A/N- You know going back and reading over all of this I found out that I
really am not any good at writing. Why didn't anybody tell me? How can I
get better? Help!
Selina: Please tell me that you are not serious.
Serafina: Well, I don't like this story that much because it moves too fast, just like AmunRa said. The plot is sloppy (although I didn't think that before) and um. . .there's just something missing.
Selina: Like what?
Serafina: I have no idea. I just can't figure it out. Maybe that's why not many people like my story.
Selina: Are you sure that people just don't see it and don't read it, or maybe something like that?
Serafina: Hm. I don't have a clue. Speaking of clue, my mystery has another chapter for those of you that read it.
Selina: When are you going to put up your other fic., Black Crystal Sacrifice?
Serafina: I told you already. As soon as I finish this one, but I might could be persuaded to post it sooner if you wanted. ^_^ Although I am stuck on it at the moment. I don't know if I should send just Yugi to another realm, or maybe Yugi and Bakura, or even Yugi, Bakura, Ryou, Yami, Joey, Tristan, and Tea. What should I do? What should I do?! WHAT SHOULD I DO?! . . .
Selina: It seems she's forgotten we're here. Serafina. . .Serafina. . .Hello? Oh, never mind. I'll just finish with the announcements. Serafina was going to tell you sorry for the long delay, but we do have an excuse (before the people that actually read our stuff start throwing things at us). We had a storm at the house and a tree fell over on the cables that bring the electricity to our house. It knocked them over and. . .
Serafina: WHAT SHOULD I DO?!
Selina: . . .they broke so we haven't had any electricity at our house for DAYS. No lights, no fans, nothing. Just candles and flashlights. We couldn't even go into our front yard because of the live wire that was there. We had to use an extention cord. . .
Serafina: WHAT SHOULD I DO?!
Selina: . . .connected to our neighbors house (we were the only house on our street without power for more than five minutes) to keep the refrigerator running. (We still haven't caught it yet, before anybody asks) It was very annoying.
Serafina: Oh, I'm sorry. I got lost in my thoughts again.
Selina: No, really?
Serafina: Ok, I've got another story I want to start to work on. At first I had ideas for 2 stories, but then I combined them so it's cool. I hope people will like my other stories better. Thank you to everybody that reviewed for me this chapter. You made me soooo happy! -^_^-
Midnight Star- Yay! I got a new reviewer, please stay with us!
Hazel- Glad you could review. Please update on Light vs. Dark as soon as you figure out what's wrong with your computer.
digigirl-izumi- I FINALLY got those emails you sent me and I got a few from Allison too. Did you send her that Dinner Math thing too? Cause she sent me one along with a poem. I got your survey and will tell you my answers as soon as I get ahold of you by phone. (My email still ain't working)
Thanks everybody! It meant a lot! Now I guess you want the story after that long A/N. Sorry. Well here it is.
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Chapter 7- Bad Surveillance
"I don't know what it is, Yami. Something just doesn't feel right. I think that they are trying to lure us into false pretences so we will let our guard down. We'll just say they were giving us a break yesterday," Yugi said to Yami, who was sitting (in transparent form) on Yugi's bed, while he got ready for school.
"I'm agreeing with you, Yugi, but look at it this way." (A/N- Apparently they were arguing about something) Grandpa interrupted Yami.
"Yugi your friends are here!"
"Coming Grandpa!" Yugi called back, then thought to Yami as his dark went into the Millennium Puzzle /We'll worry about it when it comes up. What we are doing right now is pointless bickering./
//You're right, Yugi. This is not helping anything. Have a great day at school, hikari.//
/Well, you too, since you're coming and I'll keep the link open. Just don't start telling me how history really was. My teacher wants me to learn what he's teaching, not what you're teaching./
Yami chuckled and replied, //Alright, aibou.//
Yugi grabbed his backpack and met his friends. After telling his grandfather good-bye, Yugi left for school with his friends.
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"Alright Ralph," Nixie commented to his partner, "when do they get out again?"
They were in a parked car outside of the school around the back. They were "hidden" by other cars parked there for the teachers.
"They'll be here in just a few minutes, now shut up!"
Sure enough the foursome came out of the back door and started for home. Nixie lined up his sights on Yugi's head and pulled the trigger of the gun he was holding.
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Yugi walked out of the school with his friends and headed home. They were crossing the parking lot when Yami shouted in Yugi's head, //DUCK!//
Yugi didn't hesitate. He was in front of all his friends so he jumped on top of them, making them all fall to the ground just as they heard *BANG*. Someone was shooting at them! Yugi's friends were amazed, thinking Yugi maybe had good reflexes.
"Take cover," Yami yelled as Yugi forfeited the body to him. "Stay low," he cried as they ran for cover behind a tree.
"What are we gonna do, bud?" Joey asked Yami, who seemed to be in control of the situation.
"We need to make it back into the school. We aren't that far from the school. You guys make a rum for it and try to make it back in."
"We'll be shot!"
"I don't think so, Tea. They're after me, not you. I think you'll make it."
They came out from behind the tree slowly, but trusting Yami to his word. They ran for the school hunched over just to make sure they wouldn't get hit. The bullets stopped coming and they ran flat out to the school. Once they were inside the door, Joey saw that they had stopped shooting because they were out of bullets.
"Yugi! Come on man! Hurry!" Joey yelled and motioned frantically for his friend to join them before the gun was reloaded.
Yami came out of his hiding spot and headed for the door when Nixie and Ralph started the car. They had decided to try and run him over, if they could. Yami looked over his shoulder and saw them right behind him; he jusped and rolled out of the way, then picked himself up, and kept running. He was almost safe when the car was back after him. It zoomed in front of him cutting off his progress to the school.
"YUGI!" his friends called.
One of the men inside got out. He had a black ski mask on and the, now reloaded, gun was in his hands. The man fired and Yami fell back to lie still on the pavement. The man started to take the shattered Millennium Puzzle from him and collect the pieces, but Joey and Tristan got there first. They took the gun away from him, making an effective use of jumping him from behind, and punched him so that he fell to the ground. His partner dragged him into the car and they drove off. Tea came over and picked up Yugi's head so it rested in her lap when he opened his eyes and smiled at them all.
"YUGI!" They chorused.
Tea looked bewildered which made Yugi's smile broaden. "What? How? You?" Tea "asked."
"His bullet hit the puzzle, which shattered it and made Yami disappear, but protected me. We had to make them think they had killed me so we fell."
"Oh Yugi," was all Tea could manage.
"Come on guys, we need to go inside the school and call the police," Tristan told them all.
Joey helped Yugi up and Tea collected the pieces of the Millennium Puzzle and handed them to Yugi. Then they all walked inside to the office and called the police and Yugi's Grandpa. The police toke them to stay there and they would pick the kids up and start an investigation. While they waited Yugi put the pieces of the puzzle together. Yugi just finished the last piece when officers arrived. They took Yugi and all his friends home and then waited to see what the investigation turned up. Once they were back at the Game Shop, Grandpa decided to change Yugi's bandages. He took off the old wraps and applied medication. Then the fun began when he took out the new bandages and tried to wrap Yugi with them. Yugi was wrapped; his friends laughed so hard they fell out of their seats because Gramps had turned Yugi into a mummy. In the end once Tea could breathe again, she redid his bandages and did it the right way, so they decided Tea should be the official "Yugi Wrapper". (A/N- Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! Oh! Oh! Whoooo! Yeah! That was good! Sorry. -^_^-) Yugi finally got a call telling them the car had been found abandoned and was apparently stolen property. They hadn't found anybody, but not to worry. Yugi looked out the window and couldn't see the cop cars.
'They must be on patrol,' Yugi thought them turned away. The bell to the shop rang as someone opened the door. "I'll get it!" Yugi shouted as he went to the game shop part of the house, being the closest one to it.
He walked in, but didn't see anybody. He looked out the window/door, but couldn't see anybody. The lights went out and Yugi yelled, when a hand went over his mouth and another went over his chest holding him still. The strong arms lifted up the struggling (and failing) form of Yugi and carried him out into the night.
A/N- *gasp* what's gonna happen to poor sweet Yugi? Find out next chappie! Don't forget- if you want me to post TBCS then ya gotta let me know! Leave a lovely review if you read! Love ya- tnt- ttfn.
(tnt- till next time) (ttfn- ta ta for now)
Selina: Please tell me that you are not serious.
Serafina: Well, I don't like this story that much because it moves too fast, just like AmunRa said. The plot is sloppy (although I didn't think that before) and um. . .there's just something missing.
Selina: Like what?
Serafina: I have no idea. I just can't figure it out. Maybe that's why not many people like my story.
Selina: Are you sure that people just don't see it and don't read it, or maybe something like that?
Serafina: Hm. I don't have a clue. Speaking of clue, my mystery has another chapter for those of you that read it.
Selina: When are you going to put up your other fic., Black Crystal Sacrifice?
Serafina: I told you already. As soon as I finish this one, but I might could be persuaded to post it sooner if you wanted. ^_^ Although I am stuck on it at the moment. I don't know if I should send just Yugi to another realm, or maybe Yugi and Bakura, or even Yugi, Bakura, Ryou, Yami, Joey, Tristan, and Tea. What should I do? What should I do?! WHAT SHOULD I DO?! . . .
Selina: It seems she's forgotten we're here. Serafina. . .Serafina. . .Hello? Oh, never mind. I'll just finish with the announcements. Serafina was going to tell you sorry for the long delay, but we do have an excuse (before the people that actually read our stuff start throwing things at us). We had a storm at the house and a tree fell over on the cables that bring the electricity to our house. It knocked them over and. . .
Serafina: WHAT SHOULD I DO?!
Selina: . . .they broke so we haven't had any electricity at our house for DAYS. No lights, no fans, nothing. Just candles and flashlights. We couldn't even go into our front yard because of the live wire that was there. We had to use an extention cord. . .
Serafina: WHAT SHOULD I DO?!
Selina: . . .connected to our neighbors house (we were the only house on our street without power for more than five minutes) to keep the refrigerator running. (We still haven't caught it yet, before anybody asks) It was very annoying.
Serafina: Oh, I'm sorry. I got lost in my thoughts again.
Selina: No, really?
Serafina: Ok, I've got another story I want to start to work on. At first I had ideas for 2 stories, but then I combined them so it's cool. I hope people will like my other stories better. Thank you to everybody that reviewed for me this chapter. You made me soooo happy! -^_^-
Midnight Star- Yay! I got a new reviewer, please stay with us!
Hazel- Glad you could review. Please update on Light vs. Dark as soon as you figure out what's wrong with your computer.
digigirl-izumi- I FINALLY got those emails you sent me and I got a few from Allison too. Did you send her that Dinner Math thing too? Cause she sent me one along with a poem. I got your survey and will tell you my answers as soon as I get ahold of you by phone. (My email still ain't working)
Thanks everybody! It meant a lot! Now I guess you want the story after that long A/N. Sorry. Well here it is.
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Chapter 7- Bad Surveillance
"I don't know what it is, Yami. Something just doesn't feel right. I think that they are trying to lure us into false pretences so we will let our guard down. We'll just say they were giving us a break yesterday," Yugi said to Yami, who was sitting (in transparent form) on Yugi's bed, while he got ready for school.
"I'm agreeing with you, Yugi, but look at it this way." (A/N- Apparently they were arguing about something) Grandpa interrupted Yami.
"Yugi your friends are here!"
"Coming Grandpa!" Yugi called back, then thought to Yami as his dark went into the Millennium Puzzle /We'll worry about it when it comes up. What we are doing right now is pointless bickering./
//You're right, Yugi. This is not helping anything. Have a great day at school, hikari.//
/Well, you too, since you're coming and I'll keep the link open. Just don't start telling me how history really was. My teacher wants me to learn what he's teaching, not what you're teaching./
Yami chuckled and replied, //Alright, aibou.//
Yugi grabbed his backpack and met his friends. After telling his grandfather good-bye, Yugi left for school with his friends.
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"Alright Ralph," Nixie commented to his partner, "when do they get out again?"
They were in a parked car outside of the school around the back. They were "hidden" by other cars parked there for the teachers.
"They'll be here in just a few minutes, now shut up!"
Sure enough the foursome came out of the back door and started for home. Nixie lined up his sights on Yugi's head and pulled the trigger of the gun he was holding.
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Yugi walked out of the school with his friends and headed home. They were crossing the parking lot when Yami shouted in Yugi's head, //DUCK!//
Yugi didn't hesitate. He was in front of all his friends so he jumped on top of them, making them all fall to the ground just as they heard *BANG*. Someone was shooting at them! Yugi's friends were amazed, thinking Yugi maybe had good reflexes.
"Take cover," Yami yelled as Yugi forfeited the body to him. "Stay low," he cried as they ran for cover behind a tree.
"What are we gonna do, bud?" Joey asked Yami, who seemed to be in control of the situation.
"We need to make it back into the school. We aren't that far from the school. You guys make a rum for it and try to make it back in."
"We'll be shot!"
"I don't think so, Tea. They're after me, not you. I think you'll make it."
They came out from behind the tree slowly, but trusting Yami to his word. They ran for the school hunched over just to make sure they wouldn't get hit. The bullets stopped coming and they ran flat out to the school. Once they were inside the door, Joey saw that they had stopped shooting because they were out of bullets.
"Yugi! Come on man! Hurry!" Joey yelled and motioned frantically for his friend to join them before the gun was reloaded.
Yami came out of his hiding spot and headed for the door when Nixie and Ralph started the car. They had decided to try and run him over, if they could. Yami looked over his shoulder and saw them right behind him; he jusped and rolled out of the way, then picked himself up, and kept running. He was almost safe when the car was back after him. It zoomed in front of him cutting off his progress to the school.
"YUGI!" his friends called.
One of the men inside got out. He had a black ski mask on and the, now reloaded, gun was in his hands. The man fired and Yami fell back to lie still on the pavement. The man started to take the shattered Millennium Puzzle from him and collect the pieces, but Joey and Tristan got there first. They took the gun away from him, making an effective use of jumping him from behind, and punched him so that he fell to the ground. His partner dragged him into the car and they drove off. Tea came over and picked up Yugi's head so it rested in her lap when he opened his eyes and smiled at them all.
"YUGI!" They chorused.
Tea looked bewildered which made Yugi's smile broaden. "What? How? You?" Tea "asked."
"His bullet hit the puzzle, which shattered it and made Yami disappear, but protected me. We had to make them think they had killed me so we fell."
"Oh Yugi," was all Tea could manage.
"Come on guys, we need to go inside the school and call the police," Tristan told them all.
Joey helped Yugi up and Tea collected the pieces of the Millennium Puzzle and handed them to Yugi. Then they all walked inside to the office and called the police and Yugi's Grandpa. The police toke them to stay there and they would pick the kids up and start an investigation. While they waited Yugi put the pieces of the puzzle together. Yugi just finished the last piece when officers arrived. They took Yugi and all his friends home and then waited to see what the investigation turned up. Once they were back at the Game Shop, Grandpa decided to change Yugi's bandages. He took off the old wraps and applied medication. Then the fun began when he took out the new bandages and tried to wrap Yugi with them. Yugi was wrapped; his friends laughed so hard they fell out of their seats because Gramps had turned Yugi into a mummy. In the end once Tea could breathe again, she redid his bandages and did it the right way, so they decided Tea should be the official "Yugi Wrapper". (A/N- Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! Oh! Oh! Whoooo! Yeah! That was good! Sorry. -^_^-) Yugi finally got a call telling them the car had been found abandoned and was apparently stolen property. They hadn't found anybody, but not to worry. Yugi looked out the window and couldn't see the cop cars.
'They must be on patrol,' Yugi thought them turned away. The bell to the shop rang as someone opened the door. "I'll get it!" Yugi shouted as he went to the game shop part of the house, being the closest one to it.
He walked in, but didn't see anybody. He looked out the window/door, but couldn't see anybody. The lights went out and Yugi yelled, when a hand went over his mouth and another went over his chest holding him still. The strong arms lifted up the struggling (and failing) form of Yugi and carried him out into the night.
A/N- *gasp* what's gonna happen to poor sweet Yugi? Find out next chappie! Don't forget- if you want me to post TBCS then ya gotta let me know! Leave a lovely review if you read! Love ya- tnt- ttfn.
(tnt- till next time) (ttfn- ta ta for now)
