YAY!! I'm already doing my 3rd chapter!!! So. Many. Reviews. Ahhhhhh @__@!
But that doesn't mean stop ^__^ I love getting attention! Now I will
respond finally!
Y2jfx250: Putting Hiei in Slytherin with Malfoy is just plan cruel. to Hiei AND the school. Plus. I don't want Slytherin blown up. yet *hint* *hint*
Hiei: I AM NOT HUMAN. DIE FIRE DEMON, DIE! Ehem. sorry 'bout that ^__^;;;
Black Kaze kitsune: Yes. I did read through the book. Besides. every one makes mistakes. even a Tai-youkai like me.
Oh yeah, I won't use your characters exactly as you put them; I may tweak the background of them or something.
Onto my story!!!!! --------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3: Why do strange things keep happening to me!?
The group rested in the Gryffindor dormitories after potions and dinner was over. Kuwabara and Yusuke were horrible in potions. Every time they put in an ingredient, their potion exploded in their faces. Eventually, Kurama went over and helped them out.
Bri and Hermione were doing exceptionally well that day. With Hermione's text-book-like knowledge and Bri's experience in animangus, they glided right through. Ron and Harry were on an average level as always, and Hiei and Kurama did a fairly good job.
"I feel like a brain-dead jock." Yusuke moaned in incompetence.
"You are a brain-dead jock." Hiei said.
"Did you guys hear? Botan is doing the broom lessons for the first years in Ravenclaw and Gryffindor." Kurama said.
"Oh, this should be good." Yusuke snickered. They all left to go to the Quiticch (spelling?) field. There, Botan stood with a group of uneasy first years.
"Allrighty, everyone stand to the left sides of your brooms" the first years did as they were directed. "Now place your right hand over your broom and yell 'up'" They did as she commanded.
The first one to get a broom up was a Gryffindor girl with long, red hair and a very dark tan. "Yay, I got mine up!" She cheered, but then she dropped the broom, "oops."
The second person to get a broom up was a Ravenclaw girl with dark brown hair in a ponytail. "Oh, I did it."
Soon more and more people got their brooms up.
"Now, mount your brooms." The first years did as directed.
"You know, I'm sensing some demons in the Field out there." Kurama pointed out.
"I think it's the ditzy one, with the pointed ears and fangs." Bri said.
"But how come the others don't see them?" Yusuke asked.
"It must be a spell of some sort." Kurama said.
"Let's attack her and see what happens." Hiei said.
"We can't do that, she's a girl." Kuwabara said.
"And what's wrong with being a girl? Hmm?" Bri demanded.
"I'm in trouble now, aren't I?" Kuwabara asked, Bri pulled out a large mallet and started chasing him. "MOMMY!! MOMMY, MAKE IT STOP!!!" then he gave his trademark girlie-scream.
"Uh, riiiight." Yusuke said -_-;;;
"Back on subject; I think there is more than one demon here." Kurama stated.
"Quit a few in this area are half demons." Hiei said.
"You means besides me?" Yusuke asked.
"Of course you fool, there is tons of half demons other than you." Hiei spat.
"I think we should leave before Brianna kills Kuwabara. -_-;;;" Kurama said.
"Why, that just means less work for me." Hiei said.
Albus Dumbledore,
It has came to our attention at the Ministry of Magic that you are keeping strange creatures in your school and considering them students. You are on thin ice from last year's fiasco. And we kindly ask that you get rid of these creatures as soon as possible.
Cornelius Fudge, Minister of Magic
Dumbledore shook his head at the Minister's arrogance. Do they really think they can be a hazard? He decided to ignore the letter. He decided to check how the new teacher was at the flying lessons; she was doing very, except the odd glitch here and there.
It was early morning the next day; Harry slowly stirred. He noticed that no one was in the dorm. He threw some clothes on and walked out. The spirit detectives and his friends were scattered through out the common room. For some reason they seemed to be stopped in time.
"This can't be good." Harry deducted. He walked around trying to get them out of the trance.
"It's no use, they are frozen in time." Said a cold voice out of now where.
"Who are you?" Harry asked, whipping out his wand. "And what have you done to my friends?"
"That doesn't concern you, boy. Give the detectives this message: Their attempts to stop us are futile."
"What are you talking about?" there was no answer. Every thing went back to its normal self.
The detectives and every one in the Common room jumped about five feet in the air. (A/N 'cause he wasn't there a second ago)
And that is the end of this chapter. Pease review. The next chapter I will be posting who made it into the fiction. Oh yeah . . . I NEED SOME GUYS HERE!!!! If you guys don't tell me, my fiction will be all cabobbulated. Please review.
~Anime guys, and lots of pies! ^_^
Y2jfx250: Putting Hiei in Slytherin with Malfoy is just plan cruel. to Hiei AND the school. Plus. I don't want Slytherin blown up. yet *hint* *hint*
Hiei: I AM NOT HUMAN. DIE FIRE DEMON, DIE! Ehem. sorry 'bout that ^__^;;;
Black Kaze kitsune: Yes. I did read through the book. Besides. every one makes mistakes. even a Tai-youkai like me.
Oh yeah, I won't use your characters exactly as you put them; I may tweak the background of them or something.
Onto my story!!!!! --------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3: Why do strange things keep happening to me!?
The group rested in the Gryffindor dormitories after potions and dinner was over. Kuwabara and Yusuke were horrible in potions. Every time they put in an ingredient, their potion exploded in their faces. Eventually, Kurama went over and helped them out.
Bri and Hermione were doing exceptionally well that day. With Hermione's text-book-like knowledge and Bri's experience in animangus, they glided right through. Ron and Harry were on an average level as always, and Hiei and Kurama did a fairly good job.
"I feel like a brain-dead jock." Yusuke moaned in incompetence.
"You are a brain-dead jock." Hiei said.
"Did you guys hear? Botan is doing the broom lessons for the first years in Ravenclaw and Gryffindor." Kurama said.
"Oh, this should be good." Yusuke snickered. They all left to go to the Quiticch (spelling?) field. There, Botan stood with a group of uneasy first years.
"Allrighty, everyone stand to the left sides of your brooms" the first years did as they were directed. "Now place your right hand over your broom and yell 'up'" They did as she commanded.
The first one to get a broom up was a Gryffindor girl with long, red hair and a very dark tan. "Yay, I got mine up!" She cheered, but then she dropped the broom, "oops."
The second person to get a broom up was a Ravenclaw girl with dark brown hair in a ponytail. "Oh, I did it."
Soon more and more people got their brooms up.
"Now, mount your brooms." The first years did as directed.
"You know, I'm sensing some demons in the Field out there." Kurama pointed out.
"I think it's the ditzy one, with the pointed ears and fangs." Bri said.
"But how come the others don't see them?" Yusuke asked.
"It must be a spell of some sort." Kurama said.
"Let's attack her and see what happens." Hiei said.
"We can't do that, she's a girl." Kuwabara said.
"And what's wrong with being a girl? Hmm?" Bri demanded.
"I'm in trouble now, aren't I?" Kuwabara asked, Bri pulled out a large mallet and started chasing him. "MOMMY!! MOMMY, MAKE IT STOP!!!" then he gave his trademark girlie-scream.
"Uh, riiiight." Yusuke said -_-;;;
"Back on subject; I think there is more than one demon here." Kurama stated.
"Quit a few in this area are half demons." Hiei said.
"You means besides me?" Yusuke asked.
"Of course you fool, there is tons of half demons other than you." Hiei spat.
"I think we should leave before Brianna kills Kuwabara. -_-;;;" Kurama said.
"Why, that just means less work for me." Hiei said.
Albus Dumbledore,
It has came to our attention at the Ministry of Magic that you are keeping strange creatures in your school and considering them students. You are on thin ice from last year's fiasco. And we kindly ask that you get rid of these creatures as soon as possible.
Cornelius Fudge, Minister of Magic
Dumbledore shook his head at the Minister's arrogance. Do they really think they can be a hazard? He decided to ignore the letter. He decided to check how the new teacher was at the flying lessons; she was doing very, except the odd glitch here and there.
It was early morning the next day; Harry slowly stirred. He noticed that no one was in the dorm. He threw some clothes on and walked out. The spirit detectives and his friends were scattered through out the common room. For some reason they seemed to be stopped in time.
"This can't be good." Harry deducted. He walked around trying to get them out of the trance.
"It's no use, they are frozen in time." Said a cold voice out of now where.
"Who are you?" Harry asked, whipping out his wand. "And what have you done to my friends?"
"That doesn't concern you, boy. Give the detectives this message: Their attempts to stop us are futile."
"What are you talking about?" there was no answer. Every thing went back to its normal self.
The detectives and every one in the Common room jumped about five feet in the air. (A/N 'cause he wasn't there a second ago)
And that is the end of this chapter. Pease review. The next chapter I will be posting who made it into the fiction. Oh yeah . . . I NEED SOME GUYS HERE!!!! If you guys don't tell me, my fiction will be all cabobbulated. Please review.
~Anime guys, and lots of pies! ^_^