Keitaro's Tangled Web (Part Two)
"Disclaimer: 1) a renunciation of any claim to or connection with; 2) disavowal; 3) a statement made to save one's own ass." - Dogma
Disclaimer- I own nothing but my brain and the thoughts with in it. This is my second attempt at a fanfic cut me a bit of slack. I've seen the Love Hina and Hove Hina Again anime that's it; so if anything is inaccurate boo frickety hoo.
(Setting will be in parentheses) :: Thoughts like this :: -Actions-
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(Mutsumi's Apartment, after a little talking)
-Mutsumi is holding Keitaro's arm while talking to him-
Mutsumi: "Wow Keitaro, no wonder Naru loves you."
Keitaro: "Naru loves me?" ::I thought she just liked to beat me up::
Mutsumi: "Ayra-Arya, I shouldn't have said that..."
Keitaro: "Don't worry about it. Lets talk about something else."
-All of a sudden Naru busts in-
Naru: "Keitaro! What are you..." -she spots Mutsumi sitting next Keitaro- "Kei... taro..." she whispers
Keitaro: "Naru..."
Mutsumi: "Would Naru-chan like to join? There is more than enough Keitaro has another arm."
Keitaro: "What do you mean by that?"
Mutsumi: "Ayra, never mind. Keitaro, maybe you should go now."
Keitaro: "Uh, sure..."
(About 4 blocks from Hinata Sou in a park)
Naru: "Keitaro. I need to tell you something. I..." she stutters, "I-I love you. I always have and always will! But, if you'd rather be with Mutsumi..." she trails off.
Keitaro: "Naru. Since we met 15 years ago, you've been the only thing I've ever thought about. I've loved you since before I..." He falls silent, not knowing what to say
Naru: "Keitaro... kiss me, love me. I want to be yours, and you mine!"
-Keitaro walks up to her embraces her and put his lips against hers. Naru's knee bends and she lowers a bit but Keitaro holds her close and slowly lets her down on to the grass-
Keitaro: "I love you Naru. I want to love you till the end of time."
-Naru wraps her right arm around his back and her left on his head and pulls him down on her-
Naru: "Keitaro..."
Keitaro: "Naru..."
"Keitaro, love me!" she whispers -They kiss-
Keitaro: Keitaro breaks the kiss for a breath and says, "Naru I don't want this moment to ever end." And then Keitaro's world famous great luck, which hasn't been seen in a while, finally catches up with him.
"Naru?! Keitaro?!"
End Chapter Two
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Expect more rising action as I move toward the climax of this story. This is an edit of the original story. Maverick Zero
"Disclaimer: 1) a renunciation of any claim to or connection with; 2) disavowal; 3) a statement made to save one's own ass." - Dogma
Disclaimer- I own nothing but my brain and the thoughts with in it. This is my second attempt at a fanfic cut me a bit of slack. I've seen the Love Hina and Hove Hina Again anime that's it; so if anything is inaccurate boo frickety hoo.
(Setting will be in parentheses) :: Thoughts like this :: -Actions-
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(Mutsumi's Apartment, after a little talking)
-Mutsumi is holding Keitaro's arm while talking to him-
Mutsumi: "Wow Keitaro, no wonder Naru loves you."
Keitaro: "Naru loves me?" ::I thought she just liked to beat me up::
Mutsumi: "Ayra-Arya, I shouldn't have said that..."
Keitaro: "Don't worry about it. Lets talk about something else."
-All of a sudden Naru busts in-
Naru: "Keitaro! What are you..." -she spots Mutsumi sitting next Keitaro- "Kei... taro..." she whispers
Keitaro: "Naru..."
Mutsumi: "Would Naru-chan like to join? There is more than enough Keitaro has another arm."
Keitaro: "What do you mean by that?"
Mutsumi: "Ayra, never mind. Keitaro, maybe you should go now."
Keitaro: "Uh, sure..."
(About 4 blocks from Hinata Sou in a park)
Naru: "Keitaro. I need to tell you something. I..." she stutters, "I-I love you. I always have and always will! But, if you'd rather be with Mutsumi..." she trails off.
Keitaro: "Naru. Since we met 15 years ago, you've been the only thing I've ever thought about. I've loved you since before I..." He falls silent, not knowing what to say
Naru: "Keitaro... kiss me, love me. I want to be yours, and you mine!"
-Keitaro walks up to her embraces her and put his lips against hers. Naru's knee bends and she lowers a bit but Keitaro holds her close and slowly lets her down on to the grass-
Keitaro: "I love you Naru. I want to love you till the end of time."
-Naru wraps her right arm around his back and her left on his head and pulls him down on her-
Naru: "Keitaro..."
Keitaro: "Naru..."
"Keitaro, love me!" she whispers -They kiss-
Keitaro: Keitaro breaks the kiss for a breath and says, "Naru I don't want this moment to ever end." And then Keitaro's world famous great luck, which hasn't been seen in a while, finally catches up with him.
"Naru?! Keitaro?!"
End Chapter Two
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Expect more rising action as I move toward the climax of this story. This is an edit of the original story. Maverick Zero