Hiltoph the Rogue
Chapter 2
Enter Zero
By ZeroTH
Hey there, all! It's me, Zero! Along with SIHS, Bio-Experiment, and SA3, I'll be co-authoring this story. I hope that this story will get some attention. This is Hiltoph's first story on FF.net, so.give him some criticism for improvement if needed, K? Here's the second chapter of HILTOPH THE ROGUE!
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(Night. We see a house, all the windows turned on. Looks peaceful enough)
(CRASH)
???: ZERO!!!
(OK, maybe not. A dark blue hedgehog dashes out of the house, followed by a red female hedgehog)
Girl Hedgehog: ZERO, HOW DARE YOU!
Zero: Hey, I was just having some fun!
(Suddenly, an orange light streams across Zero's face)
Zero: What the...
(Switch scenes. We see A black hedgehog with a red trenchcoat, green gloves, and red shoes flying across the night, with two other hedgehogs with horrible mutations. Hiltoph, along with Jecko and Montoze, land on a hill, miles away from the destruction that they left behind. Hiltoph looks in the distance, where he sees the smoke from the lab...)
Hiltoph: ...
(He turns toward his two 'brothers', and sits down. He feels their necks)
Hiltoph: Still alive...thank god...
(Suddenly, his ear twitches. He turns his head around, and stands up. His eyes glow a creepy blue color)
Hiltoph: Who is it...that disturbs me?
(Switch scenes to Zero and the red hedgehog, Exe. It looks like Exe got dressed in a hurry-her clothes are all wrinkled)
Exe: What did you see, anyway?
Zero: Orange light. Looked like a comet or something...
(Suddenly, a black blur jumps out of the shadows, and tackles Zero)
Zero: OOMPH!!
Exe: Zero!!
(Zero and the black figure roll on the ground, Zero trying to pry his attacker off. He eventually does so, and stands up, facing the black figure. It was Hiltoph)
Zero: What the heck? Who are you?!
Hiltoph: The name's Hiltoph. Are you working for Zefo?!
Exe: Who's Zefo?
Zero: We don't know anyone by the name of Zefo.
Hiltoph: LIAR!! You don't look like normal hedgehogs...I can sense that you're not like the other hedgehogs here! Just like me! You ARE working for him!!
Zero: What?!
(Hiltoph growls, and lunges for Zero...)
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It cliffhangy enough? The next Chapter will be authored by Hiltoph, so...I'll see you in Chapter 4!
~Zero
Chapter 2
Enter Zero
By ZeroTH
Hey there, all! It's me, Zero! Along with SIHS, Bio-Experiment, and SA3, I'll be co-authoring this story. I hope that this story will get some attention. This is Hiltoph's first story on FF.net, so.give him some criticism for improvement if needed, K? Here's the second chapter of HILTOPH THE ROGUE!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
(Night. We see a house, all the windows turned on. Looks peaceful enough)
(CRASH)
???: ZERO!!!
(OK, maybe not. A dark blue hedgehog dashes out of the house, followed by a red female hedgehog)
Girl Hedgehog: ZERO, HOW DARE YOU!
Zero: Hey, I was just having some fun!
(Suddenly, an orange light streams across Zero's face)
Zero: What the...
(Switch scenes. We see A black hedgehog with a red trenchcoat, green gloves, and red shoes flying across the night, with two other hedgehogs with horrible mutations. Hiltoph, along with Jecko and Montoze, land on a hill, miles away from the destruction that they left behind. Hiltoph looks in the distance, where he sees the smoke from the lab...)
Hiltoph: ...
(He turns toward his two 'brothers', and sits down. He feels their necks)
Hiltoph: Still alive...thank god...
(Suddenly, his ear twitches. He turns his head around, and stands up. His eyes glow a creepy blue color)
Hiltoph: Who is it...that disturbs me?
(Switch scenes to Zero and the red hedgehog, Exe. It looks like Exe got dressed in a hurry-her clothes are all wrinkled)
Exe: What did you see, anyway?
Zero: Orange light. Looked like a comet or something...
(Suddenly, a black blur jumps out of the shadows, and tackles Zero)
Zero: OOMPH!!
Exe: Zero!!
(Zero and the black figure roll on the ground, Zero trying to pry his attacker off. He eventually does so, and stands up, facing the black figure. It was Hiltoph)
Zero: What the heck? Who are you?!
Hiltoph: The name's Hiltoph. Are you working for Zefo?!
Exe: Who's Zefo?
Zero: We don't know anyone by the name of Zefo.
Hiltoph: LIAR!! You don't look like normal hedgehogs...I can sense that you're not like the other hedgehogs here! Just like me! You ARE working for him!!
Zero: What?!
(Hiltoph growls, and lunges for Zero...)
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It cliffhangy enough? The next Chapter will be authored by Hiltoph, so...I'll see you in Chapter 4!
~Zero
