AN: just some things I wanted to say to those nice ppl who reviewed this
story.
ewunia: Well, I hadn't updated this story in particular because I had some PC problems, and I got a new idea for a story, so basically I forgot it exited. Peach here, reminded me that KISA was my other fic, and so I had to read all I had written and that's why I dedicated last chapter to her. If you were asking for those at nosebleed, Prudence has chapter 5 for GWHH, she hasn't updated. Actually I had that one done almost two months ago, but when I first send it to her, her email account was full so I had to try another time. As for The Kidnap, well.It's getting tough to write, and I'm WORKING, I really am, in the next chapter, but I always find something amiss, and so I just keep editing it.
Shizuka: Forgive me. I wanted to say that to you. I, for some reason didn't receive an email with your review (the first one BTW) and I didn't hear about your suggestion. I didn't remember Kaoru's father's name and so that's why I didn't use it, but thanks.although I can't use it now. It's was smart your suggestion of Shishio and Yume, I like that, but again, it didn't occur to me at the moment. In fact, I was thinking on Jin'eh for that role.but then I didn't know who would be that woman.
And to the rest, THANK YOU! A little other thing. I really think this story would, sometime, have an R rated lemon chapter, pretty soon. Just so you know. This is quite romance novel style.it won't be.saintly written.
Knight In Shining Armor Chapter Three
By nightfall, Kaoru had relaxed. She had planned a way to escape Kenshin when they made their first camp for the night. She only hoped it would be soon, meanwhile, she was against his chest, sleeping, relaxed, and completely comfortable.
Kenshin, in the other hand, was far from comfortable. He could do nothing but be aware of her every move, he was helpless. Her scent invaded his senses and it required too much will not to stop right now and take her. He could feel her body pressed to him, and he was tensed, and sometimes couldn't help but go the wrong way until he discovered it was the other path.
They spent two days on the road, and then they stopped. She was fast asleep, so much that Kenshin had to carry her in his arms, and lay her on the grass for her to keep sleeping. As he did that, he felt like if he just got married, and was carrying his wife to their night bed. However, Kaoru wasn't asleep. She just pretended to be, so her plan would go perfectly well.
They stopped near a lake, since he knew she loved to take a bath, and swim. It had some bushes here and there, but were all scattered around the lake. Where they sat to camp, was without bushes.
Kenshin built a small tent, and laid her insides. He then built a fire and sat on a log to get warm.
Kaoru was desperate. He never closed his eyes. He was completely awake, but then, she saw him stand up and strip his cloth off. Even though his back was to her, she could still notice that he had a wonderful body. She almost forgot what she planned to do, until she realized that this was her opportunity. When he get into the water, she would slip out of the tent through the back, and then crawl to the other side of the road. She had a knife with her, so whenever she was hungry, she could just grab some wild berries and eat them.
The moment he stepped into he water, she went out through the back. She peaked from one of the tent's sides to see if he was facing that way but he wasn't. She then crawled in a straight line passed the road, and hid behind some bushes for a while to calm herself.
After a while, she decided to crawl a bit more into the woods and then stand up, when she was sure he wouldn't see her. But from the very beginning, Kenshin felt her chi speeding away. He let her try, and feel good about it, but just when she as she stood up, he was right in front of her, completely and totally naked, not at all caring of whether he was or wasn't, just trying to prevent her from getting any farther.
"Hello." She said, not able to say something else. Her tongue had sized up just by watching his body from feet to head, making a long stop look on the middle, and her face had blushed red like a rose.
He said not a word, just stood there, arms crossed in his chest hair loose brown-wet, eyes the color of molten gold and several drops of water scattered over his body. For a long time he just stared directly into her eyes, like deciding whether to kill her, rape her, or just let it be.
Rape sounded delicious on his mind. She looked beautiful with her hair askew and small leaves on it, her eyes wide, her robe showing, a little bit too much of her chest, but not enough, her skirt dirty and wet from the ground framing her legs with some holes done by branches on the ground.
But he seemed to have decided to just let it be. He went passed her grabbing her arm tight and harsh, purposely hurting her, then dragging her back to where they were. Then he practically threw her on the water, as he stood right on the border, looking at her take her hair out of her face, and dry her face with her hands to be able to see. When she looked up to him, he noticed he had been a little too rough with her, for her arm was red with the mark of his hands. However, as he looked over her body, he couldn't help but notice that she was practically naked. The robe was white. And when white cloth gets wet it gets transparent, and besides it's practically glued to her body.
She did had a quick look down and noticed he was hard, and then tried not to blush since he had seen it all. He still kept looking thoroughly at her, she felt he was going to kill her, or do something very scary. But then she noticed, that he wanted her to feel humiliated. When she cast her eyes down, she noticed she could see herself almost as if she wasn't wearing anything, and she understood why he had done so.
She let herself fall on the water, to try to hide her body, but obviously to no avail since she had not a thing to hide, he had seen it all. And then she saw him come to her. He stood right in front of her, looking down at her like if he was some superior person and she was just a lowland.
"Stand up." He commanded, his voice as cold as snow and as rough as hail.
She obeyed instantly, standing up, fully erect, only with her head to the side not wanting to look at him.
"Look at me." He commanded once more, and when she didn't obey, he forced her by turning her face to him, but she closed her eyes. "Open your eyes, Kaoru." When she didn't, he repeated the statement this time a little lower but with a frightening and commanding tone she couldn't help but obey. "You will not try to escape me again. Understood?" she nodded. "If you dare try to do so again, I swear, I won't be as lenient like now." She nodded again, and then looked down noticing, this time without purpose, his manhood erected and hardened, forcing her to look to the side, only to be turned once more to face him by his hand.
This time she didn't closed her eyes. She threw him one of her most hateful stares, and looked straight towards his amber gaze. He knew why she did so. She felt utterly humiliated, and she wouldn't dare let her pride leave her. Then she just spitted on his face like her father had taught her to do. Man style, gather as much as saliva you can, and then spit with all your force. It fell right into Kenshin's left eyes, and as he recovered from the attack, she went back to her tent feeling completely defeated, but with her chin high in the air, making sure to sway her hips very sexily like her sister had taught her to do. Kenshin just smiled when he was able to saw her walk back to the tent. She wouldn't be an easy girl.
AN: I do know this was short (2 pgs), but I think if I write more it would spoil the chapter. So this is it.for now.And I dedicated this one to a reviewer I can't recall name that said he wanted to see Kaoru fight. I know that this wasn't much fighting, but she did make a small thing.? ;)
ewunia: Well, I hadn't updated this story in particular because I had some PC problems, and I got a new idea for a story, so basically I forgot it exited. Peach here, reminded me that KISA was my other fic, and so I had to read all I had written and that's why I dedicated last chapter to her. If you were asking for those at nosebleed, Prudence has chapter 5 for GWHH, she hasn't updated. Actually I had that one done almost two months ago, but when I first send it to her, her email account was full so I had to try another time. As for The Kidnap, well.It's getting tough to write, and I'm WORKING, I really am, in the next chapter, but I always find something amiss, and so I just keep editing it.
Shizuka: Forgive me. I wanted to say that to you. I, for some reason didn't receive an email with your review (the first one BTW) and I didn't hear about your suggestion. I didn't remember Kaoru's father's name and so that's why I didn't use it, but thanks.although I can't use it now. It's was smart your suggestion of Shishio and Yume, I like that, but again, it didn't occur to me at the moment. In fact, I was thinking on Jin'eh for that role.but then I didn't know who would be that woman.
And to the rest, THANK YOU! A little other thing. I really think this story would, sometime, have an R rated lemon chapter, pretty soon. Just so you know. This is quite romance novel style.it won't be.saintly written.
Knight In Shining Armor Chapter Three
By nightfall, Kaoru had relaxed. She had planned a way to escape Kenshin when they made their first camp for the night. She only hoped it would be soon, meanwhile, she was against his chest, sleeping, relaxed, and completely comfortable.
Kenshin, in the other hand, was far from comfortable. He could do nothing but be aware of her every move, he was helpless. Her scent invaded his senses and it required too much will not to stop right now and take her. He could feel her body pressed to him, and he was tensed, and sometimes couldn't help but go the wrong way until he discovered it was the other path.
They spent two days on the road, and then they stopped. She was fast asleep, so much that Kenshin had to carry her in his arms, and lay her on the grass for her to keep sleeping. As he did that, he felt like if he just got married, and was carrying his wife to their night bed. However, Kaoru wasn't asleep. She just pretended to be, so her plan would go perfectly well.
They stopped near a lake, since he knew she loved to take a bath, and swim. It had some bushes here and there, but were all scattered around the lake. Where they sat to camp, was without bushes.
Kenshin built a small tent, and laid her insides. He then built a fire and sat on a log to get warm.
Kaoru was desperate. He never closed his eyes. He was completely awake, but then, she saw him stand up and strip his cloth off. Even though his back was to her, she could still notice that he had a wonderful body. She almost forgot what she planned to do, until she realized that this was her opportunity. When he get into the water, she would slip out of the tent through the back, and then crawl to the other side of the road. She had a knife with her, so whenever she was hungry, she could just grab some wild berries and eat them.
The moment he stepped into he water, she went out through the back. She peaked from one of the tent's sides to see if he was facing that way but he wasn't. She then crawled in a straight line passed the road, and hid behind some bushes for a while to calm herself.
After a while, she decided to crawl a bit more into the woods and then stand up, when she was sure he wouldn't see her. But from the very beginning, Kenshin felt her chi speeding away. He let her try, and feel good about it, but just when she as she stood up, he was right in front of her, completely and totally naked, not at all caring of whether he was or wasn't, just trying to prevent her from getting any farther.
"Hello." She said, not able to say something else. Her tongue had sized up just by watching his body from feet to head, making a long stop look on the middle, and her face had blushed red like a rose.
He said not a word, just stood there, arms crossed in his chest hair loose brown-wet, eyes the color of molten gold and several drops of water scattered over his body. For a long time he just stared directly into her eyes, like deciding whether to kill her, rape her, or just let it be.
Rape sounded delicious on his mind. She looked beautiful with her hair askew and small leaves on it, her eyes wide, her robe showing, a little bit too much of her chest, but not enough, her skirt dirty and wet from the ground framing her legs with some holes done by branches on the ground.
But he seemed to have decided to just let it be. He went passed her grabbing her arm tight and harsh, purposely hurting her, then dragging her back to where they were. Then he practically threw her on the water, as he stood right on the border, looking at her take her hair out of her face, and dry her face with her hands to be able to see. When she looked up to him, he noticed he had been a little too rough with her, for her arm was red with the mark of his hands. However, as he looked over her body, he couldn't help but notice that she was practically naked. The robe was white. And when white cloth gets wet it gets transparent, and besides it's practically glued to her body.
She did had a quick look down and noticed he was hard, and then tried not to blush since he had seen it all. He still kept looking thoroughly at her, she felt he was going to kill her, or do something very scary. But then she noticed, that he wanted her to feel humiliated. When she cast her eyes down, she noticed she could see herself almost as if she wasn't wearing anything, and she understood why he had done so.
She let herself fall on the water, to try to hide her body, but obviously to no avail since she had not a thing to hide, he had seen it all. And then she saw him come to her. He stood right in front of her, looking down at her like if he was some superior person and she was just a lowland.
"Stand up." He commanded, his voice as cold as snow and as rough as hail.
She obeyed instantly, standing up, fully erect, only with her head to the side not wanting to look at him.
"Look at me." He commanded once more, and when she didn't obey, he forced her by turning her face to him, but she closed her eyes. "Open your eyes, Kaoru." When she didn't, he repeated the statement this time a little lower but with a frightening and commanding tone she couldn't help but obey. "You will not try to escape me again. Understood?" she nodded. "If you dare try to do so again, I swear, I won't be as lenient like now." She nodded again, and then looked down noticing, this time without purpose, his manhood erected and hardened, forcing her to look to the side, only to be turned once more to face him by his hand.
This time she didn't closed her eyes. She threw him one of her most hateful stares, and looked straight towards his amber gaze. He knew why she did so. She felt utterly humiliated, and she wouldn't dare let her pride leave her. Then she just spitted on his face like her father had taught her to do. Man style, gather as much as saliva you can, and then spit with all your force. It fell right into Kenshin's left eyes, and as he recovered from the attack, she went back to her tent feeling completely defeated, but with her chin high in the air, making sure to sway her hips very sexily like her sister had taught her to do. Kenshin just smiled when he was able to saw her walk back to the tent. She wouldn't be an easy girl.
AN: I do know this was short (2 pgs), but I think if I write more it would spoil the chapter. So this is it.for now.And I dedicated this one to a reviewer I can't recall name that said he wanted to see Kaoru fight. I know that this wasn't much fighting, but she did make a small thing.? ;)