A Thorn in His Side
By SNHP Killer J.D.
Authoress' notes: Hey hey peoples!!!!!!! I've been on ff.net for a LONG time but never put any of my stories in writing till now.....I'm a very hyper chibi person and almost all of my stories include me and my best friend in them..but they are our online characters so we have diff names and are diff people....Anyways....Who we are in this is pretty obvious...It's very obvious since our "other selves" are the main characters...ANYWAYS..now that I'm done blabbing.....~please~ read my story and tell me what ya think!!!!!!!!!!! No rude comments or flames please.if you want to criticize my story I expect you to be polite in doing so.I understand criticism.I'm a critical person myself....but I really get annoyed when people take up my time just to tell me I suck....so, if ya dun like it...dun read it!!!!!!! And if ya do like it.. I love you!!!!! And please R&R, I'd love to hear suggestions to improve it cause I'm FAR from being perfect at this!!!!!!! lol....there..I'm done babbling.for the second time,...so read!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~~Summary~~~~ AU Story. 5th year. 2 mysterious girls burst into Hogwarts Great Hall During the Opening Feast and everyone in the school goes frantic with fear when no other than Lord Voldemort comes striding in after them with a half amused and half furious look on his face followed by several panting Death Eaters...but what happens next leaves the whole school in numb shock and even Dumbledore has to use every ounce of control he has to keep his own jaw from dropping.....And the events that unfold afterward leave even Dumbledore's Jaw lying on the floor. Starts in the Opening feast scene from the Fifth Harry Potter Book....Spoilers..so dun say I didn't warn ya!!!!.
Oh ya..and my Disclaimer...all though I honestly have to say...DUH!!!!!!!!!!! this OBVIOUSLY isn't mine..it's JK Rowlings peoples.....and if ya can't figure that out then I suggest a phycologist.....lol, I'm just joking, although I do own the plot and Elektra and Keriana!!!!!!!
A Thorn in His Side~~~~Chapter 1.
Professor Umbridge had just finished her little speech and Dumbledore was finishing his announcements that professor Umbridge had interrupted.
"Thank you very much, Professor Umbridge, that was most illuminating." He said bowing to her.
"Now, as I was saying, Quidditch tryouts will be held."
"Yes, it certainly was illuminating," said Hermoine in a low voice.
"You're not telling me you enjoyed it?" Ron said quietly, turning a glazed face upon Hermoine.
"That was about the dullest speech I've ever heard, and I grew up with Percy."
"I said illuminating, not enjoyable," said Hermoine. "It explained a lot."
"Did it?" said Harry in surprise. "Sounded like a ----
The whole school froze at the sound of loud shouts coming outside the Great Hall. The louder they got the better people could hear and pretty soon shouts of "GET THEM" and "DON'T LET THEM GET AWAY THIS TIME" were heard by everyone.
The next instant the Great Hall's doors were flung open and two teenage looking girls burst into the hall running at full speed.
Everyone was looking at their appearance in shock. One of them had neon blue hair and bright neon blue eyes with a strange dark blue dress on and there was a neon blue glow surrounding her.
The other one was just as shocking with bright purple hair and eyes, with a dark purple dress on, and a purple glow around her.
But everyone's attention was soon distracted from the mysterious strangers as the people responsible for the shouting ran into the hall. They were death eaters, about fifteen of them.
All of the staff rose in shock but before they could do anything everyone was struck with fear as Lord Voldemort strode in after them.
The look on his face was terrifying, half-amused and the half deadly furious. The two strangers spun around and paled as they saw that they had caught up to them.
Voldemort didn't even seem to register that he was in a room full as people as he set all of his furious face on the two girls. "well well well, what do we have here"
he purred with a satisfied look sweeping across his face. "I do believe your time is up, what is your answer?"
The two strangers pale faces had been replaced by looks of their own fury and hatred. The one with Neon blue hair was the first to speak up.
"Go to hell Riddle, We've told you a million time's we will NEVER join your cause you filthy little snake face"
The fury that had been replaced by amusement on Voldemort's face was again turned into total fury.
"You have no idea" he hissed, "what rejection will cost you. You will break; not even the two of you can resist it for long. But, until that time comes, I suggest a little lesson to improve your attitude"
He smiled tight lipped at them and what he said next made the color once again drain out of the strangers faces.
"I think a nice stay here at Hogwarts would do the trick, don't you Elektra?"
He asked with an even more satisfied smirk on face, looking at the girl who had spoken up.
"You wouldn't dare to bind us here" She hissed, looking furious. The other one looked just as afraid and angry at the same time but was keeping her mouth shut.
"Oh, but wouldn't I" he smirked. "You two have gotten just a little too used to having things your way while I was gone. I think it's time you remembered your place."
Finally, the other girl spoke up, but the words that came out of her mouth made Voldemort look even more furious than he had before.
"You stinking lowly F'ing son of a bit**, you have NO claim over us, keep us here all you like you filthy mudblood, but we will NEVER bow to you and we will NEVER hold any respect towards a madman, especially not you."
The look he gave the girl would have turned stone to dust.
"I suggest that if you want to stay standing you had better start learning quickly because I will not be patient for much longer Keriana."
Both of the two girls just glared at him with malice.
"Well then" he said, smirking once more. "I do believe I have other business to take care of, let me know if you change your minds."
And with that he seemingly disappeared with the rest of the Death eaters leaving the whole school to stare in disbelief as Elektra gave one last shout of
"DAMN YOU RIDDLE."
and turned to glare at everyone in the Great Hall.
The silence was only broken when a little Ravenclaw first year finally screamed and fainted.
There!!!!!!!!! * breaths a sigh of relief * That wasn't too bad was it????????? anywho..R&R peoples!!!!!! please....I wanna know what ya think....and remember this is my first try at writing everything down so please be kind!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways.TATa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~ SNHP Killer J.D.
By SNHP Killer J.D.
Authoress' notes: Hey hey peoples!!!!!!! I've been on ff.net for a LONG time but never put any of my stories in writing till now.....I'm a very hyper chibi person and almost all of my stories include me and my best friend in them..but they are our online characters so we have diff names and are diff people....Anyways....Who we are in this is pretty obvious...It's very obvious since our "other selves" are the main characters...ANYWAYS..now that I'm done blabbing.....~please~ read my story and tell me what ya think!!!!!!!!!!! No rude comments or flames please.if you want to criticize my story I expect you to be polite in doing so.I understand criticism.I'm a critical person myself....but I really get annoyed when people take up my time just to tell me I suck....so, if ya dun like it...dun read it!!!!!!! And if ya do like it.. I love you!!!!! And please R&R, I'd love to hear suggestions to improve it cause I'm FAR from being perfect at this!!!!!!! lol....there..I'm done babbling.for the second time,...so read!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~~Summary~~~~ AU Story. 5th year. 2 mysterious girls burst into Hogwarts Great Hall During the Opening Feast and everyone in the school goes frantic with fear when no other than Lord Voldemort comes striding in after them with a half amused and half furious look on his face followed by several panting Death Eaters...but what happens next leaves the whole school in numb shock and even Dumbledore has to use every ounce of control he has to keep his own jaw from dropping.....And the events that unfold afterward leave even Dumbledore's Jaw lying on the floor. Starts in the Opening feast scene from the Fifth Harry Potter Book....Spoilers..so dun say I didn't warn ya!!!!.
Oh ya..and my Disclaimer...all though I honestly have to say...DUH!!!!!!!!!!! this OBVIOUSLY isn't mine..it's JK Rowlings peoples.....and if ya can't figure that out then I suggest a phycologist.....lol, I'm just joking, although I do own the plot and Elektra and Keriana!!!!!!!
A Thorn in His Side~~~~Chapter 1.
Professor Umbridge had just finished her little speech and Dumbledore was finishing his announcements that professor Umbridge had interrupted.
"Thank you very much, Professor Umbridge, that was most illuminating." He said bowing to her.
"Now, as I was saying, Quidditch tryouts will be held."
"Yes, it certainly was illuminating," said Hermoine in a low voice.
"You're not telling me you enjoyed it?" Ron said quietly, turning a glazed face upon Hermoine.
"That was about the dullest speech I've ever heard, and I grew up with Percy."
"I said illuminating, not enjoyable," said Hermoine. "It explained a lot."
"Did it?" said Harry in surprise. "Sounded like a ----
The whole school froze at the sound of loud shouts coming outside the Great Hall. The louder they got the better people could hear and pretty soon shouts of "GET THEM" and "DON'T LET THEM GET AWAY THIS TIME" were heard by everyone.
The next instant the Great Hall's doors were flung open and two teenage looking girls burst into the hall running at full speed.
Everyone was looking at their appearance in shock. One of them had neon blue hair and bright neon blue eyes with a strange dark blue dress on and there was a neon blue glow surrounding her.
The other one was just as shocking with bright purple hair and eyes, with a dark purple dress on, and a purple glow around her.
But everyone's attention was soon distracted from the mysterious strangers as the people responsible for the shouting ran into the hall. They were death eaters, about fifteen of them.
All of the staff rose in shock but before they could do anything everyone was struck with fear as Lord Voldemort strode in after them.
The look on his face was terrifying, half-amused and the half deadly furious. The two strangers spun around and paled as they saw that they had caught up to them.
Voldemort didn't even seem to register that he was in a room full as people as he set all of his furious face on the two girls. "well well well, what do we have here"
he purred with a satisfied look sweeping across his face. "I do believe your time is up, what is your answer?"
The two strangers pale faces had been replaced by looks of their own fury and hatred. The one with Neon blue hair was the first to speak up.
"Go to hell Riddle, We've told you a million time's we will NEVER join your cause you filthy little snake face"
The fury that had been replaced by amusement on Voldemort's face was again turned into total fury.
"You have no idea" he hissed, "what rejection will cost you. You will break; not even the two of you can resist it for long. But, until that time comes, I suggest a little lesson to improve your attitude"
He smiled tight lipped at them and what he said next made the color once again drain out of the strangers faces.
"I think a nice stay here at Hogwarts would do the trick, don't you Elektra?"
He asked with an even more satisfied smirk on face, looking at the girl who had spoken up.
"You wouldn't dare to bind us here" She hissed, looking furious. The other one looked just as afraid and angry at the same time but was keeping her mouth shut.
"Oh, but wouldn't I" he smirked. "You two have gotten just a little too used to having things your way while I was gone. I think it's time you remembered your place."
Finally, the other girl spoke up, but the words that came out of her mouth made Voldemort look even more furious than he had before.
"You stinking lowly F'ing son of a bit**, you have NO claim over us, keep us here all you like you filthy mudblood, but we will NEVER bow to you and we will NEVER hold any respect towards a madman, especially not you."
The look he gave the girl would have turned stone to dust.
"I suggest that if you want to stay standing you had better start learning quickly because I will not be patient for much longer Keriana."
Both of the two girls just glared at him with malice.
"Well then" he said, smirking once more. "I do believe I have other business to take care of, let me know if you change your minds."
And with that he seemingly disappeared with the rest of the Death eaters leaving the whole school to stare in disbelief as Elektra gave one last shout of
"DAMN YOU RIDDLE."
and turned to glare at everyone in the Great Hall.
The silence was only broken when a little Ravenclaw first year finally screamed and fainted.
There!!!!!!!!! * breaths a sigh of relief * That wasn't too bad was it????????? anywho..R&R peoples!!!!!! please....I wanna know what ya think....and remember this is my first try at writing everything down so please be kind!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways.TATa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~~~~~~ SNHP Killer J.D.