This poem can be looked on as a piece concerning either couple: A/C or A/B.
"Angel"
The one I call Angel, my warrior, my knight Is not able to come out in daytime But only the sparkling moonlit night.
For you see he is a vampire with an Angelic face But what I see is a lonely child with no loving place.
He use to be evil, no humanity, soul, or care So Gypsies gave him a soul to fill in the place that was so bare.
He looks for redemption, forgiveness, and peace Which he soon learns can not be rewarded with ease.
His curse was if he had " True Happiness" for a moments starts He would surely lose his soul, as well as his gentle caring heart.
Though we love eachother more than words can say He will be my lover, my knight, and that will always stay.
Feedback Please! I've made many poems, but I would like everyones input on it.
"Angel"
The one I call Angel, my warrior, my knight Is not able to come out in daytime But only the sparkling moonlit night.
For you see he is a vampire with an Angelic face But what I see is a lonely child with no loving place.
He use to be evil, no humanity, soul, or care So Gypsies gave him a soul to fill in the place that was so bare.
He looks for redemption, forgiveness, and peace Which he soon learns can not be rewarded with ease.
His curse was if he had " True Happiness" for a moments starts He would surely lose his soul, as well as his gentle caring heart.
Though we love eachother more than words can say He will be my lover, my knight, and that will always stay.
Feedback Please! I've made many poems, but I would like everyones input on it.