Note: I realize my first fic was kinda lacking, so I'm gonna start it all
over again, redo it if you will. So bear with me!
Darkness and Light
It hurt. That was my first thought as I woke groggily from my sleep. My head pounded with a drumbeat rhythm. Damn. I slowly opened my eyes, dust searing them, but the need to see overpowering the sensation of pain. I could smell something burning, but what was it? I opened my eyes, and I realized where I was, or rather where I wasn't. I wasn't in the laboratory. I was outside, surrounded by a tremendous wreathing of fire. I coughed as smoke went into my lungs. Double damn. I sat up fairly quickly, and regretted it almost instantly. A sharp pain ripped through my body, almost forcing me into unconsciousness. I heard voices, whispers, shouts. A number of dead people were around me. People I had never seen, and some people I had. Triple Damn. I looked around me, and saw a girl, no, a woman looking at me cautiously. Who the hell was she? She walked over to me, and squatted down, making her even on level with me.
"Hmmm.. I didn't think any of them were still alive. Can you speak?" I decided I had nothing to hide from her, but she was annoying me. I got the sneaking suspicion she had helped destroy my home, regardless of the hell it had been.
"No. I cant speak." She gave me a quizzical look, then a more serious look settled on her face.
"Listen, My group has just destroyed that lab, and your free now. Your free to go." She got up, and turned around, her spiky bold hair moving a tiny bit in the torrent. I was getting angry. How the hell did she have the right to come into my life, my home, blow it up, then just walk her ass away? That was more than wrong, that was just fucked up. Telling me I could go, where the hell did she think I would go? Bitch! I stood up, more than angry now. I grabbed her arm when she started to walk away. She turned around and looked at me hard. I let go of her arm, then my right hand shot up as fast as I could bring it to her neck. I had about 5 inches on her in height, being rather tall, and I lifted her up to my eye level. She was going to die for what she did. She started struggling, trying to pull my arm away. It wasn't going to work for her this time however. I was ready, and I kept my grip. Then all of a sudden, her body started changing. Her appearances becoming more and more feline. Her hands became paws, paws with VERY sharp claws, and her face changing into that of some big cat. She started scratching away at my arm, drawing blood, and eventually almost cutting it raw. I didn't care though. I still kept my grip. Then two people, two people who I hadnt heard, came at me from both sides, sandwiching me between them. It was enough to make my drop my grip on the girl. I fell down to the ground stunned, then I became determined. They would die too, for there interference. I saw my foes clearly, a lion and a wolf, both some sort of shapeshifters like the girl. I stood up, but felt weak. It became apparent to me that I had lost a lot of blood, and I was getting weary. I couldn't keep myself up anymore. I fell and the blackness took me.
.........
Shina looked at the young, but not at all small African American boy that lay on the table. She thought over what had happened. It just didn't make any sense to her though. The boy hadn't started off as a human she was sure. But his strength was unnatural. He was to powerful, even for a Zoanthrope. Not many, if anyone at all., could do to her what he did, and still survive. It wasn't right. He wasn't human, he wasnt Zoanthrope. This idea perplexed her, and she continued to ponder it as her father walked into the room. She knew she was in for it. She wasn't supposed to have brought this kid back here, but she had anyway, and now there was going to be trouble.
"I thought I told you to kill this boy. He's a threat that cannot be ignored. You went against my absolute orders in bringing him here Shina! This isn't some toy! This is a dangerous being that's just as dangerous to us as it is to anyone else!" Shina was starting to get angry now.
"How can you just tell me to go and kill someone? Where is your heart, your compassion?! I cant just go and randomly kill people Father! And you shouldn't be able to either."
"I DON'T CARE! He tried to kill you! And I will not stand here as the person who nearly killed my daughter sits there in a righteous sleep!" Gado was in his beast form in a flash. He walked over too the boy and raised his claws in the kill position. This possible rending was interrupted by Yugo and Uriko walking in the room. Gado wasn't about to kill the boy with young Uriko in the room. Gado instead transformed back and walked over and grabbed Yugo by the scruff of the neck, as he tried to exit the room as fast as he could to avoid Gado's wrath. He wasn't quick enough how ever, and ended up being yanked back rather hard.
"Yugo," He said with more than a little bit of a growl. "Why did you disobey me?" Yugo looked positively small.
"She blackmailed me.." Shina shot a look that sent daggers at Yugo. Gado was still angry though, and Uriko was busy looking at the boy. She walked over and gave the boy a quick once over. She managed to spot some writing on the boy. It was a tattoo of some sort.
"Shina, will you come tell me what this says?" Shina gave a quizzical look then walked over to see what Uriko was talking about. She squinted then jotted down some numbers and letters on a piece of paper.
"I was writing down the name on the tattoo, as far as I can make out, it reads: Prjct:ShdwT1. I think its safe to say we can get a name for him out of that. I think we can call him Shadow."
"HE DOESN'T DESERVE A NAME! I don't care anymore. If you guys want to have this potential murderer in our facility, I don't care. But I'm not going to be the one to deal with him." Gado stormed out of the room.
"But he's so cute though..." The room was silent for a time, leaving Uriko dumbfounded and feeling more than a little stupid.
...........
Ahem. End part 1. I swear this is a hell of a lot better than my first one. This is about where my first fic ended. Lol. Anyway, I know tiger and ray are gonna be bitchin over it, but yeah, this is a mary-sue, insertion whatever you want to call it. It changes later on, but the first fic is VERY mary x sue and its not gonna change. The second may be different, but hey, after all this is just a remake. Albeit a better remake. Anyway, props to Byakko's fic for making me start writing in the bloody roar genre all over again. Also, go read my Starfox fic, StarFox : The end of ages. It's pretty kick ass, and funny as hell. Anyway, props and slops are welcome. Thanks a lot.
Darkness and Light
It hurt. That was my first thought as I woke groggily from my sleep. My head pounded with a drumbeat rhythm. Damn. I slowly opened my eyes, dust searing them, but the need to see overpowering the sensation of pain. I could smell something burning, but what was it? I opened my eyes, and I realized where I was, or rather where I wasn't. I wasn't in the laboratory. I was outside, surrounded by a tremendous wreathing of fire. I coughed as smoke went into my lungs. Double damn. I sat up fairly quickly, and regretted it almost instantly. A sharp pain ripped through my body, almost forcing me into unconsciousness. I heard voices, whispers, shouts. A number of dead people were around me. People I had never seen, and some people I had. Triple Damn. I looked around me, and saw a girl, no, a woman looking at me cautiously. Who the hell was she? She walked over to me, and squatted down, making her even on level with me.
"Hmmm.. I didn't think any of them were still alive. Can you speak?" I decided I had nothing to hide from her, but she was annoying me. I got the sneaking suspicion she had helped destroy my home, regardless of the hell it had been.
"No. I cant speak." She gave me a quizzical look, then a more serious look settled on her face.
"Listen, My group has just destroyed that lab, and your free now. Your free to go." She got up, and turned around, her spiky bold hair moving a tiny bit in the torrent. I was getting angry. How the hell did she have the right to come into my life, my home, blow it up, then just walk her ass away? That was more than wrong, that was just fucked up. Telling me I could go, where the hell did she think I would go? Bitch! I stood up, more than angry now. I grabbed her arm when she started to walk away. She turned around and looked at me hard. I let go of her arm, then my right hand shot up as fast as I could bring it to her neck. I had about 5 inches on her in height, being rather tall, and I lifted her up to my eye level. She was going to die for what she did. She started struggling, trying to pull my arm away. It wasn't going to work for her this time however. I was ready, and I kept my grip. Then all of a sudden, her body started changing. Her appearances becoming more and more feline. Her hands became paws, paws with VERY sharp claws, and her face changing into that of some big cat. She started scratching away at my arm, drawing blood, and eventually almost cutting it raw. I didn't care though. I still kept my grip. Then two people, two people who I hadnt heard, came at me from both sides, sandwiching me between them. It was enough to make my drop my grip on the girl. I fell down to the ground stunned, then I became determined. They would die too, for there interference. I saw my foes clearly, a lion and a wolf, both some sort of shapeshifters like the girl. I stood up, but felt weak. It became apparent to me that I had lost a lot of blood, and I was getting weary. I couldn't keep myself up anymore. I fell and the blackness took me.
.........
Shina looked at the young, but not at all small African American boy that lay on the table. She thought over what had happened. It just didn't make any sense to her though. The boy hadn't started off as a human she was sure. But his strength was unnatural. He was to powerful, even for a Zoanthrope. Not many, if anyone at all., could do to her what he did, and still survive. It wasn't right. He wasn't human, he wasnt Zoanthrope. This idea perplexed her, and she continued to ponder it as her father walked into the room. She knew she was in for it. She wasn't supposed to have brought this kid back here, but she had anyway, and now there was going to be trouble.
"I thought I told you to kill this boy. He's a threat that cannot be ignored. You went against my absolute orders in bringing him here Shina! This isn't some toy! This is a dangerous being that's just as dangerous to us as it is to anyone else!" Shina was starting to get angry now.
"How can you just tell me to go and kill someone? Where is your heart, your compassion?! I cant just go and randomly kill people Father! And you shouldn't be able to either."
"I DON'T CARE! He tried to kill you! And I will not stand here as the person who nearly killed my daughter sits there in a righteous sleep!" Gado was in his beast form in a flash. He walked over too the boy and raised his claws in the kill position. This possible rending was interrupted by Yugo and Uriko walking in the room. Gado wasn't about to kill the boy with young Uriko in the room. Gado instead transformed back and walked over and grabbed Yugo by the scruff of the neck, as he tried to exit the room as fast as he could to avoid Gado's wrath. He wasn't quick enough how ever, and ended up being yanked back rather hard.
"Yugo," He said with more than a little bit of a growl. "Why did you disobey me?" Yugo looked positively small.
"She blackmailed me.." Shina shot a look that sent daggers at Yugo. Gado was still angry though, and Uriko was busy looking at the boy. She walked over and gave the boy a quick once over. She managed to spot some writing on the boy. It was a tattoo of some sort.
"Shina, will you come tell me what this says?" Shina gave a quizzical look then walked over to see what Uriko was talking about. She squinted then jotted down some numbers and letters on a piece of paper.
"I was writing down the name on the tattoo, as far as I can make out, it reads: Prjct:ShdwT1. I think its safe to say we can get a name for him out of that. I think we can call him Shadow."
"HE DOESN'T DESERVE A NAME! I don't care anymore. If you guys want to have this potential murderer in our facility, I don't care. But I'm not going to be the one to deal with him." Gado stormed out of the room.
"But he's so cute though..." The room was silent for a time, leaving Uriko dumbfounded and feeling more than a little stupid.
...........
Ahem. End part 1. I swear this is a hell of a lot better than my first one. This is about where my first fic ended. Lol. Anyway, I know tiger and ray are gonna be bitchin over it, but yeah, this is a mary-sue, insertion whatever you want to call it. It changes later on, but the first fic is VERY mary x sue and its not gonna change. The second may be different, but hey, after all this is just a remake. Albeit a better remake. Anyway, props to Byakko's fic for making me start writing in the bloody roar genre all over again. Also, go read my Starfox fic, StarFox : The end of ages. It's pretty kick ass, and funny as hell. Anyway, props and slops are welcome. Thanks a lot.
