Pokemon fan fic

Backround: this fic is set 10 years after ash ketchums adventure, the story begins in pallet town, please review this after reading it to encourage me to continue the story

[dawn approaches on pallet town]

Zack: [snores]

[alarm clock rings]

Zack: [turns] wha????

Zack: [leaps up in bed] ohhhh [rubs head] [looks at clock] oh man half 6!!! I was supposed to meet the old dude half an hour ago!!

Zack: [quickly puts clothes on and runs out of house]

Zack: [runs towards lab] oh man I've been waiting for this day for years [straightens cap]

[at the lab]

Zack: [straightens jacket] oh well hope the old dude still has some pokemon left [knocks on door]

Man: [opens door] yes can I help you?

Zack: professer oak!!! I came here for my pokemon

Oak: [sighs] I think you better come in!!

[in the pokeball room]

Oak: well there are three pokemon here

Zack: all right [opens 3 pokeballs] hey the're empty!!

Oak: very observent

Zack: [angry] don't get all smartass with me pokemon has been!!

Oak: fine if you don't want a pokemon off me then go off and catch one yourself [waves hand]

Zack: all right sorry sorry, so do you have a pokemon for me?

Oak: erm well yes and no

Zack: huh?

Oak: I have a pokemon but well..

Zack: sweet I'll take it!! [grabs pokeball]

Oak: [this I'll teach him for calling me a has been] all right and heres your pokedex and pokeballs so go on and go to the first gym..

Zack: heh heh [puts pokeballs in pocket] I don't need this pokedex I already know it all about pokemon [throws pokedex to oak]

Oak: oh I think you will need all the help you can get [throws back pokedex] did you check your new pokemon yet?

Zack: uh no [throws pokeball] hey!!! Its empty

Oak: [groans] that would be because it is an empty pokeball, feel the pokeballs and the one which you can feel movement within contains your pokemon

Zack: ahhh yeah I got it [throws pokeball]

[small bird pops out]

Oak: yup theres your brand new pokemon

Zack: it's a pidgey!! [expresses a confused look]

Oak: yes very good that will be your pokemon

Zack: but it's a pidgey.

Oak: yeah, yeah I know now go on [pushes zack out of the door]

Zack: I want a different one!!

Oak: if you had got here earlier then you wouldn't have to get a level 3 pidgey no, go!! [closes door]

[door opens again]

Oak: oh and good luck

Zack: does that old man think hes funny!! I'm gonna wipe that smirk off his face

Voice: Zack your such a dufus!!

Zack: [turns round] oh man brittney [woah shes looking hot today]

Brittney: so your 15 today?

Zack: yup I've come of age.. [oh man why did I say that!!]

Brittney: so I guess your heading off then.

Zack: [scratches head] yeah I guess this will be the last time we see each other for a while [oh man I wish I could take her with me]

Brittney: you know what I'm going to miss ya!!

Zack: you are!! I mean yeah well this is something I gotta do

Brittney: yeah and oh yeah try not to let josh beat you to a pulp k?

Zack: sorry!!

Brittney: yeah didn't you know he became a pokemon trainer today as well and hes gonna compete in the pokemon league as well, tough break huh?

Zack: [damn Josh, her boyfriend, brilliant at everything so perfect. so sickening] don't worry I'll win the pokemon league

Brittney: [chuckles] yeah sure well best of look [waves] see ya

Zack: [shakes head] all right if I beat josh and win the pokemon league shes gonna fall for me!! [throws pokeball]

[pidgey pops out]

Zack:[kneels down] all right pidgey listen up me and you are gonna win the pokemon league ya hear?

Pidgey: [puzzled look]

Zack: sharpen up your moves buddy cos this wont be a pleasure cruise [clenches fist] look out world here I come!!

[door opens]

Oak: listen zack your first goal is in pewter city against the first gym leader brock

Zack: you think I don't know that!! His geodude and onyx wont be a problem

Oak: [scratches head] I don't think he stills has the same pokemon after 10 years!!

Zack: [not listening] don't worry gramps I'm gonna become a pokemon master and win the ultimate prize!!

Oak: no where have I heard that before [shrugs] and I don't even want to know what your ultimate prize is. well anyway you better get going because the other three trainers set off over an hour ago so you [points at zack] have to play catch up, If you want to talk to me again there is a video phone in every poke-centre

Zack: [frowns] I don't need any help

Oak: fine.

Zack: [walks off] now I'm off to pewter city

Pidgey: [flaps wildly]

Oak: [coughs] arent you forgetting someone?

Zack: huh? [looks at pidgey] oh yeah return pidgey [red light beams pidgey into pokeball] now lets go [leaves pallet town]