Here is my first chapter. This is where I will decide whether or not I am
going to continue. If you want me to write I have to write. Please review.
Mystery Island
Chapter 1
By The Sweet and Innocent
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On the lost boat.
Malachite and Darien had been debating for a while on whether or not they should go to the island. In the end Darien said they would, but no one wanted to go.
"Darien, I'm not sure whether we should go abroad the island. It looks. well.,"
"It looks too mysterious." Jedite finished the sentence that Malachite was trying to get our but could not finish.
"Listen, guys I know it looks dangerous, but we do not have much of an option. Either we die of spoiled food and stay on this damn boat or we go to that island and see if we can find something to eat. I am for one am not going to sit around until I die of fucking starvation! I am going to that island with or without you! Now tell me whether you are going or not!"
"Well. umm. Darien. we.," they all started at once.
"Yes or no!"
"Yes." They may not have wanted to go to that island but they were damned if they were gonna let Darien go by himself.
"Alright let's get some things together to take the island. We will leave tomorrow morning since the sun is starting to set. I think I can wait one more day to go when it is daylight."
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The next day.
"Do we have everything?" Darien was triple checking that they had everything they could carry. He did not want to come across some wild creature without having anyway to protect his friends. and not to mention him.
"Yes!" They all shouted at once. They were getting quite tired of Darien asking if they had everything.
"Alright. let's go."
They left at 7:00 a.m. and got to the island at 7:15 a.m., but it seemed like an eternity. They had no problems getting to the island besides Nephlite pushing Zoisite in the water and Zoisite pulling Nephlite in, although Nephlite was holding on to Jedite, so Jedite went in also. Once they got on shore, they realized what was so mysterious about the island.
Before them stood a very dense forest of all sorts of tropical trees. They walked all around the island and found that the only in was through the trees. It was now dark out since it took forever to get around the island. They decided to camp on the shore and explore tomorrow. They set up camp and all fell asleep. Little did they know that someone was watching them the whole time they were on the island.
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Mina had been walking in the forest when she saw a boat approaching the island. Her first instinct was to run and tell the others, but when she saw that it was full of men, she decided to stay. The only people she knew were Serena, Amy, Raye, and Lita. She had never seen a man before, and was very interested. She had a strange feeling about them, so she followed them around all day, while staying unnoticed. She thought it very strange that they walked all the way around the island only to stop and put up a camp where they landed. Once they had fallen asleep, she ran to tell the others.
"You guys. will. never believe. what I saw!" Mina had run all the way to her home. Their home was located behind the waterfall in the middle of the island. The entrance was not only hard to find because of the waterfall but also because of how it was made. It was made of two pieces of overlapping rock that left you barely any room to squeeze into. The inside was beautiful. There were five beds of a very soft material made from some wild animal, a lot of artwork, and the smell of heaven.
"Go ahead and tell us. Just tell me one thing. Tell me you actually saw something of interest this time." Raye had had enough of Mina always saying she saw something interesting. Mina was starting to get more annoying than Serena. And, that Raye thought was impossible.
"Well I did see something. There are men on the island." Mina stated it as a simple fact.
When the others heard they could not believe what she said.
"Come again Mina. Did you just say you saw men?" Amy was in a state of shock.
"Yes! They are camping at the southern end of the island. They looked famished. I think that we should make them something to eat and leave it by their camp. It would be really nice."
"It would be nice, but wouldn't they know that someone was here if we left them some food. Did the Creator not say that no one was to know where we are at?" Amy always had to be the one to bring them to reality.
"Well I would love to cook something for them, but your right Ames, but we could leave some berries or something for them to find that aren't poisonous. I would love to meet them." Lita loved to cook.
"Alright it's settled we will leave some food for them!" Serena finally decided to join in on the talk.
"Are you guys sure? I mean what if they suspect something?" Amy did not like the idea of this at all.
"Well they can suspect whatever they want, but that doesn't mean they know." Serena really wanted to do this. She wanted more than anything to meet these men at this moment.
"I'll go and gather some berries and coconuts for them to 'find' in the morning." Raye liked the idea of this. "Amy all we are doing is preventing them from dying."
"I guess it's okay."
"Hey I have everything! Mina lead the way to their camp!" Lita was ecstatic.
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Back at camp.
"Man I'm starving. I cannot believe it is morning already. When can we go get some food Dar?" Nephlite was always thinking about food.
"We can look for food when the others get up."
"Is there a bucket anywhere?"
"What are you up to?"
"I just want to um. freshen the guys up that's all."
"Over there."
"HEY!! NEPHLITE YOUR DEAD!!!" He threw water on Zoisite and that was all he could do before Zoisite had him on the ground and was about to kick his ass when Malachite stopped them.
"Let's go get some food."
"Yeah you two can fight when we get back." Jedite decided to throw in. "Dar, you lead the way."
"Why me?"
"Because you're the one who made us come on this stupid island to find food."
"Oh yeah okay."
They took several guns and knives with them. They saw some berries but Zoisite informed them that they were poisonous along with almost every other plant that was on the island. They eventually found the food the girls had left out for them to find. Darien immediately became suspicious.
"Why is that the one thing we want more than anything is food and here is some food just sitting for us. No animals have bothered it. And, to top it all off there is not a berry bush for a while around. There is someone else on this island."
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And, this is where I leave you. It is up to you whether I continue or not. I plan on making this get really good. Just give it time and reviews.
Mystery Island
Chapter 1
By The Sweet and Innocent
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On the lost boat.
Malachite and Darien had been debating for a while on whether or not they should go to the island. In the end Darien said they would, but no one wanted to go.
"Darien, I'm not sure whether we should go abroad the island. It looks. well.,"
"It looks too mysterious." Jedite finished the sentence that Malachite was trying to get our but could not finish.
"Listen, guys I know it looks dangerous, but we do not have much of an option. Either we die of spoiled food and stay on this damn boat or we go to that island and see if we can find something to eat. I am for one am not going to sit around until I die of fucking starvation! I am going to that island with or without you! Now tell me whether you are going or not!"
"Well. umm. Darien. we.," they all started at once.
"Yes or no!"
"Yes." They may not have wanted to go to that island but they were damned if they were gonna let Darien go by himself.
"Alright let's get some things together to take the island. We will leave tomorrow morning since the sun is starting to set. I think I can wait one more day to go when it is daylight."
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The next day.
"Do we have everything?" Darien was triple checking that they had everything they could carry. He did not want to come across some wild creature without having anyway to protect his friends. and not to mention him.
"Yes!" They all shouted at once. They were getting quite tired of Darien asking if they had everything.
"Alright. let's go."
They left at 7:00 a.m. and got to the island at 7:15 a.m., but it seemed like an eternity. They had no problems getting to the island besides Nephlite pushing Zoisite in the water and Zoisite pulling Nephlite in, although Nephlite was holding on to Jedite, so Jedite went in also. Once they got on shore, they realized what was so mysterious about the island.
Before them stood a very dense forest of all sorts of tropical trees. They walked all around the island and found that the only in was through the trees. It was now dark out since it took forever to get around the island. They decided to camp on the shore and explore tomorrow. They set up camp and all fell asleep. Little did they know that someone was watching them the whole time they were on the island.
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Mina had been walking in the forest when she saw a boat approaching the island. Her first instinct was to run and tell the others, but when she saw that it was full of men, she decided to stay. The only people she knew were Serena, Amy, Raye, and Lita. She had never seen a man before, and was very interested. She had a strange feeling about them, so she followed them around all day, while staying unnoticed. She thought it very strange that they walked all the way around the island only to stop and put up a camp where they landed. Once they had fallen asleep, she ran to tell the others.
"You guys. will. never believe. what I saw!" Mina had run all the way to her home. Their home was located behind the waterfall in the middle of the island. The entrance was not only hard to find because of the waterfall but also because of how it was made. It was made of two pieces of overlapping rock that left you barely any room to squeeze into. The inside was beautiful. There were five beds of a very soft material made from some wild animal, a lot of artwork, and the smell of heaven.
"Go ahead and tell us. Just tell me one thing. Tell me you actually saw something of interest this time." Raye had had enough of Mina always saying she saw something interesting. Mina was starting to get more annoying than Serena. And, that Raye thought was impossible.
"Well I did see something. There are men on the island." Mina stated it as a simple fact.
When the others heard they could not believe what she said.
"Come again Mina. Did you just say you saw men?" Amy was in a state of shock.
"Yes! They are camping at the southern end of the island. They looked famished. I think that we should make them something to eat and leave it by their camp. It would be really nice."
"It would be nice, but wouldn't they know that someone was here if we left them some food. Did the Creator not say that no one was to know where we are at?" Amy always had to be the one to bring them to reality.
"Well I would love to cook something for them, but your right Ames, but we could leave some berries or something for them to find that aren't poisonous. I would love to meet them." Lita loved to cook.
"Alright it's settled we will leave some food for them!" Serena finally decided to join in on the talk.
"Are you guys sure? I mean what if they suspect something?" Amy did not like the idea of this at all.
"Well they can suspect whatever they want, but that doesn't mean they know." Serena really wanted to do this. She wanted more than anything to meet these men at this moment.
"I'll go and gather some berries and coconuts for them to 'find' in the morning." Raye liked the idea of this. "Amy all we are doing is preventing them from dying."
"I guess it's okay."
"Hey I have everything! Mina lead the way to their camp!" Lita was ecstatic.
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Back at camp.
"Man I'm starving. I cannot believe it is morning already. When can we go get some food Dar?" Nephlite was always thinking about food.
"We can look for food when the others get up."
"Is there a bucket anywhere?"
"What are you up to?"
"I just want to um. freshen the guys up that's all."
"Over there."
"HEY!! NEPHLITE YOUR DEAD!!!" He threw water on Zoisite and that was all he could do before Zoisite had him on the ground and was about to kick his ass when Malachite stopped them.
"Let's go get some food."
"Yeah you two can fight when we get back." Jedite decided to throw in. "Dar, you lead the way."
"Why me?"
"Because you're the one who made us come on this stupid island to find food."
"Oh yeah okay."
They took several guns and knives with them. They saw some berries but Zoisite informed them that they were poisonous along with almost every other plant that was on the island. They eventually found the food the girls had left out for them to find. Darien immediately became suspicious.
"Why is that the one thing we want more than anything is food and here is some food just sitting for us. No animals have bothered it. And, to top it all off there is not a berry bush for a while around. There is someone else on this island."
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And, this is where I leave you. It is up to you whether I continue or not. I plan on making this get really good. Just give it time and reviews.