Golden Sun - Love Line
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Chapter 9 - Garet Grows Guilt
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[Hiding under table]
After throwing in a joke about the LA summons, I have been forced to hide under my dining room table lest Dragonmaster find me. I was only joking!!
And now to my reviewers:
ge - Ignoring what Dragona told me of this, this actually sounds like a good plan, but will have to wait until LL is finished...
BrightBlueInk - Thanks for reminding me of that quote. When I finally get to updating my bios page, I/J will go up in percentage!! And if you play the Jupiter Lighthouse (or anyother place where you can read Alex's mind), you'll see that he cares for her (but Mia, on the other hand...) And what is your reason for disliking Ivan/Sheba? It's never been one of my top faves, but the main reason I didn't care for it was I originally predicted that Ivan and Sheba were siblings and that Master Hama was their mother. How wrong I was...
Dragonmaster - PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!! If you want something else to harp on, read Dragona's bio. That aside, My top three new summons are actually Catastrophe, Daedalus, and Eclipse (who doesn't like the Judgment-like summon?) Seriously! And despite how powerful Eclipse is, the rest of the Jupiter/Mercury summons seem to be weak... Good point on the analysis of the Camelots work on the pairings (or lack thereof).
PhishyKiss - Thanks!
0==|=R=a=g=n=a=r=o=k= - Thanks for the tip, and I like the name :-)
Rain Child - Thanks for the input on the bio page, and you needn't prove that you're the queen of angst - you are easily one of the top four angst authors that I know (Rain Child, Tiger Dauthi, Incrediblecuznz, and Dragon Empress). I'm currently collecting summons and dijiin in my new file, and I'm about to go to Piers's (sheez I /hate/ that name...) boat. Wait 'till you see Lemuria (or better yet, Jupiter Lighthouse...)
Dragona - Thanks... But expect more Issac/Jenna...
And now... I WILL OWN GOLDEN SUN AS SOON AS I OWN THE MOON, UNIVERSE, AND THE WORLD'S SMALLEST GAME BOY. 'Nuff said.
NOTE - THIS CHAPTER MAY CONTAIN LOST AGE SPOILERS!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!
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Resting in the VIP suite at the Xian inn, Master Hama pondered the events that conspired against the world. Ever since she encountered her brother, she had been engaged in a weak telepathic bond, silently reading his mind. She learned of the troubles of his friends, of their quest. She dearly wanted to help them, help her brothers leader, who was on the verge of insanity.
But, she couldn't.
Every night, it ached her to hear the thoughts from her sibling, stinging like a thousand needles enriched with the powers of Mars. She wished to aid them, but to do so would go against what she was supposed to do. Her sworn duty was to to not interfear with their fate.
But she couldn't help it.
Every night it was the same - the tossing, the turning, the sweat, the pain, the tight chest... It seemed that she was not only connected to her brother, but his friend. Her normally smooth lavender hair had become course over the last week, without the chance to shower on account that she hadn't the time to get to the river to bath. She actually missed her temples private baths...
She screamed as pain flowed through her, nails gripping the sheets. Her entire left side suddenly went numb, and then her right side followed suit. She soon found herself paralyzed on the bed, with only her mental abilites to aid her...
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"Damn. Damn it to hell."
For the hundreth time that day, Garet cursed himself outloud. Without knowing the origins of Isaac's mysterious collapse, they had taken him to Vale, in hopes that seeing his mother might brighten his spirits. But once there, they saw how weak and ill she was. Only the need to find Jenna and his mothers insistance had him on his way again, but only even more depressed.
"Ivan, throw me some more herbs!"
Garet stared at his love, whose beautiful face shared his dread as she tried to heal Isaac's latest wound. Having snuck into Lunpa, they had already beaten countless thugs, but the last one had caught Isaac in the back, cutting too close to his spine. And even Mia, whose powers could turn a shrivled arm healthy, couldn't repair something as complex as the spine.
"Ivan!! Garet, get them!"
Startled that Ivan hadn't gotten the herbs, he looked at the smaller mage, only to see him writhing on the ground, herbs in hand. The blond mage twiched and turned, shaking as he drooled on his blank face.
"Oh, crap."
Garet recalled seeing one stranger to Vale, who had arrived with severe injuries. His partner, who was determined to be of Jupiter alignment, shared her love's pain, until death claimed them. And seeing Ivan twich like this...
Garet rushed to Ivan, grabbing the herbs and running to his love's aid. She threw countless psynergetic spells into the wound, but for naught.
Isaac was dead. There was nothing they could do.
Garet heard a gasp from Mia, and seeing her paler than usual face caused him to look behind himself, only to suddenly have pain ensnare him, causing darkness to encircle him...
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Mia grabbed Garet as he fell back, and suddenly a sharp pain formed in her head, throbbing at intense intervals. But she knew that she still needed to heal Isaac, even if he was doomed to die, for if he didn't recover, they'd all be dead.
Grabbing the Hermes's Water, she sloshed it onto the open wound, just as the pain intensified. Screams rebounded through the room as darkness claimed another victim...
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Jenna...
The thought of her near him was enough to wake him from his slumber, and he looked around. Bodies laid nearby, and his first thought was that they were all dead. He ran to the closest body, and had to wipe her angellic aqua hair out of her face, only to see a lifeless stare, one that seemed... No, it couldn't be...
He checked the rest of the bodies, only to recieve the stares of death. How did it happen? How... Could he have saved them?
A moan from behind him showed that his younger blond friend had come around, and he rushed to aid him.
And the younger mage stared at him before telling of the images that he saw... of the sufferings of not one, but six people...
And then the mage sighed, lightly chuckling...
"It's funny. Your line of love with Jenna saved us..."
Unsure as to what that meant, Isaac checked on the other two moaning casualties.
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What do ya'll think of Hama's involvement? Hee hee...
I found out some rather funny information in GS2 - when you get all 8 allies, go to the Battle Arena, and mix up the characters in your party: here are some of the reactions I got (NOTE - these are determined by whose the leader (Felix, Isaac, or Isaac & Felix), whose in the party, and whose not -
Sheba - "Don't you want me with you anymore, Felix?"
- "Good luck, Felix. If you want me, you know where to find me."
Ivan - "There's something really sad about being told to stay behind."
- "Huh? No way! Please fill in for me!"
- "If you want me to fight, I'll do it, but don't expect anything amazing from me."
Garet - "Hey, Felix, I'm all set to show you what I've got."
- "What? I have to take a break? Why do I have to do that?"
- "If you don't want to fight, that's fine. We'll do better without you, no problem."
Isaac - "Ok, We're set, Felix. But remember that you're calling the shots, all right?"
- "It's our turn. Let's go, Felix."
- "I'll fight enough for both of us..."
Jenna - "Hey, I'll do my best if you do yours!"
- "Wait, I say I'll fight, and then you back out of it? What's that all about?" [Angry face]
Mia - "That's fine, I could use some rest anyway."
Piers - "Are you trying to tell me something, Felix?"
I made the list longer than I originally meant to, but it's still missing many quotes...
I'll update when I can, but please check my GS3 outline that I created while waiting for GS2 late last fall. Go to my bios and look under "Rise of Darkness." It actually had some good ideas, since I lacked the knowledge of GS2...
REVIEW!!
And note to I/J fans - I will get back to them, but right now, I have to wait 'till I get to the Venus Lighthouse (I have my reasons...)
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Chapter 9 - Garet Grows Guilt
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[Hiding under table]
After throwing in a joke about the LA summons, I have been forced to hide under my dining room table lest Dragonmaster find me. I was only joking!!
And now to my reviewers:
ge - Ignoring what Dragona told me of this, this actually sounds like a good plan, but will have to wait until LL is finished...
BrightBlueInk - Thanks for reminding me of that quote. When I finally get to updating my bios page, I/J will go up in percentage!! And if you play the Jupiter Lighthouse (or anyother place where you can read Alex's mind), you'll see that he cares for her (but Mia, on the other hand...) And what is your reason for disliking Ivan/Sheba? It's never been one of my top faves, but the main reason I didn't care for it was I originally predicted that Ivan and Sheba were siblings and that Master Hama was their mother. How wrong I was...
Dragonmaster - PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!! If you want something else to harp on, read Dragona's bio. That aside, My top three new summons are actually Catastrophe, Daedalus, and Eclipse (who doesn't like the Judgment-like summon?) Seriously! And despite how powerful Eclipse is, the rest of the Jupiter/Mercury summons seem to be weak... Good point on the analysis of the Camelots work on the pairings (or lack thereof).
PhishyKiss - Thanks!
0==|=R=a=g=n=a=r=o=k= - Thanks for the tip, and I like the name :-)
Rain Child - Thanks for the input on the bio page, and you needn't prove that you're the queen of angst - you are easily one of the top four angst authors that I know (Rain Child, Tiger Dauthi, Incrediblecuznz, and Dragon Empress). I'm currently collecting summons and dijiin in my new file, and I'm about to go to Piers's (sheez I /hate/ that name...) boat. Wait 'till you see Lemuria (or better yet, Jupiter Lighthouse...)
Dragona - Thanks... But expect more Issac/Jenna...
And now... I WILL OWN GOLDEN SUN AS SOON AS I OWN THE MOON, UNIVERSE, AND THE WORLD'S SMALLEST GAME BOY. 'Nuff said.
NOTE - THIS CHAPTER MAY CONTAIN LOST AGE SPOILERS!! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!
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Resting in the VIP suite at the Xian inn, Master Hama pondered the events that conspired against the world. Ever since she encountered her brother, she had been engaged in a weak telepathic bond, silently reading his mind. She learned of the troubles of his friends, of their quest. She dearly wanted to help them, help her brothers leader, who was on the verge of insanity.
But, she couldn't.
Every night, it ached her to hear the thoughts from her sibling, stinging like a thousand needles enriched with the powers of Mars. She wished to aid them, but to do so would go against what she was supposed to do. Her sworn duty was to to not interfear with their fate.
But she couldn't help it.
Every night it was the same - the tossing, the turning, the sweat, the pain, the tight chest... It seemed that she was not only connected to her brother, but his friend. Her normally smooth lavender hair had become course over the last week, without the chance to shower on account that she hadn't the time to get to the river to bath. She actually missed her temples private baths...
She screamed as pain flowed through her, nails gripping the sheets. Her entire left side suddenly went numb, and then her right side followed suit. She soon found herself paralyzed on the bed, with only her mental abilites to aid her...
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"Damn. Damn it to hell."
For the hundreth time that day, Garet cursed himself outloud. Without knowing the origins of Isaac's mysterious collapse, they had taken him to Vale, in hopes that seeing his mother might brighten his spirits. But once there, they saw how weak and ill she was. Only the need to find Jenna and his mothers insistance had him on his way again, but only even more depressed.
"Ivan, throw me some more herbs!"
Garet stared at his love, whose beautiful face shared his dread as she tried to heal Isaac's latest wound. Having snuck into Lunpa, they had already beaten countless thugs, but the last one had caught Isaac in the back, cutting too close to his spine. And even Mia, whose powers could turn a shrivled arm healthy, couldn't repair something as complex as the spine.
"Ivan!! Garet, get them!"
Startled that Ivan hadn't gotten the herbs, he looked at the smaller mage, only to see him writhing on the ground, herbs in hand. The blond mage twiched and turned, shaking as he drooled on his blank face.
"Oh, crap."
Garet recalled seeing one stranger to Vale, who had arrived with severe injuries. His partner, who was determined to be of Jupiter alignment, shared her love's pain, until death claimed them. And seeing Ivan twich like this...
Garet rushed to Ivan, grabbing the herbs and running to his love's aid. She threw countless psynergetic spells into the wound, but for naught.
Isaac was dead. There was nothing they could do.
Garet heard a gasp from Mia, and seeing her paler than usual face caused him to look behind himself, only to suddenly have pain ensnare him, causing darkness to encircle him...
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Mia grabbed Garet as he fell back, and suddenly a sharp pain formed in her head, throbbing at intense intervals. But she knew that she still needed to heal Isaac, even if he was doomed to die, for if he didn't recover, they'd all be dead.
Grabbing the Hermes's Water, she sloshed it onto the open wound, just as the pain intensified. Screams rebounded through the room as darkness claimed another victim...
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Jenna...
The thought of her near him was enough to wake him from his slumber, and he looked around. Bodies laid nearby, and his first thought was that they were all dead. He ran to the closest body, and had to wipe her angellic aqua hair out of her face, only to see a lifeless stare, one that seemed... No, it couldn't be...
He checked the rest of the bodies, only to recieve the stares of death. How did it happen? How... Could he have saved them?
A moan from behind him showed that his younger blond friend had come around, and he rushed to aid him.
And the younger mage stared at him before telling of the images that he saw... of the sufferings of not one, but six people...
And then the mage sighed, lightly chuckling...
"It's funny. Your line of love with Jenna saved us..."
Unsure as to what that meant, Isaac checked on the other two moaning casualties.
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What do ya'll think of Hama's involvement? Hee hee...
I found out some rather funny information in GS2 - when you get all 8 allies, go to the Battle Arena, and mix up the characters in your party: here are some of the reactions I got (NOTE - these are determined by whose the leader (Felix, Isaac, or Isaac & Felix), whose in the party, and whose not -
Sheba - "Don't you want me with you anymore, Felix?"
- "Good luck, Felix. If you want me, you know where to find me."
Ivan - "There's something really sad about being told to stay behind."
- "Huh? No way! Please fill in for me!"
- "If you want me to fight, I'll do it, but don't expect anything amazing from me."
Garet - "Hey, Felix, I'm all set to show you what I've got."
- "What? I have to take a break? Why do I have to do that?"
- "If you don't want to fight, that's fine. We'll do better without you, no problem."
Isaac - "Ok, We're set, Felix. But remember that you're calling the shots, all right?"
- "It's our turn. Let's go, Felix."
- "I'll fight enough for both of us..."
Jenna - "Hey, I'll do my best if you do yours!"
- "Wait, I say I'll fight, and then you back out of it? What's that all about?" [Angry face]
Mia - "That's fine, I could use some rest anyway."
Piers - "Are you trying to tell me something, Felix?"
I made the list longer than I originally meant to, but it's still missing many quotes...
I'll update when I can, but please check my GS3 outline that I created while waiting for GS2 late last fall. Go to my bios and look under "Rise of Darkness." It actually had some good ideas, since I lacked the knowledge of GS2...
REVIEW!!
And note to I/J fans - I will get back to them, but right now, I have to wait 'till I get to the Venus Lighthouse (I have my reasons...)
