Chp.Four

Wilin

Their, standing tall and proud, was Dillandou. She felt a tremor of fear run down her spine before she swallowed and said in a would be strong voice,"D. .Dillandou,"She felt sick on how she spoke so fearfully,"How - whare am I. Why am I here! Why are yo-"

She was suddenly posed by two long fingers, the ends slightly calloused, landing on her feathery pink lips. A blushed crossed her face for reason's beyond her. "Just angry,"a little voice inside her said,"I'm just angry."But a other voice said,"Aaa yes. But it isn't every day a cute guy come's up to you and puts his fingers on you're lips.."

"CUTE GUY!?"she almost sputtered aloud as she gave a blink a look of wonder entering her now serene grass green eyes,"when have I found Dillandou cute?"

"Ever since you first saw him,"teased the voice.

She would of argued back, but Dillandou's thumb had started to do circles on her cheek.

"Aaa yes,"he said. His voice, silk and yet rich at the same time, just like she remembered it, had snapped her out of her stupor,"The pretty little personnel hoe of Van's."

She blushed. No hoer was she! She growled slightly and suddenly sat up, her face inches from his so their breaths were mixing,"What do you want DIllandou!"he had already angered her enough. He had token her to some weird place, locked her in a room, and now he had called her Van's hoe! She was not to put up with this! Not one second.

He smirked,"That is me to know my pretty and,"he got so close now his lips brushed up agonized her own while he spoke,"You to fined out."

And, taking advantage of the closeness, he pressed his lips harshly against hers. She suddenly struggled, yet he grabbed her chin in her's, so she became limp. His kiss lightened and became, was was odd enough for her, sweet and loving. Suddenly it was all over, leaving her flushed and dazed.

"You are sweet. Well my sweet, I do hope we can have a other delightful chat as this but sadly,"he stood,"I will be leaving. Oh and pleas, don't try to leave. Their is no way."

And he left. She wanted to yell out to him. To make him turn around and stop, answer her question of why had he had kissed her at least, but she couldn't. She was too coght up in thinking on how soft and addictive those full rose lips were. And, she felt a sudden pang of fear, guilt, and confusion at this thought.

She wanted more.

Lin3:Well how did you like? Bad, yes I know, but I've been very buissy. But I'm trying to up date all my stories, so I dicide to up date this one next. SORRY IT IS SO SHORT! Well R+R pleas.

Anonymous letta me guss it's gonna be some one like Dillandou or whatever that blondies name is. And hitome is a draconinone, has all of this power, and is gonna save the hole fo gia while falling for the handsome Van. Puhleas.

Lin3:*Cross's arms and smerks*I guss you think you have me all figured out here, now don't yah? Yes it is Dillandou, this will be a romance between them after all-but when did I hint or even say that Hitmoe was a Draconinone, has any power at all, and much less will save the hole of Gia? And obvously she isn't gonna fall for Van as she is with Dillandou. Puhleas, you should read this more before you juge it so. I'm not some simple minded writer like that thank you(not insolting anyone who uses that plot). Pleas get you're priority's strate and do not juge. Thank you very much for giving me such a informing review. I hope this turns the table's and this chapter sway's you from thinking of such things. Smellz yah later.

DragonSight Anonymous YOU ARE EVIL! E.V.I.L THAT SPELLS EVIL! TO LEAVE ME LIKE THAT! NO MORE CLIFFYS! PLEASE!

Sorry!!! I Don't 'mean' to leave Cliffy's it's just-well it's just when I'm writing their's just a spot whare it seems like I should end. Maybe I should try up dating more if you feel so harshly twords cliffhangers. I'm very sorry, yet again, as for I was stumped after ending whare I did. Pleas try to forgive me and I will promis to try as hard as possible not to make a cliffy and to try and make the next chapter nice and long. Thank you for reviewing. Seeya!

Sarina Fannel Signed Loved it!^_^Awesome chappie!:)

Well If you loved that chapter, you're going to adore this one. I belive, correct me if I'm wrong, that you like Dillandou and Hitome paring?I hope*smirk*that you just haven't died half way threw the romance parts yet. Pleas continue reading, and I will continue writing! Thanx for R+Ring!Seezyaz~

AkaneKitten Signed yay! YOU CONTINUED!^^ now continue more!^w^

~AkaneKitty

YA, I continued! Again! Now all you need to do is review more~.~I looove reviews. Ok ennof about reviews. How did u like the chapter. To short I guess you would say. I'll be sure to make the next one around 2,0o0 words hows THAT sound? Well thanx for Reviewing! c-u-later

Mevneriel 2003-04-09 3 Anonymous Neat chapter. Keep up the great work.

Thank you very much for that complement. I'll be sure to keep up the work! After all, if I don't who will write the story???? Well thank you for reviewing! Seez yaz

Feye Morgan 2003-04-09 3 Signed *bows to the omnipotent writer* Wow! This is awesome!! Yep. This is DEFINITELY different from any story I've read. That is a very good thing. Oh so many mysteries! I can't wait for you to write more! Hm...methinks the person is not Van. Could it be the worlds most beloved pyro with cute hair? I hope it is. I'me very glad that you're probably going to make this a D/H fic. I love that pairing ^_^ But if it isn't, I'll still read, of course. This is just too good!

Inportent Am I?*Blush's* well I never thought some one would consider me importent ennof to bow to! I'm flattered. Thank you for all the complements, and I'm glade that this is diffrent from former stories you have recently read. I had a reviewer who thought she could prodic everything that was gonna happen. At least not everyone thinks mine sound's the same as everyone elses. Nope. The person was not Van, but you guessed correctly for who it was , though. A cookie for you! Yes I have dicided this is most deffently gonna be D/H. I kinda like that coupple. Oh my, you really like it that much that you would read it even if the coupple was diffrent. Oh my my my my my. I deffently would not like to be in you're position*Cackles evily*I got you rapped around my little pinky.*Clears throught*well. . .yes. Hehehe just kidding their. Well thank you for R+ring. C you later~

NachtMusik 2003-04-09 3 Signed You've got a good theme running. It's pretty interesting, and seems like with all the stories basically focusing on Dilandau that these are starting to become a rarity. I've also noticed some errors you will want to correct.

First off, you must spell the names of the main characters correctly! Hitomi is spelled with an I on the end not an E. Van, well, Van's correct so I'll leave that at that.

Herd should be heard. Hay should be hey, unless you mean she was shocked at all the bundled straw laying around. You should capitalize the title of your fic. It should look like this: "Winged Demons and Pretty Girls." After all, it is a proper noun! It deserves respect! And it's not just to the fic but to the readers as well.

Keep up the good work!

Woh! Lot's ta write, eh? Well thank you, I'm trying to make my theme diffrent and uneic compaired to everybody elses work, and I'm trying too.Rarity? Oh my I'll just have to write more stories like this if their rare. I don't like things ppl like being rare.

Yah, I know. I think I changed that once reading you're review. Thank's, I'm stupid.*Thonk's herself on head*not much of a speller, even for the obvois. I can just amagin how much. . .fun you're having reading this very ansewer.

And thank you for the spelling help. I think I did replace that chapter with the correct spelling*beams at you*thanks to you. And, if I already havent, I'm gonna changed the title to being like you said it should. Geez If you were a close frind I would joke about how brainy you sound, like Hermoine. Anywayz off subject their.

Well I'll be sure to keep up the work or else u will have no fic. And thank you for reviewing. And Reviewing again if you did. Pleas do R+R though. Thank's. Seeeeeyaaaa!

Honeypot (honeypot_hay88@hotmail.com) Anonymous Hey... WOW! terrific story... I love it right away... You know it is really suspenseful... Please update soon and tell me when if u can!?!?! Neways, great story... C u later... Honeypot =P

Lo! Terrific eh? I like that complement. Really, right away? Well I'm honered. Suspenseful, thanks I here that is what make's a good writer, and I'm trying to get in that direction. Up dateing I am, and telling you I will. Alway's will if the person has given me the E-mail. Yep. Smellz youz later!!!!

Lin3:Honeypot had reminded me. PLEAS ONCE REVIEWING LEAVE U R EMAIL IF U WHANT ME TO INFORM YOU OF FURTHER UP DATES! Thank'z.