude and onyx wont be a problem
Oak: [scratches head] I don't think he stills has the same pokemon after 10 years!!
Zack: [not listening] don't worry gramps I'm gonna become a pokemon master and win the ultimate prize!!
Oak: no where have I heard that before [shrugs] and I don't even want to know what your ultimate prize is. well anyway you better get going because the other three trainers set off over an hour ago so you [points at zack] have to play catch up, If you want to talk to me again there is a video phone in every poke-centre
Zack: [frowns] I don't need any help
Oak: fine.
Zack: [walks off] now I'm off to pewter city
Pidgey: [flaps wildly]
Oak: [coughs] arent you forgetting someone?
Zack: huh? [looks at pidgey] oh yeah return pidgey [red light beams pidgey into pokeball] now lets go [leaves pallet town]
