Disclaimer : Yu Yu Hakusho is not mine. At all! And this is forever!
A/N : Thank you, thank you, thank you (thousand times) for review!!
Especially for Tatoosh, amethyst bubble ( thanks for your cookie, give
me more okay? ), siver-eyes magician girl and schizophrenic Kami, who
were the first persons in the same day had written some reviews for me.
I'm really happy!! There are my first reviews ( really the first,
sweatdropped ) and for your appraising, I would work harder for my
appreciation. Please give me some support, if I may ask? Forget to
mention! I'm making Hiei is as tall as Kurama! He is a teen in my
imagination of course. Wahahaha!! Review please? I really appreciate
everything, even flame!
The dusk had aroused, appeared between the high mountains. The king of the sky emerged and shone every part of the land. Beyond the colored sky, the birds were flying, chirping for greeting another beautiful morning. A teen, who is wearing all black opened his lids lazily. " Wake up, it's morning already." Soft voice like a murmur was heard like a lullaby.
The black teen jolted hearing the unfamiliar voice. Suddenly he realized that his face is too near to the redhead. He was within an inch of Kurama. Unconsciously he moved back to the edge of the soft bed.
" I can't believe it that the dragon was changing its form into human. Surprisingly there lays such a cute teen like you in the next day." Kurama smiled warmly. The other teen just glared deadly to the fox. " What is your name?"
"...." The young dragon was silent. " Oh, I get it. If you don't have one then let me give you one. How about Pochi?" He flicked his ruby eyes, sickened of Kurama. " No one lives for humbling me or provoking me. And you have nerve to have fight with me? " Kurama giggled. " Are you insulting me?" His voice rose a bit.
" Finally you talk to me "the ruby head still giggled " so what is your name? " The spiked hair teen kept his mouth closed. " Okay, Pochi, that's final! "
" Hiei."
" Huh?"
" I SAID HIEI, YOU DEAF!! "
" Gee, don't shout. I can hear you."
Silence..
" Fox, Where am I? "
" My name is Kurama, not fox even it's a good nickname for me. "
" Who cares about your name! What is this damn place?! "
" Watch your mouth please. This is my bedroom. "
" Hn, why everyone always concern about taste? "
" Huh? "
" Nothing. "
The silver fox moved himself and suited to Hiei's position. "Luckily Yomi isn't here even your presence has been reported. I'll take the responsibility to question you. "
Hiei moves further away from the red hair. He shunned any body contact to other person. " You will get naught. "
" Hmm, so Mukuro has a concern about the taste too? "
" She comes noisy when it's about her antique's vase or stupid mirror. " Hiei stopped then gasped.
" That's why I'm the one who asking you. You need a little trick to gain the answer, especially for a loyal person. " Kurama smiled wickedly. " But you realize it too fast. Maybe I have to use another way. "
" Damn fox !@#$%^&*@#$%^&* "
Kurama sighed. This will be a hard work.Maybe I should move him to another room. If I don't, it could be possible that he messed up all my things in my only private room. Kurama sighed heavily.
Kurama had left the room. Hiei took his rest in a room that was a place that no one can enter without using the front door. Finally he goes somewhere, I'm getting nervous when he is around. I hate that feeling, something that makes you feel weak. He went down his bed and stood up on the cold floor. I have to think something to flee from this stupid prison room. He placed his hand on his forehead.
I don't think I should change my form again for a while. Even my dragon form is stronger but it drained my ki too much. And that is the ridiculous reason why I end up in this foe's territory. He analyzed the room carefully to search any possible way to retreat. That room wasn't bad with some light within it. But there was some scattered ward at the only window in that room. The only possible way to retreat without causing harm for me is by using the front door. And it would not success actually.
He scanned more and all he could see is the bed, table and some chair. At least they don't chain me. He walked toward the window and carefully touched it. Sudden bolt made him jolted. The bolt was occurred as the effect of the wards. He flinched and touched his burned fingers. Hn! Makes everything so complicated, don't you?
He sat down with some pain on his bed. I couldn't return either if I could run from here. She will probably cast me out to carry on her sins. She won't give up until I can end this task completely. So, where is that mirror? If I stay here, I may get something to be acquired.
He curtly squinted to the front door. He could hear the sound of the footsteps. He waited intently and raised his guard. Unluckily his katana was taken from him to decrease the possibility for him to run. The footstep ended in front of his door. Now what they want?
The door was opened. Hiei frowned at his visitor. The crimson hair came into his room gracefully. His emerald eyes calmed like the thick green forest. It reminded him of the freedom flying freely in Makai. " So how is your day, dragon-san? " Kurama smiled gleefully.
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How is it? Do I have any improvement or even less? Review please! Oh, and also I has planned on the other fic. Please read it if it comes, OK? It's " Forgotten florist ", the title of the plan!
A/N : Thank you, thank you, thank you (thousand times) for review!!
Especially for Tatoosh, amethyst bubble ( thanks for your cookie, give
me more okay? ), siver-eyes magician girl and schizophrenic Kami, who
were the first persons in the same day had written some reviews for me.
I'm really happy!! There are my first reviews ( really the first,
sweatdropped ) and for your appraising, I would work harder for my
appreciation. Please give me some support, if I may ask? Forget to
mention! I'm making Hiei is as tall as Kurama! He is a teen in my
imagination of course. Wahahaha!! Review please? I really appreciate
everything, even flame!
The dusk had aroused, appeared between the high mountains. The king of the sky emerged and shone every part of the land. Beyond the colored sky, the birds were flying, chirping for greeting another beautiful morning. A teen, who is wearing all black opened his lids lazily. " Wake up, it's morning already." Soft voice like a murmur was heard like a lullaby.
The black teen jolted hearing the unfamiliar voice. Suddenly he realized that his face is too near to the redhead. He was within an inch of Kurama. Unconsciously he moved back to the edge of the soft bed.
" I can't believe it that the dragon was changing its form into human. Surprisingly there lays such a cute teen like you in the next day." Kurama smiled warmly. The other teen just glared deadly to the fox. " What is your name?"
"...." The young dragon was silent. " Oh, I get it. If you don't have one then let me give you one. How about Pochi?" He flicked his ruby eyes, sickened of Kurama. " No one lives for humbling me or provoking me. And you have nerve to have fight with me? " Kurama giggled. " Are you insulting me?" His voice rose a bit.
" Finally you talk to me "the ruby head still giggled " so what is your name? " The spiked hair teen kept his mouth closed. " Okay, Pochi, that's final! "
" Hiei."
" Huh?"
" I SAID HIEI, YOU DEAF!! "
" Gee, don't shout. I can hear you."
Silence..
" Fox, Where am I? "
" My name is Kurama, not fox even it's a good nickname for me. "
" Who cares about your name! What is this damn place?! "
" Watch your mouth please. This is my bedroom. "
" Hn, why everyone always concern about taste? "
" Huh? "
" Nothing. "
The silver fox moved himself and suited to Hiei's position. "Luckily Yomi isn't here even your presence has been reported. I'll take the responsibility to question you. "
Hiei moves further away from the red hair. He shunned any body contact to other person. " You will get naught. "
" Hmm, so Mukuro has a concern about the taste too? "
" She comes noisy when it's about her antique's vase or stupid mirror. " Hiei stopped then gasped.
" That's why I'm the one who asking you. You need a little trick to gain the answer, especially for a loyal person. " Kurama smiled wickedly. " But you realize it too fast. Maybe I have to use another way. "
" Damn fox !@#$%^&*@#$%^&* "
Kurama sighed. This will be a hard work.Maybe I should move him to another room. If I don't, it could be possible that he messed up all my things in my only private room. Kurama sighed heavily.
Kurama had left the room. Hiei took his rest in a room that was a place that no one can enter without using the front door. Finally he goes somewhere, I'm getting nervous when he is around. I hate that feeling, something that makes you feel weak. He went down his bed and stood up on the cold floor. I have to think something to flee from this stupid prison room. He placed his hand on his forehead.
I don't think I should change my form again for a while. Even my dragon form is stronger but it drained my ki too much. And that is the ridiculous reason why I end up in this foe's territory. He analyzed the room carefully to search any possible way to retreat. That room wasn't bad with some light within it. But there was some scattered ward at the only window in that room. The only possible way to retreat without causing harm for me is by using the front door. And it would not success actually.
He scanned more and all he could see is the bed, table and some chair. At least they don't chain me. He walked toward the window and carefully touched it. Sudden bolt made him jolted. The bolt was occurred as the effect of the wards. He flinched and touched his burned fingers. Hn! Makes everything so complicated, don't you?
He sat down with some pain on his bed. I couldn't return either if I could run from here. She will probably cast me out to carry on her sins. She won't give up until I can end this task completely. So, where is that mirror? If I stay here, I may get something to be acquired.
He curtly squinted to the front door. He could hear the sound of the footsteps. He waited intently and raised his guard. Unluckily his katana was taken from him to decrease the possibility for him to run. The footstep ended in front of his door. Now what they want?
The door was opened. Hiei frowned at his visitor. The crimson hair came into his room gracefully. His emerald eyes calmed like the thick green forest. It reminded him of the freedom flying freely in Makai. " So how is your day, dragon-san? " Kurama smiled gleefully.
~~~
How is it? Do I have any improvement or even less? Review please! Oh, and also I has planned on the other fic. Please read it if it comes, OK? It's " Forgotten florist ", the title of the plan!